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Laurel · 11-01-2002, 05:14 PM

Wally's new girlfriend has a reputation for being "loose" -- and rumors run rampant when Wally is seen babysitting and infant with the girl.

FADE IN:

EXT. - MALT SHOP - DAY

CUT TO:

INT. - BOOTH - DAY

Wally Cleaver and Sallie Martin sip ice cream sodas.

SALLIE: I'm sorry that I won't be able to watch you play touch football tomorrow, Wally. But I promised the Donaldsons that I would babysit their daughter while they attend a family wedding.

WALLY: That's okay, Sallie. We play every Saturday. You can watch a game some other time.

(A BEAT)

WALLY: The Donaldsons? Do they live on Maple Drive?

SALLIE: Why yes, they do. Do you know them?

WALLY: Sort of -- they were our neighbors when we lived on Maple Drive. I haven't seen them since we moved.

Sallie looks surprised.

SALLIE: It's certainly a small world. My mother joined the neighborhood bridge club a few weeks ago and met Mrs. Donaldson there.

Sallie sips her ice cream soda.

SALLIE: I have an idea, Wally. Why don't you stop by the Donaldsons after your game tomorrow. I'll be there all day, and you can help me babysit.

Before Wally can give Sallie an answer, Eddie Haskell strides into the malt shop and sits next to Wally.

EDDIE: Hey, Sam, you better take cover.

WALLY: What for?

EDDIE: Mary Ellen is heading this way.

WALLY: It's a free country, Eddie. Mary Ellen Rogers can come into the malt shop if she wants to.

Eddie beams at Sallie.

EDDIE: Sure she can, Wally. But when she sees you with this beautiful dove, you'll be wearing that soda. Heh, heh, heh.

(TO BE CONTINUED...)

Laurel · 11-02-2002, 02:29 PM

CUT TO:

Mary Ellen Rogers and Julie Foster approach the counter and order two sodas. Julie surveys the shop and spots Wally Cleaver sitting at a booth with Eddie Haskell.

JULIE: Mary Ellen, it's your lucky day! Wally Cleaver is here!

MARY ELLEN: He's old hat, Julie.

JULIE: That's not what you said last night. You said that dumping Wally was the biggest mistake you ever made and that you wished you hadn't told him to date other girls.

Julie continues to watch Wally, and realizes that he is with Sallie.

JULIE: Uh-oh.

Mary Ellen picks up the two sodas and hands one to Julie.

MARY ELLEN: What's wrong, Julie?

Mary Ellen spots Sallie. Her eyes narrow.

MARY ELLEN: Julie, don't you think chocolated malted would look just peachy on the front of Sallie's cheerleader sweater.

Julie's eyes widen.

JULIE: Mary Ellen, you wouldn't! Would you?

MARY ELLEN: Oh, wouldn't I?

Mary Ellen and Julie walk toward an open booth, stopping in front of Eddie's and Wally's booth. They feign surprise at seeing them.

MARY ELLEN: Why, look Julie -- it's Eddie and Wally. What a surprise to see you here!

Eddie motions toward his booth.

EDDIE: Hey, Dolls! Why don't you join us -- we've got plenty of room.

MARY ELLEN: Thanks, Eddie.

Mary Ellen and Julie slide in next to Sallie. Mary Ellen dumps half of her soda down the front of Sallie's sweater.

MARY ELLEN: Oh! I'm so sorry! How clumsy of me! And all over your cheerleader uniform!

Sallie looks startled as she reaches for her napkin. Eddie and Julie snicker.

SALLIE: That's quite alright. It's washable.

Wally glares at Mary Ellen.

WALLY: You did that on purpose, Mary Ellen.

Mary Ellen feigns shock.

MARY ELLEN: Who--me? You know I'm not that kind of girl, Wally.

TO BE CONTINUED...

FOL85NatandMrsGRock · 11-02-2002, 06:38 PM

haha! i read the first part a real while ago when you first put it up, but your parts are so short, i didn't have much to respond to, but this part was funny! i love how mary ellen is being so mean to sallie, but hey, let's get some more going!! This could be a really interesting story if my thoughts go as planned!

Stormtracker TF · 11-08-2002, 01:26 AM

Funny! Add more soon PLEASE!

BBF · 11-08-2002, 03:51 PM

This is great! When are you gonna post some more?!

Stormtracker TF · 11-08-2002, 10:03 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BeaversBiggestFan
This is great! When are you gonna post some more?!

PLEASE MORE, PLEASE!

*InThisMoment* · 11-10-2002, 02:54 PM

GREAT story so far keep writing!!!

Laurel · 11-11-2002, 01:18 PM

INT. - MALT SHOP - DAY

(CONTINUED)

WALLY: I've dated you for two years, Mary Ellen. I think I know what kind of girl you are, and I think you're jealous.

Mary Ellen glares at Wally.

MARY ELLEN: Jealous! Don't flatter yourself, Wally Cleaver! I can't help that you dumped me for Bleach Blonde Bimbo here.

SALLIE: Bimbo!

Mary Ellen looks askance at Sallie.

MARY ELLEN: If the reputation fits, wear it. And yours followed you from Belport. And I'll thank you to leave Wally off your list of conquests. He's mine.

Wally glares at Mary Ellen.

WALLY: I am not yours, Mary Ellen! You dumped me at last year's Holiday Dance, remember? You wanted to date that football player from State U.

EDDIE: That's true. I was there -- and it wasn't pretty.

MARY ELLEN: Butt out, Eddie!

WALLY: Mary Ellen! Control yourself!

Mary Ellen jumps up from her seat.

MARY ELLEN: I am under control! You're just impossible, Wally Cleaver! Let's go, Julie.

Mary Ellen and Julie leave in a huff.

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. - CLEAVER DINING ROOM - NIGHT

The Cleaver family -- Ward, June, Wally, and Beaver -- eat their dinner. Wally attacks his roast beef with anger.

WARD: Wally! The meat is already dead -- you don't need to attack it like that.

WALLY: Oh, I'm sorry Dad. Guess I have stuff on my mind.

WARD: Is there something bothering you, Son?

BEAVER: He's got girl trouble, Dad.

WALLY: Thanks alot, Beaver!

WARD: Girls in general or is there some special girl you're having trouble with, Wally?

BEAVER: Two girls, Dad.

JUNE: Beaver, please don't interrupt.

BEAVER: Sorry, Mom.

WARD: What two girls are you having trouble with, Wally?

Wally stares at his dinner plate and then at Ward.

WALLY: Sallie Martin -- the girl I've been tutoring in trigonometry --asked me to help her babysit tomorrow at the Donaldsons.

WARD: The Donaldsons? Our former neighbors?

JUNE: They had a girl, Ward.

WARD: Oh.

WALLY: So I told her I would -- help her I mean. Then Mary Ellen saw us and made a whole big thing about my seeing Sallie. Mary Ellen said that Sallie has a reputation as a ...

WARD: I think I get the picture, Wally. Sounds to me like Mary Ellen is having second thoughts about you, Wally.

WALLY: I figured that. But how can I tell her that I want to see Sallie?

June interrupts.

JUNE: Ward, Dear, will you join me in the kitchen and help me make the coffee?

Ward and June exit to the kitchen.

BEAVER: Uh oh, Wally. They're talking in the other room.

WALLY: Yeah. Hey, Beav -- do yourself a favor when you get into high school next year.

BEAVER: What's that?

WALLY: Don't get mixed up with girls.

BEAVER: Don't worry!

(TO BE CONTINUED...)

BBF · 11-11-2002, 04:03 PM

OMG, this is funny! Eagerly anticipating more soon!!

FOL85NatandMrsGRock · 11-11-2002, 06:48 PM

ARGH!!!!!!! i wanna see hwat june and ward talk about!!!!!!!!1 POST ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please! or i'll die from anticipation!

Stormtracker TF · 11-12-2002, 03:52 PM

Great! Post More soon!

Laurel · 11-17-2002, 05:11 PM

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. - KITCHEN - NIGHT

Ward follows June into the kitchen. June yanks a cupboard door open and reaches for a coffee can. She opens the can and shakes the coffee scooper at Ward.

JUNE: Ward, you're just going to have to talk to Wally. I have an idea that he really likes this girl.

WARD: I'd love to oblige, June, but I gave that talk to Wally when he was twelve years old. And as I remember, Wally was more interested in playing baseball than hanging around girls at the time.

June plugs the coffee machine into an outlet.

JUNE: Oh, to go back to those days! I've seen the way Wally looks at Sallie -- and the way she looks at him -- when they study at the dining room table. Believe me, Ward, Wally's got more than trigonometry on his mind!

WARD: He wouldn't be my son if he was only interested in a girl as a study partner.

June stares at Ward.

JUNE: Ward, you're not helping. I suppose you think I'm being foolish about Wally babysitting with Sallie tomorrow.

Ward reaches into a cupboard for two coffee cups.

WARD: Not foolish. Overprotective. Wally's eighteen years old now -- old enough to decide what girls he wants to date.

June pours coffee into the cups.

JUNE: I know, Ward. I just don't want Wally getting any grand ideas about marriage and babies when he still has college ahead of him.

Ward laughs.

WARD: I don't think that will happen, and if it does, we'll remind Wally about the Hendersons.

June hands Ward his cup of coffee.

JUNE: Just keep in mind that the Hendersons didn't have a five-month old baby to take care of.

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. - METZGER'S FIELD - DAY

THE NEXT MORNING

Wally, Eddie, and Lumpy shake Tom Henderson's hand after winning the flag football game.

TOM: Great game, guys. I'm sure going to miss you when you're all up at State U in the fall.

EDDIE: We'll get home on a few weekends to beat the pants off you, Tom. Heh, heh, heh.

Wally rolls his eyes.

WALLY: Eddie! We won on a fluke play.

EDDIE: Yeah. Lump tripped and fell into the end zone!

LUMPY: I do what I can.

Judy Henderson arrives and waves at Tom.

TOM: Gotta go. There's Judy.

Tom leaves and Eddie shakes his head as he surveys the bleachers.

EDDIE: Great ball player. Too bad he's tied down to a ball and chain.

(A BEAT)

EDDIE: Speaking of ball and chains, Wally -- isn't that Sallie over there with a baby carriage?

Wally looks over at the bleachers. He smiles.

WALLY: Yeah, it is.

EDDIE: I thought you said she was babysitting today and couldn't make the game.

WALLY: That's what she told me.

Wally dashes toward the bleachers. Eddie grabs him.

EDDIE: Hold it, Sam. You're getting in way over your head.

Wally's eyes narrow.

WALLY: What's that supposed to mean, Eddie?

EDDIE: While you're babysitting today, get all the practice you can. You're going to need it.

Wally shirks away from Eddie.

WALLY: Cut it out, Eddie. You and Mary Ellen have something in common -- you're both jealous.

Wally dashes toward the bleachers. Eddie shakes his head.

EDDIE: I'm not jealous.

LUMPY: Sure you are, Eddie. Sallie turned you down flat when you asked her out. Guess she only has eyes for Wally Cleaver.

EDDIE: And about five guys in Bellport.

Eddie starts to leave.

EDDIE: C'mon Lump. We gotta clue Wally in about his new girl.

(TO BE CONTINUED...)

FOL85NatandMrsGRock · 11-17-2002, 06:10 PM

AAAWWWWSSSSOOOOMMMEEEE!!!! This totally rocks!!!! it's WAY better than ANYTHING i could ever write!! I hope you post more SOOOOOONNNNN!!! You know hte katchup commercial!!! "anticiapation.... anticipayayation...." (hahah)

KEEEP WRITING!!!!!! You're totally awsome and i LOVE the story! Great spot between Ward and June!! YOu really got everyone down!! Congrats on the great writing my friend!

BBF · 11-17-2002, 06:33 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by FOL85NatandMrsGRock
AAAWWWWSSSSOOOOMMMEEEE!!!! This totally rocks!!!! it's WAY better than ANYTHING i could ever write!! I hope you post more SOOOOOONNNNN!!! You know hte katchup commercial!!! "anticiapation.... anticipayayation...." (hahah)

KEEEP WRITING!!!!!! You're totally awsome and i LOVE the story! Great spot between Ward and June!! YOu really got everyone down!! Congrats on the great writing my friend!

I agree! This story is excellent! and FUNNY!!!! You are a great writer! Don't put yourself down Sarah, your Wally and Shirley fanfic is AWESOME too!

Stormtracker TF · 11-18-2002, 04:17 PM

Both Fanfics are TOO COOOL AWWWWWWWWWSOME!

11-01-2002, 05:14 PM	#1
Laurel "Lauriebelle" Occasional Poster Join Date: Sep 20, 2002 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 80	The Patter of Little Feet (fanfiction) Wally's new girlfriend has a reputation for being "loose" -- and rumors run rampant when Wally is seen babysitting and infant with the girl. FADE IN: EXT. - MALT SHOP - DAY CUT TO: INT. - BOOTH - DAY Wally Cleaver and Sallie Martin sip ice cream sodas. SALLIE: I'm sorry that I won't be able to watch you play touch football tomorrow, Wally. But I promised the Donaldsons that I would babysit their daughter while they attend a family wedding. WALLY: That's okay, Sallie. We play every Saturday. You can watch a game some other time. (A BEAT) WALLY: The Donaldsons? Do they live on Maple Drive? SALLIE: Why yes, they do. Do you know them? WALLY: Sort of -- they were our neighbors when we lived on Maple Drive. I haven't seen them since we moved. Sallie looks surprised. SALLIE: It's certainly a small world. My mother joined the neighborhood bridge club a few weeks ago and met Mrs. Donaldson there. Sallie sips her ice cream soda. SALLIE: I have an idea, Wally. Why don't you stop by the Donaldsons after your game tomorrow. I'll be there all day, and you can help me babysit. Before Wally can give Sallie an answer, Eddie Haskell strides into the malt shop and sits next to Wally. EDDIE: Hey, Sam, you better take cover. WALLY: What for? EDDIE: Mary Ellen is heading this way. WALLY: It's a free country, Eddie. Mary Ellen Rogers can come into the malt shop if she wants to. Eddie beams at Sallie. EDDIE: Sure she can, Wally. But when she sees you with this beautiful dove, you'll be wearing that soda. Heh, heh, heh. (TO BE CONTINUED...)

11-02-2002, 02:29 PM	#2
Laurel "Lauriebelle" Occasional Poster Join Date: Sep 20, 2002 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 80	Patter of Little Feet, continued CUT TO: Mary Ellen Rogers and Julie Foster approach the counter and order two sodas. Julie surveys the shop and spots Wally Cleaver sitting at a booth with Eddie Haskell. JULIE: Mary Ellen, it's your lucky day! Wally Cleaver is here! MARY ELLEN: He's old hat, Julie. JULIE: That's not what you said last night. You said that dumping Wally was the biggest mistake you ever made and that you wished you hadn't told him to date other girls. Julie continues to watch Wally, and realizes that he is with Sallie. JULIE: Uh-oh. Mary Ellen picks up the two sodas and hands one to Julie. MARY ELLEN: What's wrong, Julie? Mary Ellen spots Sallie. Her eyes narrow. MARY ELLEN: Julie, don't you think chocolated malted would look just peachy on the front of Sallie's cheerleader sweater. Julie's eyes widen. JULIE: Mary Ellen, you wouldn't! Would you? MARY ELLEN: Oh, wouldn't I? Mary Ellen and Julie walk toward an open booth, stopping in front of Eddie's and Wally's booth. They feign surprise at seeing them. MARY ELLEN: Why, look Julie -- it's Eddie and Wally. What a surprise to see you here! Eddie motions toward his booth. EDDIE: Hey, Dolls! Why don't you join us -- we've got plenty of room. MARY ELLEN: Thanks, Eddie. Mary Ellen and Julie slide in next to Sallie. Mary Ellen dumps half of her soda down the front of Sallie's sweater. MARY ELLEN: Oh! I'm so sorry! How clumsy of me! And all over your cheerleader uniform! Sallie looks startled as she reaches for her napkin. Eddie and Julie snicker. SALLIE: That's quite alright. It's washable. Wally glares at Mary Ellen. WALLY: You did that on purpose, Mary Ellen. Mary Ellen feigns shock. MARY ELLEN: Who--me? You know I'm not that kind of girl, Wally. TO BE CONTINUED...

11-02-2002, 06:38 PM	#3
FOL85NatandMrsGRock The Lovable Sarah Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2000 Location: Wisconsin (Same Place Charlotte's From and where That 70's Show takes place!) .... Wish I was in Mayfield USA! Posts: 1,770	haha! i read the first part a real while ago when you first put it up, but your parts are so short, i didn't have much to respond to, but this part was funny! i love how mary ellen is being so mean to sallie, but hey, let's get some more going!! This could be a really interesting story if my thoughts go as planned!
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11-08-2002, 01:26 AM	#4
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11-08-2002, 03:51 PM	#5
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11-10-2002, 02:54 PM	#7
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11-11-2002, 01:18 PM	#8
Laurel "Lauriebelle" Occasional Poster Join Date: Sep 20, 2002 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 80	INT. - MALT SHOP - DAY (CONTINUED) WALLY: I've dated you for two years, Mary Ellen. I think I know what kind of girl you are, and I think you're jealous. Mary Ellen glares at Wally. MARY ELLEN: Jealous! Don't flatter yourself, Wally Cleaver! I can't help that you dumped me for Bleach Blonde Bimbo here. SALLIE: Bimbo! Mary Ellen looks askance at Sallie. MARY ELLEN: If the reputation fits, wear it. And yours followed you from Belport. And I'll thank you to leave Wally off your list of conquests. He's mine. Wally glares at Mary Ellen. WALLY: I am not yours, Mary Ellen! You dumped me at last year's Holiday Dance, remember? You wanted to date that football player from State U. EDDIE: That's true. I was there -- and it wasn't pretty. MARY ELLEN: Butt out, Eddie! WALLY: Mary Ellen! Control yourself! Mary Ellen jumps up from her seat. MARY ELLEN: I am under control! You're just impossible, Wally Cleaver! Let's go, Julie. Mary Ellen and Julie leave in a huff. DISSOLVE TO: INT. - CLEAVER DINING ROOM - NIGHT The Cleaver family -- Ward, June, Wally, and Beaver -- eat their dinner. Wally attacks his roast beef with anger. WARD: Wally! The meat is already dead -- you don't need to attack it like that. WALLY: Oh, I'm sorry Dad. Guess I have stuff on my mind. WARD: Is there something bothering you, Son? BEAVER: He's got girl trouble, Dad. WALLY: Thanks alot, Beaver! WARD: Girls in general or is there some special girl you're having trouble with, Wally? BEAVER: Two girls, Dad. JUNE: Beaver, please don't interrupt. BEAVER: Sorry, Mom. WARD: What two girls are you having trouble with, Wally? Wally stares at his dinner plate and then at Ward. WALLY: Sallie Martin -- the girl I've been tutoring in trigonometry --asked me to help her babysit tomorrow at the Donaldsons. WARD: The Donaldsons? Our former neighbors? JUNE: They had a girl, Ward. WARD: Oh. WALLY: So I told her I would -- help her I mean. Then Mary Ellen saw us and made a whole big thing about my seeing Sallie. Mary Ellen said that Sallie has a reputation as a ... WARD: I think I get the picture, Wally. Sounds to me like Mary Ellen is having second thoughts about you, Wally. WALLY: I figured that. But how can I tell her that I want to see Sallie? June interrupts. JUNE: Ward, Dear, will you join me in the kitchen and help me make the coffee? Ward and June exit to the kitchen. BEAVER: Uh oh, Wally. They're talking in the other room. WALLY: Yeah. Hey, Beav -- do yourself a favor when you get into high school next year. BEAVER: What's that? WALLY: Don't get mixed up with girls. BEAVER: Don't worry! (TO BE CONTINUED...)

11-11-2002, 04:03 PM	#9
BBF Workin' those Scrubs Senior Member Join Date: Jun 12, 2002 Location: The "Natural" State Posts: 2,014	OMG, this is funny! Eagerly anticipating more soon!!

11-11-2002, 06:48 PM	#10
FOL85NatandMrsGRock The Lovable Sarah Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2000 Location: Wisconsin (Same Place Charlotte's From and where That 70's Show takes place!) .... Wish I was in Mayfield USA! Posts: 1,770	ARGH!!!!!!! i wanna see hwat june and ward talk about!!!!!!!!1 POST ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please! or i'll die from anticipation!

11-12-2002, 03:52 PM	#11
Stormtracker TF Happy Easter! Moderator Forum Idol Join Date: Jul 19, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 102,598	Great! Post More soon!

11-17-2002, 05:11 PM	#12
Laurel "Lauriebelle" Occasional Poster Join Date: Sep 20, 2002 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 80	DISSOLVE TO: INT. - KITCHEN - NIGHT Ward follows June into the kitchen. June yanks a cupboard door open and reaches for a coffee can. She opens the can and shakes the coffee scooper at Ward. JUNE: Ward, you're just going to have to talk to Wally. I have an idea that he really likes this girl. WARD: I'd love to oblige, June, but I gave that talk to Wally when he was twelve years old. And as I remember, Wally was more interested in playing baseball than hanging around girls at the time. June plugs the coffee machine into an outlet. JUNE: Oh, to go back to those days! I've seen the way Wally looks at Sallie -- and the way she looks at him -- when they study at the dining room table. Believe me, Ward, Wally's got more than trigonometry on his mind! WARD: He wouldn't be my son if he was only interested in a girl as a study partner. June stares at Ward. JUNE: Ward, you're not helping. I suppose you think I'm being foolish about Wally babysitting with Sallie tomorrow. Ward reaches into a cupboard for two coffee cups. WARD: Not foolish. Overprotective. Wally's eighteen years old now -- old enough to decide what girls he wants to date. June pours coffee into the cups. JUNE: I know, Ward. I just don't want Wally getting any grand ideas about marriage and babies when he still has college ahead of him. Ward laughs. WARD: I don't think that will happen, and if it does, we'll remind Wally about the Hendersons. June hands Ward his cup of coffee. JUNE: Just keep in mind that the Hendersons didn't have a five-month old baby to take care of. DISSOLVE TO: EXT. - METZGER'S FIELD - DAY THE NEXT MORNING Wally, Eddie, and Lumpy shake Tom Henderson's hand after winning the flag football game. TOM: Great game, guys. I'm sure going to miss you when you're all up at State U in the fall. EDDIE: We'll get home on a few weekends to beat the pants off you, Tom. Heh, heh, heh. Wally rolls his eyes. WALLY: Eddie! We won on a fluke play. EDDIE: Yeah. Lump tripped and fell into the end zone! LUMPY: I do what I can. Judy Henderson arrives and waves at Tom. TOM: Gotta go. There's Judy. Tom leaves and Eddie shakes his head as he surveys the bleachers. EDDIE: Great ball player. Too bad he's tied down to a ball and chain. (A BEAT) EDDIE: Speaking of ball and chains, Wally -- isn't that Sallie over there with a baby carriage? Wally looks over at the bleachers. He smiles. WALLY: Yeah, it is. EDDIE: I thought you said she was babysitting today and couldn't make the game. WALLY: That's what she told me. Wally dashes toward the bleachers. Eddie grabs him. EDDIE: Hold it, Sam. You're getting in way over your head. Wally's eyes narrow. WALLY: What's that supposed to mean, Eddie? EDDIE: While you're babysitting today, get all the practice you can. You're going to need it. Wally shirks away from Eddie. WALLY: Cut it out, Eddie. You and Mary Ellen have something in common -- you're both jealous. Wally dashes toward the bleachers. Eddie shakes his head. EDDIE: I'm not jealous. LUMPY: Sure you are, Eddie. Sallie turned you down flat when you asked her out. Guess she only has eyes for Wally Cleaver. EDDIE: And about five guys in Bellport. Eddie starts to leave. EDDIE: C'mon Lump. We gotta clue Wally in about his new girl. (TO BE CONTINUED...)

11-17-2002, 06:10 PM	#13
FOL85NatandMrsGRock The Lovable Sarah Senior Member Join Date: Nov 07, 2000 Location: Wisconsin (Same Place Charlotte's From and where That 70's Show takes place!) .... Wish I was in Mayfield USA! Posts: 1,770	AAAWWWWSSSSOOOOMMMEEEE!!!! This totally rocks!!!! it's WAY better than ANYTHING i could ever write!! I hope you post more SOOOOOONNNNN!!! You know hte katchup commercial!!! "anticiapation.... anticipayayation...." (hahah) KEEEP WRITING!!!!!! You're totally awsome and i LOVE the story! Great spot between Ward and June!! YOu really got everyone down!! Congrats on the great writing my friend!
	Last edited by FOL85NatandMrsGRock; 11-17-2002 at 06:14 PM.

11-18-2002, 04:17 PM	#15
Stormtracker TF Happy Easter! Moderator Forum Idol Join Date: Jul 19, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 102,598	Both Fanfics are TOO COOOL AWWWWWWWWWSOME!