"The Jagerson's" (2nd pilot) - Sitcoms Online Message Boards

Archie and Edith · 08-02-2002, 05:28 PM

I'm going to make a new pilot for "The Jagerson's".

a new cast:

Pete (the dad), Mary (the mom), Andrew (child who's 10),
Jim Hanks (a neighbor) and Luke Hanks (Jim's son, who's 10).

1.1 "Moving In"

Pete: Mary, I'm going to meet our neighbor.

Mary: ok.

Pete: Hi, I'm Pete Jagerson.

Jim: Hi, I'm Jim Hanks and this is my son, Luke.

Pete: I have a wife named, Mary and a son named, Andrew.

Jim: My wife has been gone for 2 years and I miss her.

Pete: Well, nice meeting you.

Jim: Nice meeting you too, Pete.

They both say "Bye".

Pete: Mary, our neighbor is nice. He has a son Andrew's age.

Mary: Oh, that's great.

Pete: Hey, Andrew we have a neighbor your age.

Andrew: great. Can I go meet him?

Pete: Yes you can. His name is Luke.

Andrew goes next door to meet Luke.

Andrew rings the doorbell.

Luke: I'll get it dad.

Jim: ok, son.

Luke: Oh, hi you must be my neighbor.

Andrew: yep, I'm Andrew.

Luke: I'm Luke. Do you want to play?

Andrew: Sure, but can I call my parents first?

Luke: Sure.

Andrew calls his parents

Andrew: my parents said I could play.

Luke: ok. What should we play?

Andrew: How about Monopoly?

Luke: Sure.

They play for an hour and Andrew goes home.

THE END

How did you like the storyline?

Chrish · 11-10-2002, 06:58 PM

I just noticed this, and, not to be mean or anything, but I found it kind've boring and plotless. I mean, a family meeting a new neighbor, the boys becoming best friends.. It's just so... o_o;; Unoriginal?

08-02-2002, 05:28 PM	#1
Archie and Edith Kerry's the best Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 17, 2001 Location: Archie Bunker's house Posts: 418	"The Jagerson's" (2nd pilot) I'm going to make a new pilot for "The Jagerson's". a new cast: Pete (the dad), Mary (the mom), Andrew (child who's 10), Jim Hanks (a neighbor) and Luke Hanks (Jim's son, who's 10). 1.1 "Moving In" Pete: Mary, I'm going to meet our neighbor. Mary: ok. Pete: Hi, I'm Pete Jagerson. Jim: Hi, I'm Jim Hanks and this is my son, Luke. Pete: I have a wife named, Mary and a son named, Andrew. Jim: My wife has been gone for 2 years and I miss her. Pete: Well, nice meeting you. Jim: Nice meeting you too, Pete. They both say "Bye". Pete: Mary, our neighbor is nice. He has a son Andrew's age. Mary: Oh, that's great. Pete: Hey, Andrew we have a neighbor your age. Andrew: great. Can I go meet him? Pete: Yes you can. His name is Luke. Andrew goes next door to meet Luke. Andrew rings the doorbell. Luke: I'll get it dad. Jim: ok, son. Luke: Oh, hi you must be my neighbor. Andrew: yep, I'm Andrew. Luke: I'm Luke. Do you want to play? Andrew: Sure, but can I call my parents first? Luke: Sure. Andrew calls his parents Andrew: my parents said I could play. Luke: ok. What should we play? Andrew: How about Monopoly? Luke: Sure. They play for an hour and Andrew goes home. THE END How did you like the storyline?

11-10-2002, 06:58 PM	#2
Chrish Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Nov 10, 2002 Location: Iowa Posts: 10	I just noticed this, and, not to be mean or anything, but I found it kind've boring and plotless. I mean, a family meeting a new neighbor, the boys becoming best friends.. It's just so... o_o;; Unoriginal?
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