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Sweet scaredy cat
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Nate was still sitting in Anchorside, the guy he was talking to left about 10 minutes before,
and he just felt like going back to his place and sleeping. A tall woman, with blond hair, wearing a white button up shirt and black slacks walked in. She stood behind Nate, put one hand on his shoulder, and ordered a beer. He turned to see who it was, though he’d know that voice anywhere. She gave him a smile and sat down next to him, where the guy had been sitting. “I thought...you and Brian...romantic vacation?” He was confused and she just started to laugh. “I realized that Brian may or may not be willing to give his life for me, but, you...I’ve witnessed it. I don’t know why it took me so long to realize what I feel about you. And I’m sorry I’ve blown you off before. But today, I’ve realized that maybe I should give ‘us’ a chance. Maybe I should see if this would work out.” She paused, “I don’t think I’ve ever been as scared as I was today in that temple, and without you, chances are I wouldn’t have made it out.” “Well then, if you want to start something, let’s head over to my place, we can talk for a while, have something to drink, you know. I think we both need to talk after all that’s happened today.” CD nodded in agreement. Both paid the amount for what they had been drinking and they each got into their separate cars. CD followed Nate to his house and walked up do the door where he was standing. Nate let them both in and told CD to take a seat on the couch, “What do you want to drink?” “Just soda or something.” CD replied. Nate walked over to her with to Cokes in hand. He handed her one and he sat down on the couch next to her. There was a long, awkward period of silence before either person spoke, and eventually, Nate talked, “Remember when we were on the case of the lady who died who wrote the advice column*?” “Yeah,” She replied hesitantly, “What about it?” “You gave me an article. It was a letter she had answered about a kid that had something happen to them at camp. They wouldn’t tell anyone. I asked you if something happened to you, and you replied, ‘Not at camp.’ What happened?” He waited for her to answer, and when she attempted to speak, she couldn’t, and all she could do was cry. Nate pulled her into a warm embrace and rubbed her back. He knew it would be a touchy subject, but he wanted to know, and he wanted to help her any way he could. *I don’t remember her name...so I’m leaving it at that. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ is this any good? I don't think it is, but still...just tell me |
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YAY! More please!
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this rocks add more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Diamonds...
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Join Date: Aug 24, 2001
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YAY! Of course it doesnt suck! You've got CD and Nate together! How could it suck? lol More please!
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defying gravity
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Join Date: Jan 13, 2001
Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys
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this is soooooo good!!!!post more asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Certifiably Insane
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Join Date: Dec 21, 2000
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Ah, this is what I've been waiting for! Awesome...please post more ASAP!
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-:-Bonnie Raitt-:-
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Post moooooooooooooooore, please *puppy eyes*
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<p align=center> -:-Mona Clarkson-:- ![]() <IMG SRC=http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/attachment.php?s=afae9bc00c04f9dd900efa81724f25e6&postid=425672> : -:-:-bonnie raitt-:-:- : Patricia as Sarah- Sarah: So Linda, what do you do? Brenda: It's Brenda. Sarah: Forgive me, I'm drunk. While My Friend Leela and I watched The Exorcist- Regan-*Makes some sort of demonic moaning sound* Leela-And that's the lovely daughter now! Later... Leela-It sounds like a moose in heat...or a cow! Conan-*As Bob Dylan* I saw you on the TV! Jay Leno-See these kids don't know what they're doing but you do. Bonnie Raitt-*Coughs and clears her throat* </center> |
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I'll Cover You
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AWESOME!! Really well written! Post more soon!!
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Sweet scaredy cat
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Nate knew he shouldn’t have asked, but any relationship doesn’t work out if you don’t trust
the person. CD burried her head in his chest and continued crying. Eventually, the heavy sobs turned into slight whimpers, slowly coming to a stop. She looked up, her eyes red and puffy. “CD, I’m sorry I asked,” Nate started. CD cut him off, “No, don’t be. I need to tell you about this, I should have told you a long time ago...” Nate nodded, encouraging her to tell him the whole story, “When...When I was ten, my parents got a divorce, five years later, my mom started dating this guy, Ricky, who she really, really liked. She was always so happy around him, always smiling and cheerful. I hadn’t seen her like that in so long. I wanted it to stay that way. Ricky was a nice guy, and since I wanted him to stick around, I was always attempting to impress him, in any way I could. I dressed nice, I always picked up my room...the stuff that always impresses parents.” She stopped, Nate new that wasn’t all, so he waited for more information. He wasn’t about to push her into telling him, the fact that she’d willingly made it thus far was amazing. “Late one night, after he and my mom got home from a date, he came up to my room. He kept telling me he had to punish me for being a bad girl and that I had brought what was happening on,” she blinked back tears, and attempted to go on, “He threw me on the bed and took off my clothes, the blue PJs with stars all over them, I attempted to scream, I told him no, but he put a pillow over my face and muffled the screams so no one could hear. I eventually just laid back on my bed and sobbed. He had raped me, and I’d never gotten up the nerve to tell.” The tears rolled once again, and CD fell into the strong embrace of Nate Basso. He held her like you’d hold a child who was scared of a thunderstorm. He finally realized why CD sometimes had problems working rape cases, now he understood a lot. They’d definately take it slow. He’d make her as comfortable as he could. He wouldn’t let anything happen to her, and he’d swear to her that he’d never leave. They stayed like that most of the night. Nate didn’t mind it one bit. He loved having her close to him, but what he liked most was that she trusted him, and he could help her now. He could always be there for her, and assure her that things would be all right. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ more? |
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*nods. More.
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defying gravity
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Join Date: Jan 13, 2001
Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys
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awwwwwwww....more asap
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More please!!!!
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~~ CD needs to come back!!!! ~~ Being your somebody you're not is NOT cool, being yourself IS cool- Me :-) |
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this is awesome!!!!
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Crazed Nancy Fan!!!!
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post more soon!!
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"Don't cry because it's gone,SMILE because it happened." "I've discovered that the hardest discovery to make is who you are."-Bonnie Bedelia "You're born,ya move on,ya die,thats life."-Jo's philosophy on life. Kate: You think I'm like 80,don't cha Jinny? Jinny:No...not... 80 (I love the way she said that) "Look Buddy! I got pMS,and I got a gun! Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead. "It's not reaching your dreams that counts. It's going towards them." Cher. ~Emma~ P.S. TEDDY IS MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Certifiably Insane
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Join Date: Dec 21, 2000
Location: I live in my hole...
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mm-hmm
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