Chapters 7,8 & 9 of "Oh, What a night!" are up (joanie & fonzie fic) - Sitcoms Online Message Boards

Mara · 03-05-2003, 09:10 PM

Ok, here are the next three chapters!

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1248876

Fair warning, there's two more chapters left and I'm done!

Although, I am wondering wether or not to do a third instalment of the story. You guys be the judges!

Enjoy!

*Shelle* · 03-06-2003, 11:44 AM

Great job as usual! I, for one, vote for more stories! You have nothing else to do, right? LOL

I couldn't find Chapter 9 though...

animalcrackers · 03-06-2003, 04:49 PM

I loved it! Yep, I vote for more.

I couldn't get chapter 9 either.

Mara · 03-06-2003, 07:58 PM

Sorry about Chapter 9 I haven't posted that one yet. I must of miscalculated or something.

Thanks for the reviews and I am planning on doing a third instalment, why not?

I really don't have anything else to do. Might as well enjoy my free time now, it's not going to last very long though. Next year I'll be a senior and then college!

CollegeGirl · 03-07-2003, 03:15 AM

This is very good. One of my favorite parts is....

"I love you and only you," she said in a whisper against his ear. A small shiver ran through his body, which made her feel absolutely wonderful. She loved making him lose control.

It describes these characters so well, and allows the reader a special glimpse into their "special moment." I can seriously feel the spark between them. It takes talent to convey emotions like that. BRAVO!!

Mara · 03-07-2003, 11:44 AM

Thank you for your compliment, I have had the best time writing this series. Although at times I do feel as though I'm going no where with the story. But that is about to change, I have great things planned for these two characters! I can't wait to share them with everyone!

03-05-2003, 09:10 PM	#1
Mara Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 12, 2003 Location: Meriden, CT Posts: 69	Chapters 7,8 & 9 of "Oh, What a night!" are up (joanie & fonzie fic) Ok, here are the next three chapters! http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1248876 Fair warning, there's two more chapters left and I'm done! Although, I am wondering wether or not to do a third instalment of the story. You guys be the judges! Enjoy!
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03-06-2003, 11:44 AM	#2
Shelle I Love Pipa! Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 21, 2003 Posts: 222	Great job as usual! I, for one, vote for more stories! You have nothing else to do, right? LOL I couldn't find Chapter 9 though...
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03-06-2003, 07:58 PM	#4
Mara Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 12, 2003 Location: Meriden, CT Posts: 69	sorry Sorry about Chapter 9 I haven't posted that one yet. I must of miscalculated or something. Thanks for the reviews and I am planning on doing a third instalment, why not? I really don't have anything else to do. Might as well enjoy my free time now, it's not going to last very long though. Next year I'll be a senior and then college!

03-07-2003, 11:44 AM	#6
Mara Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 12, 2003 Location: Meriden, CT Posts: 69	Thanks! Thank you for your compliment, I have had the best time writing this series. Although at times I do feel as though I'm going no where with the story. But that is about to change, I have great things planned for these two characters! I can't wait to share them with everyone!

03-06-2003, 04:49 PM	#3
animalcrackers Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 24, 2002 Location: The Backseat Of Fonzie's Bike Posts: 1,603	I loved it! Yep, I vote for more. I couldn't get chapter 9 either.

03-07-2003, 03:15 AM	#5
CollegeGirl Spike Loves Buffy Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2002 Location: Sunnydale: The Land of The Vamps, Monsters, And Things That Go Bump Posts: 1,517	This is very good. One of my favorite parts is.... "I love you and only you," she said in a whisper against his ear. A small shiver ran through his body, which made her feel absolutely wonderful. She loved making him lose control. It describes these characters so well, and allows the reader a special glimpse into their "special moment." I can seriously feel the spark between them. It takes talent to convey emotions like that. BRAVO!!