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Fred G Cleaver · 03-13-2003, 04:01 AM

well first thing im going to say the year that this takes place is 2003 but its like beaver was a kid in the 70's 80's instead of the 50's 60's

Mayfield March 13 2003

Cleaver House

Upstairs Beavers and pennys room
Penny: Beaver wake up hunny youll be late for work
Beaver: im up hunny
Beaver: Has mom cooked breakfast yet
Penny: yes she has
Beaver: are those kids of ours up yet
Penny: Yes Sweetheart i woke them

Downstairs Kitchen Beaver's Daughter and Son come running in

Kenny: Hey Grandma whats for breakfast
June : Eggs and bacon
Sissy: hey grandma good morning how are you
June: im fine

Beaver comes into the kitchen
Beaver: mom i only have time for a cup of coffee
June: its not that late you got time to eat breakfast
Beaver: no mom dont you remember i got an important metting this morning at 8:30 and its 8:00 right now

Penny comes into the kitchen Beaver fisnshes his coffee kisses his mother and his wife penny and leaves

Kenny: Sissy lets get a move on we got to get to school and its time for the bus
Penny: Kenny dont hurry your sister like that
Kenny:yes mam
Sissy: oh theres the bus lets go kenny see you mom see you grandma
Penny: I got to go to mother cleaver
June: bye penny
June to herself: they have done this for a long time i cook a hot breakfast and nobody gets much of it

the Law Firm Wally works for

Mr.Kincad: Mr.Cleaver you have lost 5 cases in a row
Wally: Sorry Mr.Kincad
Mr.Kincad: Cleaver i like you thats why i hired you but these lost cases is costing us lots of money
Wally: Well my last cilnet was Guilty but you told me to plead him not guilty
Mr Kincad: Well Cleaver your right im sorry but you still got to strigten up
Wally: Well i have worked here since i got out of Law School and i think i have done a very good Job alright Mr Kincad
Mr Kincad I know you lost your Father and Son within a few years but not an accuse for poor work when you first came here you were the best rookie lawer I had ever seen
Wally: Thanks Mr Kincad
Mr.Kincad Well Cleaver i got anothor case for you its a rapist who says he was nowhere near the girl
Wally: Alright

back at the Cleaver house
June is looking at some old photographs of Ward

She thinks to herself oh God i miss you Ward
the phone rings she anwsers it
June: Hello
Fred: Hello
June: oh hey Fred
Fred: You know what
June: what
Fred: I think its about time we started dating agian
June: but we are to old and who would go out with a widow and a widower
Fred: Well we Could go out with each other
June: I Dont know Fred it seems so soon
Fred: I know but noone should die alone
June: Right Fred
Fred: So You want to go to diner and a movie
June: alright just this one time and just as freinds
Fred: Yes ofcourse
June: Bye Fred
Fred: Goodbye

Courtroom

Judge: Well it looks like the suspect didnt do it so im dissmissng the charges
Wally: Thank you your honor but how do you know he didnt do it
Judge: DNA doesnt match
Wally: Doesnt match then why drag us into court Your honor
Judge: Becase we just got the DNA Results ourself
Wally: Thanks your Honor but you know who the DNA matches
Judge: Not yet but we will soon you may leave now
Wally: Alright your Honor

Park daytime

Cop1: Looks like the rapist struck agian but this time the victums dead
Cop2: yeah she sure was pretty who do you think done this
Cop3: we will find the guy who done this

Cleaver House Afternoon
Sissy: Grandma what happened today
June: I got a date with Fred Rutherford
Sissy: You mean that crazy old man whose wife died about the same time Grandpa died
June: Yes

Penny comes in
Penny: wheres your brother Sissy
Sissy: I guess he had to stay after School
Penny: Like Father like son
June: Well Beaver wasnt that bad when he was kenny's age

Kenny comes in
Kenny: Hey Mom Hey Grandma
Penny: Kenny why did you come home so late
Kenny: there was a big deal over at the park me and steven went to see but we couldnt get nowhere near it
June: Wonder what happened

Beaver comes in though the front door
Beaver: Penny hunny im home
Penny: comes into the room and says beaver whats that all over you
Beaver: Says they were painting the office today

Back at the Law Firm

Mr.Kincad Cleaver There was anothor rape this morning
Wally: then my clinet really didnt do it
Mr.Kincad: there is one more thing the woman that was raped also died
Wally Gee Do they have any idea who done it
Mr Kincad: Yes there was a witness who seen a dark haired man in the park at the time the murder took place
Wally: Well im going to get home to the Wife and Daughter bye Mr.Kincad

Wally's House
Wally: Hey Im home
Julie: What happened today
Wally: Lots I Tell you about it Later im starved whats for dinner

Back at the Cleaver House
The Phone Rings
its beavers boss
Penny answers it

Penny: Hello
Mr Henderson: Hello
Penny: Mr.Henderson what a pleanst surpise
Mr Henderson: what time did your husband leave this morning
Penny: about 8 why
Mr Henderson:well He Never showed for that metting he didnt get here till half past 9
Penny: thats strange Theodore never is late for work or a metting
Mr Henderson: Tell Him the next time he does that he is fired bye
Penny: Good bye
June: Who was that
Penny: That was beavers boss
June what did he want
Penny: he wasnted to know why beaver Showed up late for work

Police Station

Cop1 We Got DNA on the suspect
Cop2 Well who is he
Cop1 We only know his last name was cleaver
Cop2 well there is only two Cleaver Adults in Mayfield
Officer Bates What are you guys talking about
Cop2 it seems your buddy Theodore is the suspect at least in the murder case but i think we can tie him to the other rape
Officer Bates: No way Beaver would never hurt someone at that bad

Meanwhile back at the cleaver house
Fred has came to pick June up

Fred: Hello June you look lovely tonight
June: Thanks Fred
Fred: We'd Better Go its getting alful late

They leave

Later on
There is a knock at the door

Sissy answers it

Sissy: Hello Officer Bates
Officer Bates : is your Dad here
Penny: oh hey Gilbert
Officer Bates: im here on Offical bussiness Wheres beaver
Penny He's right upstairs ill call him
Beaver hunny Gilberts here to see you

Beaver comes down the stairs

Beaver oh hey buddy
Officer Bates Theodore Cleaver im placing you under arrest
Beaver come on Gilbert quit the clowning
Officer Bates Im not Clowning
Beaver well then what charge is it
Officer Bates Mr Cleaver your under arrest for rape and murder
Beaver What
Officer Bates you have the right to remain silent any thing you say can and will be used aginst you in a court of law you have the right to the precsene of a lawer if you can not afford one one will be appointed to you before questioning do you understand your rights
Beaver: Yes
Officer Bates Lets Go to the Station Maybe we can get this mess fixed ok
Beaver ok
Penny Dont worry hunny we will get you out if it takes every last cent we have
Beaver Gilbert do you have to put me in hand cuffs
Officer Bates : im afirad i have to sorry beav

Police station

Beaver Aint i Allowed to make one phone call
Cop1 i dont know why they let killers like you make phone calls but yes you do have the right to one call
Beaver ok

Beaver calls wally

Wally anwsers the phone

Wally Hello
Beaver Hey Wally
Wally Beaver where are you
Beaver im at the police station
Wally what did you do
Beaver i didnt do anything
Wally then what charge do they got you on
Beaver they say i killed some woman in the park this morning
Wally Alright Beaver ill be there first thing in the morning and get you bailed out
Beaver Gee Wally thanks

Meanwhile at the dinner that Fred and June are having Fred takes June home and she comes in to see penny ans sissy crying

June whats wrong
Penny Beaver is in Jail
June what for
Penny they say he killed a woman but im sure by now he has called wally

March 14 2003 morning
Jailhouse

Beaver couldnt hardly sleep at all Wally comes in

Wally I got you out on Bail we can go but its going to be hard to get you off the lethal injection table
Beaver Gee Wally is it that bad
Wally im afirad it is

Back at the Cleaver house
Wally and Beaver enter

June are you alright Beaver
Beaver im fine
Wally Alright Beaver what happened i know you were at the park yesterday morning
Beaver i seen this Man attack this woman i tried to save her he hit me next thing i know they both are gone i just got up and went to the office
Wally is that it
Beaver yes thats it
Penny oh baby your back home and wally whens the Trial
Wally Monday Apirl 21
Beaver i dont want to lose everything i have lived for my wife my kids my job my life noone knows how much i love them
Wally Beaver your not going to lose them
Beaver How can you be sure Wally
Wally Because your innocent
Beaver im going to bed i didnt sleep much last night in that Jail cell
Penny I didnt sleep much either hunny worring about you
Beaver you and the kids mean more to me than my on life
Wally What did the guy look like that was Attacking this woman
Beaver well he had a mask on but he was big i mean real big
Wally well ok now we got somthing ill check it out now Beaver now dont leave the house and dont go anywhere ok
Beaver i wouldnt leave this house for nothing

Back at the Police Station

Cop1 i dont know why they let a killer out on bail
Cop2 Well everybody gets a bail set
Officer Bates well and anthor reason is becuase he is innocent and im going to his house and watch it all the time i can so if another one happenes we can clear beaver

Saturday March 15 2003
Wally is Beaver up yet
June no he isnt

Fred Rutherford comes bye to see June not knowing a thing about whats happened to Theodore
Fred Good morning
June hello Fred
Fred Hows things here on the home front
June Beaver has been acussed of murder
Fred say agian
June Beaver was arrested for murder
Fred well im going to leave then ill call you later
June ok
Wally Beaver do you know anything else about that guy
Beaver all i know is he was wearing a mechanicts suit
Wally well we got our first lead the guy who done it works on cars

Monday March 17

Court Room
The hearing before the trial

Judge How do you plea
Wally we plea not gulity

Monday April 21

CourtRoom the Trial starts

day after day week after week it carries on and so does Fred and June's realtionship

Sunday night June 8
Wally is tossing and turning he cant het to sleep how is he going to prove is borther's not guilty he thinks who would want to frame Beaver he thinks back 15 years Beaver had preposed to Viloet Ruterford and then went off and married Penny Woods Violet went and killed herself so wally thought it was either Fred or Lumpy but couldnt think which one it was he said Fred's too old to comint such a bloddy act with out a weapon so it had to be Lumpy and Wally remembered Lumpy works at a car shop fixing cars so that would explain the suit that beaver saw

Monday June 9
CourtRoom

Wally calls his last witness Clarence Rutherford to the stand he first ask him was he at work that morning
Lumpy Yes
Wally I Checked to see if you came in that morning and your boss said you didnt come in at all
Lumpy what does he know
Wally Where you at the park
Lumpy come on wally your making it sound like i killed that girl
Wally Didnt my Client prepose to your sister 15 years ago
Lumpy Yes
Wally then didnt my Client marry someone else
Lumpy (in a mad sounding voice) yes
Wally then didnt your sister kill herself
Lumpy you know she did
Wally You killed that girl in the park didnt you and tried to frame my client
Lumpy Yes
Wally I would like all charges aginst my clinet droped
Judge you got it
Wally Gee thanks your honor
Penny and June are Crying

Fred puts his head between his legs and says nothing

outside the court room
Beaver Its over this nightmare is finally over
Penny Yes dear lets go home and live a happy life
Beaver Thanks Wally out of all the messes i have gotten into this has to be the worst im lucky to have a brother like you who knows what he is doing and im lucky to have a wife that supported me through this whole thing and kids that was always by my side

June Wally your Father would have been proud the way you helped beaver
Wally it was hard but i got the Job done
Beaver lets got home pop open a bottle of wine and lets Celerbrate
Wally im with you
Beaver i got the best Family in the world i wished Dad was here to see all what wally done for me
Wally me too beav

they all 6 walk out of the courthouse and beaver kisses penny sweet and tenderly

(roll Creadits)

.:BF:. · 03-13-2003, 02:00 PM

Exciting fanfic. but i can never picture lumpy killing somone, but i still think it was a good fanfic.

BBF · 03-13-2003, 03:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BeAvEr FaN
Exciting fanfic. but i can never picture lumpy killing somone, but i still think it was a good fanfic.

Very interesting fanfic. Welcome to the boards by the way!

*InThisMoment* · 03-13-2003, 03:57 PM

very well written! oh and welcome to the boards!

TAZZZZZZDEVIL · 06-28-2003, 07:28 PM

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hog wash · 06-28-2003, 08:04 PM

that is hog wash!!!

TAZZZZZZDEVIL · 06-28-2003, 09:06 PM

Yes it is hog wash

hog wash · 06-28-2003, 11:39 PM

What nonsense! Totally hog wash!!!

TheHappyBurgerMeister · 06-29-2003, 12:16 AM

Welcome to the board. I think it's very good. Very creative. I'd never think of that! Is Penny supposed to be Penny is old schoolmate? I didn't even realize that until the end.

the buzz · 06-29-2003, 10:39 AM

you have got to be kidding, who wrote this story?

BrandonS · 06-29-2003, 10:47 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by the buzz
you have got to be kidding, who wrote this story?

It's an old post by someone who doesn't come around here anymore.

the buzz · 06-29-2003, 11:19 AM

I thought I went to a Perry Mason or Matlock website. What an imagination.

catnap · 06-30-2003, 10:51 AM

terrible story!!! who could write such bad stuff?

Waterston_Fan · 08-10-2007, 10:26 PM

Okay, I know this story is old but... who killed who?

And it almost sounded as if Ward and Fred's wife were killed when they were together..

03-13-2003, 04:01 AM	#1
Fred G Cleaver Have You Forgotten Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 13, 2003 Location: With Esther Anderson Posts: 208	Beaver fanfic that I hope you enjoy well first thing im going to say the year that this takes place is 2003 but its like beaver was a kid in the 70's 80's instead of the 50's 60's Mayfield March 13 2003 Cleaver House Upstairs Beavers and pennys room Penny: Beaver wake up hunny youll be late for work Beaver: im up hunny Beaver: Has mom cooked breakfast yet Penny: yes she has Beaver: are those kids of ours up yet Penny: Yes Sweetheart i woke them Downstairs Kitchen Beaver's Daughter and Son come running in Kenny: Hey Grandma whats for breakfast June : Eggs and bacon Sissy: hey grandma good morning how are you June: im fine Beaver comes into the kitchen Beaver: mom i only have time for a cup of coffee June: its not that late you got time to eat breakfast Beaver: no mom dont you remember i got an important metting this morning at 8:30 and its 8:00 right now Penny comes into the kitchen Beaver fisnshes his coffee kisses his mother and his wife penny and leaves Kenny: Sissy lets get a move on we got to get to school and its time for the bus Penny: Kenny dont hurry your sister like that Kenny:yes mam Sissy: oh theres the bus lets go kenny see you mom see you grandma Penny: I got to go to mother cleaver June: bye penny June to herself: they have done this for a long time i cook a hot breakfast and nobody gets much of it the Law Firm Wally works for Mr.Kincad: Mr.Cleaver you have lost 5 cases in a row Wally: Sorry Mr.Kincad Mr.Kincad: Cleaver i like you thats why i hired you but these lost cases is costing us lots of money Wally: Well my last cilnet was Guilty but you told me to plead him not guilty Mr Kincad: Well Cleaver your right im sorry but you still got to strigten up Wally: Well i have worked here since i got out of Law School and i think i have done a very good Job alright Mr Kincad Mr Kincad I know you lost your Father and Son within a few years but not an accuse for poor work when you first came here you were the best rookie lawer I had ever seen Wally: Thanks Mr Kincad Mr.Kincad Well Cleaver i got anothor case for you its a rapist who says he was nowhere near the girl Wally: Alright back at the Cleaver house June is looking at some old photographs of Ward She thinks to herself oh God i miss you Ward the phone rings she anwsers it June: Hello Fred: Hello June: oh hey Fred Fred: You know what June: what Fred: I think its about time we started dating agian June: but we are to old and who would go out with a widow and a widower Fred: Well we Could go out with each other June: I Dont know Fred it seems so soon Fred: I know but noone should die alone June: Right Fred Fred: So You want to go to diner and a movie June: alright just this one time and just as freinds Fred: Yes ofcourse June: Bye Fred Fred: Goodbye Courtroom Judge: Well it looks like the suspect didnt do it so im dissmissng the charges Wally: Thank you your honor but how do you know he didnt do it Judge: DNA doesnt match Wally: Doesnt match then why drag us into court Your honor Judge: Becase we just got the DNA Results ourself Wally: Thanks your Honor but you know who the DNA matches Judge: Not yet but we will soon you may leave now Wally: Alright your Honor Park daytime Cop1: Looks like the rapist struck agian but this time the victums dead Cop2: yeah she sure was pretty who do you think done this Cop3: we will find the guy who done this Cleaver House Afternoon Sissy: Grandma what happened today June: I got a date with Fred Rutherford Sissy: You mean that crazy old man whose wife died about the same time Grandpa died June: Yes Penny comes in Penny: wheres your brother Sissy Sissy: I guess he had to stay after School Penny: Like Father like son June: Well Beaver wasnt that bad when he was kenny's age Kenny comes in Kenny: Hey Mom Hey Grandma Penny: Kenny why did you come home so late Kenny: there was a big deal over at the park me and steven went to see but we couldnt get nowhere near it June: Wonder what happened Beaver comes in though the front door Beaver: Penny hunny im home Penny: comes into the room and says beaver whats that all over you Beaver: Says they were painting the office today Back at the Law Firm Mr.Kincad Cleaver There was anothor rape this morning Wally: then my clinet really didnt do it Mr.Kincad: there is one more thing the woman that was raped also died Wally Gee Do they have any idea who done it Mr Kincad: Yes there was a witness who seen a dark haired man in the park at the time the murder took place Wally: Well im going to get home to the Wife and Daughter bye Mr.Kincad Wally's House Wally: Hey Im home Julie: What happened today Wally: Lots I Tell you about it Later im starved whats for dinner Back at the Cleaver House The Phone Rings its beavers boss Penny answers it Penny: Hello Mr Henderson: Hello Penny: Mr.Henderson what a pleanst surpise Mr Henderson: what time did your husband leave this morning Penny: about 8 why Mr Henderson:well He Never showed for that metting he didnt get here till half past 9 Penny: thats strange Theodore never is late for work or a metting Mr Henderson: Tell Him the next time he does that he is fired bye Penny: Good bye June: Who was that Penny: That was beavers boss June what did he want Penny: he wasnted to know why beaver Showed up late for work Police Station Cop1 We Got DNA on the suspect Cop2 Well who is he Cop1 We only know his last name was cleaver Cop2 well there is only two Cleaver Adults in Mayfield Officer Bates What are you guys talking about Cop2 it seems your buddy Theodore is the suspect at least in the murder case but i think we can tie him to the other rape Officer Bates: No way Beaver would never hurt someone at that bad Meanwhile back at the cleaver house Fred has came to pick June up Fred: Hello June you look lovely tonight June: Thanks Fred Fred: We'd Better Go its getting alful late They leave Later on There is a knock at the door Sissy answers it Sissy: Hello Officer Bates Officer Bates : is your Dad here Penny: oh hey Gilbert Officer Bates: im here on Offical bussiness Wheres beaver Penny He's right upstairs ill call him Beaver hunny Gilberts here to see you Beaver comes down the stairs Beaver oh hey buddy Officer Bates Theodore Cleaver im placing you under arrest Beaver come on Gilbert quit the clowning Officer Bates Im not Clowning Beaver well then what charge is it Officer Bates Mr Cleaver your under arrest for rape and murder Beaver What Officer Bates you have the right to remain silent any thing you say can and will be used aginst you in a court of law you have the right to the precsene of a lawer if you can not afford one one will be appointed to you before questioning do you understand your rights Beaver: Yes Officer Bates Lets Go to the Station Maybe we can get this mess fixed ok Beaver ok Penny Dont worry hunny we will get you out if it takes every last cent we have Beaver Gilbert do you have to put me in hand cuffs Officer Bates : im afirad i have to sorry beav Police station Beaver Aint i Allowed to make one phone call Cop1 i dont know why they let killers like you make phone calls but yes you do have the right to one call Beaver ok Beaver calls wally Wally anwsers the phone Wally Hello Beaver Hey Wally Wally Beaver where are you Beaver im at the police station Wally what did you do Beaver i didnt do anything Wally then what charge do they got you on Beaver they say i killed some woman in the park this morning Wally Alright Beaver ill be there first thing in the morning and get you bailed out Beaver Gee Wally thanks Meanwhile at the dinner that Fred and June are having Fred takes June home and she comes in to see penny ans sissy crying June whats wrong Penny Beaver is in Jail June what for Penny they say he killed a woman but im sure by now he has called wally March 14 2003 morning Jailhouse Beaver couldnt hardly sleep at all Wally comes in Wally I got you out on Bail we can go but its going to be hard to get you off the lethal injection table Beaver Gee Wally is it that bad Wally im afirad it is Back at the Cleaver house Wally and Beaver enter June are you alright Beaver Beaver im fine Wally Alright Beaver what happened i know you were at the park yesterday morning Beaver i seen this Man attack this woman i tried to save her he hit me next thing i know they both are gone i just got up and went to the office Wally is that it Beaver yes thats it Penny oh baby your back home and wally whens the Trial Wally Monday Apirl 21 Beaver i dont want to lose everything i have lived for my wife my kids my job my life noone knows how much i love them Wally Beaver your not going to lose them Beaver How can you be sure Wally Wally Because your innocent Beaver im going to bed i didnt sleep much last night in that Jail cell Penny I didnt sleep much either hunny worring about you Beaver you and the kids mean more to me than my on life Wally What did the guy look like that was Attacking this woman Beaver well he had a mask on but he was big i mean real big Wally well ok now we got somthing ill check it out now Beaver now dont leave the house and dont go anywhere ok Beaver i wouldnt leave this house for nothing Back at the Police Station Cop1 i dont know why they let a killer out on bail Cop2 Well everybody gets a bail set Officer Bates well and anthor reason is becuase he is innocent and im going to his house and watch it all the time i can so if another one happenes we can clear beaver Saturday March 15 2003 Wally is Beaver up yet June no he isnt Fred Rutherford comes bye to see June not knowing a thing about whats happened to Theodore Fred Good morning June hello Fred Fred Hows things here on the home front June Beaver has been acussed of murder Fred say agian June Beaver was arrested for murder Fred well im going to leave then ill call you later June ok Wally Beaver do you know anything else about that guy Beaver all i know is he was wearing a mechanicts suit Wally well we got our first lead the guy who done it works on cars Monday March 17 Court Room The hearing before the trial Judge How do you plea Wally we plea not gulity Monday April 21 CourtRoom the Trial starts day after day week after week it carries on and so does Fred and June's realtionship Sunday night June 8 Wally is tossing and turning he cant het to sleep how is he going to prove is borther's not guilty he thinks who would want to frame Beaver he thinks back 15 years Beaver had preposed to Viloet Ruterford and then went off and married Penny Woods Violet went and killed herself so wally thought it was either Fred or Lumpy but couldnt think which one it was he said Fred's too old to comint such a bloddy act with out a weapon so it had to be Lumpy and Wally remembered Lumpy works at a car shop fixing cars so that would explain the suit that beaver saw Monday June 9 CourtRoom Wally calls his last witness Clarence Rutherford to the stand he first ask him was he at work that morning Lumpy Yes Wally I Checked to see if you came in that morning and your boss said you didnt come in at all Lumpy what does he know Wally Where you at the park Lumpy come on wally your making it sound like i killed that girl Wally Didnt my Client prepose to your sister 15 years ago Lumpy Yes Wally then didnt my Client marry someone else Lumpy (in a mad sounding voice) yes Wally then didnt your sister kill herself Lumpy you know she did Wally You killed that girl in the park didnt you and tried to frame my client Lumpy Yes Wally I would like all charges aginst my clinet droped Judge you got it Wally Gee thanks your honor Penny and June are Crying Fred puts his head between his legs and says nothing outside the court room Beaver Its over this nightmare is finally over Penny Yes dear lets go home and live a happy life Beaver Thanks Wally out of all the messes i have gotten into this has to be the worst im lucky to have a brother like you who knows what he is doing and im lucky to have a wife that supported me through this whole thing and kids that was always by my side June Wally your Father would have been proud the way you helped beaver Wally it was hard but i got the Job done Beaver lets got home pop open a bottle of wine and lets Celerbrate Wally im with you Beaver i got the best Family in the world i wished Dad was here to see all what wally done for me Wally me too beav they all 6 walk out of the courthouse and beaver kisses penny sweet and tenderly (roll Creadits)

03-13-2003, 02:00 PM	#2
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03-13-2003, 03:57 PM	#4
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06-28-2003, 07:28 PM	#5
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06-29-2003, 12:16 AM	#9
TheHappyBurgerMeister Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 23, 2002 Location: Wisconsin, USA Posts: 2,209	Welcome to the board. I think it's very good. Very creative. I'd never think of that! Is Penny supposed to be Penny is old schoolmate? I didn't even realize that until the end.
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06-28-2003, 08:04 PM	#6
hog wash Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jun 26, 2003 Posts: 13	that is hog wash!!!

06-28-2003, 09:06 PM	#7
TAZZZZZZDEVIL Banned Banned!! Occasional Poster Join Date: Jun 25, 2003 Posts: 10	Yes it is hog wash

06-28-2003, 11:39 PM	#8
hog wash Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jun 26, 2003 Posts: 13	What nonsense! Totally hog wash!!!

06-29-2003, 10:39 AM	#10
the buzz Member Forum Cub Join Date: Jun 29, 2003 Posts: 2	you have got to be kidding, who wrote this story?
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06-29-2003, 11:19 AM	#12
the buzz Member Forum Cub Join Date: Jun 29, 2003 Posts: 2	I thought I went to a Perry Mason or Matlock website. What an imagination.

06-30-2003, 10:51 AM	#13
catnap Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jun 30, 2003 Location: South Florida Posts: 6	terrible story!!! who could write such bad stuff?
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08-10-2007, 10:26 PM	#14
Waterston_Fan Eternal Member Eternal Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 26, 2005 Location: Southern California Posts: 3,195	Okay, I know this story is old but... who killed who? And it almost sounded as if Ward and Fred's wife were killed when they were together..