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*InThisMoment* · 03-09-2003, 06:25 PM

well i know i'm not a real good fan fic writer so go easy on me LOL. but still i feel like writing it and it is a good idea even if I'M not a good writer.

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(the opening scene beaver is up in his and wallys room looking a bit nervious geting ready for a date with violet)

Beaver:wally?

Wally:yea?

Beaver:how do i look?

Wally: oh fine.

(beaver wrecklessly puting on his tie)

Wally:calm down.what ya' all shook up about?

Beaver: oh nothing (hiding some thing)

Beaver:well i got to go i don't want to be late.

Wally:were ya going anyway?

Beaver: oh me and violet are going out to eat.

Wally: oh. well i'll see you later.

(they scene fades into beaver and violet sitting down to the table that they reserved the day before)

(beaver sits down and they order. beaver looks like he's nervious or some thing is wronge.Violet notices)

Violet

me thing wronge?

Beaver: oh no.

Violet: ok good.i sure can't wait to eat i'm starving.

Beaver: oh, me too. (he really didn't have much of a apetite for food. he had some thing on his mind)

(about 10 minutes later they order and the waiter comes up to thier table sets down their plates and leaves)

Violet:yumm this looks good.

Beaver:yes.

Violet

me thing wronge beaver.you haven't been acting your self.

Beaver: oh no.well i'm sure it's nothing i ate. because i haven't ate yet (trying to hide his nerviousness)

(beaver and violet continue their meal and are leaving for the movies)

(beaver and violet get in the car)

Beaver:did you have a nice time (a little more calm than earlier)

Violet:wondorful beaver, just wondorful.

Beaver:good. i thought so too.

(they head to the movies)

Violet:beaver?

Beaver:yes violet?

Violet:are you enjoying your self?

Beaver:yes i am.i'm just a little tired.

Violet:beaver.listen why don't we skip the movie and go home huh?

Beaver:why?

Violet:well i don't know what but you seem to have some thing on your mind.and i think maybe we should head home.it's geting late any way.

Beaver: ok violet what ever you say. (trying to pretend he didn't know what she mean't)

(beaver drove violet home and is kissing her good bye on her porch)

Beaver:uh violet?

Violet:yea beaver?

Beaver:well i know you noticed a change in me and... well i didn't mean to ruin your evening but maybe now you'll know why...

(beaver gets on his knees)

Beaver:would you marry me?

(beaver stands up and violet falls into his arms)

(Violet near crying)

Violet: oh yes beaver i will!

(Beaver and violet kiss)

to be continued...

i'll write more if i get some replys

Corvetteguy · 03-09-2003, 08:54 PM

I can't wait to read more. I can just picture Fred having to buy the best of everything and running around taking pictures left & right and Lumpy eating out of the wedding food and fred scolding him

Fred:"Clarence keep your hands off that food. it's cost me $80 bucks for that shrimp.

Lumpy: "Yes Daddy".

*InThisMoment* · 03-09-2003, 09:25 PM

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Originally posted by Corvetteguy
I can't wait to read more. I can just picture Fred having to buy the best of everything and running around taking pictures left & right and Lumpy eating out of the wedding food and fred scolding him

Fred:"Clarence keep your hands off that food. it's cost me $80 bucks for that shrimp.

Lumpy: "Yes Daddy".

thanks i will write more later on today or tammorow i'm glad you like it.you know i'm gonna use some of those ideas in my fanfic.that does sound very real!

.:BF:. · 03-09-2003, 10:19 PM

Wow good fanfic, very romantic.

TheHappyBurgerMeister · 03-10-2003, 12:18 AM

Hey, that's cool! How old are they supposed to be in the fanfic? Well, it's almost funny because I'm still thinking of them as 2 kids in grammar school and here Beaver is proposing to Violet! Well, I guess I should try a bit harder to imagine them older. I can't wait for more- keep it up!

*InThisMoment* · 03-10-2003, 01:03 AM

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Originally posted by TheHappyBurgerMeister
Hey, that's cool! How old are they supposed to be in the fanfic? Well, it's almost funny because I'm still thinking of them as 2 kids in grammar school and here Beaver is proposing to Violet! Well, I guess I should try a bit harder to imagine them older. I can't wait for more- keep it up!

i guess they are saposed to be around 18 or 19.and i also thought it was hard to picture them that old too!. i'm glad you are all enjoying my fan fic. i'll proably write more tammorow.

*InThisMoment* · 03-10-2003, 01:36 AM

ok heres the next part...

(the scene fades into beaver and violet siting in the cleaver living room telling june ward and wally the news)

June: oh my little babys geting married!!! (in tears)

Ward:calm down june.

June:yes (holding back her tears)

Wally:congradulations! beaver! i never thought i'd see the day my little brother was married before me! (yes i'm saying wally isn't married i wanted him to still be single so it could add more of the BEAVER quality.i don't think it would be right for both the cleaver boys to be married.LOL)

June: oh beaver.oh violet.i'm so happy for you.

Violet:thank you mrs (about to say mrs cleaver)..mom!

Ward:well son. i'm very proud of you. (looks at june) please dear stop crying.

June:i'm just so happy for them.

Ward:well june than act happy.

June:yes

(and i'm saying the whole time he's talking shes crying histerically.just so you don't think ward was over reacting)

Wally:i'm real happy for you beav.

Beaver:thanks wally.

(the scene fades into beaver and wally in their room talking)

Beaver:wally?

Wally:what?

Beaver:would you...

Wally:what?

Beaver:i want you to be my best man.

Wally:well gee thanks beav i would love to be your best man!

Beaver:thanks. i hope the wedding turns out to be everything i hope it will be.

(the scene fades into violet's house were fred and gwenn are discussing the wedding)

Fred:we are so proud of you violet.

Violet:thank you daddy.

Fred:and just think some day clarence will be geting married.

Lumpy:yes daddy.

Fred:and violet i can't wait to talk with ward about this.i'll see to it that you two have the best wedding you could ever imagine.

Violet:thank you daddy.

Gwenn:yes violet you have made a wondorful decision marring beaver.

Violet:thank you mom.i love beaver alot.and i know he loves me too.i can't wait to be married with him.

Fred:you two do make quite a cute couple.

to be continued...

i know it seemed to have some rough edges but it wasn't THAT bad

BBF · 03-10-2003, 08:55 AM

This is great so far! Eagerly anticipating more soon!

*InThisMoment* · 03-10-2003, 03:43 PM

thanks, i'll write the next part later

.:BF:. · 03-10-2003, 04:24 PM

Wow! cant wait to read about the wedding, Keep it coming.

*InThisMoment* · 03-10-2003, 09:32 PM

thanks everyone.i promise the next part later today

*InThisMoment* · 03-11-2003, 01:26 AM

ok heres the next part...

(the scene fades into ward's office where ward and fred are talking about beaver and violets wedding...

Fred:yes ward old man just the best for our violet.first class all the way.

Ward:well i plann to do my fair share too.me and june are very glad for beaver and violet.

Fred:us too.us too.

(ward and fred go on talking about the wedding.mean while beaver and violet are pretty much having the same conversation over dinner)

Violet: oh beaver i'm so exited about the wedding! i just know we'll be so happy!.

Beaver:i do too.

(beaver and violet kiss a passionate kiss)

(the scene fades into ward and june talking. the boys had already went to bed.)

June:you know i never really realized just how serious beaver and violet were about each other.

Ward:well june they have been going steady for a few years.

June:yes...my little babies growing up.soon he'll have little babys and then some day well be grandparents and than...

Ward:well lets just get thru the wedding june.

June:it just seems like yesterday beaver was just a little baby.

Ward:well he's 18. he's all grown up.

June:well i sure am proud of beaver.i'm sure beaver and violet will be very happy together.

Ward:me too june. me too.

to be continued...

i hope you enjoyed the 3rd part. i know it was short but i'm kinda' stumped.

*InThisMoment* · 03-11-2003, 01:37 AM

i know this last part turned out short and kinda' bad so i "thunk" up some good ideas for the next one

*InThisMoment* · 03-11-2003, 07:27 PM

ok heres the next part...

the scene fades into wally and mary ellen on a date together at a movie...

Mary ellen:are you enjoying the movie wally?

Wally:sure it's a great picture.just i was thinking.soon beaver and violet will be married.

Mary ellen:maybe some day wedding bells will be ringing for us. (puting her hand in wallys)

(now just to get someting straight.in all my other short fics wally's steady girl was julie foster. like it was at the end of the real LITB series.so they had just got back together.but you all know mary ellen. and she really likes wally.just mentioning this so you might understand this part in my fanfic)

Wally:maybe.i don't know if i'm quite ready for marriage.

Mary ellen:well wally your in your 20's you have to get married some time.

Wally:well i just wan't to be sure i don't rush into things and marrie some one i won't get along with.ya know mary ellen.marriage isn't anyting to rush.

Mary ellen:are you saying i wouldn't make a good wife!?

Wally: of course not.look i'm just not ready to get married ok? can we just watch the picture?

Mary ellen:well wally cleaver i think i get the picture!

Wally:wait!

(mary ellen madly walks away)

Wally:mary ellen!

(the scene fades into the kitchen one week later wally and mary ellen and wally still haven't got back together. june is baking a cake) (oh and just so you all know mary ellen IS coming to the wedding)

June:hi wally.

Wally:hi mom

June

me thing wronge?

Wally:i tryed to call mary ellen but she refused to talk to me.

June:what she mad about?

Wally:well i told her i didn't want to rush into marriage and she took it personal and thought i was saying i wouldn't want to be married to her.

June: oh.well how are you gonna face her.we already invited her to the wedding.

Wally:thats why i'm trying to makeup with her.i never ment to insult her.

June:well i'm sure you will makeup in time.

Wally:girls sure are touchy.

June:wally?

Wally:yea mom i'll go try to call back mary ellen

(just a update... the wedding is in 2 weeks)

(ok now back to beaver and violet)

Violet

honey. (she just walked into the den)

Beaver: oh hi violet.

Beaver:i just came home i was looking around for a room in a apartment.

Violet:no luck?

Beaver:no luck.

Violet:well i'm sure we will find one.

Beaver:me too.

Violet:i think we sent out all the wedding invatations.

Beaver:we did send one to uncle billy didn't we?

Violet:don't you remember that was the 5th one we sent out.

Beaver: oh yea.i sure can't wait to see uncle billy's face when he sees the radiant beautiful girl i'm marrying. (huging violet)

Violet: oh beaver!.you can really make a girl feel special.

(she kisses him)

Violet:i can't wait to be married

Beaver:me too.

(they go back to kissing)

(just then wally walks in to the den to try to call mary ellen)

Wally: oh (turning around)

Beaver: oh it's ok wally you can come in.

Wally: oh thanks beav.i have to try to phone mary ellen.

Beaver:sure.wally if you see a apartment for rent will ya tell me?

Wally:sure thing beav.

(beaver exits the room)

(wally trys to call mary ellen but still no luck so he goes over to her house)

Wally:hi mary ellen (who just answered the door)

Mary ellen:hi wally

Wally:look mary ellen. i'm real sorry about what i said.

Mary ellen: oh(still mad). oh wally i'm sorry too!

(falling into his arms)

Mary ellen:i shouldn't of taken it so personal.

Wally:well i'm just glad we are back together again.

Mary ellen:me too. i know what you men't and wally.and i really am sorry.i promise i won't rush you.marriage IS a thing you shouldn't rush into.

Wally:well i'm glad ya understand mary ellen.

to be continued...

i still got some more good ideas for the next part, hope you all liked this part of my fanfic

BBF · 03-11-2003, 08:18 PM

I don't see why you said you weren't a good writer! This is an excellent fanfic! Can't wait to read more!

03-09-2003, 06:25 PM	#1
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	Beaver's wedding (fanfic) well i know i'm not a real good fan fic writer so go easy on me LOL. but still i feel like writing it and it is a good idea even if I'M not a good writer. ... (the opening scene beaver is up in his and wallys room looking a bit nervious geting ready for a date with violet) Beaver:wally? Wally:yea? Beaver:how do i look? Wally: oh fine. (beaver wrecklessly puting on his tie) Wally:calm down.what ya' all shook up about? Beaver: oh nothing (hiding some thing) Beaver:well i got to go i don't want to be late. Wally:were ya going anyway? Beaver: oh me and violet are going out to eat. Wally: oh. well i'll see you later. (they scene fades into beaver and violet sitting down to the table that they reserved the day before) (beaver sits down and they order. beaver looks like he's nervious or some thing is wronge.Violet notices) Violetme thing wronge? Beaver: oh no. Violet: ok good.i sure can't wait to eat i'm starving. Beaver: oh, me too. (he really didn't have much of a apetite for food. he had some thing on his mind) (about 10 minutes later they order and the waiter comes up to thier table sets down their plates and leaves) Violet:yumm this looks good. Beaver:yes. Violetme thing wronge beaver.you haven't been acting your self. Beaver: oh no.well i'm sure it's nothing i ate. because i haven't ate yet (trying to hide his nerviousness) (beaver and violet continue their meal and are leaving for the movies) (beaver and violet get in the car) Beaver:did you have a nice time (a little more calm than earlier) Violet:wondorful beaver, just wondorful. Beaver:good. i thought so too. (they head to the movies) Violet:beaver? Beaver:yes violet? Violet:are you enjoying your self? Beaver:yes i am.i'm just a little tired. Violet:beaver.listen why don't we skip the movie and go home huh? Beaver:why? Violet:well i don't know what but you seem to have some thing on your mind.and i think maybe we should head home.it's geting late any way. Beaver: ok violet what ever you say. (trying to pretend he didn't know what she mean't) (beaver drove violet home and is kissing her good bye on her porch) Beaver:uh violet? Violet:yea beaver? Beaver:well i know you noticed a change in me and... well i didn't mean to ruin your evening but maybe now you'll know why... (beaver gets on his knees) Beaver:would you marry me? (beaver stands up and violet falls into his arms) (Violet near crying) Violet: oh yes beaver i will! (Beaver and violet kiss) to be continued... i'll write more if i get some replys
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03-09-2003, 08:54 PM	#2
Corvetteguy Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 01, 2003 Location: TN Posts: 126	I can't wait to read more. I can just picture Fred having to buy the best of everything and running around taking pictures left & right and Lumpy eating out of the wedding food and fred scolding him Fred:"Clarence keep your hands off that food. it's cost me $80 bucks for that shrimp. Lumpy: "Yes Daddy". Attached Images

03-09-2003, 10:19 PM	#4
.:BF:. Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Nov 21, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 4,736	Fanfic. Wow good fanfic, very romantic.

03-10-2003, 12:18 AM	#5
TheHappyBurgerMeister Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 23, 2002 Location: Wisconsin, USA Posts: 2,209	Hey, that's cool! How old are they supposed to be in the fanfic? Well, it's almost funny because I'm still thinking of them as 2 kids in grammar school and here Beaver is proposing to Violet! Well, I guess I should try a bit harder to imagine them older. I can't wait for more- keep it up!
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03-10-2003, 08:55 AM	#8
BBF Workin' those Scrubs Senior Member Join Date: Jun 12, 2002 Location: The "Natural" State Posts: 2,014	This is great so far! Eagerly anticipating more soon!
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03-10-2003, 01:36 AM	#7
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	ok heres the next part... (the scene fades into beaver and violet siting in the cleaver living room telling june ward and wally the news) June: oh my little babys geting married!!! (in tears) Ward:calm down june. June:yes (holding back her tears) Wally:congradulations! beaver! i never thought i'd see the day my little brother was married before me! (yes i'm saying wally isn't married i wanted him to still be single so it could add more of the BEAVER quality.i don't think it would be right for both the cleaver boys to be married.LOL) June: oh beaver.oh violet.i'm so happy for you. Violet:thank you mrs (about to say mrs cleaver)..mom! Ward:well son. i'm very proud of you. (looks at june) please dear stop crying. June:i'm just so happy for them. Ward:well june than act happy. June:yes (and i'm saying the whole time he's talking shes crying histerically.just so you don't think ward was over reacting) Wally:i'm real happy for you beav. Beaver:thanks wally. (the scene fades into beaver and wally in their room talking) Beaver:wally? Wally:what? Beaver:would you... Wally:what? Beaver:i want you to be my best man. Wally:well gee thanks beav i would love to be your best man! Beaver:thanks. i hope the wedding turns out to be everything i hope it will be. (the scene fades into violet's house were fred and gwenn are discussing the wedding) Fred:we are so proud of you violet. Violet:thank you daddy. Fred:and just think some day clarence will be geting married. Lumpy:yes daddy. Fred:and violet i can't wait to talk with ward about this.i'll see to it that you two have the best wedding you could ever imagine. Violet:thank you daddy. Gwenn:yes violet you have made a wondorful decision marring beaver. Violet:thank you mom.i love beaver alot.and i know he loves me too.i can't wait to be married with him. Fred:you two do make quite a cute couple. to be continued... i know it seemed to have some rough edges but it wasn't THAT bad

03-10-2003, 03:43 PM	#9
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	thanks, i'll write the next part later

03-10-2003, 04:24 PM	#10
.:BF:. Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Nov 21, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 4,736	Fanfic. Wow! cant wait to read about the wedding, Keep it coming.

03-10-2003, 09:32 PM	#11
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	thanks everyone.i promise the next part later today

03-11-2003, 01:26 AM	#12
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	ok heres the next part... (the scene fades into ward's office where ward and fred are talking about beaver and violets wedding... Fred:yes ward old man just the best for our violet.first class all the way. Ward:well i plann to do my fair share too.me and june are very glad for beaver and violet. Fred:us too.us too. (ward and fred go on talking about the wedding.mean while beaver and violet are pretty much having the same conversation over dinner) Violet: oh beaver i'm so exited about the wedding! i just know we'll be so happy!. Beaver:i do too. (beaver and violet kiss a passionate kiss) (the scene fades into ward and june talking. the boys had already went to bed.) June:you know i never really realized just how serious beaver and violet were about each other. Ward:well june they have been going steady for a few years. June:yes...my little babies growing up.soon he'll have little babys and then some day well be grandparents and than... Ward:well lets just get thru the wedding june. June:it just seems like yesterday beaver was just a little baby. Ward:well he's 18. he's all grown up. June:well i sure am proud of beaver.i'm sure beaver and violet will be very happy together. Ward:me too june. me too. to be continued... i hope you enjoyed the 3rd part. i know it was short but i'm kinda' stumped.

03-11-2003, 01:37 AM	#13
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	i know this last part turned out short and kinda' bad so i "thunk" up some good ideas for the next one

03-11-2003, 07:27 PM	#14
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	ok heres the next part... the scene fades into wally and mary ellen on a date together at a movie... Mary ellen:are you enjoying the movie wally? Wally:sure it's a great picture.just i was thinking.soon beaver and violet will be married. Mary ellen:maybe some day wedding bells will be ringing for us. (puting her hand in wallys) (now just to get someting straight.in all my other short fics wally's steady girl was julie foster. like it was at the end of the real LITB series.so they had just got back together.but you all know mary ellen. and she really likes wally.just mentioning this so you might understand this part in my fanfic) Wally:maybe.i don't know if i'm quite ready for marriage. Mary ellen:well wally your in your 20's you have to get married some time. Wally:well i just wan't to be sure i don't rush into things and marrie some one i won't get along with.ya know mary ellen.marriage isn't anyting to rush. Mary ellen:are you saying i wouldn't make a good wife!? Wally: of course not.look i'm just not ready to get married ok? can we just watch the picture? Mary ellen:well wally cleaver i think i get the picture! Wally:wait! (mary ellen madly walks away) Wally:mary ellen! (the scene fades into the kitchen one week later wally and mary ellen and wally still haven't got back together. june is baking a cake) (oh and just so you all know mary ellen IS coming to the wedding) June:hi wally. Wally:hi mom Juneme thing wronge? Wally:i tryed to call mary ellen but she refused to talk to me. June:what she mad about? Wally:well i told her i didn't want to rush into marriage and she took it personal and thought i was saying i wouldn't want to be married to her. June: oh.well how are you gonna face her.we already invited her to the wedding. Wally:thats why i'm trying to makeup with her.i never ment to insult her. June:well i'm sure you will makeup in time. Wally:girls sure are touchy. June:wally? Wally:yea mom i'll go try to call back mary ellen (just a update... the wedding is in 2 weeks) (ok now back to beaver and violet) Violet honey. (she just walked into the den) Beaver: oh hi violet. Beaver:i just came home i was looking around for a room in a apartment. Violet:no luck? Beaver:no luck. Violet:well i'm sure we will find one. Beaver:me too. Violet:i think we sent out all the wedding invatations. Beaver:we did send one to uncle billy didn't we? Violet:don't you remember that was the 5th one we sent out. Beaver: oh yea.i sure can't wait to see uncle billy's face when he sees the radiant beautiful girl i'm marrying. (huging violet) Violet: oh beaver!.you can really make a girl feel special. (she kisses him) Violet:i can't wait to be married Beaver:me too. (they go back to kissing) (just then wally walks in to the den to try to call mary ellen) Wally: oh (turning around) Beaver: oh it's ok wally you can come in. Wally: oh thanks beav.i have to try to phone mary ellen. Beaver:sure.wally if you see a apartment for rent will ya tell me? Wally:sure thing beav. (beaver exits the room) (wally trys to call mary ellen but still no luck so he goes over to her house) Wally:hi mary ellen (who just answered the door) Mary ellen:hi wally Wally:look mary ellen. i'm real sorry about what i said. Mary ellen: oh(still mad). oh wally i'm sorry too! (falling into his arms) Mary ellen:i shouldn't of taken it so personal. Wally:well i'm just glad we are back together again. Mary ellen:me too. i know what you men't and wally.and i really am sorry.i promise i won't rush you.marriage IS a thing you shouldn't rush into. Wally:well i'm glad ya understand mary ellen. to be continued... i still got some more good ideas for the next part, hope you all liked this part of my fanfic

03-11-2003, 08:18 PM	#15
BBF Workin' those Scrubs Senior Member Join Date: Jun 12, 2002 Location: The "Natural" State Posts: 2,014	I don't see why you said you weren't a good writer! This is an excellent fanfic! Can't wait to read more!