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PhoenixMcKeonism · 01-13-2003, 05:55 AM

another attempt at a new fan fic: ENJOY
THIS PARTICULAR PART IS JUST AN INTRODUCTION AND ITS PRETTY SHORT SO I'LL BE UPDATING IT EVERYDAY FOR YOU GUYS. ITS SORT OF A ROUGH START BUT IM HOPING TO MAKE IT GROW IF YOU GUYS DIG IT...

setting: Jinny's apartment

CHAPTER 1 JINNY AND TEDDY: INTRO

The fog rolls by as the lonely yet content Jinny reads a current case while sipping on some hot coffee. Her expression is very solid as she looks out the window at the whiteness of the sky and sees a faded light reflection coming. Her happiness is defined by her glowing smile as she walks out of her chilled apartment and down the squeaky stairs to outside where she sees the man of her dreams walking toward her dressed in a clean dark suit.

JINNY: Hey Teddy

TEDDY: Hey Jinny

He starts to hug her but she declines...

JINNY: We need to talk...

TEDDY: jin- jinny whats wrong I dont unde-

JINNY: Just come inside for a second

Jinny and Teddy walk in her apartment, one of the lights have burned out.

TEDDY: I got it

Oddly enough, teddy knew exactly where there were spare bulbs and he replaces the burnt out light in a few minutes.

JINNY: Teddy, You've been gone for a long time now.

TEDDY: I missed you so much while I was gone for business.

JINNY: Yeah some things have changed while you were gone you see-

TEDDY: Shhh... let's just enjoy our time alone for now ok?

JINNY: No... No I got to tell you this Teddy

TEDDY: Then what is it? I'm sure whatever it is, I can handle... I'm a lawyer for godsakes.

JINNY: Well, I accidently spilt juice all over your white shirt while i was putting it away.

TEDDY: Is that what the big deal was about? Jinny, I have six other shirts that are identical to that one.

Teddy looks at Jinny straight at her beautiful green eyes...

TEDDY: Now can we spend some time together?

Jinny looks at Teddy and takes off her black leather jacket and they start to make out in the room.

The night goes by quickly as Jinny lays in bed with Teddy, and she looks at the window again and she wonders how she could feel so lucky. Then she gets out of bed and goes in the front room to make a phone call... Jinny dials the phone...

JINNY: Hello, Jack?

::Jacks Voice Mail:: Hi you have reached Jack-

Jinny hangs up the phone and takes a walk..... she starts to go downtown and she sees the sky clear up into this blackness. She walks into a bar and sees the alcohol pouring... she looks at the bartender and walks up to him.. and he look at her with his dark brown eyes... she starts to open her mouth, but nothing comes out...she decides to leave and go home as she realizes that her worse fears have came true and a triangle has formed.

Babes_Cat · 01-13-2003, 03:22 PM

Oooooooooooooooooooooh! Wow. More please!

jinnygirl2005 · 01-13-2003, 05:11 PM

Are Jinny and Jack married in this? Just wondering. Yeah cause I confuse easily and that confused me.

*Marilyn Monroe* · 01-13-2003, 06:12 PM

Oooh yeah. I definitely like this! Please continue!

*MIBabe03* · 01-13-2003, 06:24 PM

I can't wait to read more on this story. You have a really good start.

Rhiannon · 01-13-2003, 08:07 PM

that was really good.

JDS84 · 01-13-2003, 09:27 PM

This kicks @ss. Post more.

Ewan's My Man · 01-13-2003, 10:23 PM

Awesome!! Now I'm gonna haveta badger Michelle AND u to update!

Ewan's My Man · 02-01-2003, 01:22 PM

MORE FIC!!!! *taps foot impatiently*

Please???

Babes_Cat · 02-01-2003, 04:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
MORE FIC!!!! *taps foot impatiently*

Please???

Laudie is a very impatient little girl today.

Ewan's My Man · 02-01-2003, 05:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Babes_Cat
Laudie is a very impatient little girl today.

LOL!!

I'm a very impatient girl every day...Michelle can tell ya

. That reminds me...Michelle hasn't posted for a few days *goes off to hunt her down*

And don't think just b/c I'm going off to hunt down Michelle, u can get away with not posting...I'll be back!!

XoVanillaRain90oX · 02-11-2003, 04:31 PM

Whoaaaaaa.........MORE!

PhoenixMcKeonism · 02-12-2003, 12:06 AM

dang you guys LOL ok..... ill post more tonight that is even better than the start. LOL

PhoenixMcKeonism · 02-12-2003, 05:07 AM

heres a continuation:

::In Slow Motion:: A dark room, a gun, and window with the moon shining through the glass onto an old hardwood floor... Jinny is sitting against the wall... a woman appears into the moonlight smiling at Jinny.

RONNIE: go on Jinny... you know you want to do it... what's stopping you?

Jinny wakes up in a bunch of sweat and looks at the clock. 4am.
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:: im sorry you guys... 3 of my housemates are drunk and annoying right now so Im sorry i couldnt make a whole story.... but ill try and finish it tomorrow night

:: thanks for the nice comments though... i just cant concentrate.

XoVanillaRain90oX · 02-12-2003, 06:07 PM

Oooh!! Morenezz!!!!

01-13-2003, 05:55 AM	#1
PhoenixMcKeonism Psychotic McKeon Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 20, 2001 Location: Los Angeles Ca Posts: 306	Jinny, Jack, Teddy, and The Triangle another attempt at a new fan fic: ENJOY THIS PARTICULAR PART IS JUST AN INTRODUCTION AND ITS PRETTY SHORT SO I'LL BE UPDATING IT EVERYDAY FOR YOU GUYS. ITS SORT OF A ROUGH START BUT IM HOPING TO MAKE IT GROW IF YOU GUYS DIG IT... setting: Jinny's apartment CHAPTER 1 JINNY AND TEDDY: INTRO The fog rolls by as the lonely yet content Jinny reads a current case while sipping on some hot coffee. Her expression is very solid as she looks out the window at the whiteness of the sky and sees a faded light reflection coming. Her happiness is defined by her glowing smile as she walks out of her chilled apartment and down the squeaky stairs to outside where she sees the man of her dreams walking toward her dressed in a clean dark suit. JINNY: Hey Teddy TEDDY: Hey Jinny He starts to hug her but she declines... JINNY: We need to talk... TEDDY: jin- jinny whats wrong I dont unde- JINNY: Just come inside for a second Jinny and Teddy walk in her apartment, one of the lights have burned out. TEDDY: I got it Oddly enough, teddy knew exactly where there were spare bulbs and he replaces the burnt out light in a few minutes. JINNY: Teddy, You've been gone for a long time now. TEDDY: I missed you so much while I was gone for business. JINNY: Yeah some things have changed while you were gone you see- TEDDY: Shhh... let's just enjoy our time alone for now ok? JINNY: No... No I got to tell you this Teddy TEDDY: Then what is it? I'm sure whatever it is, I can handle... I'm a lawyer for godsakes. JINNY: Well, I accidently spilt juice all over your white shirt while i was putting it away. TEDDY: Is that what the big deal was about? Jinny, I have six other shirts that are identical to that one. Teddy looks at Jinny straight at her beautiful green eyes... TEDDY: Now can we spend some time together? Jinny looks at Teddy and takes off her black leather jacket and they start to make out in the room. The night goes by quickly as Jinny lays in bed with Teddy, and she looks at the window again and she wonders how she could feel so lucky. Then she gets out of bed and goes in the front room to make a phone call... Jinny dials the phone... JINNY: Hello, Jack? ::Jacks Voice Mail:: Hi you have reached Jack- Jinny hangs up the phone and takes a walk..... she starts to go downtown and she sees the sky clear up into this blackness. She walks into a bar and sees the alcohol pouring... she looks at the bartender and walks up to him.. and he look at her with his dark brown eyes... she starts to open her mouth, but nothing comes out...she decides to leave and go home as she realizes that her worse fears have came true and a triangle has formed.
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01-13-2003, 05:11 PM	#3
jinnygirl2005 Thank you Miranda! Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 10, 2002 Location: I'm in my room waiting for TD and Miranda and Michelle to post! Posts: 777	Are Jinny and Jack married in this? Just wondering. Yeah cause I confuse easily and that confused me.
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01-13-2003, 06:24 PM	#5
MIBabe03 Loving Swingtown! Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 28, 2002 Location: TX Posts: 4,646	I can't wait to read more on this story. You have a really good start.
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01-13-2003, 08:07 PM	#6
Rhiannon oh, snap! Forum Fanatic Join Date: Jul 19, 2002 Location: middle of nowhere Posts: 11,097	that was really good.
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01-13-2003, 09:27 PM	#7
JDS84 Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 11, 2001 Location: My Old Kentucky Home Posts: 3,377	This kicks @ss. Post more.
	__________________ Jessica

01-13-2003, 03:22 PM	#2
Babes_Cat Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Oct 11, 2001 Location: massachusetts Posts: 34,145	Oooooooooooooooooooooh! Wow. More please!

01-13-2003, 06:12 PM	#4
Marilyn Monroe Diamonds... Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 24, 2001 Location: Where gentlemen actually prefer brunettes Posts: 4,811	Oooh yeah. I definitely like this! Please continue!

01-13-2003, 10:23 PM	#8
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	Awesome!! Now I'm gonna haveta badger Michelle AND u to update!
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02-01-2003, 01:22 PM	#9
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	MORE FIC!!!! taps foot impatiently Please???

02-11-2003, 04:31 PM	#12
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	Whoaaaaaa.........MORE!
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02-12-2003, 12:06 AM	#13
PhoenixMcKeonism Psychotic McKeon Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 20, 2001 Location: Los Angeles Ca Posts: 306	dang you guys LOL ok..... ill post more tonight that is even better than the start. LOL

02-12-2003, 05:07 AM	#14
PhoenixMcKeonism Psychotic McKeon Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 20, 2001 Location: Los Angeles Ca Posts: 306	continuation heres a continuation: ::In Slow Motion:: A dark room, a gun, and window with the moon shining through the glass onto an old hardwood floor... Jinny is sitting against the wall... a woman appears into the moonlight smiling at Jinny. RONNIE: go on Jinny... you know you want to do it... what's stopping you? Jinny wakes up in a bunch of sweat and looks at the clock. 4am. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- :: im sorry you guys... 3 of my housemates are drunk and annoying right now so Im sorry i couldnt make a whole story.... but ill try and finish it tomorrow night :: thanks for the nice comments though... i just cant concentrate.

02-12-2003, 06:07 PM	#15
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	Oooh!! Morenezz!!!!