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"Let It Be"
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This is a continuation of the other fanfic I wrote (see the thread for "A New Complete Fanfic, in 3 Scenes"--I guess it wasn't so complete after all, LOL).
Scene 1 Gilligan and Mary Ann walked slowly back to her hut, holding hands. They stopped in front of her door, and Mary Ann turned to him, taking both his hands in hers. "Well, goodnight, Gilligan. I'm so glad you asked me to go for a walk." "I'm glad I did, too, Mary Ann." Mary Ann put her hands on his face and gave him a slow, gentle kiss on the lips. Gilligan, just starting to overcome his nervousness, hesitantly put his arms around her waist and pulled her closer. Several moments went by before the kiss ended. She smiled, said goodnight again, and went into her hut. Gilligan stood there for a moment, looking after her. Then he started walking toward the hut he shared with the Skipper. When he got there, the Skipper was not in a good mood. "Where have you been, Gilligan?! It's getting late!" "I'm sorry, Skipper. I went for a walk with Mary Ann." "Well, you should have been back a long time ago. Where did you two go...hey, what's on your face? Is that lipstick?!", the Skipper asked disbelievingly. Gilligan rubbed his face and looked at his fingers. "Um, yeah...I guess it is", he said, both a little embarrassed and a little proud of himself. "Well, how did you get lipstick on your face?!" "I'm sorry, Skipper, a gentleman doesn't kiss and tell." "KISS AND TELL?", the Skipper roared. "Sorry, Skipper--good night." Gilligan climbed into the top hammock and put his hat over his face, leaving the Skipper standing there staring at him. After a bit, Skipper climbed into his own hammock and lay there with a puzzled look on his face. "Hey, Skipper", Gilligan said. "You know that conversation you wanted to have with me about the birds and the bees? Well, I don't think we need to talk about that after all. I may be able to figure it out myself. Well, good night." The Skipper no longer looked puzzled. Now he looked astonished. Scene 2 Mary Ann walked into the hut she shared with Ginger, smiling to herself. She was so thrilled and excited. Ginger sat at their dressing table, trying on different pieces of jewelry and just generally admiring herself. "How did your walk with Gilligan go?", Ginger asked, not taking her eyes off her own reflection. "Oh, it was wonderful, Ginger. He did tell me he likes me, just like I hoped he would." Mary Ann sighed happily and sat down on her bed. Ginger finally turned toward Mary Ann. "That's incredible!" "I know, isn't it marvelous?!" "Imagine him liking you...instead of me!" Mary Ann was still too happy to get very angry. "That's not a very nice thing to say!" "Oh, don't get me wrong, Mary Ann. You're a pretty girl and all that. But I'm...well, I'm me!" She suddenly giggled. "I guess I shouldn't be too upset. After all, it is only Gilligan." Now Mary Ann was getting mad. "Well, "only-Gilligan" is a wonderful man!", she said angrily. "And a wonderful kisser", she added. Ginger was still amused. "It's not like he's Gregory Peck or Rock Hudson, Mary Ann." "I don't see any of the men on this island throwing themselves at your feet!" Mary Ann was really steamed. Ginger jumped up and got in Mary Ann's face. "I could have any man on this island I wanted!!" "Well, we've been here nearly three years, what's taking you so long?!" "OH! How dare you! Just wait, I'll get you for that!" Ginger stormed out of the hut. Mary Ann took a deep breath and tried to calm down. She was used to Ginger's super-ego, and she usually just ignored it, but tonight was different. By the time she was ready for bed, she was much calmer, and she decided to just think about her evening with Gilligan, nothing else. She fell asleep just as she was remembering the look on his face when she told him how she felt about him TO BE CONTINUED, later this week, I hope. |
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Last edited by iDOhavealife; 02-17-2003 at 06:26 PM. |
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AWW! this is just getting better and better! poor skipper....all surprised and itching to know the details. lol! and ginger....ooooo *grrr! hiss hiss!* i love that...."i could have any man on this island i wanted!" LOL!!! she could probably get the skipper by using her irritating vamping....but no one else.
this is great! i'm looking forward to the next part! |
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Oooooo!! I like... actually, no, I love! YAY!
"Well, we've only been here three years, what's taking you so long?!" I LOVE IT! Cat-fight! **screeching sound effect** LOL. Keep going...so what if it's more than three scenes? Hee. |
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Sorry, guys--I was sick and then my 5 year-old daughter got sick. We're both better now, and I promise, I'll try to write some more of this fanfic by Friday morning--just hang in there.
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aw, well, hey! of course we understand....you were sick! glad to hear you're feeling better....and your daughter as well.
i'll try to hold on.
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Weeeeell, I'll try... LOL. No, just kidding. I'm glad you're both feeling better.
I think I can wait a few more days.
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Finally, here's a little more:
Scene 3 The next morning found Mary Ann up early, fixing breakfast as usual. She hadn't gotten much sleep the night before. Ginger had come back in late and hadn't tried to be quiet, waking Mary Ann. Mary Ann wondered where she had been all that time. But this morning she felt happy and content, though she and Ginger hadn't spoken, and the mood in their hut was tense. Gilligan was also awake and getting ready for his morning chores. He hadn't gotten any sleep at all. He had no experience with girls whatsoever, and he was confused by some of his new feelings. Everytime he had tried to go to sleep, all he could think about was how it had felt to kiss Mary Ann, how warm she was, and how she had looked at him so lovingly. He was also astonished to find that, knowing how she felt about him, he had a little more confidence in himself. Though he was tired this morning, he felt like he could deal with just about anything and anybody. Mary Ann heard Gilligan coming into the clearing where she was cooking breakfast, and she turned to meet him with a bright smile. "Good morning, Gilligan." She felt a little shy with him this morning, in the daylight, but she gave him a gentle kiss on the cheek. "Morning, Mary Ann." They had spent a lot of time kissing the night before, but he was still too nervous to just grab her and kiss her, though this is what he wanted to do. They stood there smiling at each other until they heard the Skipper coming down the path. Mary Ann hurriedly turned back to her cooking, and Gilligan busied himself getting buckets to fetch the morning water. "Good morning, Mary Ann." Mary Ann smiled hello at the Skipper but kept her attention on her cooking. The Skipper watched the two of them--he sensed that something was going on, but he wasn't sure what it was. "Gilligan", Skipper said in his 'I'm-trying-to-be-patient-but-I'm-getting-exasperated' tone of voice, "you forgot to wash your face. You still have lipstick on your cheek." "No, I washed my face, Skipper." Mary Ann blushed and stirred the food faster. "I'm going to go get water now. See you at breakfast." He hurried off before the Skipper could say anything else. The Skipper turned to Mary Ann, who was trying to look busy. "Um, Mary Ann...", he said, not sure how to broach the subject. "Is something going on? Gilligan came in last night with lipstick on his face, but all he told me was that gentlemen don't kiss and tell. I mean....." Mary Ann interrupted him quickly. "Skipper. Ladies don't kiss and tell either." She hurried away to set the table, leaving the poor Skipper more confused than ever. I'm working on Scene 4--and I have to write-- "UGH"--a Ginger vamp scene! ICKIPOO! Didn't you see it coming, though?
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Eeeehehehe! OMG, I love it! They're so cute!
Poor Skipper... lol. "No, I washed my face, Skipper." Scandal... I'm so excited for the rest - keep it coming! (I'm now officially giddy for the rest of the day! lol) |
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*gasp!* oh the cuteness!!!! hee hee....i love it!
*giggle* i have a suggestion as to where Ginger was so late.....*giggle* please excuse my dirty mind
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Actually, I may throw something in along those lines....hmmm...... |
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Oooh, Proffy/Ginger scandal as well! Julie will be excited.
This story is getting more involved than you thought, huh? I'm glad, though, because I really like it and I have conniption fits between postings. LOL. No, not really, but close enough... Be speedy with the next part! Hehehe. |
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*jumps up and down spastically* YAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAY!!!!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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My, my, Julie is excited. LOL. I believe I underestimated the excitableness of Julie. LOL.
Well, I believe we're both looking forward to the next part. YAY! |
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*darth vader voice*
do not underestimate the excitableness of Julie *deep breathing* i'm such a dork.
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I hope I'm staying in character--that's my main worry. You guys tell me if I stray, OK?I'm glad you guys like it and are excited. I'll try to post more tomorrow, I hope. Hard to type when the hubby and kids are home, and when they're gone, it's housework time, sigh. |
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