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CameraQueen · 11-09-2002, 09:38 AM

Ok guys, I'm just curious...what did you think of my story in XDrama's web site "The Dating Game"? Input, suggestions...I promise to consider every idea here. (I like feedback...LOL)

CollegeGirl · 11-09-2002, 12:04 PM

I LOVED it! Ad I can't wait to read more. The anticipation is dwelling up inside me

You did such a great job at capturing everyone's personalities.

I am so curious to find out why Potsie wasn't at the wedding-- as stated in the teaser. I love this follow up from "They Call It Potsie Love." That episode was just on yesterday, so it is still fresh in my mind.

And Fonzie has feelings for Joanie? Did I read that correctly? I would love to see this explored more, too! I never would have dreamed of a romantic relationship between Fonzie and Joanie, but after reading several stories with that theme, it has gotten into my blood. I would love to see what would happen.

I am having a hard time swallowing the Jenny dating Chachi thing-- would Joanie even care if they dated? She'd probably just laugh! Jenny is always hitting on everybody, so this is expected. Maybe have Chachi date K.C. or another girl, instead.... I'm not sure who, though.

I was wondering if anyone ever considered changing the plot line from Happy Days to where Chachi and Joanie DON'T get back together and don't get married. How would you write the ending of Happy Days? I watched Erin Moran on Street Smarts yesterday, and even she admitted that chachi never loved Joanie. How interesting this was.

CameraQueen · 11-09-2002, 12:24 PM

Yes I watched Street Smarts last night too. I loved it when she said that. Chachi was a punk. LOL My original intent with this story was to make it sort of "Alternate Universe" where Joanie and Chachi don't get back together, and the ending would have Joanie and Fonzie get married instead. But I figured between XDrama's stories and some of my other stuff, there was wayyy too much Joanie/Fonzie out there. So I decided to make it fit neatly into the context of the series instead, almost like it could've been a three-part episode right before "Passages". I will get a little bit into the whole Fonzie/Joanie thing within this story, which also resolving Potsie/Joanie, and Joanie/Chachi. And don't worry...this whole Chachi/Jenny thing will not last long.

CollegeGirl · 11-09-2002, 12:39 PM

I am so glad to hear that! I can't wait to read more!

11-09-2002, 09:38 AM	#1
CameraQueen Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 08, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 602	Feedback on my story..... Ok guys, I'm just curious...what did you think of my story in XDrama's web site "The Dating Game"? Input, suggestions...I promise to consider every idea here. (I like feedback...LOL)
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11-09-2002, 12:04 PM	#2
CollegeGirl Spike Loves Buffy Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2002 Location: Sunnydale: The Land of The Vamps, Monsters, And Things That Go Bump Posts: 1,517	I LOVED it! Ad I can't wait to read more. The anticipation is dwelling up inside me You did such a great job at capturing everyone's personalities. I am so curious to find out why Potsie wasn't at the wedding-- as stated in the teaser. I love this follow up from "They Call It Potsie Love." That episode was just on yesterday, so it is still fresh in my mind. And Fonzie has feelings for Joanie? Did I read that correctly? I would love to see this explored more, too! I never would have dreamed of a romantic relationship between Fonzie and Joanie, but after reading several stories with that theme, it has gotten into my blood. I would love to see what would happen. I am having a hard time swallowing the Jenny dating Chachi thing-- would Joanie even care if they dated? She'd probably just laugh! Jenny is always hitting on everybody, so this is expected. Maybe have Chachi date K.C. or another girl, instead.... I'm not sure who, though. I was wondering if anyone ever considered changing the plot line from Happy Days to where Chachi and Joanie DON'T get back together and don't get married. How would you write the ending of Happy Days? I watched Erin Moran on Street Smarts yesterday, and even she admitted that chachi never loved Joanie. How interesting this was.

11-09-2002, 12:24 PM	#3
CameraQueen Member Forum Regular Join Date: Mar 08, 2001 Location: MA Posts: 602	Yes I watched Street Smarts last night too. I loved it when she said that. Chachi was a punk. LOL My original intent with this story was to make it sort of "Alternate Universe" where Joanie and Chachi don't get back together, and the ending would have Joanie and Fonzie get married instead. But I figured between XDrama's stories and some of my other stuff, there was wayyy too much Joanie/Fonzie out there. So I decided to make it fit neatly into the context of the series instead, almost like it could've been a three-part episode right before "Passages". I will get a little bit into the whole Fonzie/Joanie thing within this story, which also resolving Potsie/Joanie, and Joanie/Chachi. And don't worry...this whole Chachi/Jenny thing will not last long.

11-09-2002, 12:39 PM	#4
CollegeGirl Spike Loves Buffy Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2002 Location: Sunnydale: The Land of The Vamps, Monsters, And Things That Go Bump Posts: 1,517	I am so glad to hear that! I can't wait to read more!