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Sara Micelli · 08-06-2002, 03:59 PM

I hope everyone likes this.
Sorry if it's bad.If this offends anyone I am sorry.This was an assignment I had for school.

"The Internal Light"
by Sara

I hold in my hand something I cannot smell, see, taste, or hear, but it lies within my heart. It costs nothing, but is worth everything. As bright as a shining star in the midnight sky, it emits a light so brilliant that it brings joy to the joyless. As grand as a symphony, this instrument is as soft as a whisper.
It is something that everyone needs but not everyone has. It can be possessed by anyone but cannot be bought or sold. This has the power to brighten darkened corridors and to light the way for the lost. It serves as a beacon for the poor, sick, lonely, and homeless.
Many people who have this have overcome tough situations; others have failed without it. It is the means for the weak to become strong, and without it the strong will weaken. This tool can help prevent sorrow, contempt, bitterness and mistrust in our imperfect world. It can turn the most heartless people into the most caring because of its amazing power.
In times of fear, danger, and uncertainty when there is little else to trust, we must ignite this spark within ourselves to lead us from the darkness back into the light.
What I hold in my hand cannot solve all of the world's problems, but it will surely provide a shining pathway toward a better tomorrow.
I hold in my hand…faith.

Plata · 08-06-2002, 04:19 PM

This is a nice poem, Sara. I think it has a strong meaning about life.

Jordan · 08-06-2002, 07:39 PM

It's a very beautiful poem! Do you write often, or was it purely for the assignment?

Sara Micelli · 08-06-2002, 08:19 PM

I love to write but that was an assignment.I don't write as often as I should.

shavelyLBC34 · 08-06-2002, 09:15 PM

wow! that was really good! i like the very last line the best...

JDS84 · 08-06-2002, 09:20 PM

That is very good. I like it.

dawsongirl · 08-06-2002, 10:39 PM

Do you like writing poetry or stories?

Sara Micelli · 08-06-2002, 10:50 PM

both

TibbyTibby2 · 08-07-2002, 12:00 AM

wow thas really good!

FOLrocks1 · 08-07-2002, 12:41 AM

That's really beautiful!

TibbyTibby2 · 08-07-2002, 11:55 AM

you have inspired me to Finally post m y favorite poem i wrote. If u want to me to take it down... i will. im not trying to steal the attention i just wanna post and see what people think.

Love can be a silly thing
at the age of 14
But for me it's not that same
a day without you drives me insane
I love you for you no more or less
Even if you like me the less
Just as friends is fine
But, oh to feel your hand
interlocked with mine
1 Day is all I ask
Just a simple task
Give me a chance and you will see...
I Was meant for you .. and you were meant for me

Mr. Shy Guy · 08-07-2002, 12:08 PM

Both of them are really nice.

shavelyLBC34 · 08-07-2002, 12:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by TibbyTibby2
you have inspired me to Finally post m y favorite poem i wrote. If u want to me to take it down... i will. im not trying to steal the attention i just wanna post and see what people think.

Love can be a silly thing
at the age of 14
But for me it's not that same
a day without you drives me insane
I love you for you no more or less
Even if you like me the less
Just as friends is fine
But, oh to feel your hand
interlocked with mine
1 Day is all I ask
Just a simple task
Give me a chance and you will see...
I Was meant for you .. and you were meant for me

deep man, deep...lol...is that about a particular someone?? **coughcough**

Sara Micelli · 08-07-2002, 12:22 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by TibbyTibby2
you have inspired me to Finally post m y favorite poem i wrote. If u want to me to take it down... i will. im not trying to steal the attention i just wanna post and see what people think.

Love can be a silly thing
at the age of 14
But for me it's not that same
a day without you drives me insane
I love you for you no more or less
Even if you like me the less
Just as friends is fine
But, oh to feel your hand
interlocked with mine
1 Day is all I ask
Just a simple task
Give me a chance and you will see...
I Was meant for you .. and you were meant for me

That is a great poem.

DarleneIllyria · 08-07-2002, 04:23 PM

Both poems are so beautiful.

08-06-2002, 03:59 PM	#1
Sara Micelli Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 3,122	Anyone want to read something I wrote last year (please respond) I hope everyone likes this. Sorry if it's bad.If this offends anyone I am sorry.This was an assignment I had for school. "The Internal Light" by Sara I hold in my hand something I cannot smell, see, taste, or hear, but it lies within my heart. It costs nothing, but is worth everything. As bright as a shining star in the midnight sky, it emits a light so brilliant that it brings joy to the joyless. As grand as a symphony, this instrument is as soft as a whisper. It is something that everyone needs but not everyone has. It can be possessed by anyone but cannot be bought or sold. This has the power to brighten darkened corridors and to light the way for the lost. It serves as a beacon for the poor, sick, lonely, and homeless. Many people who have this have overcome tough situations; others have failed without it. It is the means for the weak to become strong, and without it the strong will weaken. This tool can help prevent sorrow, contempt, bitterness and mistrust in our imperfect world. It can turn the most heartless people into the most caring because of its amazing power. In times of fear, danger, and uncertainty when there is little else to trust, we must ignite this spark within ourselves to lead us from the darkness back into the light. What I hold in my hand cannot solve all of the world's problems, but it will surely provide a shining pathway toward a better tomorrow. I hold in my hand…faith.
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08-06-2002, 07:39 PM	#3
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08-06-2002, 09:15 PM	#5
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08-06-2002, 09:20 PM	#6
JDS84 Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 11, 2001 Location: My Old Kentucky Home Posts: 3,377	That is very good. I like it.
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08-07-2002, 12:00 AM	#9
TibbyTibby2 I heart rock stars! Senior Member Join Date: May 24, 2002 Location: Painting the town your favorite color... Posts: 1,325	wow thas really good!
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08-06-2002, 04:19 PM	#2
Plata Member Senior Member Join Date: May 16, 2001 Location: Regina,Saskatchewan, Canada Posts: 1,201	This is a nice poem, Sara. I think it has a strong meaning about life.

08-06-2002, 08:19 PM	#4
Sara Micelli Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 3,122	I love to write but that was an assignment.I don't write as often as I should.

08-06-2002, 10:39 PM	#7
dawsongirl Member Forum Icon Join Date: Jan 04, 2001 Posts: 53,140	Do you like writing poetry or stories?

08-06-2002, 10:50 PM	#8
Sara Micelli Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 3,122	both

08-07-2002, 12:41 AM	#10
FOLrocks1 My favorite ladies! Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Mar 09, 2001 Location: Ohio Posts: 4,103	That's really beautiful!
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08-07-2002, 11:55 AM	#11
TibbyTibby2 I heart rock stars! Senior Member Join Date: May 24, 2002 Location: Painting the town your favorite color... Posts: 1,325	you have inspired me to Finally post m y favorite poem i wrote. If u want to me to take it down... i will. im not trying to steal the attention i just wanna post and see what people think. Love can be a silly thing at the age of 14 But for me it's not that same a day without you drives me insane I love you for you no more or less Even if you like me the less Just as friends is fine But, oh to feel your hand interlocked with mine 1 Day is all I ask Just a simple task Give me a chance and you will see... I Was meant for you .. and you were meant for me
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08-07-2002, 12:08 PM	#12
Mr. Shy Guy Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Oct 30, 2001 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 7,871	Both of them are really nice.
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08-07-2002, 04:23 PM	#15
DarleneIllyria Gone Forum Star Join Date: Oct 15, 2000 Posts: 19,086	Both poems are so beautiful.