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Okay I don't know how good this, but please let me know...
She sat there looking at a picture of her mother, with tears running down her face. "How much am I like her?" She thought. Jinny had been so depressed lattely. Ever since her father had the heart attack and she found out about her half sister. Her father was out of the hospital, and doing better, but for some reason that didn't make her feel better. She had even forgiven him for lieing to her about her half sister, or had she? She wasn't sure of anything anymore. She felt out of control of her own life, as she sat there, and cried harder. She didn't even feel like drinking, "It only makes things worse when I drink, " she thought, "becides I don't know what I would do to myself if I did start drinking again.." Jinny sat there thinking of one of the other times she was depressed, and had been drinking to try and forget things, and how she was feeling, and didn't know why she was feeling that way. She had been in her car, and didn't want to live anymore. She turned on her car, and before she had even realized what she was doing she had put the gas peddle all the way to the floore she didn't care anmore, at that every moment she thought, "What are you doiing? YOu don't want to die!" So she slamed on her breaks, she never told anyone about that night, and she made a promice to herslef that she never would tell anyone. "Yes Jinny thought she didn't want to go back to drinking. The thing was that even work wasn't making her happy anymore. Putting away the bad guys just wasn't the same as it used to be. It used to make a difference in the world or even just the town that she lived in, but now that didn't even work. Jinny came home every night from work crying and she couldn't stop. She would wake up every norning crying. She didn't know what to do or, who to turn too. "Magda just didn't understand," she thought, "and she has her own problems with Ben being in the hospital." Jinny didn't want to add more problems for Magda. Every other time that Jinny was depressed she always found away to come out of it, but this time was different. She couldn't pull herself out of it this time. She Thought "My life isn't worth living like this." She just wanted help, but didn't know how to get it. "I have to do something," She thought, as she tried to clear her head. She needed someone she could talk to. Someone who would help her. Jinny got off the couch and went over to the phone. She picked it up and dialed a number. It rang twice and there was no answer. She said, " come on pick up," as it rang a thried time Jinny looked at the clock and realized that it was two O'clock in the morning. "Oh damn it I didn't realize how late it was." She hung up the phone. " God what was I thinking. I shoudn't have hung up the phone after three rings that would have wakin me up" So she picked back up the phone again and dialed the same number again. She needed help no matter how late it was she new that this person would understand, or so she hoped. The voice on the other side sounded ever tired, "Hello...." Jinny asked, "Teddy is that you?" So how was that? Any good? Would you like me to write more? |
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Oooooooooooooooh yes! Goooooooooooooooood! MORE PLEASE!
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yeah i suggest you keep it up.
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Hey I loved it! Of course we want more!
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Aww thanks everyone!!! Here's more. Let me know what you think.
"Yeah, it's me. " He could tell that is was Jinny. He didn't even half to ask. He could tell that she had been crying, and he was really worried about her. It had been a long time since the two had talked. Teddy new that he made a huge mistake when he had called it off with Jinny. He had sice then tried to make it up to her, and it was working she had forgiven him for his mistake, but soon after her father's heart acctack she stoped talking to him, and going out with him. Teddy had tried to get her to talk to him, but the more he asked the more she pushed him away. Teddy wiped the sleep out of his eye's. "Is everything okay? Jinny are you alright??" Teddy asked concered. Jinny was tring hard to stop crying, but it was no use, "I...I" She said threw sobs. "Is it your dad? Is he in the hospital again?" He was getting more worried about her. Jinny said, "No...my da..dad's fine." She was trying to get words out of her mouth but , she just couldn't. She was crying to hard. Teddy asked worriedley, "Then what is it Jinny? are you okay?" There was no answer from Jinny. Only The sound of her crying. "Jinny?" Still no answer. "Jinny take a dep breath and try to stay calm so, you can tell me whats going on?" He heard her take a dep breat it was another few minutes before Jinny said anything. "I can't do this anymore. I can't llive like this. Ineed help, and I don't know how to get it." She started crying even harder her legs gave out on her as she fell on the couch. She said with what she had left to give, she was just so tired, "I need help! Please help me!" Teddy was scared, he didn't know what was going one with Jinny, but he would do anything for her. "Jinny I will be right there!" He really wasn't sure what she might do to herself. Jinny could barley get the words out of her mouth. "Okay," was all she could get out. Teddy said, "okay I will be right over. Bye." He hung up the phone. He got dressed grabed, his coat and keys and got into his car, and headed over to Jinny house. It was about ten minutes later, and Jinny was settin in a chair. She had stopped cring, but she still didn't feel right. Something just wasn't righ with her. It hadn't been for a long time, and she couldn't figure out why. She just sat there stareing across the room. She had just shut down all her emotions. She couldn't feel much anymore, and that scared her. It was almost like she was in shock. The door bell rang, and she got up and walked slowley to the door. She felf kinda like a zombie. She opened the door. Teddy walked in, and huged her, and asked, "Jinny what's going on!?" Jinny huged him back she didn't ever want him to let her go. She could tell that he was worried about her. She was very calm now. A little to calm for Teddy He could see that cicrles under her eyes. He wasn't sure the last time she had slept a full night. Jinny was so tied of everything. She just wanted to sleep and not wake-up until she felt better. "Teddy I don't know what is wrong with me." They walked over to the couch and sat down. "it started around the time that I found out that Ronnie was my half sister, and then of corse when my father has his heat acctack. I know that I pushed everyone out of my like then, but I didn't know how to deal with it. I still don't. I don't even know why your here. I mean out of eveyone I pushed you away the most. I didn't retern your phone calls. I wouldn't even give you the time of day, then I call you in the middle of the night and after all that you come over. Why?" Teddy said in a soft and understanding voice," Jinny look at me." He gentley put his hand on her chin and turned her face so she was looking at him. He wanted her to hear what he was saying, but he also wanted her to see that he meant what he was saying. As she looked at him she saw the love in his eye's for her. That scared her more thne anything, but she kept looking at him. She had nothing more to lose, but she thought as one single tear ran down her face, execpt her life. Teddy wipped the tear away from her face and said, " Jinny the worst mistake that I ever made was by letting you go. I wll never do that again. I love you with everything that I am. I would do anything for you, because my life isn't worth living with out you in it. Let me help you Jin. Please?" The words that he had just said were so beatufl that she felt like cring again, but she couldn't. She was to tired too. She could tell just by looking at him that every word that he was saying was true. "I will try to let you help, but I don't under stand it myself. If I did then I wouldn't feel the way that I do. I just feel so down. I fell depressed. I don't feel like getting up in the morning. All I want to do is sleep, and that seems to be that last thing that I am able to do. I lay in bed and cry at night. I get out of bed, and go to work and everything seems to be okay when, I am around people, but then I get home and I cry more. I am just so tired. All I want to do is sleep." "Jinny when was the last time you got a full night sleep?Teddy asked. She thought for a secound and said, "I can't remember it's been such a long time." "Why don't you call in work, and let them know that you won't be at work until later tomorrow? Just tell them that something came up." I can't do that Teddy. I have this huge case that I'm working, and with Magda not being able to come to work all the time that is make us behind on our case", Jinny said. "What is more important Jinny, your life or, your job?!" She just looked down she didn't know anymore somethimes she thought that work was the only thing that kept her from taking her life. "That's the problem I don't know anymore!" She got up from the couch. She lost it again. She didn't think that she had anymore tears left, but she was wrong. She started screaming and cring. She was throwing things. She yelled, "What do I have to live for?! Huh?! there's nothing that I look forward to anymore! I hate feeling like this!" She droped to her nees on the floor, and just started crying even more. "I need help...I can't turn out like her...I can't turn out like my mom!" Teddy leaned down, and pit his arms around her. " I won't let you do that. I love yo to much. You mean the world to me." He said. He picked her up off the floor, and carried her back to her bed room, and put her on her bed. He held her in his arms. He never wanted to let her go. He had never sceen her like this, and it scared him. Jinny just kept on cring. He was still holding her as he started to rub her back. "Shhh...everything will be okay. I will take care of you. I will get you all the help in the workd. I will do anything for you." He said as he laid there worried about Jinny. As she laid there she started to calm down. She felt Teddy's arms around her, and that helped her feel a little bet better, or at least for the moment. After about a half hour she was about alseep when she said, " I love you Teddy." He softley kissed her forhead and said, I love you too." They fell alseep in each other arms. How was that any good?? Would you like me to write more? |
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YES! OH MY GAWD! POST MORE PLEASE!
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Hey that was really good! You had better post more soon girl because you know that I will be hounding you all the time about it if you don't.
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Thanks everyone!!! I don't know how long this will be, or how good, but let me know what you think...
Jinny woke up, and turned to see what time it was. The clock said five minutes till eight. She rubed her eyes, and couldn't believe that she was already up, after the night that she had. I never got up that easey never. She turned over to her other side, and pulled the covers over her head, and moned she didn't want to get up, and face life, she didn't want to do anything. Teddy who was awake, and right besiced her didn't want to leave her side. He asked, "Jinny are you okay?" She took the covers away form her face. "Teddy, I wish that I could tell you that I was fine. I don't know I mean it is hard, and I just don't know what to do anymore. The only thing that I do know is that I wish that I could just stay in bed all day, but I can't becasue I have work to do." Teddy didn't know how to tell her this, but he had to. He just didn't know how she would react to him having gone threw some of her things to find out who her docter was so that he could try, and get her into see her docter that day. He new that it was improtant for her to go as soon as possible. "Jinny, look frist thing that I need for you to do is to stay calm when I tell you this. The last thing that you need right now is to get upset. It is also importnat for you to know that I love you, and I never want to see you the way that you were last night. I went through some of your things, and found your docters phone number, so that I could get you in to see her as soon as posible. She has an opening at Nine thirty this morning. I was just getting ready to wake you up." Jinny sat up in bed, and upset she said, "You did what? What makes you think that you can do that? Huh? What givies you the right to come in here, and go threw my things, and make phone calls for me huh? I have to be at work in a little while, and i don't have time to go to the docters." "What gives me the right..Jinny I care for you that is what gives me the right, and the fact that you called me last night, and asked me for help. Do you think that I am just going to set her, lose you slowley. No I will not do that. I love you to much. As for work you can call them, and tell them that you are going to be late." Okay that is all that I have for now. I know it wasn't that good, and it was short, but let me know what you think... |
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Awesome. Post more.
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Okay....I am gonna try, and post more...I don't know how good it will be..BTW Thank U for the reply!!!
Jinny, pulls the covers off of her, and stands up. She doesn't know if she is more upset at the fact that she called him last night, or the fact that he was there to help her, and that he was doing just that. She said to Teddy ticked..."You know what your right I did call you last night for your hlep..That was my mistake, and it will never happen again! I was feeling a little down, but now I am better, so I guess that you can leave now." She goes to her door, and opens it for him to leave. Teddy thought to himself that he wasn't leaving that easley. He walks to the door, and slams it shut, and turns back to Jinny. "Jinny I know that you are upset with me, but please don't shut me out...I need you...more then anything I need us..You, and me. YOU said to me that you can't live life like this anymore. Do you think that I am just going to leave you after you say something like that to me? Oh, and don't pull this carp that you are feeling better. No one...not even the women that I love can pull herself out of a depression that fast." Jinny didn't know what to say. She sat down on the couch. She looked down. Teddy was right she was she wasn't feel better, but she also wasn't as bad as last night. "Look Teddy, I am sorry. Your right..I didn't mean to get mad at you. It's just....It's just that for me depending on people is hard, and last night I...I" She was still trying to find the right words...."I didn't know....I didn't know WHY I was feeling the way that I was. I was tired of all the crying, and everything else." She looked up into Teddy eyes. She new he was worried about her, and for that reason she was trying to stay calm. She didn't want him to be worried about her. She could take care of herself, but she also new that he wasn't going to take that as an answer. "Teddy I am NOT going to kill myself. I hope that you realize that. I may not know what is going on with me right now, but I know that at lesat for today I am not going to kill myself." Teddy cut her off, "Maybe not today, but what about tomorrow. What would have happend if I hadn't come last night?" Jinny said in a soft voice, almost to the point that Teddy couldn't here her. " I wouldn't have killed myself. Not last night, and not tomorrow." Jinny didn't believe herself. All the times in the last few months that sucided had poped in her mind, and how last night it was the worst, but now she was feeling better at least a little. She didn't want to go to the docters.She had to much work to do. Teddy said, "You don't sound to shure of yourself? Why don't we just go to the docters, and then maybe things will make more since. Hey, you might just find out what is borthering you." Jinny thought for a secound, and then said, "I can't go to the docters today. I really do have to much work to do, but what if I promice that I will go next week sometime? Will that work for you? " Teddy wasn't sure what to think. He had never sceen Jinny like that before, but he also knew that if he pushed Jinny right now that she would just puch him right back out of her life. "Jinny you swear to me that next week you will go, and see your docter." Jinny got up from the couch, and walked over to Teddy, and looked him straght in the eye, and siad, "I swear..." They kissed each other, and hugged. Jinny pulled away, and said, "I have to get ready for work, and I am sure that you have to leave to work as well." You are right I do, but if you need..." Jinny cut him off. "I call." He walked to the door, and then turn to ask, " Is it okay if I stop by tonight?" Jinny said, "sure, maybe we can brab a bite to eat or something." Teddy opend the door, and said, "Bye" Jinny said, "See Ya." --------------------------------- An hour later Jinny showed up at work. She sat down, and started on some paper work. Magda walked in a little while later, and said "Hey, Jin." There was no answer from Jinny..Magda tired again Mornin Jin..." Jinny looked up realizeing that her best friend was standing in fornt of her. "Umm oh, Hi Mag. How is Ben?" "Oh man last night was a rough night." Jinny thought to herself tell me about it. Magda contunied with what she was saying. "He is a tough little boy though. A real fighter." Jinny simeiled, and tucked her hair behind her ear. "Just like his mom." She said. Jinny was trying to hide the way she was feeling, but Magda could tell that something was wrong. Jinny then said, "So is he feeling better now?" Maged said, "Yeah he's feeling a little better now. So how are You doing she asked her best frined seeing the dark circles around her eyes, and seeing that they were also blood shot. "Uhh...I guess tired..you know not getting enough sleep. That kinda thing Jinny said trying to cover. Magda looked at her. "Come on Jin your hideing something from me. What's going on?" "You wouldn't understand no one does." Jinny said. "Try me Jin." Magda said. "Mag, I am sorry I just don't wanna talk about it okay?" Magda Looked at her best friend. She couldn't stand to see her hurting like this, but she didn't know what else she could do so she said, "okay, but you know If you need to talk to me I am here for you." "Yeah. Jinny said, " I know." They both when to doing there paper work. -------------------------- Captain's office Kate looked at the file that the A.D.A had just stoped by to talk to her about. He was gone now, and now all she had to do was talk to Jinny, and Magda about it, but the problem was she didn't know how Jinny was going to take her news. Kate could tell that Jinny had been really depressed lately, but she also knew that there was nothing she could do about it. She took at deep breath, and walked to her office door, and called for both the inesperters to come into her office. They both walked into her office, and took a seat, and Kate shut her door. "I have to talk to the both of you about the Walter's case. I know that this is a touchey subject, but I need for both of you to stay calm." Jinny got up from her seat, and said, "Please, not bad news. Don't tell me Mr. Walter's is going to get away with beating his wife, and kid, PLEASE don't tell me that." Kate looked up at Jinny. Kate was sorry to have to tell Jinny this, but there was nothing that she could do anymore. "Jinny I am sorry, but the mother, is takeing back her statemeat. She is saying that there was no abuse." Jinny started yelling, "But, we have a docters recard, and neabors who have heard screaming coming form the hose,a nd it's not the first time that the mother has called the police." Magda was upset too, but not quite as upset. "Captain didn't the juge say that if the mother took back her statment that the kid was going to go to a foster home?" "Yes," Kate said. "That is what the juge...." Jinny cut her off.."Yeah, but everybody know that within a few monts that kid will be right back in that home, and being beat again, becasue the law doesn't work!" "Jinny that not ture...You don't know that." Kate was staying really calm for herslf, and for Jinny. She knew she had too.This was to touchey subject for her. "I do know it!" Jinny said get more upset. "Why is it that the fact that a kids life is at stake, and you are just setting there staying so calm?! It's like you don't even care?" "I DO care damn....!"Kate stoped herself, and took a deep breath... "It's just sometimes when a case is so personal to you you have to take a step back from it that way you don't take it so personal. Look Jinny the father will make a mistake, and we will get him. Until then we will just have to wait it out. I know that is hard, but that is what we have to do." "She's right Jinny. The Dad will make a mistake, and we will be there when he does." Magda said. "UH Huh?" Jinny questioned what they where saying. "So what happends if we wait, and the father kills the mother, or the kid then what? I am not going to stand here while the monster gets away with it!" "Jinny there is nothing that you can do at this point. The law won't let you do anything about it." Kate said "Well then I guess that we wouldn't have done our jobs...as police at protecting the inocent! If that is the way it is then I guess you can take this job, and screw it!" Jinny walked to the door, and opended it up, and walked out the door. Okay that it...for now let me know what ya think....
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Ahhhh! How could you leave me hangin like that!? post more! Post more sooooooooooooooooooon! Pleez!
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Howdy! :-D Stacy:Sorry to bother you. Cap:You've still got time to reconsider. Crazy is normal,and Normal is crazy! Optimism can be a real b!t(h sometimes. "I've discovered the hardest discovery to make is who you are."-Bonnie Bedelia. "It's Not reaching your dreams that counts. It's going towards them."-Cher Somebody once said(I don't remember who) "I know that God won't give me more then I can handle...I just wish he didn't trust me so much." <- - I liked that. God Bless EVERYONE ~Emma~ |
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aahhhh!! It's been awhile since I have posted...ehhh...lets hope by me wrighting I start getting any idea poping off my head...or I could do like you Emma and start bagging my head against something, but something tells me I would hit my head to hard, and pass out or something. LOL Thanks for the reply...Here is an atmept for more...hope you like...
Kate sat at her deck watching as Jinny ran out of the room. Kate firured she would follow in a minute, but frist she had to make a phone call. Magda looked at her captain as if, asking for permision to follow her parter and close friend. Kate gave her a nod, and said, "Go." Magda didn't think twice about it she went after her best friend. Jinny went into the locker room and was just sitting on the bench. She was trying not to cry, but she knew that the tears were coming, and she knew how she had been latley and knew that she wasn't goona be able to stop them once they did come. Magda walked in right after her, and asked, "please, tell me what's going on. Jin it's pretty clear that it isn't just this case that's getting to you." Jinny looked up at her best friend knowing that she meant well, but she was to upset to see it. "Look it doesn't matter what is going on with me wright now. They are going to end up letting this little boy go back to his parents. I don't know what I will do if that happpens, and something tells me I am not going to have a choice in the matter. If, only this one case the only case that I have given a damn about in the last few months could work out maybe I would start to feel better." "Jinny," Magda stated, "You know as well as I do that one case isn't going to make you feel better. Look, I can honlisty say that I don't know what your going though, but I can say that you have seed sad for a long time now. Maybe even since I meet you, and we didn't notice it then...Jin...I don't know..But if, it is this case that you think is going to make you feel better then maybe you should fight for it. Maybe she should go over all the files again..Talk to the people in the neiaborhood, and see what they have to say." It's not that simple Magda...Look I made my choice I am sticking to it. I don't wanna do a job that doesn't protect the children. I woulda you of everybody would understand that Mag." Jinny said. ------------------------------ AN Okay I must say that in the next part or for that matter any police stuff that goes on or anything with Children Welfair Serivious I know thing about so, anything, or everything that I say might be wrong...Please just stick with me. Kate sat back in her chair after dialing the number for childrean's welfair serivious, and as the person answerd she asked if she could pelase talk to Dave Frost. The women on the other end said one sec. Kate waited about another Minute and hurd the voice that she wanted. "Hello, this is Dave Frost. What can I do for you?" "Uhh. Hi dave, this is Captain Kate McCafferty." The captain part was a mistake on Kate part becasue, she knew Dave pretty well. Dave asked, Oh hI Kate how are you doing? What can I do for you today? Kate got right down to what she needed becides she was in a hurry. She wanted to get back to Jinny before she had a chance to leave. "well, Kate said, "remember that favour you owe me? Yeah, dave said,'I guess it's time that you are Collecting it Huh? Yes, Kate said.."it is an emergency I don't have much time to explain, but I hope you can help." I will try my best Kate" he started "Good Kate said, She went into dealteal of what she needed and Dave said that it shouldn't be any problem. So they hung up the phone, and Kate 'Oh, Allen The ADA on the case was going to kill her for going behind his back. oh she siad, 'it was very important that I did this.' She walked out of her officce, and asked Raina , "Did you see where Jinny, and Magda when? Raina looked up form what she was doing, and saw her captain, "yeah the ran into the bathroom. What's goin on cap," Raina questioned. Kate looked at the courisity in Raina's face, and Kate Said, "you know Raina courisity killed the cat." With that Kate walked over to the locker room, and turned back mostley looking at Raina, and said, "oh by the way, if I ceth any of you by that door with your ear by it then you will find yourselfs with a day offf.....with NO pay." Kate Walked into the locker rooms and saw Magda and Jinny sitting there talking. Kate couldn't help over hear. Madgda was giving Jinny a hug, and Said, "So, I guess this is it your leaving?" Jinny nodded her head as she was pooling away form her best friend. "Yeah there is nothing more I can do here." Jinny was sad after all the years she was there, but if, she couldn't save this child form the father, then there was nothing more that she could do that would be worth while. That when she hurd..the voice the that had so much anger in it she felt like she was a little kid again. "Like HELL your leaving!" Kate was ticked but in the same she felt like she had to have Jinny close to her she Jinny didn't get hurt. Jinny to the captain even though Kate would never addimet it was like a daughter to her. She always had to wantch over her making sure she didn't do anything to get herself into trouble. She knew that if Jinny left that room that day Kate would never be able to look after her...after the women who had come in with such a chip on her shoulder. The women who had gotten into so much trouble, and Kate had found a way each time to dig jinny out of it...The women that Kate had so much pride in becasue of her strenath. Now once again Kate wasn't letting the women that she sometines found in her dreams as though she was her daughter wish her the best...and hopeing for her to having a family some day. Kate never new why she felt so close to Jinny, and she never thought that she would ever know. Maybe some were in this case Kate might be able to find out why. Till then she had to get Jinny to stay. Jinny said simply, "You can't make me stay." Kate said, "Wanna make you bet..you haven't given me your two week notice. Yes, I know you can walk out of her, but that doesn't mean that I wont' follow you out. At any rate...your here for two more weeks wither you like it or not." Jinny asked, WHAT?!?!, now she was upset again this time not tears. "YOu can't do that! Kate Looked at Jinny, and said, "Really? Why don't you try me..Huh see were that leads.." Kate changed subject for a secound, "Magda can you leave us alone for a minute?" Eventhough it was more of a statement then a question. Magday said, "umm...I kinda like the seat right next to the both of you.Both Jinny and Kate glared at her, and she said, "okay okay, I am going." Magda walked to the door and went to open it. "Magda, Kate said, stoping her in her tracks. "Ask Raina what I said about listening at the door..and what ever she tells you the same goes got it?" Magda, gave her Cap a starnge look and said "Umm Yeah sure." She left the room. All eyes on her. She had hoped that the captain would convince her to stay. Magda thought it was kinda strange how the captain was acting but she though oh well maybe it was her way of trying to get Jinny to stay. She went to walk over to her seat when she still noticed the eyes still on her. What? She asked Raina said, "so you gonna tell us what's goin on or what?" Magda knew that Jinny wouldn't want them all know how she felt, she dind't blame them,but she also new that they were going to leave her alone she had to say soemthing. Well she thought that maybe what the cap had told her to ask RAina would get them off her back so, she said, "I don't know much, but Cap told me to ask you what she said when she went to walk into the locker room." Magda asked as she looked at raina. Raina, got a frown on her face, and told magda what the cap had said, and Magda nearley laughed. -------------------------------------------- Back in the locker room Jinny was fighting with all the streath that she had left no one told her what to do NO ONE, I can leave here if I want, and there is nothign that you can do about it!" Jinny Yelled Okay Kate thought for a secound, she watched as jinny walked over to her locker, and started grabing stuff, and putting it into her bag Kate couldn't stand it any longer she walked over to Jinny locker and slamed it shut. Jinny face turned red cuase she was so upset, but now Kate new that withougt a doubt she had Jinny's attechion. "Jinny listen to me I have found a way to keep the little boy out of his dad, and mothers home....For a very long time. Jinny was more courious now, but still up set and wanted to know answers, "How, How did you do that? It's a long story, but someone in child willfair serivious owed me a faiorver. THe Boy woun't be going back to his parents until the mother agrees that the abuse was happening. Kate said Oh, Jinny said, "Well in that case you really don't need me after all, you did that on your own the child is safe so there is no more work for me to do here...." Kate cut her off before she could say, or do anything else. "Jinny..."Kate couldn't quite find the words that she was looking for. "I..Look there are a lot of people who need you here...Myself incul.."She stoped at that, and went to the case at hand....'Well, ummm....anyway back to the case I thought that I should tell you that the only way that the kid stays away form his father is if, you stay here, and work it, and if not well then the kid goes back to the parents." Jinny was in somewhat of shock of her captain say that eveyone needed her here, and just the little bet that she had said about even herself needing her, but the shock quickley wore of as Jinny thought of the last stament that her Captain had said. "What do you mean That only if, I stay here, and work the case that the kid doesn't go back to the paresnts..That's crul, and mean. Who would put a child in danger like that just to keep me hear? Jinny asked "I did, Kate said matter of factley. "YOU?! Jinny asked, and very upset this wasn't like her captain at all. "Why is it so important that I stay here? This kid Will die That's not far putting that kinda preasher on me! Why are you doing this? How are you so sure that by putting a child llife in danger that I will stay here?! " Kate waited a while, she couldnt' think of what to say when Jinny snaped her out of it. "HUH!? What makes you so sure?! Kate had come up with her answer it was a fact that kate knew that both her, and Jinny would understand. "Becasue if, you leave your killing yourself, and that kid. I don't think your willing to make that dection. Now on the other hand, you can stay her if it isn't saving yourself at least your makeing a choice for the kid. I just want to make this clear if, you walk so does the deal for the kid. So, What have you decided? So, should I wright more...pelase tell me what ya think???????? |
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Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay,wahooo! You FINALLY posted more!!
that was great, post mooooooooooore sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Cd, Had gotten a call about five minutes after the Captain had walked out of her office. The call was about their suspect being around this wair house. They already had the warrent for the arrest, now all they had to do was find the guy. This was the frist lead that they had gotten in a few days. Cd, told Nate what was going on, and that he would meet her in the car. Cd looked to both Raina, and Magda, she was trying to figure out witch one she should tell were they were going in case something happend. She figured she would tell both of them on the safe side. "Hey, Magda and Raina, Nate and I are going to a ware house on twenty-ninth street. Let Cap no when she gets done. Will you?" They both noded their head in unision.
--------------------- Jinny glared at her captain, but kate wasn't back down no way in hell was Kate going to do that. Jinny then yelled, "That's blakmail!" "Call it what you want, but that is the deal that is before you. Take it or leave it." Kate stated. "You wanna know what I calle it?" Jinny didn't wait for any answer. "I call it..." Kate cut her off before she had a chance to say more. But, this time Kate tone was down, it was more mothering then anything, "Jinny believe it or not I know what your going though. It's tough, and it's not going to away over night. It could take months, even years. You may never get better, but you have to keep fighting. Wither you like it or, not I will be here fighting for your life. Each of us has our own part in this family of ours, and yours is just as important as everybody elses, and if you die then a part of all of us dies. Jinny didn't quite know how to respond. Kate had never used those terms of them being a family. The last thing that Jinny wanted to do was to let down Kate or that little boy. Jinny sat back down on the bench, let herself relaxe a bit. She looked back up at her captains face, and said, "Alright I will do this, but only for that kid." Then Jinny gave her captain a worning. "Now, don't you go thinkin that since I am staing that means that I have forgiven you, because I haven't. It's going to take me a long time to forgive you." One would have thought that Kate would be upset at what Jinny had just said to her, but she wasn't. She understood why she was mad at her, and for that reason she wasn't upset. "That's fine." Kate said Jinny asked, "Now what?" "Will," Kate said, "This is up to you, but why don't you go home for the day? Take the rest of the day as a sick day." |
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It's about freakin time!!!! Post moooooore sooooooon
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