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ooooh you haven't called me in days
it seems like its been weeks I'm tired of you acting like I'm not even there and like you don't ever care I never understood why you'd ignore me sometimes I wonder if you even notice me around *chorus* I'm sick of your crap you weird freak You make me feel so alone You brought me in a world of darkness and I can't come out You are sooo stupid you loser I wait by the phone for it to ring I'm wasting my time again sometimes I wonder if you even give a **** *chorus* I'm sick of your crap you weird freak You make me feel so alone You brought me in a world of darkness and I can't come out You are sooo stupid you loser GET THE HECK OUT OF MY FACE, YOU SICKEN ME IF YOU CALL ME AGAIN I AM CALLING THE POLICE OH WELL ITS NOT LIKE YOUR CALLING ANYWAY YOU FAT PIECE OF GARBAGE I'M SICK OF YOOOOOOOOUUUU! |
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I wrote that song, opinions please!
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oh, snap!
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sounds pretty good to me
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peaceout.
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That was magical. Really hit me right in the heart.
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ummm what the hell does that have to do with my song? |
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It's alright.
Your songs will be better if they had some sort of rhyme sceme. |
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BJL, please if you are going to edit my posts don't switch my words around because thats not me.
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Last edited by Kristina; 01-06-2003 at 06:29 AM. |
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Please don't take me seriously. And don't let what I posted ruin your day.
The truth is, there's no good reason why I posted the "no makeup" picture of Avril Lavigne. I just found it amusing. And I have no ill opinions of Ms. Lavigne (well, maybe a little), you, or your writing. I was kidding. Relax. Take a deep breat and relax. And write a spiteful song about me. |
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The last verse doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the song. The other verses talk about how he never calls, and then you say if you ever call me I will call the police? Personally I think it would work a lot better with a different last verse.
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i like it. it's original.
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