"A New Perspective"....... A new fic By: Emma & Michelle(Bonnie Is Great)

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Here it goes, Hope ya like.........


Louis, sits at the dinner table, and is angry. He thinks to himself "She was
supposed to be home by now. I had this dinner all prepared for her,and she
new about it. Why is she always doing this? Working so late, and forgetting
about me?" He looks at his watch, and it says ten o'clock. He picks up
his can of beer that he has already had to much of, and takes a drink, and
realizes there is no more, so he goes to the fridge, and get another one out,
and opens it up. He hears kate's car pull up, and her
her door slam. He says to himself after she walks into the
house. "Damn, job is all she think about!"
"Sorry,what did you say?" Kate greeted him with a smile
as she took her coat and holster off,and hang them on the coat tree
"Does it matter? It's not like you care!" Louis shouted.
"What is that supposed to mean? Why are you mad at me?"
Kate asked
Louis Looks at Kate angry and says, "Kate What the hell time do U
think it is?"
"it's 10:15" Kate looked down at her watch." Oh,Louis,I am
soo sorry,I forgot all about dinner!"
Louis didn't believe her. The only thing that she cared about
was her job, and getting to the top not matter what even if that meant
sleeping with other men. Louis was bitter, and jealious over Kate's job. In a
bitter voise he says, "Yeah, sure you did."
"Yes,I did, I'm sorry I just had a lot of paper work I
wanted to get done,and I lost track of time." She kissed him lightly on the
lips," Have you been drinking?" She asked when she smelt alcohol on his
breathe.
"Yes I was..It' not like you were home like you were supposed
to be. There is ONLY one kind of work that a women can do at NIGHT!" Louis
says in a drunk over upset voice.

" U know I can't talk to U when ur like this.
Your DRUNK, and u Know Damn well that I would NEVER do something like that" kate said as she started to walk out of the room.
"Come back here,I'm talking to you!" Louis yelled as he
grabbed Kate's arm and jerked her towards him.
"Ouch,let go of me!,that hurts!"
Kate pulls her arm away, as Louis Yells, "You weren't doing
work..You know as well as I do you were sleeping around with the boss. You
keep telling me how much u hate Haysbert, but maybe the truth is that you
can't get enough of him. Your shuch a slut!"

Kate is trying to stay calm, because there was no use in talking to Louis
when he was like this, but she was ticked as she yelled right Back "You son of a b*tch!,
YOU know as well as I do...I was NEVER the one doin the SLEEPing around you
Were!"
"What's that supposed to mean!?" Louis's voice kept
getting louder and louder.
"Oh come on! you know exactly what it means!" She wasn't suceeding at her
efforts of staying calm.
Louis takes a step towards kate, and she takes a step
backwards. His temper is well to the boilong point, but not higher. "If you
are trying to say I cheated on you when we are married...it's all YOUR FAULT! IF
you had been her more often then I wouldn't have had to get it else were! "
"Well, i kinda had to work as many hours as
possible,y'know it wasn't easy supporting myself and 2 kids on a cop's paycheck!!" Kate said as she took another step backwards.
"What's that supposed to mean!?" He took another step forward,almost pinning
her between him and the wall.
Kate: You d@mn well what it means! If you weren't laying on your lazy ass
daydreaming,you were out with the boys,partying. Spending MY hard earned
money!...And probably on hookers!"....
Kate didn't have time to blink before Louis slapped her so
hard she fell to the ground.
Kate Puts her hand on her face were Louis has just hit her. She
is shocked as she trys to get up. Louis realizes what he has just done. "Oh my god!
kate i am so sorry...I didn't mean to hit you. Let me help you up." He
reaches for her arm, and she pulls it away.
She pulls her arm away.." I can get up on my own. I believe you have done
enouh for one night" She gets up, and goes to her bed room, and shuts, and
locks the door.


So wutcha think? Shud we continue?

[JinKateFan]

hey gals... awesome job so far.. keep it coming....

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Hi JinKateFan, Thanks for the reply..We hope that U will continue to read the fanfic. We are also very happy that U liked it.

We are bumping this up, in hopes that we will get some more replys. Emma, and I worked very hard on this, and we would like to see what all of ya think...So please let us know.

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[consentida]

Yet another fic where Kate is accused of being a slut...what else is new?

[*MIBabe03*]

Originally posted by consentida
Yet another fic where Kate is accused of being a slut...what else is new?

LOL! Good one! Anyway this fic is awesome you guys, you better keep writing on it.

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I can't believe he hit her That bastard! lol! Keep up the good work (or else!) lol! (j/k)

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Opps Made a mistake....LOL go to next post...

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ooooooooooops I did it again....LOL You can never turst blondes to do something on the frist try...Well then again maybe not even on the secound one! LOL go to next post...I promice...theres something there. LOL

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Hey everyone were really gald that you like our fanfic. Thanks for the replys. Here's more........


Cd, looked at her watch..It was ten-thirty. She couldn't believe that she had agreed to go out on a date so late. She thought to herself, "but, at least it's just a few drinks with him, and then she could tell him that she had to get up real early in the moring because she had to go to work." She had just met the man a few weeks ago, and she was thinking that this was going to be their last date, because he wasn't really her type. His name was Jack. Cd was getting ready to go when her phone rang. She ran to the phone to get it. She hoped that it was Jack calling off the date. She picked up the phone. "Hello." She said.
"Hi, Cd, it's Nate."
"Nate?" Cd asked. "I thought that you were sleeping over at Lily's?"
"Umm....I was...I mean I am..." Nate was nervous. "I mean..Cd I have to talk to you."
Cd, Looked at a clock again, and she was already going to be late. "Nate are you okay?" Cd asked worriedley.
"Yeah, I am fine."
"Well, then can this wait until tomorrow then? Remember I have a date?"
Nate smiled, "With what's his name?"
Cd, getting annoyed, "Jack."
He did that just to annoy her, and they both knew it too. "Oh, yeah Jack. Cd..I am sorry, but no this can't wait until tomorrow. It's really important."
"Okay," Cd said. "How much further are you?"
Nate, said, "Not far at all. I will be right there. I will talk to you when I get there. Bye." He hung up before she got a chance to say anything else.
Cd hurd the dial tone. "Umm, bye too." Said as she hung up the phone. She was getting ready to pick it back up when her door bell rang.
Nate stood outside of Cd's apparment door. He had called her as soon as he had gotten to her place. He didn't want her to have time to call her date to tell him that she would be late. Cd opened the door.
"That was fast." Cd said. "Come in."
Nate walked in. "Well I told you that it wouldn't take long." He said with a smile.
"Yeah, maybe becasue you were standing right outside my door. You could have told me that." She said saractiley.
Nate was trying to sound senseer. He knew that he had to make his plan work. "I didn't tell you that? I am sorry. I thought that I had"
Cd could tell that something was up, but she just wasn't sure what. She knew that she would know soon though. "Umm..That's okay." CD shut the door, and they both walked into the living room. "So, what is it that was SO important, that couldn't wait until tomorrow?"
Nate, knew that the only to get the reaction that he wanted out of CD, was just to tell her. He wanted to see what she would say, and do. "Well, CD, when I went over to Lily's tonight she said that she has something very important that she wanted to talk to me about something that was so inportant that it would change our lives forever."
She cut him off, "Well, what is it that she wanted to talk to you about?" Cd almost looked happy. She thought to herself maybe she broke up with him. She couldn't figure out why that would make her so happy though. Then again she thought Nate is too good for Lily. He deserves much better.
"She asked me to marry her."
"She WHAT?!" Cd, asked suprised, yet angry at the same time. Wait calm down why are U acting like this. Why should I care if Nate get's married to Lily or not. She walked passed Nate hopeing that he couldn't tell that she was jelious. WAit...She thought. I am NOT jealous of Lily. Cover! she thought before Nate could see how she was really thinking. "Nate, I am confused isn't that a good thing? I mean the two of you have been dating for a long time now."
"Well see Cd I don't want to make the biggest mistake of my life, and I wanted to come here, and talk to you. See what you thought, and how you felt about Lily, and I getting married. I think that you just made it very clear how you feel." Nate Said with a very satified smile on his face.
She was still trying to cover. "What are you talking about Nate?"
"Oh come on CD admit it."
"Admit what!" Cd yelled.
"Cd, look at me." Nate said calmly. CD turned around trying not to show any feelings in her face at all. "Admit to me that you care for me, that you have feelings for me."
"Wh...wh...what?!" She couldn't believe what she was hearing out of him..she about laughed. "Are you crazy? I mean what? Was Lily back on drugs, and she accidently put them in your food?!?!"
"No, Cd" Nate laughed, he was enjoying this. "she wasn't taking any drugs, and she didn't put anything in my drink."
"Well then am I missing something? I know it's not april fools day!" She looked into Nate's eyes. He was looking right back into hers. It was as if he could see right into her. Into her most deepest thoughts to know how much she really did want him, but the fact that he was her parter at work would stop whatever feelings that she would have for him, because they weren't allowed to date each other as long as they were partners.
Nate turned serious. "Cd, no you aren't missing anything. Look..." he said," I am tired of pretending."
Cd, wanted to turn away, to run away, but she knew that if she did Nate would just follow her. No one had ever known her like he did. "Pretending What?" Cd asked.
"I am tired of pretending that neither one of us has feelings for the other." Nate said, hoping that she would be honest about how she felt.
Cd, started laughing. Nate was almost afraid of where this was going to go. She stop laughing. "You know Nate. I can't believe you. You have just left Lily's, who just aked you to marry her, and now your over here telling me that we have feelings for each other. As, for me I am dateing someone that could be someone that I could end up beeing realey serious about."
"Cd, your full of it. We both know that he isn't even your type. The two of you have nothing in comin." Nate wasn't falling for what Cd was saying.
"You think you know everything. Don't you?!" Cd, thought to herself well she would show him. "Well then tell me, if, he isn't even my type, then how come he is moving in with me?!"
"JACK, Moving in here with you?" He nearley laughed. "That's JACK SH*T! And we both know it!"
Cd, glared at him, "Oh, you enjoyed your little pun there didn't you Nate?!
With a mock bashful smile, that only Nate can do. He looks at CD. "Yep I sure did. So, uhh...tell me, if what you are saying is true, when is Jack moving in here?!
CD, knew that he had cought her in a lie, but she was willing to do anything to show him that she wasn't lieing. "You don't believe me? Well I tell you what. Why don't we go to the bar that he, and I are meeting at, and you can see for yourself." She was hopeing that he would take that as she was telling the truth. Cd walked for her do, and opened it up. "Are you coming?!
They both Knew that the both of them were plaing games, but Nate was about to put a stop to it. He walked over to the door, and he and he closed it. "Were not going anywere until we get the truth out in the open. Got it?"
"How dare you?! How dare you come in here demanding me tell you how I feel?! Huh? Is this worth us losing our jobs for it?!"
"CD, We can switch partners, we don't have to keep each other as partners." Nate sid
"Well did you ever stop to think that I don't want to switch partners. I happen to like things the way they are!" CD Yelled.
Nate said very calmley. "Well we can still be partners, but it would be in another way." The way Nate said it sounded more like a joke.
"YOU think this is some kinda JOKE don't YOU?! Cd yelled getting more upset. CD couldn't help it there was something inside her, that at this point the only thing that she wanted to do was grab Nate, and rip all his close off. It was all she could do to restrain herself. She thought to herself there was only one thing that she could do that would put her back in control of what was going on. She started walking for the door.
"Were are are you going?" He asked. He could tell that he was getting to her, and that's what he wanted.
"Oh, me?!?! I am not going anywere, you are!" as she got to the door, and put her hand on the door knob.
He walked over to the door, and he put in hand on top of Cd's. "I don't think you want me going anywere, but in your bed, or maybe you just want to tear off all my clothes right here as much at I would like to do the same to you."
She pushed Nate away, and opend the door. "Get out!! She yelled.
Nate knew that he wasn't getting anywhere talking, so he knew that he had to take action. He grabed her in an embrace, and started kissing her.
CD, just stood there limp for a second, and then she pulled away. "What the H*ll do you think you're doing?!" Before he had time to say anything Cd, didn't know what had come over her except something that she had wanted to do since the first time that she laid eyes on Nate. This time she started kissing him. She slammed the door shut with her leg. They stated tearing at each other clothes.

Next morning

Kate stood in her bathroom,trying to figure out how she was gonna hide her swollen,black and blue right cheek
She couldn't believe what had happend last night.
Sure Louis had a temper,and it was becoming worse as he began to drink more. That was something else she couldn't figure out...Why had he started drinking so much lately?
The more he drank the worse it became. He had been loosing his temper more, and more. Mostly when it came to her work, if she had to stay over, or go in on her day off. He wanted her to quite, and she wasn't going to do that. She hadn't worked this hard to get where she was just to quite. Louis kept saying stuff like she didn't need a job anymore, that he could support them. Kate guessed that it was his male ego that she was hurting, and by yelling, and screaming at her, and saying that she was sleeping
around was his way of getting back. She could handle all that, but for him to have hit her? She didn't expect that, but maybe she should have she thought, "all the signs where there, maybe if had I paid more attention maybe I would have seen this coming. Maybe this is my fault....I shouldn't have said what I did last night,that was cruel." She thought," WAIT just one minute here Kate McCafferty! You should know better, this in not your fault..No, matter how upset he got with you he never should have hit you!"
With a sigh,Kate bit her lip and put her makeup on as gently as she could. And by the time she was done,she had tears in her eyes it hurt so bad.
She went into their bedroom,put on her shoes,and went into the kitchen, to grab sumthin to eat on the way to work
She grabbed her keys and purse, and put the nutragrain bar she'd grabbed in her it. She went to torwards the family room to leave. Louis was passed out on the couch. Kate didn't want to wake him for fear of another arugment, so she snuck by him, and to the door. Just as she got to the door she heard a moan come out of Louis.."Kate is that U?" Louis asked. Not really sure of were he was . "Yeah,Louis.." Kate mumbled,as she put her coat on.
"Where ya goin?" Louis fumbled to his feet,and wabbled over to her.
"To work." She sighed,getting angry at how he wasn't showing any sign of remorse for what happened last night.
Louis started to kiss her goodbye,when he saw her swollen purple cheek," Oh my gawd, what the h*ll happened to you ?!" He asked.
Kate pushed his hand away when he started to touch it. " You fist happened to me!" She yelled,and stormed out before he could say anything.


Cd, opended her eyes, and rolled over to see what time it was. She had forgotten to set her alarm clock. She got up, and put her robe on. As she looked down at Nate. She got mad. If they had done it once that would have been one thing, but they started out on the floor, then went to the couch, and then they made it to the bedroom, and then ...well...to the bed. She thought to herself that Nate knew exactly what he was doing when he came over last night. That thought made Cd even more upset. She looked at a peacfully sleeping Nate. "Well." She thought "He isn't going to be sleeping for long." She yelled, "Nate wake-up!"
"Huh?" Nate said half alseep. "oh, Cd, good morning. Last night was great." He started streaching like he was right at home.
Cd just shock her head at him. "Nate we're late for work. I think you should just put on you clothes, and leave" She stated. "Oh and Nate....None of this happend." She said as a warning.
Nate was already fully awake. "Oh, come on Cd you know as well as I do that you wanted last night to happen as much as I did. If, you did then you would have kicked me out."
Her blood was boiling. "I did try to kick you out! You didn't leave!"
"Cd, we both know you, and once you put your mind to something then we both know that you aren't going to change it. In other words you didn't want me going anywhere,you wanted me, just as much as I wanted you."
"You know Nate, you are so full of yourself."
Nate smiled. He decided to take that as a compliment, knowing full well that it wasn't. "That isn't the first time that i have heard that."
Cd mumbled to herself. "That doesn't suprise me." Her cell phone rings. She goes to get it. "That's probably Cap wanting to know where we are." When she got to the phone she was out of breathe. "Hello." She said while she was trying to keep catch her breath. "ummm...No Jack...Ummm...I am fine..I just had to run to the phone that's all." Cd, Knew that as soon as she had hurd his voice that she had forgotten all about their date last night, and now she was looking for an excues that she could tell him. "Jack....I am so sorry about last night. I had a long day at work, and then when I got home, I just plopped down on the couch, and I fell alseep."
Nate knew that he was going to have fun with this. "You mean that you forgot all about him, because you were having wild,crazy,passionate...' fun' ." He winked, "..on the couch with another man."
Cd just gave him a worning look like he had better shut up. "Oh, I know jack I work to hard, but it is my job, and I love it."
"Yep, Jackey boy Cd loves her job so much more then you know , she would rather spend her whole evening with her partner then you...hmmm Lets see we started on the floor.."
Once again Cd gave him another look, but she was trying to ignore him. "No I am not at work yet I got up late. I was getting ready for work when you called...Yeah I know it's not like me to be late."
"...oh, and then we went to the couch...where Cd did this wonder thing with her...."
Cd had had enough. "SHUT UP! JUST SHUT UP! Huh? What? OH, NO not you Jack...I wa....was saying shooo fly shoo fly...You know I just can't stand flies. "
Nate started craking up. This was one side of Cd that he had never seen of her, and he was really enjoying it. CD took a book that she saw on her dresser, and threw it at Nate. "Ouch!" He yelled.
"That noise...ummm it must of been the people living across from me you know my walls are like sheets. You can hear right through them."
Nate said with another smile, "Well then they must have heard a lot more from us then they wanted to hear."
"Ummm...you know Jack I really have to go...Uh huh. Okay Talk to you later. Bye" Cd hung up the phone. "I can't believe you! You have five seconds to get your clothes. Then I will give you another twenty secounds to put them on, and get the h*ll out of here."
"Cd, I really think that we should talk about where we are going to go from here." Nate said.
"Oh, that's easy." Cd said as she walked out of the bed room for a second. "This isn't going anywere, because that was the first, and last time that that is going to happen." Cd walked back into the room holding a trash bag. She sees that Nate hasn't gotten up to get his clothes, and started getting dress, and it has been a little longer then five seconds.
"Cd that's not fare." He was trying to find the right words, but he didn't quite know what they were. "Cd I know this is going to sound a little fast, but what I have to say is very important." Cd was taking all of Nate clothes, and putting them in the trash bag. "I care about you.....I love you. I know that may seem a little soon, but I have since the first time that I saw you "
Cd just looked at him while she picked up his pants, and put it in the trash bag. She was to angry to really hear the words that he was saying, and even if, she did hear them she thought he was just saying the words so that she would melt in his hands and say oh, Nate I love you too, and I have since i met you too, but she wasn't going to say that. She wasn't going to fall for those lines. "Nate you really think that I am gonna believe what you just said. What you think that I am just one of those women who would just believe your lies, and become putty in you hands." Nate was hurt by what Cd was saying. Cd went on to say, "Now get your trash bag and get out of here."
"No CD, I am not leaving until we talk this out."
"You have one more chance to get your clothes." CD warned.
"I'm not going anywhere." Nate was holding his own ground.
"Fine." Cd said as she walked over to her window, and opended it up, and threw the trash bag full of his clothes out.
"OH, My God, CD I can't believe that you just did that. Now what am I suposed to do?"
Cd said, "I don't know, but you better hurry up, and figure it out, because the trash men will be coming any minute."Nate Went running for the door with the sheet around his body. Cd was following him. Nate opened the door to go. "Oh, Natiepoo..." Cd said.
Nate turned around to face her.
"That is my sheet." As she grabbed the sheet, and pulled it off Nate. She pushed him out the door, shut, and locked it.


Nate pulled into the parking lot of the division just as Kate did.
"At least I'm not late.."He thought with a sigh,pulling into a parking space.

Kate mumbled a few words that deserved a bleep,as she checked her make-up in the mirror on her sunvisor. There was just no hiding her bright purple and blue cheek.
"Ouw,god!" She exclaimed. The pain that shot through her ankle,as she stepped out of her car nearly caused her to fall. She had twisted her ankle or something when she fell the night before. "Louis,you son of a b*tch!" She thought. She gritted her teeth and did her best not to limp.

"Mornin,Cap" Nate greeted as they met up with eachother on the way to the division.
"Oh.,Good morning,Nate..." She was hoping that he wouldn't notice either her glowing cheek,or her ankle.
Nate did a double take,when he noticed her cheek,"Whoa,Cap are you okay?" He wasn't sure if he should've asked,when he saw her reaction.
"Oh,uh...yeah..i'm...i'm fine." She tried to postion her hair to hide it better.
"What happened?" He asked when he saw her grimace as they started up the steps to the building.
Kate stopped and leaned against the railing for support,"Oh,uh....." she searched for an explination,"Uh...had to break up a bar fight last night...things got kinda rough..."
"Oh...are you okay?..Maybe you should see a doctor.."
"No,I'm fine..it..it's nothin an ice pack won't help..." She took another painful step.
"Here,let me carry ya.." Nate put his arm around her waist and started to pick her up.
"Uh,no..thats okay...." She pushed his arm away.
"Are you sure? I don't mind."
"Yeah,I'm sure...thanks for the offer,though." She smiled as bestt she could,without hurting her cheek.
"Well,at least let me help you walk.."
"...Okay..thank you.."
"No prob.." Nate put his arm around her,and they started for the division.
When CD saw them walking down the hall with their arms around eachother,she was suprised at Kate,and even more pissed off at Nate. Nate, and Kate get to Kate's office door, and kate says, "thanks, I think that I can handle it form here." "Mornin.." Magda greeted Kate and Nate as they walked in together.
"Morning.." Nate replied.
"Whoa,Cap! What happened to you?" Raina asked,walking over to get a better look at her cheek. "That's one h*ll of a shiner."
The rest of Kate's face a turned a shade of red that went well with her purple cheek, "Oh,uh....Broke up a barfight last night...things got kinda rough.."
"Oh.." Raina nodded," Where was the fight?"
Oh," Kate says, " You probably haven't even heard of it." Kate is trying to think of a name fast.She is drawling a blank. "....Umm...it...it's called Calark's Pub."
"There wasn't any barfights there last night.." Jiny thought. " You mean the one over on Dean Street?" She asked.
"Yeah, that's the bar that I was at last night" Kate says.

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Jinny nodded her head in responce,and looked back down at her work. " Why did she lie?" She asked herself. Kate seized this oppertunity,and limped to the sanctuary of her office.
"Cap,you should go see a doctor."
"I'm fine,Nate." She tried to smile at him, " Thanks for the help." With that she went into her office,and shut the door,before anyone else decided to give her the third degree.

"So,what you couldn't get the blonde, now you're going after the redhead?" CD whispered to Nate.
"Huh?" Nate whispered back,in confusion.
"I saw you and Cap...hanging all over eachother,y'know I really thought she had better taste in men then that."
"CD...are you jeaslous?" He flashed an almost devilish grin.
"Me jealous? You are the one who came over to my appartment last night,and deliberately kept me from my date." She pulled him to a more private corner of the room.
"Ah,but you were the one who basically attacked me,and ripped my clothes off."
"Had you never called me..and said that you needed to talk to me this never would have happened."Cd said.
"Excuses,excuses." Nate smiled.
"asswhole." she rolled her eyes.
"You're just mad because i'm right." He winked and went back to his desk.

Just as Kate sat down at her desk, Raina knocked on the door and let herself in.
"Louis is on the phone for ya." She smiled.
"I'm busy." Kate said,getting some files out of a drawer so she wouldn't be lieing.
Louis had already called Kate's cellphone twice on her way to work,and she didn't answer either time.
"Okay...what do you want me to tell him?" Raina looked at her captain questioningly. "must have had a fight." She thought.
"Whatever." Kate said without looking up at her.
"Okay." Raina said mostly to herself,as she left Kate's office,closing the door behind her.
"That was strange"
"What was strange?" Jinny asked.
"Cap told me to tell Louis that she's busy..."
"So...?"
"She's not busy."
"Oh...." Jinny nodded"...who's Louis?"
"Her daughter's father..Her boyfriend..whom she's been living with for like six months." Raina gave Jinny a look that said "Where the hell have you been?"
"Forgive me for not having an encyclipedic knowledge of our captain,I am one of those people who tend to mind their own business" Jinny gave Raina a look that said "Right here. you however have been up Cap's ass so long, you've probably forgotten what color your own hair is."
Raina couldn't think of good comeback,luckily she was saved by the bell...well,her ringing telephone.
"San Fransisco Police Department,Felony division, Inspector Washington speaking,how may I help you?...Yes,I say that everytime..."She laughed," I'm sorry you had to wait so long, Cap's really busy... ....She'll call you back when she gets a chance....okay,sorry....You have a nice day too,bye Louis." Raina hang up the phone just as Kate limped out of her office,with a stack of files. "Cases,everyone!" She announced,sitting on the corner of Jinny's desk.
"Oh Joy." Jinny said saracastically.
"Hey,be glad i'm not you putting on another dog case."
"you wouldn't be that mean.."
"Don't try me."
"So what do we got?"Magda asked.
" A homicide.." Kate feinded delight, " Male, late teens, early twenties,found in the alley behind Kent's bar & Grill,drunk on his ass....well,when he had one,that is." She held in her laughter.
"When he had one?" Magda questioned.
"Yep, he was shot in the ass about 6 times before he was put out of his misery."
"Cap,it's not funny." Magda scolded," A man is dead."
"I know, you're right,I'm sorry." She said.
"Not funny at all." Jinny added, as they snickered together. "Oh,c'mon Mag lighten up." She said when she saw the stern look her partner was giving her and her captain.
"Well,whatever he did,the lady apparently didn't like it that much." Nate commented..
"Haha,that was good!" Jinny gave him a thumbs-up.
"I can't believe you guys!" Magda crossed her arms.

"You're one to speak." Cd whispered to Nate.
"You seemed to enjoy yourself quite a bit....all three times last night." He whispered back.

"And for you and CD..." Kate turned her attention to them, " It seems like our cases today are all about passion. A man went home to find his wife with another man in bed, and somehow the wife ended up dead."
"Gawd,you're just on fire today woman!" Jinny cracked up.
"I did NOT mean for that to rhyme."
"Suuure,ya didn't" Jinny cackled.
"I swear." Kate laughed with her.

"This isn't funny guys! Captain I am suprised at you.."Magda scolded. "..we're talking about murder, and extra-marital affairs here..these things aren't funny."
"What you got something to hide,Mag?"Jinny raised her eyebrow.
"Yeah, The Doctor that did surgery on you when you got shot was pretty damn good lookin'." Kate tried to smile,and her cheek reminded her that it wasn't a good idea.
"Oh, you mean Joooonaaah" Jinny smiled from ear-to-ear.
"Jonah,huh? I like that name."
"Y'know they are pretty good friends now." Jinny nodded.
"Oh,I see." Kate winked at Magda.
"What does Jonah look like?" CD asked.
"Ya ever seen Gilmore Girls?." Kate asked. "He looks like Rory's dad on Gilmore Girls."
"Ooohhh,he is a hotty then!" Raina laughed.
"Y'know,I always feared the day those two started getting along,and now I know why." Magda said,pointing to Jinny & Kate.
"Oh,c'mon Mag,we're just kidding around." Jinny laughed.
"Is that all women ever kid about,hot guys and sex?" Nate jumped back into the conversation.
"Maaaaybe." Jinny and Kate said in unison.
"You're just jealous,because we're not talking about your sexyness." CD pinched his cheek.
"Yeah,well..." He smiled.

"Okay,get to work now." Kate quickley composed herself.
'"Ooohhh..." Jinny thought when she saw Charles Haysbert walk in, and realized that was the reason for her captain's sudden change of mood.

"Kate." Charles greated,dryly.
"Charles." She replied,and did her best not to limp back into her office.

"Are you okay?" Charles asked,once they were in her office with the door shut. " I uh...noticed your cheek....and that you're limping"
"Oh,uh...." Kate was rather embarrassed. And she didn't tknow if she should use the same excuse or not..." I..uh..broke up a barfight last nite....things got a little rough."
"Oh,I see..Have you seen a doctor?" Kate was relieved when he baught it.
"Oh,I'm fine,it's nothing an ice pack won't fix.."
"Go see a doctor..thats an order."
Kate sighed, "So what did you want to see me about?" Changing the subject was her way of excepting the order.

"So...,talked to Jackie poo,lately?" Nate asked,with a smirk.
CD gave him a long cold,hard stare, "Not since this morning."
"Gawd,this day is going...weird.."Raina thought,"..CD &Nate are acting very...secretive,and Cd seems very annoyed with him...Jinny & Cap were actually joking around with eachother..that was really weird...And Cap got hurt in a bar fight,and she must be mad at- -" She was brought out of her thought,when her phone started ringing.
"San Fransisco Police Department,Felony Division,Inspector Washington Speaking,How may I help you?...Yes,Ma'am it is a mouthfull."she laughed,"She's in a meeting right now. Can I take a message?...Okay,I will,you have a nice day." She hang up the phone. "And she must be mad at Louis.." She finished her train of thought just before the phone began to ring again,
"San Fransisco Police department,Felony division, Inspector Washington - -Oh,Hi "She laughed," She's in a meeting with D.C. Haysbert....Louis,...I don't wanna be a busy body,but it everything okay? i mean did you guys have a fight or sumthin?...Are you sure? Coz you know you can talk to me if anything is wrong...Okay...okay,I will, Bye."


"And ,Kate..Go to a doctor." He said one more time as he was leaving to make himself clear.
"Yeah okay." She rolled her eyes,and then forced herself to say," Have a nice day."


"um,...Cap can i see you in your office,please?" Cd asked once Haysbert was gone.
"Yeah,sure." She looked at Nate questiongly,as she got up and limped to her office.
"You need some help?" CD asked.
"No,I got it,thanks anyways."

"Whatcha need?" Kate sat in a chair across from her desk,it was closest,and the shorter the walk the better,she thought.
"If it's okay with them, can I trade my partner for Jinny or Magda?...just for this case....I think."CD sighed
"Why, what's the problem?"She looked at CD in confusion."I thought you and Nate were getting along."
"..Yeah, we do- -were...uh..we're having a disagreement at the moment...And there's just no way any work is gonna get done...If i have to work with him."
" Ok...well,it's fine with me,if it's fine with Mag & Jin." Kate sighed.
"Thanks, Cap." CD said.
"No problem." Kate started to smile and again was reminded by her cheek that it wasn't a good idea.
"Put some ice on that." CD stated as she left the office
"Hey,Jin..."CD said,shutting the door behind her," You wanna take a break from Magda?"
"Huh?" Jinny looked at her in confusion.
"Can I work your case with you?...Magda can work with Nate."
"Uh...yeah,sure...If Magda doesn't mind."
"Where is she?"
"I think she went to the locker room."
"K,I'm gonna go talk to her." Cd said, and headed for the Ladies' locker room.

"what was that about?" Raina asked rolling in her chair,over to Jinny's desk.
"I was just thinkin the same thing." She shrugged.

Kate sighed looking down at the caller-id on her ringing cell phone. "You're not gonna give up,till I answer are ya?" The caller-id said Louis Parillo on it. Kate counted as she wnet back over her calls, their phone number showed up 4 times in a row. She decided to see if he'd left any messages.

Message 1 :
C'mon,pleas answer.
What did you mean "my fist happened to you??"

Message 2:
Kate,c'mon,please answer the phone. What happened? What did you mean?

Message 3:
You don't mean that I....hit you? Do you?? Kate,please talk to me.

Message:
D@mn it,Kate! I just wanna know why you're mad at me!
Please answer the d@mn phone!

Kate sighed,shut off her phone,put it in her pocket,and tried to focus on her work.



"Well, looks like you and me are partners,on this case." Magda said,picking up the case file laying on Nate's desk,and looking through it.
"What?"
"Didn't CD talk to you? She asked me to trade partners with her."
"Oh,no she didn't." He said ,watching CD sit on the corner of Jinny's desk,and pick up their case file.
"Oh...well, uh...are you okay with it?."
"....yeah,thats...fine."
"You sure?"
"Yeah." He stood up from his desk," C'mon,I'll fill ya in on the case,on the way."
"Okay." Magda grabbed her jacket off her chair,and put it on. "Bye guys" She said following Nate out.

"So....why,did you wanna switch partners?" Jinny asked,as they walked from the scene of the crime,to their car.
"Uh...well...we just had a disagreement..that's all..."
"About what?"
"uh...political stuff."
Jinny stared at the blonde,as she unlocked the car,and got in,"So...why did you wanna switch partners?" She started the car,and pulled out onto the highway,"Well...?"
CD didn't say anything f,she couldn't decide if she should tell her or not. She thought it might make her feel better to tell someone, and who better to tell,then Jinny, nobody could keep a secret like Jinny could.
"Candace...did you sleep with your partner?" Jinny asked jokingly.
"Yes."
"Seriously?"
"Last night." CD nodded.
"Go Candy..."Jinny let go of the wheel,ad started waving her arms," Getcha some booty!...work it girl!"
"Will you shut up,and watch the road!" Cd said,grabbing the wheel.
"Sorry.." She laughed,and took over the wheel,again,"So..tell me what happened...why did you feel the need to switch partners?"
"well...." CD began her recount of the night before.

"I smell pizza." Jinny said as she and CD walked into the division.
"It's on Raina's desk,help yourself." Nate replied,taking a huge bite of his own slice.
"You don't gotta tell me twice." She grabbed a slice for herself,and handed one to her temporary partner.
"Where's Raina?" CD asked.
"She's having lunch, with an old friend...His name Sedrick, and he is cuuuuute!" Magda informed.
"Oooohhhh I see." CD laughed.
Jinny just rolled her eyes."Well,speak of the devil and her phone will ring." She said,walking over and answering the ringing phone on Raina's desk. "SFPD, Inspector Exstead speaking....Who's speaking?...okay,just a moment." She put the caller on hold,walked over to her captain's office ,and knocked on it. Unlike Raina,she waited for a reply before going in.
"What's up?" Kate asked.
"uh...Louis...,is on line 3 for you."
"Thanks." Kate sighed. She gave in,and answered.
"No prob." As Jinny walked out she heard Kate say," Yes Louis, that is exactly what happened...look,I don't want to talk to you right now. I am trying to work,stop calling."
"Ooookay,somebody is in the certainly doghouse." Jinny thought.


So wutcha think? Shud we post more?

[Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan]

You really want to know what I think? I think you should post more ASAP!

[CD DeLorenzo]

Hey I like this Please post more again

[*Nancy Mckeon*]

ya gonna finish this? its been like 2 weeks!

[MovieHuntress17]

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
ya gonna finish this? its been like 2 weeks!

Lol, sumday hopefully. We can never manage 2 be on at the same time lately lol,and last time we talked we both had a bad case of writer's block (yes i know,not suprising on my part)