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Bass Player / Skater
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Join Date: Jul 28, 2002
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"THE BREAKUP"
Here's the first part of my fanfiction 'The Breakup'..I hope you like it..thanks! ------------------- ((Eastland - Season 3)) (Blair is talking to her latest boyfriend on the phone, Scott) B: Mh hmm. I'll check my schedule, hold on a second. ::Pulls out her pocket-schedule:: Well...I have Saturday free. How's that? Good? Okay, fantastic. Buhbye, Scott. I love you too. ::Hangs up smiling:: ::Jo comes in the room:: J: Lemme guess, Scott. B: Yup. We're going out to eat next Saturday - I am so excited. J: Pathetic. B: Excuse mua, but since when does going out to eat on a date become 'pathetic'? J: That's just my opinion, glamour princess. (Sarcastically)] B: ::Smiles:: That's me! J: ::Rolls eyes:: ((Girl's Bedroom)) (Tootie is studying for a History exam and Natalie is writing a report for English Class) B: ::Walks in the bedroom:: Hello, all. N: Blair has entered the bedroom, people. B: That's right, and I am proud to announce that Scott and I will be going out to eat next Saturday! T: Blair, did you ever stop and think that...nobody cares? B: Tisk, tisk, TISK! SOMEBODY is in a bad mood today. T: Well I'm trying to study for a History exam that's tomorrow. B: Well pardon mua! J: ::Walks in:: Will you stop using that word? B: Mua? J: Yes. It makes me cringe. B: MUA MUA MUA MUA N, J, T: ::Yells:: SHUT UP BLAIR! B: Gosh!! ::Shakes head and stays silent for the rest of her time in the room:: ((The Restaurant - Scott and Blair's Date)) S: So what would you like? B: Diamond rings and pearls. ::Giggles:: S: ::Smiles:: Seriously, Blair. B: Seriously! S: I mean to eat. B: Oh..I'll have a chicken salad. S: That's it? B: I suppose. Hey, how about going to Bloomingdales after this? S: Um..what? B: They are having a great sale! S: Sorry Blair. Don't shop there. B: Oh..::giggles:: I'm sorry, I forgot. Silly me! S: I don't mean to sound rude or anything, Blair, and I do really like you..but..do you think about anything besides wasting money and going shopping? B: Excuse me? S: This is a night for us. We're here out to eat and all you care about is going to Bloomingdales the minute we leave for a sale? B: Okay, I'll stop. ::Their food arrives and they begin to eat it:: S: You're beautiful, Blair. B: Oh, I know. S: ::Shocked:: That's a great way to say thank you. B: Well so many people have told me-- S: --Blair we need to talk something over. B: We do? S: Yeah. We do. Now. B: Alright.. S: I hate to say it, but you're acting so..selfish and..conceited.. B: Me?! S: Yes, you. I tell you you're beautiful and you say you know? That's so..shallow. B: But... S: No buts. You need to change. B: Why do I need to change? S: Because you are getting to snobbish for me! B: SNOBBISH?! S: Not everybody has the money like you do to go out to Bloomingdales every day..nobody can just go out and buy gold rings and pearls whenever they feel like it. B: But..that's just how I am.. S: Well I don't like it. B: I've always been like this.. S: Not as selfish as you are being tonight, Blair! B: ::Silent:: S: ::Also silent:: So..are you done eating? B:..Yes. S: Alright. ((Eastland)) B: ::Walks in:: MG: How was it? B: Oh..it was great! MG: I'm happy for you, Blair. B: Yeah..so am I. ::Smiles fakely and walks upstairs:: ((The next day)) (After class ends) B: ::Sitting at her desk in the bedroom with her head down in her hands:: J: ::Walks in:: Blair? B: ::Stands up:: Hi Jo. J: What's wrong? B: Like you care. J: I do. Believe it or not. B: ::Rolls eyes:: J: What happened? B: ::Eyes begin to tear:: ..Scott dumped me. J: Why? B: ::Chuckles:: Like I'm going to tell you. You'll just agree with the reason he broke up with me. J: Just tell me so I can help you! B: Since when do YOU want to help me? J: Ya know what? Forget I ever said anything. See ya. ::Begins to leave:: B: Wait. J: ::Turns around:: B:..He said I was..selfish. And conceited. He called this morning to break up with me..he didn't wanna tell me at dinner. J: Well..I can't say you arent selfish and conceited sometimes either. B: I knew you'd say that. J: Well it's true! You can't be this way if you're gonna have someone in your life like you had Scott, Blair.I may not have had alot of boyfriends but I know! B: It's almost like..I can't help it anymore. This is just me! Blair Warner! J: Well you have to begin to mature. B: Mature? What does that have to do with it? J: Mature so that you can understand how to act towards people. I know you probably said something like "Let's go to Bloomingdales" or "I want gold and pearls" B: Exactly.. J: Well you have to stop saying that. B: ::Quiet:: You're right. I have to "mature" J: You act like you almost have no personality. Just shopping and money and looks. B: ::Nods slightly and slowly:: J: I'm right, huh? B: Yeah. I..guess you are. Why did you just help me? J: What? B: You always act so..sarcastic.. J: Like you don't? B: So why did you just help me? J: Because even though we may not get along that well..you still are my friend..kinda. B: I am? J: Yeah. I guess. B: ::Smiles:: Thanks, Jo. J: ::Slightly grins:: The End That was it. A Blair and Jo moment was included in that. It was kind of short, but my first full fan fiction. I'm working on another one..I made a preview for it. What did you think of this one? Thanks!
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Emmaline
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Join Date: Dec 05, 2000
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I liked it. I think you're a good writer
It was like watching the show!
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~PussNBoots~
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Its great
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