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AKA CaitlinMoore2002
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Title: Reggies Twin
Written by: Melissa (you may add to it however you wish if you'd like) Beginning Clip Scene:Reggies Diner, Reggies Twin Lexi is pouring coffee at the Counter Becker: *just walking in seeing Lexi and not knowing Reggie had a twin thinks shes Reggie* Before you EVEN start pouring that you didnt make that coffee did you because if you did I DONT want it Lexi: Okay First of all WHO ARE YOU and Second Why would I be making you coffee'? *Becker looks confused, Reggie comes in from the upstairs apartment door* Reggie: Oh Good you've met my twin Becker: *looking from to the other* GOOD GOD THERES TWO OF YOU Roll Credits Commercial Break Scene one Setting-the same Jake: *sarcastically* Yeah isnt THAT the BEST thing EVER Reggie: *hitting him* Thats not FUNNY Bob: *coming in and seeing Lexi and Reggie together* LEXI You're BACK!! *goes to hug her, Lexi Makes a face* Becker: This is all FINE AND DANDY But HOW are we suppose to tell you apart? Lexi: She wears a watch... I dont Becker: AND THATS IT??!! Bob: Atleast you didnt go to highschool with them They always tried to pull a fast one on me Reggie:Thats not Hard to Do Becker: So YOU knew she had a twin? Bob: Well yeah I went to highschool with her remember Becker: Why was i the Only one that didnt know she had a twin?? Jake: you werent the ONLY one I didnt know either Becker: You dont count YOU'RE blind Lexi: Hey thats not nice Jake:Get use to it..*to Reggie* So Reg why didnt we know you had a twin Reggie: You never asked Becker: WE'VE KNOWN YOU FOR 5 YEARS thats NOT SOMETHING we have TO ASK ABOUT thats something YOU'RE SUPPOSE TO TELL US and Not nonchalantly like 'OH BY THE WAY I've got a TWIN!!" Jake: *ignoring this and changing the subject* So how come you the diner and she didnt? Lexi: Have you TASTED my Cooking? Becker: HAVE YOU TASTED HERS!!??! *Reggie rolls her eyes at the both of them* Becker: SO WHY did YOU get the diner what made YOU so special? Reggie: *shrugging* I guess I was closer to dad then she was I spent hours here with him and I was here when he died Unlike SOMEONEELSE *staring at her sister* Who went running off to California the first chance she got Lexi: *now Rolling HER eyes at Reggie* Did You know it wasnt ALWAYS Called "Reggies diner"*quickly changing the subject Bob:I DID I DID Lexi: Shut up Bob I'm Talking Bob:You havent changed a bit YOU act just like you did in highschool Lexi: *clearing her throat* ANYWAYS it used to be called "5th street diner" but when Dad found out he had cancer and knew he was going to die he changed it to "Reggies Diner" after her since she spent so much time here with him Jake: Oh how sad Becker: *sarcastically* as much as i enjoyed this little stroll down memory lane I need to go back to work *He exits* (Okay thats what I have so far tell me If You like it TELL me if you dont... change stuff... add stuff.. whatever BUT ENJOY...LOVE MEL) |
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"We're not dating , We just go to Movies"-Sara Sidle CSI "Now all I can think about is someone took my Doll and Now I want him back so I can Play with him HER Well you know what I mean"-Reggie on Becker "Just in case I'm not enough of a Freak already LETS add a Tiara"-Mia Princess Diaries |
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OMG FABULOUS!!!!! That sounds EXACTLY LIKE THE SHOW!
kEEP uP tHE gOOD wORK! jEN ps>i KNOW FORSURE THEY HIRED YOU AS A WRITER! GOOD JOB MEL!
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OMG I'm rolling on the floor here. I can't breathe lol.
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AKA CaitlinMoore2002
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awwww thank you you guys I'm SOOO GLAD you liked it
and before you even ask YES I really do act like that MOSTLY to people I know well like family and Friends i'm not a BRAT to COMPLETE strangers hehe |
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Nice job Mel! That's awesome
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Okay this is a script I wrote awhile ago its Becker doing GREASE Enjoy ladies
![]() THE ONE WHERE BECKER DOES GREASE with Special Guest Stars Ewan Mcgregor Benjamin Bratt Sean Hayes and Sandra Bullock Scene Starts off in Paris we see Reggie looking at a Letter and holding a small ring (note this isnt IN THE ACTUAL Movie but I thought it fitting for the show and the song IS in the movie also SOME of the words to SOME of the songs have been changed to fit the show) Reggie Sings: Johnny My Love I miss you more then words can say (Pink Ladies:Margie, (Margaret) Frenchy (Linda),Jan (Played by Sandra) and Chris:Oh oh oh) Johnny My Love please keep in touch while I'm away (oh Yeah) Hearing from you can make the days so much better Getting a souvenir or maybe a letter I"ve really flipped over the Grey Cashmere sweater Johnny My Love Johnny My Love Johnny My Love Johnny my Love Johnny You know You're absences makes me feel so blue (soo blue) Thats okay though your presents make me think of you (sure they do) My friends will have a heartache when they catch those petal pushers with the black leather patches Oh How I wish I had a jacket that matches Johnny My Love Johnny My Love Johnny My Love Johnny My love Dont keep your letters from me I thrill to every line Your spellings kinda crummy but Honey so is mine I treasure every gifty the ring is really nifty you said it cost you 50 so you're thrifty I dont mind (Oh oh oh oh) Johnny you'll see you'll me in your arms one day Johnny My love and I will be wearing you'r lacey langerie (Johnny I'm yours) thinking about it my hearts pounding already Knowing when I come home we're bound to go steady and throw Your doctors pay around Like confetti Johnny My Love Johnny my Love Johnny My Love Johnny My love (repeat to end) SCENE SHIFTS back to NY at the Diner: Frenchy: I wanna know what Reggie did this Summer Chris: Yeah what happened do tell? Reggie: I went to the beach and fell in love with the sweetest guy Scene shifts to Beckers office: Bob: (As sonny) so how was the Beach this summer Kenickie: (Played by Benjamin Bratt) Yeah did you meet anyone John: (Johnny/Danny) I met a girl Bob: Ooh do tell Jake: as (DOODY) Yeah we wanna know John: OKAY *singing* Johnny: SUMMER LOVIN HAD ME A BLAST (back at the Diner) Reggie: Summer Lovin Happened so fast (back at office) Johnny: Met a Girl crazy for me (diner) Reggie: Met a boy cute as can be Both: Summer Days Drifting away to Uh Oh those Summer nights Thunderbirds: (Jake,Bob,Ewan,Benjamin) Tell me More Tell Me more Jake: (as Doddy) Didja get very Far Pink Ladies: Margeret,Linda,Sandra and Chris Tell me More Tell me more Margie (Margaret) Like Does He have a Car Johnny:She swam by me She got a Cramp Reggie: He ran by me got My suit Damp Johnny: I saved her life she nearly drowned Reggie: He showed off Splashing around Both:Summer Sun somethings Begun But uh Oh those Summer Nights Pink Ladies: Tell Me More Tell Me more Frenchy: (Linda) Was it love at first sight? ThunderBirds: Tell Me More, Tell Me More Kenickie: (Played by Benjamin Bratt) Did she put up a Fight Johnny:Took her bowling in the arcade Reggie: we went strolling Drank lemonade Johnny: We made out under the dock Reggie: we stayed out till ten aclock Both: Summer fling Dont mean a thing But uh oh those summer nights Thunder Birds: Tell Me More Tell Me More Bob: (As sonny) But you dont gotta Brag Pink Ladies: Tell Me More Tell Me more Chris (as Rizzo): Cause he sounds like a drag Reggie: He got Friendly holding my Hand Johnny: She got friendly down in the Sand Reggie:He was Sweet Just Turned eighteen Johnny: Well she was good Ya know what I mean Both: Summer Heat Boy and Girl Meet But Uhoh those Summer Nights Pink Ladies: Tell Me More Tell Me More Sandra (as Jan) How Much Dough Did he Spend ThunderBirds: Tell Me More Tell Me More Bob: Could she get me a Friend Reggie: it turned colder thats where it ends Johnny: So I told her we'd still be friends Reggie: Then we made our True love vow Johnny: Wonder what Shes doing now Both: Summer Dreams Ripped at the Seams But UH OH THOSE SUMMMMER NIGHTSSSS Chris: He sounds sweet what did you say his name was Reggie: John ,John Becker Other girls Snicker Chris: I dont know I believe someday when You least expect it Prince Charming will show up again some day Reggie: you really think so Chris: Sure More snickering from other girls (we skip some scenes from the movie because well its only a half hour show and the movie is two hours long BUT Ya know) Scene: Reggies Apartment above the Diner (which has miraculously turned into a teens apartment JUST for this) Reggie: I dont know what happened he was so nice to me this summer Margie: Dont sweat it kid have one of mine Reggie: theres so many of them how do you keep up? Margie: easy I'm a terrific Penpal I'm hopelessly Devoted to Each and Every One Reggie: Can I have some of that (Paper) Margie: sure *hands her paper.. Reggie gets up to leave* WAIT *sprays perfume on it* Now Reggies alone at the Diner sitting on one of the Bar Stools SINGING: Guess Mine is not the first Heart Broken My eyes are not the first to cry I'm not the first to know theres Just no getting over You I know I'm just a fool whose willin To sit around and wait for you Baby cant you see Theres nothing else for me to do Hopelessly devoted To you (Reggie gets up off the BarStool and it swings around she gets up and Dances around the Diner) BUT NOW Theres nowhere to Hide since you pushed my Love aside I'm out of my Head hopelessly Devoted to you Hopelessly Devoted to you Hopelessly Devoted To you My Head is saying FOOL Forget him My Heart is saying dont let go Hold on to the end Thats what I intend to do Hopelessly Devoted to you (Reggie ends up outside spins around the Pole outside the Diner) BUT Now theres nowhere to Hide since you pushed my Love aside I"m out of my Head hopelessly devoted to you Hopelessly Devoted to you Hopelessly Devoted to You (ends up back at the Bar Stool) Back Up in the Apartment Frenchy: Reggies kind of sick one look at the Blood and BLECH Jan: You're not getting near my ears (we skip some of it cause again No time) Frenchy: Heres your toothbrush Reg Chris: Miss Goody Two shoes Makes me wanna Barf *Puts on wig* *singing* Look at me I"m Reggie Dee Lousy with virginity Wont go to bed till I"m Legally wed I cant I'm Reggie Dee Watch it HEY i"m Doris day I was not brought up that way wont come across even Rock Hudson lost his heart to Doris Day I dont drink Or swear I dont rat my Hair I get Ill from one Cigeratte *fake coughing* Keep Your Filthy Paws off My Silky Drawers WOULD you pull that Crap with Annette? as for You Troy Donahue I know What You wanna do You've got your Crust I'm no Object of Lust I'm just Plain Reggie Dee Elvis Elvis Let me Be Keep Your Pelvis far from me just keep your cool Cause you're starting to Drool HEY FONGOOL I'm Reggie Dee Reggie: are you makin fun of me Chris? Chris: Some people are so touchy Skip Scene to Garage somewhere in NY Johnny: Why this car is SYSTEMATIC HYRDOMATIC WHY ITS GREASE LIGHTIN *singing* Johnny: We'll get some Over Head Lifters and Four Barrel quads oh yeah Kenickie: Keep talkin Woe Keep keep Talkin Johnny: A fuel injection Cut-off and Chrome Plated Rods Oh Yeah Kenickie: We'll Get ready I'll Kill to get it ready Johnny: with a Four speed on the floor They'll be waitin at the Door You know that aint no **** We'll be getting lotsa tit in Greased Lightnin Thunderbirds: Go Go Go Go Go Go Go go Go Johnny: Go Greased Lightnin you're burning up the quarter Mile ThunderBirds: Greased Lightnin Go Greased Lightnin Johnny: Go Greased Lightnin you're coastin through the heat-Lap Trial ThunderBirds: Greased lightnin Go Greased Lightnin Johnny: You are Supreme The Chicks'll Cream For Greased Lightnin ThunderBirds: Go Go Go Go go go go go Johnny: We'll get some Purple French taillights and Thirty Inch Fins oh yeah a Palomino dashboard and dual muffler twins oh yeah With new pistons,plugs and shocks I can get off my rocks You know that I aint braggin shes a real ***** Wagon Greased Lightnin Thunderbirds: Go go go go go go go Johnny:Go Greased Lightnin you're burnin up the quarter mile Thunderbirds: Greased Lightnin Go Greased Lightnin Johnny: Go Greased Lightnin you're coastin through the Heat Lap trial Thunderbirds: Greased lightnin Go Greased Lightnin Johnny: You are Supreme the Chicks'll Cream For Greased Lightnin ThunderBirds: Go go go go go go go Johnny: Go Greased lightnin You're burnin up the quarter mile Thunderbirds: Greased lightnin go Greased Lightnin Johnny: Go Greased lightnin you're coastin through the heat lap trial Thunderbirds: Greased lightnin Go Greased Lightnin Johnny: You are Supreme the Chicks'll Cream For Greased Lightnin ThunderBirds Lightnin, Lightnin Lightnin,Lightnin Lightnin Lightnin Lightnin Lightnin Lightnin YEAHH SCene: Reggies Diner Linda as Frenchy's hair is Purple and shes Sad and Crying DOWN comes Teen Angel played by Sean Hayes *singing* Your Storys Sad to tell A Teenage Ne'er do well Most Mixed up Non Delinquent on the Block Your futures so unclear now Whats left of your career now Cant even get a trade in on your Smock Beauty School Dropout No Graduation day for you Beauty School Drop out missed your midterms and flunked shampoo Well atleast you could have taken time to wash and clean your clothes up after spending all the dough to have the doctor fix your nose up Baby get movin Why keep your feeble hopes alive What are you proovin you got the Dream but not the Drive if You go for yoru Diploma you could Join a Steno Pool Turn in your Teasing comb and go back to highschool Beauty School Drop out hangin around the corner store Beauty school dropout its about time you knew the score well they couldnt teach you anything you think you're such a looker but no customer would go to you unless she was a hooker Baby dont sweat it you're not cut out to hold a job better forget it who wants thier hair done by a slob now your bangs are curled your lashes twirled but still the world is cruel wipe off that angel face and go back to highschool Baby dont blow it dont put my good advice to shame baby you know it Even dear abby'd say the same Now i've called the shot get off the Pot I really Gotta fly Gotta be goin to that Malt Shop In The Sky Beauty school dropout Go back to highschool Beauty school Dropout Go Back to highschool Beauty school Dropout Go back to higschool Scene shifts to a Drive in Johnny is all alone and sad Johnny: Stranded at the drive-in Branded a fool What will they say Monday at Work (changed the words there) Reggie Cant you see I"m in Misery We made a Start Now we're a part theres nothing left for me Love has flown all alone I sit and wonder why-yi yi yi oh why You left me Oh Reggie Oh Reggie Baby Someday when this work is done Somehow some way our two worlds will be one in heaven forever and ever we will be oh Please say you'll stay Oh Reggie (spoken) Reggie my Darlin You hurt me real Bad You know its true But baby you gotta believe me when I say I"m helpless without you (sung) Love has Flown all alone I sit I wonder why-yi yi yi oh why You left me oh Reggie Reggie Reggie Why-yi yi yi (spoken) Oh Reggie Scene:Outside Diner: Reggie: Let me know if theres anything I can do to help Chris: I can handle my self and anyoneelse who comes along *reggie Leaves, Chris stares at Kenickie and starts to Sing* Sing Chris: There are worse things I could do then go with a Boy or two Even though the neighborhood thinks i"m trashy and no good I suppose it could be true But there are worse things I can do I could flirt with all the guys Smile at them and bat my eyes Press against them when we dance Make them think they stand a chance then refuse to see it through Thats a thing i'd never do I could stay home everynight wait around for Mr. Right Take cold showers every day and throw my life away on a dream that wont come true I could Hurt someone like me Out of spite and jealousy I dont steal and I dont lie But I can feel and I can cry a Fact I'll bet you never knew But to cry in front of you Thats the Worst thing I could do Scene:a racecar track Reggie is watching grease Lightning go ![]() *singing* Reggie: Look at me There has to be something more then what they see wholesome and pure oh so scared and unsure the poor Mans Reggie Dee Reggie You must start anew dont you know what You must do hold your Head High Take a deep breath and SIGH Good Bye to Reggie Dee Scene: Central Park all the Gang is there Reggie: *with a ciggerate in her mouth* Tell me about it STUD *singing* Johnny: I got chills they're multiplyin and i'm losin control cause the power you're supplyin its electrifyin Reggie: You better shape up cause I need a Man and My Heart is set on you You Better shape up you better Understand to My Heart I must be true Johnny: Nothin Left Nothin Left for me to do Both: you're the one that i want You oh oh oh oh Honey The one that I want You oo oo oh Honey The One that I want you oo oo Are what i need oh Yes Indeed Reggie: If you're filled with affection You're to shy to convey Meditate in my Direction Feel the way Johnny: I better shape up Cause you need a man Reggie: I need a Man who can keep me satisfied Johnny: I better shape up if i'm gonna prove Reggie: You better proove that my faith is justified Johnny: Are you sure Reggie: Yes I"m Sure (both) Down Deep inside You're the one that i want you oo ooo Honey the one that I want you ooo ooo Honey The one that I want you oo oo o are what I need oh yes indeed frenchy: The gangs all back together *sings* Johnny and Reggie: We go together Like Ra malama Ka dinga da ding a dong Remembered forever as Shoo bob Sha wada wada yippity boom de boom Reggie,Johnny,Kenickie and Chris: Chang Chang Changity Chang shoo bop Thats the way it should be WHA OOH YEAH All: We're one of a kind Like Dip da dip Da dip Doo wop Da dobeedoo our names are signed Boogedy Boogedy Boogedy Boogedy Shooby doo wop she bop Chang Chang Changity Chang shoo bop We'll always be like one WA WA WA WAHHH When we go out at night And stars are shinin bright up in the skies above or at the highschool dance where we can find romance maybe it might be love we're one for eachother like A wop babalu mop and Wop bam boom Just like my brother is Shan nana na na Yippity dip de doom Chang changity chang shoobop We'll always be together wha ooh yeah we'll always be together we'll always be together we'll always be together we'll always be together THE END I hope you enjoyed LOVE MEL |
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I LOVE IT!
That was so cute! Bob as sonny, fits him to a tee! lol. ok in my opinion I see Chris as sandy, and Reggie as Rizzo(but thats all me), I still love your story, and I think it would be awesome if they made it into a ep, kind'of like Home Improvement did. I saw it the other day and they had Al as Knnicke,lol. Anyways your an awesome writer and I think you should apply for a writers job at Paramount Studios, seriously though, hey have you ever been to Los Angeles in any of your trips to California? (Just curious) GREAT STORY MEL! A+
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I agree 100% with what Jennifer said.
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Yeah as I'd told you Earlier i've been to Los Angeles about a half a million times its not to far from Huntington Beach where My Aunt lives. someday Maybe I WILL WRITE for the show and then I'll MEET my Twin but thanks for the vote of Confidence guys
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