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~Tropical Punch 19~ · 11-05-2002, 12:03 AM

Okay this fan fic is a bit different, but hey it works...

The scene starts off in the living room. Mallory, and her parents are standing there. Mallory is getting ready to go out.

Mrs. Keaton. Where you off to Mal?
Mallory. Oh, I am going to Suzanne’s house. WE are gonna study for our big business final.
Mrs. Keaton. Oh, well don’t forget Andy.
Mallory. Whoa, what are you talking about mom?
Mrs Keaton. You now your father and I are going to his WKS work party and Andy certainty cannot come to that.
Mallory. (Whiny) But Mom!! Can’t Alex or Jen watch him?
Mrs. Keaton. Mallory, Alex is out somewhere with Lauren and Jennifer is at krissy’s birthday party. Besides it is your turn to baby-sit anyway. Just take hoim with you.
Mallory. Agh. We will never get any studying done. He is so annoying. I can’t stand him sometimes.
Mrs. Keaton. Don’t talk about your brother that way. I’ll go get him.

Mallory and Andy arrive at Suzanne’s house

Mallory. Hey Suzanne. What’s up?
Suzanne. Ah, not much. Who’s this?
Mallory. Oh, he’s my little brother
Suzanne. Oh, it’s nice to meet you. What’s your name?
Andy. Hey. I am Andy.
Suzanne. Well come in and make yourselves at home.

Suzanne and Mallory sit at the table and try to study.

Mallory. Okay if the stock market goes down two points…
Andy: Bang Bang Bang!!! (makes gun sound affects)
Mallory: Andy! We are trying to study. Shut up.
Andy. Sorry. I will.
Suzanne. Aw, he’s so cute.
Mallory. No, not really.
Andy. Just beat it, just beat it, no one wants to be defeated!!
Mallory. Andrew, what did I just tell you?
Andy. Sorry. It’s just soo boring in here.
Suzanne. Andy, we have a swing set outside if you wanna go swing.
Andy. Okay.
Mallory. Good got rid of him.

Andy goes outside and swings for awhile and then eh spots a swimming pool.

Andy. Cool! I wish we had a pool. (Slowly climbs up the side of the pool)
Mallory doesn’t want me around, maybe I’ll just live in the pool.
(all of a sudden he falls in)
Andy. Ahh! Help me. Help me! (flaps his hands around rapidly)
Suzanne. Do you hear something?
Mallory. Yeah, it sounds like (looks out the window.) Oh my gosh! Andy. He’s drowning.

Will andy survive or die? Find out when I add part 2.

Plata · 11-05-2002, 05:40 PM

This is a good fan fic so far. It's suspenseful for sure. I'm looking forward to read part 2.

~Tropical Punch 19~ · 12-11-2002, 06:54 PM

oh, i'm sorry. It's just i haven't had time. I have been super busy. i willy try to finish it sometime though. sorry about hat.

11-05-2002, 12:03 AM	#1
~Tropical Punch 19~ Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 19, 2001 Location: I'm a fly on Clay's wall Posts: 1,961	Angels Okay this fan fic is a bit different, but hey it works... The scene starts off in the living room. Mallory, and her parents are standing there. Mallory is getting ready to go out. Mrs. Keaton. Where you off to Mal? Mallory. Oh, I am going to Suzanne’s house. WE are gonna study for our big business final. Mrs. Keaton. Oh, well don’t forget Andy. Mallory. Whoa, what are you talking about mom? Mrs Keaton. You now your father and I are going to his WKS work party and Andy certainty cannot come to that. Mallory. (Whiny) But Mom!! Can’t Alex or Jen watch him? Mrs. Keaton. Mallory, Alex is out somewhere with Lauren and Jennifer is at krissy’s birthday party. Besides it is your turn to baby-sit anyway. Just take hoim with you. Mallory. Agh. We will never get any studying done. He is so annoying. I can’t stand him sometimes. Mrs. Keaton. Don’t talk about your brother that way. I’ll go get him. Mallory and Andy arrive at Suzanne’s house Mallory. Hey Suzanne. What’s up? Suzanne. Ah, not much. Who’s this? Mallory. Oh, he’s my little brother Suzanne. Oh, it’s nice to meet you. What’s your name? Andy. Hey. I am Andy. Suzanne. Well come in and make yourselves at home. Suzanne and Mallory sit at the table and try to study. Mallory. Okay if the stock market goes down two points… Andy: Bang Bang Bang!!! (makes gun sound affects) Mallory: Andy! We are trying to study. Shut up. Andy. Sorry. I will. Suzanne. Aw, he’s so cute. Mallory. No, not really. Andy. Just beat it, just beat it, no one wants to be defeated!! Mallory. Andrew, what did I just tell you? Andy. Sorry. It’s just soo boring in here. Suzanne. Andy, we have a swing set outside if you wanna go swing. Andy. Okay. Mallory. Good got rid of him. Andy goes outside and swings for awhile and then eh spots a swimming pool. Andy. Cool! I wish we had a pool. (Slowly climbs up the side of the pool) Mallory doesn’t want me around, maybe I’ll just live in the pool. (all of a sudden he falls in) Andy. Ahh! Help me. Help me! (flaps his hands around rapidly) Suzanne. Do you hear something? Mallory. Yeah, it sounds like (looks out the window.) Oh my gosh! Andy. He’s drowning. Will andy survive or die? Find out when I add part 2.

11-05-2002, 05:40 PM	#2
Plata Member Senior Member Join Date: May 16, 2001 Location: Regina,Saskatchewan, Canada Posts: 1,201	This is a good fan fic so far. It's suspenseful for sure. I'm looking forward to read part 2.

12-11-2002, 06:54 PM	#3
~Tropical Punch 19~ Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 19, 2001 Location: I'm a fly on Clay's wall Posts: 1,961	oh, i'm sorry. It's just i haven't had time. I have been super busy. i willy try to finish it sometime though. sorry about hat.