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Yankee Girl · 08-04-2002, 12:51 AM

First attempt at a CD and Nate fan fic, it's gonna suck, but oh well, here goes:

CD rolled over in bed and turned her lamp on. Her clock read 5:23, she rolled her eyes and tossed the covers off.
Sitting up, she signed and grinned slightly, it was a Friday which meant no work tomorrow unless they needed her.
Taking a quick shower and throwing some clothes on, CD headed out off to work. Nate and her were working a child abuse case, since she couldn't go back to sleep, she just decided to head to work and get a head start.
Parking her car in teh parking lot, CD got out and headed towards The Division. Her mind was so busy thinking about reasons and soloutions to her case, she didn't see what was headed for her.

Nate looked at his watch, he couldn't believe he was up this early and headed to work at 5:50 in the morning.
His radio on a low jazz station he yawned sleeply.
"Oh, great..NOW i'm tired," he mumbled pulling into the Division parking lot.
Nate looked ahead in the parking lot and suddenly slammed on his breaks. Looking ahead at a body laying in the middle of hte parking lot. It was rather big body, from what he could see. Short blonde hair, slacks, blazer.
Suddenly Nate's heart stopped, he knew that outfit, that body, that person. His legs felt wobbly yet strong at the same time as he climbed out of the car and ran towards the body.
Bending down he turned the body over.
"No, No, CD! CD, com on girl, wake up!," Nate said, his voice panic stricken. He looked down at CD and felt her pulse. "Thank-you God," he whispered, relieved to feel a pulse. "CD, come on, hang in there,"
Nate looked out in teh street at the people passing by. "Somebody get an ambulance!! Call 911, HELP!" he yelled.
Turning back to CD he cupped her face in his hands and took in her injuries.
She had a bruise on the left side of her forehead and cheek, and a cut lip, that's all he could tell.
"Hang on Cd, please hang on," Nate whispered, forcing the tears back.

Well?? Whatdya think??

Bonnie Is Great! · 08-04-2002, 02:38 AM

I think that it's really good, and that you should post more soon!

BonniesLilCutiePie · 08-04-2002, 03:01 AM

Awww! Post more real soon! Please! I love it!

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 08-04-2002, 04:07 PM

Post more! Post more! This is great!!

Ewan's My Man · 08-04-2002, 10:15 PM

This is really good! Post more soon

Yankee Girl · 08-04-2002, 10:27 PM

Okay here's some more, im trying to think after the preview for next sunday's ep...man..... :

Nate tapped his fingers against his leg nervously, sitting in teh waiting room wasn't easy. He couldnt' believe what was going on, CD was his partner, this couldn't happen to her, she was so tough.
He had called Captian and told her what happened, then called Jinny, she was on her way.
"DeLorenzo," the doctor said, coming out into the waiting room.
"Yeah," Nate said, jumping up. "Is she okay, is CD okay, what happened?"
"She's going to be all right. She's awake. And as for what happened, I believe that's your job to figure out, it just looks like she took a couple blows to the head, her right is sprained. But she can go home, she said she wants to,"
"Can I see her?"
"Yes, go straight through the door, third room on your right,"
Nate nodded.

Opening teh door to CD's room, he saw her struggling to get her jacket on.
"Hey," he said quietly, closign the door behind him.
CD looked up at him, "Hi,"
"Let me help you with that," Nate said, taking the coat from her hands and slipping it over her shoulders.
"Thanks," CD said, fingering the edge of her bandage around he wrist.
"Hey, you okay?"
CD nodded.
Nate took a deep breath. "You wanna...tell me what happened?"
Tears clouded CD's eyes, but she shook them away, "I got mugged I guess,"
"CD, you were in teh middle of the parking lot out cold, a mugger would've killed you,"
"Nate all I remember is seeing someone come runnign at me, tackling m then hitting me hard with the end of his gun," CD yelled.
"Hey, hey, calm down. It's okay," Nate said. "Sit down," he took her by the arm and led her to the bed.
A tear slipped down her face, "I'm sorry,"
"Hey, it's okay," Nate said, putting an arm around her.

Sorry it's so short, more later tonight!

Jo/Blair_fan · 08-04-2002, 10:40 PM

GREAT I WANT MORE U ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more please???????????????????

BonniesLilCutiePie · 08-04-2002, 11:27 PM

Awesomenesss!

Yankee Girl · 08-05-2002, 11:20 PM

Here's More:

"Hey,"
Nate turned around and saw Jinny come in. "Hey," he replied, standing.
"Hey, you okay?" Jinny asked CD, nodding at Nate.
CD rubbed her forehead, "I can tell ya I've been better,"
"You need me to do anything?"
CD shook her head, "Thanks anyways Jin,"
"Look, Captian called me on my way in...she said you are gong to need to come in, and at least say what you can so that we can try to catch this guy,"
CD sighed, "Now?"
Jinny's face showed her sympathy. "I understand what you are going through, But Captain, thinks you need to do this, but she says it's not an order,"
""I can take you in CD, have you in and out of there in a few minutes," Nate said.
"Look guys there is nothing to ask cause there is nothing for me to tell. I got mugged, no big deal, happens all of the time, don't worry about it," CD snapped.
Jinny looked at Nate, then back at CD.
CD come on," Nate said, stepping forward he put a hand on CD's shoulder.
CD pulled back. "Guys come on, leave me alone, okay," she stood and face them. "I can't....please there's nothing to tell,"
"CD if-"
CD lowered her voice, "Nothing," she said, before walking out of the room.

Well??

BonniesLilCutiePie · 08-06-2002, 12:00 AM

Awww! I luf it! More please!

KerriBerri687 · 08-06-2002, 12:32 AM

dude....this is good...very goooood...post more asap plz

BonniesLilCutiePie · 08-06-2002, 02:06 PM

This is so cute! I luv it!

Yankee Girl · 08-08-2002, 12:24 AM

"Captain I don't think she's gonna-"
"Break her down," Captain interrupted Jinny, "I've known CD for 15 years, she'll tell you,"
"Captain with all do respect," Jinny paused as Captain rolled her eyes then continued, "she seemed set-"
"Jin, it's an order, not a suggestion,"
Jinny nodded.
"Well, wait, what do I do?" Nate asked.
"Uh...well..." Captain stuttered
"Okay now, Captain, I know I'm a guy, but CD is my partner and good friend. Somebody...somebody attacked an dpossibly threatened her adn you expect me to sit out and not worry about her...I seriously don't think so,"
Captain sighed. "Okay, you and Jinny got this, have Raina do anything you need to her to do,"
Jinny and Nate nodded and filed out the door.

CD sat curled up on her couch,wrapped in a bath robe, her hair wet, and holding a cup of coffee in hand.
She was still going through her mind what had happened earlier, when the telephone rang.
She jumped, her nerves on edge, she slowly picked up the phone, "Hello?"
"Hey sweets,"
"What do you want?"
"I think you know-"
"Listen to me, I'm not gonna say anything, just leave me alone okay,"
"Candace, Candace," he paused.
CD heard it to. Clicks.
"Is your phone tapped?" he asked.
"I...I..."
"You know who's gonna get hurt..."
"I swear to God if you hurt h-" CD stopped when all she heard was a dial tone. Slamming the phone down she breathed in deeply. The person she cared for the most, was in more trouble then her.

Whatdya think??

KerriBerri687 · 08-08-2002, 12:27 AM

aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! post more asap!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleeeez

NewsiesGurl229 · 08-08-2002, 01:54 PM

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Originally posted by Blair n' Jo Rock
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couldn't have said it better myself!

MORE PLEASE!

08-04-2002, 12:51 AM	#1
Yankee Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 22, 2002 Posts: 144	New fan fic, no name though, sorry :) First attempt at a CD and Nate fan fic, it's gonna suck, but oh well, here goes: CD rolled over in bed and turned her lamp on. Her clock read 5:23, she rolled her eyes and tossed the covers off. Sitting up, she signed and grinned slightly, it was a Friday which meant no work tomorrow unless they needed her. Taking a quick shower and throwing some clothes on, CD headed out off to work. Nate and her were working a child abuse case, since she couldn't go back to sleep, she just decided to head to work and get a head start. Parking her car in teh parking lot, CD got out and headed towards The Division. Her mind was so busy thinking about reasons and soloutions to her case, she didn't see what was headed for her. Nate looked at his watch, he couldn't believe he was up this early and headed to work at 5:50 in the morning. His radio on a low jazz station he yawned sleeply. "Oh, great..NOW i'm tired," he mumbled pulling into the Division parking lot. Nate looked ahead in the parking lot and suddenly slammed on his breaks. Looking ahead at a body laying in the middle of hte parking lot. It was rather big body, from what he could see. Short blonde hair, slacks, blazer. Suddenly Nate's heart stopped, he knew that outfit, that body, that person. His legs felt wobbly yet strong at the same time as he climbed out of the car and ran towards the body. Bending down he turned the body over. "No, No, CD! CD, com on girl, wake up!," Nate said, his voice panic stricken. He looked down at CD and felt her pulse. "Thank-you God," he whispered, relieved to feel a pulse. "CD, come on, hang in there," Nate looked out in teh street at the people passing by. "Somebody get an ambulance!! Call 911, HELP!" he yelled. Turning back to CD he cupped her face in his hands and took in her injuries. She had a bruise on the left side of her forehead and cheek, and a cut lip, that's all he could tell. "Hang on Cd, please hang on," Nate whispered, forcing the tears back. Well?? Whatdya think??
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08-04-2002, 03:01 AM	#3
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08-04-2002, 04:07 PM	#4
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08-04-2002, 10:15 PM	#5
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08-04-2002, 10:40 PM	#7
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08-04-2002, 02:38 AM	#2
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08-04-2002, 10:27 PM	#6
Yankee Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 22, 2002 Posts: 144	Okay here's some more, im trying to think after the preview for next sunday's ep...man..... : Nate tapped his fingers against his leg nervously, sitting in teh waiting room wasn't easy. He couldnt' believe what was going on, CD was his partner, this couldn't happen to her, she was so tough. He had called Captian and told her what happened, then called Jinny, she was on her way. "DeLorenzo," the doctor said, coming out into the waiting room. "Yeah," Nate said, jumping up. "Is she okay, is CD okay, what happened?" "She's going to be all right. She's awake. And as for what happened, I believe that's your job to figure out, it just looks like she took a couple blows to the head, her right is sprained. But she can go home, she said she wants to," "Can I see her?" "Yes, go straight through the door, third room on your right," Nate nodded. Opening teh door to CD's room, he saw her struggling to get her jacket on. "Hey," he said quietly, closign the door behind him. CD looked up at him, "Hi," "Let me help you with that," Nate said, taking the coat from her hands and slipping it over her shoulders. "Thanks," CD said, fingering the edge of her bandage around he wrist. "Hey, you okay?" CD nodded. Nate took a deep breath. "You wanna...tell me what happened?" Tears clouded CD's eyes, but she shook them away, "I got mugged I guess," "CD, you were in teh middle of the parking lot out cold, a mugger would've killed you," "Nate all I remember is seeing someone come runnign at me, tackling m then hitting me hard with the end of his gun," CD yelled. "Hey, hey, calm down. It's okay," Nate said. "Sit down," he took her by the arm and led her to the bed. A tear slipped down her face, "I'm sorry," "Hey, it's okay," Nate said, putting an arm around her. Sorry it's so short, more later tonight!

08-04-2002, 11:27 PM	#8
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08-05-2002, 11:20 PM	#9
Yankee Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 22, 2002 Posts: 144	Here's More: "Hey," Nate turned around and saw Jinny come in. "Hey," he replied, standing. "Hey, you okay?" Jinny asked CD, nodding at Nate. CD rubbed her forehead, "I can tell ya I've been better," "You need me to do anything?" CD shook her head, "Thanks anyways Jin," "Look, Captian called me on my way in...she said you are gong to need to come in, and at least say what you can so that we can try to catch this guy," CD sighed, "Now?" Jinny's face showed her sympathy. "I understand what you are going through, But Captain, thinks you need to do this, but she says it's not an order," ""I can take you in CD, have you in and out of there in a few minutes," Nate said. "Look guys there is nothing to ask cause there is nothing for me to tell. I got mugged, no big deal, happens all of the time, don't worry about it," CD snapped. Jinny looked at Nate, then back at CD. CD come on," Nate said, stepping forward he put a hand on CD's shoulder. CD pulled back. "Guys come on, leave me alone, okay," she stood and face them. "I can't....please there's nothing to tell," "CD if-" CD lowered her voice, "Nothing," she said, before walking out of the room. Well??

08-06-2002, 12:00 AM	#10
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	Awww! I luf it! More please!

08-06-2002, 12:32 AM	#11
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08-06-2002, 02:06 PM	#12
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	This is so cute! I luv it!

08-08-2002, 12:24 AM	#13
Yankee Girl Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 22, 2002 Posts: 144	"Captain I don't think she's gonna-" "Break her down," Captain interrupted Jinny, "I've known CD for 15 years, she'll tell you," "Captain with all do respect," Jinny paused as Captain rolled her eyes then continued, "she seemed set-" "Jin, it's an order, not a suggestion," Jinny nodded. "Well, wait, what do I do?" Nate asked. "Uh...well..." Captain stuttered "Okay now, Captain, I know I'm a guy, but CD is my partner and good friend. Somebody...somebody attacked an dpossibly threatened her adn you expect me to sit out and not worry about her...I seriously don't think so," Captain sighed. "Okay, you and Jinny got this, have Raina do anything you need to her to do," Jinny and Nate nodded and filed out the door. CD sat curled up on her couch,wrapped in a bath robe, her hair wet, and holding a cup of coffee in hand. She was still going through her mind what had happened earlier, when the telephone rang. She jumped, her nerves on edge, she slowly picked up the phone, "Hello?" "Hey sweets," "What do you want?" "I think you know-" "Listen to me, I'm not gonna say anything, just leave me alone okay," "Candace, Candace," he paused. CD heard it to. Clicks. "Is your phone tapped?" he asked. "I...I..." "You know who's gonna get hurt..." "I swear to God if you hurt h-" CD stopped when all she heard was a dial tone. Slamming the phone down she breathed in deeply. The person she cared for the most, was in more trouble then her. Whatdya think??

08-08-2002, 12:27 AM	#14
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! post more asap!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleeeez