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chrissya · 08-19-2002, 10:50 PM

Alright ladies and gentlemen here we go with the frist part of my fan fic, It's gonna be pretty short though. i'm pretty muchout of it right now. It's starting out as frist POV( Kate)

I watched as Jinny paced around the living room of the home they were now shareing and wondered what was going on inside of her head. She had a pretty good Idea of what it was but, she knew she couldn't be sure Afterall, these was Jinny and with Jinny you never know whats going on in head from one minute to the next. I also knew that Jinny wasn't sleeping and as much as that worries me her reaction to CD's prisioner really out me on egde.
It had been just before lunch when CD walked in with a suspect cuffed. Jinny heard his voice and fliped out. As usal there were no tears but, her anger was seething out . It was what she did next that left us all stuned . Well all of us except Magda who just shock her head. I couldn't belive it I have never known this woman to react this way to anything and belive me i have been there for too many of her crisis.

Sorry it's short and I know it sucks but give it a chance

Swimfan85 · 08-19-2002, 11:11 PM

and then.................................. ADD MORE AND NO THIS DOESNT SUCK...THIS KICKS BUTT!!!!!!!!! I love it!!! i would pay you to add...but I cant cuz im broke...(this is the funniest thing....im broke...hah but not really...well sorta)

consentida · 08-19-2002, 11:17 PM

Post more. This is a really good start.

chrissya · 08-20-2002, 03:25 AM

ok here we go.

As much as my heart was breaking I knew I had to stay there and be all business afterall I am kate Mcafferty hard ass police captian to most people but, my people know diffent . Each one of these people hold a special place in my heart Jinny just happens to the one who holds the largest and most special of places.
Charles just happened to be in my office when all Hell broke loose. He stood in my office with one of his what the hell kind of zoo do you think your running on his face, his mouth agape and began one of his usal " What The Hell is going on around here" rants. I , just stood there my mind spinning out of control but, I was trying to stay calm becose I knew I had try to cover up all the things running rampant in my head . I knew I had to cover the best I could and then I saw Madga get up and break into a run almost knocking CD over as she made her way to the door. The next thing I know I get a brids eye view of the man I have come to hate with a passion. I have an idea where Magda and Jinny have gone so as soon as my assnanie male chovisnist pig of a boss leaves I head down there too. I just knew they were in the bathroom afterall where else would they met. BY the time I got down there I was shocked in a way by what I found Magda was on her knees in front of Jinny talking to her about what I couldn't tell but, I knew it was serouis. Mag's head was bent and was in close to Jinny's and jinny was crying her head in her hands. I wanted to be there so I sat down beside Jinny on the bench and put my arm around her wanting to cry myself becouse I knew she had to be going through Hell for to be crying like this. It was at that moment that my heart shattered becouse Jinny turned away from me. The woman I was in about to propose to turned away from me. She would not even let me touch her. As much as I wanted to set there with her at that moment I couldn't and I knew it. I wouldn't let her see how much that had hurt me.
All I wanted to do was go into my office and close the blinds . I wanted to be alone becouse I was sure I had done something to Jinny. It tore me up inside that she didnt want me there but, to tell the truth I thought she was about to break it off with me. I didn't want anybody to know anything was wrong after all not to many people knew about us and i knew I neeed to keep it that way. I could hear the mumurs of peoples convestions as I walked down the hall but, it was as I neared the door to the volient crime division, My divsion that I heared some one call out my name that I realize that i really am out of it. It was CD and she wanted to know what was wrong with me. I couldn't tell her . I was at this piont finding it hard to breath and I was trying to blink back the tears that had began to from in my eyes. I had conviced myself that it was over and that in someway it was my fault. I kept my head low as I walked through the divsion tryiing to make it my office before anyone could notice how i look. Too late the keen eyes of Nate Bassco saw me and lunched in to his questions of what was wrong. By this time I was still fighting with the tears as they were threating to spill over and they were consturing my thoart . I was barely able to tell him I was ok before I shut the door and pulled the blinds. As hard as nails as i usally am I could keep the tears from falling and I collosped in my chair with my head in my hands, the tears free flowing. I must have changed my postion and put my head on the desk at some piont becouse sometime later I heard a soft knock on my door . It was Magda telling her Jinny had gone home for the day.
Magda stood there before me looking about as emotionly spent as I knew I was but, i could see in her eyes that there was more going on with Jinny than a little bit but, I knew she wouldn't tell me what was going on but, I knew I had to try. I knew that Magda had to know something and I was completly teffied of what I was going to find when I got home. Was JInny gonna be there or not. I guess Magda could see the worry in my eyes but, she finally told of her suspions of what had happened the night Jinny had been found in the alley. I sat there dumbfouned but, I could see it.

BonniesLilCutiePie · 08-20-2002, 08:06 AM

Awww!

Swimfan85 · 08-20-2002, 10:49 AM

sweet add more!

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 08-20-2002, 11:05 AM

add more sooooon, this is great!

consentida · 08-20-2002, 11:46 AM

Post more! This is really great. I love it.

chrissya · 08-20-2002, 03:19 PM

It was an odd night to say the least and once again my mind was running wild. I really needed to know what was going on in her mind. I didn't know what to do but, I wanted to do something . I watched her and tried to fiqure it out but as much as I tried the more questions came to mind. I looked into her eyes and I knew we needed to talk but, I just couldn't do it. I guess in some small way I didn't want to know becouse I knew if what Magda told me was true i wouldn't be able to handle it very well.
I know I'll always remember that day becouse it's they day Jinny blew me out of the water with her confession. It was on that sent me rrreeling even after what I had already heard from Magda. This was gonna be hard on us both if it was even true and I still didn't knew if Jinny was going to leave.

consentida · 08-20-2002, 05:44 PM

U hafta post moooore!!! I'm lovin' this.

chrissya · 08-21-2002, 04:49 AM

It took a while but, i finally did get her to stop paceing and I looked at her as she sat down in one of the dining room chairs and hung her head. She was crying once again although it was a quite crying and had I not seen her face I wouldn't have even known. It is then that I notice something . a suite case by the door . It was then that I lost it for a second time in one day I just knew it was over. Jinny was leaveing me. How in the world was I gonna go on?
I couldn't hide the tears any longer and fell apart right there on the couch. I didn't even see Jinny when she left. That night was sheer hell . I don't know when or how I managed to do it but, I at some point got off the couch and found my jounrnal . It was well after 4 am whenI finally finshed reading the entrys from the five months we'd been togather at that time.
When the sleep finally overtook me I dreamed of nothing but, the woman I loved more than anything else in life except for Amanda and the one person I needed more than I had ever needed anybody in my life. Much the same way I went to sleep I woke up the tears just rolling down my face. The clock was buzzing in my head and i could smell the coffee brewing down stairs. I really didn't want to get up and face the day I guess thats why I threw the clock across the room screaming at myself at Jinny and at everything else. I didn't even want to go to work but, i knew I had to be there, the last thing I needed right then was to have charles up my ass yet again . I didn't know how i was going to handle being there but, I would pull it outta my ass some way just like I had done some many other times . I knew I looked like something out of a horror magazine but, I'd do the best I could to cover it up. I had no choice . As much as I was hurting I was twice that worried about Jinny. I wanted to see her just to make sure she wasn't off on a bender or haveing a drunken one night stand. As much as i prayed that it was nethier of these the things the last one made me cringe at the mere thought of it.

consentida · 08-21-2002, 11:00 AM

Ooooh Post More!!! This is great!

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 08-21-2002, 01:56 PM

Hurry up and post more!!

you are doing a great job!!

chrissya · 08-22-2002, 12:33 AM

ok here we go yet, again.

I stood there in the bathroom getting ready as the fear and the appahession bulit even more . I knew that they were all goning to know something was wrong but, even mopre than that I knew there was more of Charles to deal with and I knew Magda would know something was wrong but, there was CD and there was Nate along with Amanda and Jill who we were suppose to be haveing lunch with. I knew no of them would have a second thought about questioning me about what was wrong with me.
I knew there would be glances and I knew people would be talking behind my back but, I never expected what I found when I got to work that moroing. As soon as I walked in I scanned the office for jinny and didn't see her there. It was like my heart took another plunge and I didn't know what to do. There were obvoious stares from my best inspectors sidelong glances from other's that I caught and Magda just shock her head as I made my way toward her desk. the coments that were being made were not only couseing her to blush with embrassment but, to becomeing flush with anger. I was on the verge of losseing my temper with a young inspector who was new to the department when I felt an assureing hand on my shoulder . Magda had walked the few feet from her desk to my door were I was now standing when she she heard the same comment I did and she knew what my reaction would be. I still can't belive what he said . "I wonder if Mr. X the mystery man did this to her I heard him say CD who turned away in a huff only to turn back around and give him apiece of her mind. It was one that would have made Jinny proud if she had have been there to see it.
Cap I hear Magda rich voice call out from beside of me " call on line 3" "Take a message" I tell her. I then hear her tell me it's from Casey Exstead I hear her tell me trying to sound as professonally as she could. I take it in my office. I don't remember if i told her she could come but, when i looked up Magda was standing there and it was a good thing that she was becouse had she not have been i know it would have been a good thing . I knew something was wrong when I heard Casey's voice. My heart fell even futher than it already had. He addressed me as kate and told me to sit down. I could feel myself began to shake afarid of what Casey was going to tell me .

consentida · 08-22-2002, 12:40 AM

*gets down on knees* PLEASE POST MORE!!!! PLEEEAAASSE!!! I NEED more!!! *puts head in hands and sobs* I cant believe you stopped....

*realizes how idiotic shes being and slaps herself* Tara...just shut up...it'll be okay....

Arite...i'm okay...i'll live...i think...

08-19-2002, 10:50 PM	#1
chrissya Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 25, 2002 Location: North carolina Posts: 84	chrissy's unnamed fan fic Alright ladies and gentlemen here we go with the frist part of my fan fic, It's gonna be pretty short though. i'm pretty muchout of it right now. It's starting out as frist POV( Kate) I watched as Jinny paced around the living room of the home they were now shareing and wondered what was going on inside of her head. She had a pretty good Idea of what it was but, she knew she couldn't be sure Afterall, these was Jinny and with Jinny you never know whats going on in head from one minute to the next. I also knew that Jinny wasn't sleeping and as much as that worries me her reaction to CD's prisioner really out me on egde. It had been just before lunch when CD walked in with a suspect cuffed. Jinny heard his voice and fliped out. As usal there were no tears but, her anger was seething out . It was what she did next that left us all stuned . Well all of us except Magda who just shock her head. I couldn't belive it I have never known this woman to react this way to anything and belive me i have been there for too many of her crisis. Sorry it's short and I know it sucks but give it a chance

08-20-2002, 03:25 AM	#4
chrissya Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 25, 2002 Location: North carolina Posts: 84	ok here we go. As much as my heart was breaking I knew I had to stay there and be all business afterall I am kate Mcafferty hard ass police captian to most people but, my people know diffent . Each one of these people hold a special place in my heart Jinny just happens to the one who holds the largest and most special of places. Charles just happened to be in my office when all Hell broke loose. He stood in my office with one of his what the hell kind of zoo do you think your running on his face, his mouth agape and began one of his usal " What The Hell is going on around here" rants. I , just stood there my mind spinning out of control but, I was trying to stay calm becose I knew I had try to cover up all the things running rampant in my head . I knew I had to cover the best I could and then I saw Madga get up and break into a run almost knocking CD over as she made her way to the door. The next thing I know I get a brids eye view of the man I have come to hate with a passion. I have an idea where Magda and Jinny have gone so as soon as my assnanie male chovisnist pig of a boss leaves I head down there too. I just knew they were in the bathroom afterall where else would they met. BY the time I got down there I was shocked in a way by what I found Magda was on her knees in front of Jinny talking to her about what I couldn't tell but, I knew it was serouis. Mag's head was bent and was in close to Jinny's and jinny was crying her head in her hands. I wanted to be there so I sat down beside Jinny on the bench and put my arm around her wanting to cry myself becouse I knew she had to be going through Hell for to be crying like this. It was at that moment that my heart shattered becouse Jinny turned away from me. The woman I was in about to propose to turned away from me. She would not even let me touch her. As much as I wanted to set there with her at that moment I couldn't and I knew it. I wouldn't let her see how much that had hurt me. All I wanted to do was go into my office and close the blinds . I wanted to be alone becouse I was sure I had done something to Jinny. It tore me up inside that she didnt want me there but, to tell the truth I thought she was about to break it off with me. I didn't want anybody to know anything was wrong after all not to many people knew about us and i knew I neeed to keep it that way. I could hear the mumurs of peoples convestions as I walked down the hall but, it was as I neared the door to the volient crime division, My divsion that I heared some one call out my name that I realize that i really am out of it. It was CD and she wanted to know what was wrong with me. I couldn't tell her . I was at this piont finding it hard to breath and I was trying to blink back the tears that had began to from in my eyes. I had conviced myself that it was over and that in someway it was my fault. I kept my head low as I walked through the divsion tryiing to make it my office before anyone could notice how i look. Too late the keen eyes of Nate Bassco saw me and lunched in to his questions of what was wrong. By this time I was still fighting with the tears as they were threating to spill over and they were consturing my thoart . I was barely able to tell him I was ok before I shut the door and pulled the blinds. As hard as nails as i usally am I could keep the tears from falling and I collosped in my chair with my head in my hands, the tears free flowing. I must have changed my postion and put my head on the desk at some piont becouse sometime later I heard a soft knock on my door . It was Magda telling her Jinny had gone home for the day. Magda stood there before me looking about as emotionly spent as I knew I was but, i could see in her eyes that there was more going on with Jinny than a little bit but, I knew she wouldn't tell me what was going on but, I knew I had to try. I knew that Magda had to know something and I was completly teffied of what I was going to find when I got home. Was JInny gonna be there or not. I guess Magda could see the worry in my eyes but, she finally told of her suspions of what had happened the night Jinny had been found in the alley. I sat there dumbfouned but, I could see it.
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08-20-2002, 08:06 AM	#5
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08-20-2002, 11:05 AM	#7
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08-21-2002, 04:49 AM	#11
chrissya Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 25, 2002 Location: North carolina Posts: 84	It took a while but, i finally did get her to stop paceing and I looked at her as she sat down in one of the dining room chairs and hung her head. She was crying once again although it was a quite crying and had I not seen her face I wouldn't have even known. It is then that I notice something . a suite case by the door . It was then that I lost it for a second time in one day I just knew it was over. Jinny was leaveing me. How in the world was I gonna go on? I couldn't hide the tears any longer and fell apart right there on the couch. I didn't even see Jinny when she left. That night was sheer hell . I don't know when or how I managed to do it but, I at some point got off the couch and found my jounrnal . It was well after 4 am whenI finally finshed reading the entrys from the five months we'd been togather at that time. When the sleep finally overtook me I dreamed of nothing but, the woman I loved more than anything else in life except for Amanda and the one person I needed more than I had ever needed anybody in my life. Much the same way I went to sleep I woke up the tears just rolling down my face. The clock was buzzing in my head and i could smell the coffee brewing down stairs. I really didn't want to get up and face the day I guess thats why I threw the clock across the room screaming at myself at Jinny and at everything else. I didn't even want to go to work but, i knew I had to be there, the last thing I needed right then was to have charles up my ass yet again . I didn't know how i was going to handle being there but, I would pull it outta my ass some way just like I had done some many other times . I knew I looked like something out of a horror magazine but, I'd do the best I could to cover it up. I had no choice . As much as I was hurting I was twice that worried about Jinny. I wanted to see her just to make sure she wasn't off on a bender or haveing a drunken one night stand. As much as i prayed that it was nethier of these the things the last one made me cringe at the mere thought of it.
	Last edited by chrissya; 08-21-2002 at 04:52 AM.

08-19-2002, 11:11 PM	#2
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	and then.................................. ADD MORE AND NO THIS DOESNT SUCK...THIS KICKS BUTT!!!!!!!!! I love it!!! i would pay you to add...but I cant cuz im broke...(this is the funniest thing....im broke...hah but not really...well sorta)

08-19-2002, 11:17 PM	#3
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	Post more. This is a really good start.

08-20-2002, 10:49 AM	#6
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	sweet add more!

08-20-2002, 11:46 AM	#8
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	Post more! This is really great. I love it.

08-20-2002, 03:19 PM	#9
chrissya Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 25, 2002 Location: North carolina Posts: 84	It was an odd night to say the least and once again my mind was running wild. I really needed to know what was going on in her mind. I didn't know what to do but, I wanted to do something . I watched her and tried to fiqure it out but as much as I tried the more questions came to mind. I looked into her eyes and I knew we needed to talk but, I just couldn't do it. I guess in some small way I didn't want to know becouse I knew if what Magda told me was true i wouldn't be able to handle it very well. I know I'll always remember that day becouse it's they day Jinny blew me out of the water with her confession. It was on that sent me rrreeling even after what I had already heard from Magda. This was gonna be hard on us both if it was even true and I still didn't knew if Jinny was going to leave.

08-20-2002, 05:44 PM	#10
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	U hafta post moooore!!! I'm lovin' this.

08-21-2002, 11:00 AM	#12
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	Ooooh Post More!!! This is great!

08-21-2002, 01:56 PM	#13
TeddyisMINE!!!! Crazed Nancy Fan!!!! Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 03, 2002 Location: Tennessee Posts: 496	Hurry up and post more!! you are doing a great job!!

08-22-2002, 12:33 AM	#14
chrissya Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 25, 2002 Location: North carolina Posts: 84	ok here we go yet, again. I stood there in the bathroom getting ready as the fear and the appahession bulit even more . I knew that they were all goning to know something was wrong but, even mopre than that I knew there was more of Charles to deal with and I knew Magda would know something was wrong but, there was CD and there was Nate along with Amanda and Jill who we were suppose to be haveing lunch with. I knew no of them would have a second thought about questioning me about what was wrong with me. I knew there would be glances and I knew people would be talking behind my back but, I never expected what I found when I got to work that moroing. As soon as I walked in I scanned the office for jinny and didn't see her there. It was like my heart took another plunge and I didn't know what to do. There were obvoious stares from my best inspectors sidelong glances from other's that I caught and Magda just shock her head as I made my way toward her desk. the coments that were being made were not only couseing her to blush with embrassment but, to becomeing flush with anger. I was on the verge of losseing my temper with a young inspector who was new to the department when I felt an assureing hand on my shoulder . Magda had walked the few feet from her desk to my door were I was now standing when she she heard the same comment I did and she knew what my reaction would be. I still can't belive what he said . "I wonder if Mr. X the mystery man did this to her I heard him say CD who turned away in a huff only to turn back around and give him apiece of her mind. It was one that would have made Jinny proud if she had have been there to see it. Cap I hear Magda rich voice call out from beside of me " call on line 3" "Take a message" I tell her. I then hear her tell me it's from Casey Exstead I hear her tell me trying to sound as professonally as she could. I take it in my office. I don't remember if i told her she could come but, when i looked up Magda was standing there and it was a good thing that she was becouse had she not have been i know it would have been a good thing . I knew something was wrong when I heard Casey's voice. My heart fell even futher than it already had. He addressed me as kate and told me to sit down. I could feel myself began to shake afarid of what Casey was going to tell me .

08-22-2002, 12:40 AM	#15
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	gets down on knees PLEASE POST MORE!!!! PLEEEAAASSE!!! I NEED more!!! puts head in hands and sobs I cant believe you stopped.... realizes how idiotic shes being and slaps herself Tara...just shut up...it'll be okay.... Arite...i'm okay...i'll live...i think...