something old.....

[jinnygirl2005]

hey if you guys like this just tell me and i'll start writting more.


It was 7:30 and Nate had just come into work (a little late). Jinny looked up from her paper work, "Hey your just a little late." Nate gave her a look, "yeah i noticed that when i looked at the clock." "Hey o.k... jeeze someone is in a mood today!" jinny said to yourself as she turned back to her desk and to her paperwork.
Raina walked in from the captian's office, "you guys do not want to go in there, while captian is on vaction this replacement is horrible!" Jinny looked up from her work once again "He can't be worse then captian." she tought about what she said, she gave a small chuckle, Jinny was in a unsually good mood this morning considering that her father was in the hositpal. Nate looked around the division, then he relazied what was bothering him " where's mag?" he asked, right after he though of the answer "Is she with Ben?" jin looked at him and said "No, she went to the strip joint down the street for kicks, where else would she be?"

It was lunch time and the Captains door open and a man in his mid 60s a little heavy set came out, This was the frist time that nate or jinny had seen their replacement captian. The man looked around "Basso, Exstead?" Nate and Jinny looked up from the work that was on there desks, "yeah" they both said.

[Jo/Blair_fan]

Keep Going!!!!!!!

[#1fan]

This is pretty good other than the fact that you left us kinda hanging there... ...POST MORE!!!

[jinnygirl2005]

I knida meant to leave you hanging it was to help get relies guess what. it worked!!!!


They both look up at the over weight balding man, "I want you two to work on this case, since both of your partners are gone." he said as he handed Jinny the folder. He then turned and went back into the office. Nate walked over to jinny's desk to look over the folder with her. Raina looked over at the two who had just gotten their assignment and wonder why she didn't get one. As the two read the paper they both got a look of confustion on there faces. nate looked at Jinny " I don't believe it!" Jinny looked up at the man hovered over her shoulders "believe it, it's happened before they even made a lifetime movie out of it.... Not that i watch lifetime it's just ya know Mag had it on." she looks back at the folder Nate just snickers "yeah I'm sure thats what happened." The door to the captians ffice opens once more, Rainas head pops up from some paper work she was doing,
"are you really an exstead?"the man says in Jinny direction
Jinny looks up "thats what the name plate says."
"Are you related to john?"
"he's my dad"
"oh so your the little girl he was always bragging about. the names frank, frank cornwallis"
"hi" jinny says not caring in the slighest.
"well get back to work."
he heads back into the office Nate looks down at Jinny
"you think we should go talk to this guy?"
"sure I'm driving though."
Nate nods fine with me.

[#1fan]

You did it again...

[jinnygirl2005]

ok i know i just posted but i just feel like posting more, like you guys mind, *god i hope you guys don't mind* thinks in her head

oh and #1fan on your little thing below it says flutes rock i have to disagree clarinets all the way baby!!!! lol



Nate shut the door to the car, and buckles the seat belt as jinny starts to back out of the parking space. Jinny looks over at Nate
"So.... Whats new with you?"
Nate looks over at her "hmm, got drunk out of my mind last night thats why was late this morning."
"oh" she stops at the red light.
Nate realizes that she is uncomfortable and tries to think of somthing to say "So hows your dad?"
"hes pretty good really mad that they're keeping him in the hositpal this long though."
"oh, hey the street is coming up here on the right."
Jinny looks over and turns on her blinker, she makes the turn and goes up to a one story light blue house.

Sitting in her living room Kate looks at her sister, "I mean he basically said you might as well retire!"
Pam sat there thinking " I think you should"
"what, pam my job is my life i can't just give up!"
" Katie, thats why you should retire it is your life, you have a wond... well a gre... well you have amanda, and Ross, in ENGLAND no less, come on kate what more could you want?"
"Well... i don't know"


Magda opened the heavy door to her sons room, she saw Gabe still there tring to get ben to eat the hositpal food.
"No dad it's gross!"
"come on son, it's good for you though."
just then ben looks up and sees hes mommy
"mom did you bring me something good to eat?"
"no but it's good to see you to. How you holding up papi?"
"I 'm fine expect the food here sucks!"
magda let out a sigh "Ben don't say sucks, ok it's not nice."
"well it does mom here smell it..... see it doesn't even smell!"
magda just laughs.

[*Marilyn Monroe*]

Originally posted by jinnygirl2005
oh and #1fan on your little thing below it says flutes rock i have to disagree clarinets all the way baby!!!! lol

Gotta agree with you! lol I used to play clarinet, but band in high school is boring.

But...I also agree with #1fan, POST MORE! It's awesome!

[#1fan]

Originally posted by jinnygirl2005
ok i know i just posted but i just feel like posting more, like you guys mind, *god i hope you guys don't mind* thinks in her head

oh and #1fan on your little thing below it says flutes rock i have to disagree clarinets all the way baby!!!! lol

Nope!!! You don't play clarinet here...omg they can't march much less play...we do have a couple of good ones but only a couple... I agree with flutes all the way!!! hahaha...anyways keep posting...

[#1fan]

Originally posted by AliciaKeysForever
Gotta agree with you! lol I used to play clarinet, but band in high school is boring.

How could you agree with her?!?! Band in High School is interesting here in Cv Texas... Anyways...Im waiting!!!

[jinnygirl2005]

band is the only fun thing in my high school (how sad is that?).
anyways heres some more.


C.D. Opened the door to her hotel room, looking around she found brian sitting on the bed talking on the phone. She was in her bathing suit from going for a little swim and sitting by the pool. She walked over to her suit case and pulled out some casual clothes.
" Thanks yeah thats right, ok thank you, good bye."
brain hung up the phone and smile at C.D.
"What"
she said with a smile
"nothing"
he answered with a sly smile.
"O.k. I'm going to go take a shower then."

Nate closed the door to the car and waited for Jinny on the sidewalk. When Jinny got to the sidewalk they both walked up the pathway to the house then nate knocked on the door.

[Swimfan85]

great add more

[#1fan]

Originally posted by jinnygirl2005
band is the only fun thing in my high school (how sad is that?).
anyways heres some more.

Not here man...we have sooooo many extracurriculars here its funny...I just happen to be in band...I dunno...Anyways, KEEP GOING!!!

[jinnygirl2005]

We have other things to i just don't find them as fun as band in band we're one big happy "family" that is a laugh...Well here is more.


Nate knocked again and waited, being her normal self jinny rang the doorbell three times in a row.
"I guess no one is home"
Nate points out ashe shurggs and turns around torward the car.
"So you wanna....."
he turns back around and notices jinny is still on the porch by the door.
"Hey, come onn no one is home."
Jinny turns back around and looks him in the face
"I heard someone in there, didn't you hear it?"
"no thats why i want to leave. Come jinny we can go get something to eat before we go back to the division to tell old buddy Frank what happened."
"Fine but if we come back and someone abandoned the house I'm blaming this on you."
as they head back to the car Jinny gives one more look back at the house and in the window, she saw the window curtian move but since the window was open she figured that it was jusst the wind. she got in and started the car.

Kate watched as her sister drove down the driveway, she couldn't believe at what she just heard, Pam wanting her to quit her job! yes it did take up a lot of her time but she loves her job.... most of the time and she worked really hard for it, she just give up, could she? she needed more help from someone you wasn't quite so bias. she picked up the phone and dailed a number very fast.
"hello"
a woman said from the other side of the line
"hi, Jill it's kate..."
"oh hold on I'll get amanda."
"No, no, actually i wanted to talk to you about something."

[#1fan]

Yeah we're like a family...one of our freshman got hurt the other day and usually we pick on our freshman but when it is something serious, we take care of them...I told someone that we may pick on our fishies but we still love them... ...Anyways, I think I have a good idea... ...POST MORE!!!

[jinnygirl2005]

oh i know we're the same way it was raining at practice last night and fresh was so wet, i gave her my band sweater from last year and i got a big aaawww from my section it's was great

anywho here is some more... quick note i'm following the last season here but one minor change teddy and jinny never got back together. (don't take that wrong i love teddy and jinny together)


Nate and Jinny walk into the division from lunch and head to there seperate desks, jinny walks two steps and looks down at her partner
"What are you doing here!"
"I couldn't stay at the hosiptal anymore, and don't yell at me, you should go see your dad!"
mag answered defencely.
"Mag if you've forgotten the whole being broke doesn't allow time for me to take time off."
"right, well just go sit down, I'm fine work on that case of yours."
"Yes captian"
with that jinny goes and sits at her desk, looks at nate
"so when are we going back to the house?"
"how about in an hour or so."
nate says, not really wanting to go.
everyone gets back to the work thats okn their desks when the division doors open and in walks teddy. he looks around the room and sees you all is in the room. magda turns around to see who just walked in.
"Hey Teddy, what are you doing here?"
"working on a case and seeing how you'r doing. How are you doing?"
"I'm fine Teddy, how about you?
"ok i guess, but i think i should go see this new captain of yours."
he walks past magdas desk and turns down the path to the captains door, as he passes jinnys desk he slows down hopping for her to say something, when she doesn't he thinks it's just because she dosen't know she there, at least he hopes thats what it is. Mag notices this and gives a little smirk.


"So A.D.A. I need you to help out a couple of my inspectors once they get things together, heres the case."
Frank says as he hands Teddy the folder, Teddy opens it and scans though before leaving, when something pops out at him Jinny was working the case. Frank looks up at Teddy,
" You can leave now A.D.A."
" right sorry, good bye."
he leaves the office and starts heading right for jinny when he hears nate
"hey Jin you think we should go get this over with."
"yeah lets go try again. See you in a little Mag."
they leave the division with teddy just standing near Jinnys deskMag looks up again and sees this
"so teddy, whats wrong?"
"nothing, i just wanted to talk jinny thats all"
" do i since a little hope for you two?"
" i sure hope so, i just don't know if she feels the same way anymore."
"give it a try teddy you never know."