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BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-24-2002, 09:47 PM

Kate's House 5:00 P.M.
Morgan! i'm home! *no answer* Morgan! *walks into the kitchen and sees a note on the table, so she reads it.*

The note reads: Mom,
Dad stopped by and took me to the mall.
We'll be back before dinner.
Love,
Morgan

Kate: *sits down on the couch and watches tv.*

2 hours later Morgan and Louis come home.

Morgan: Hi mom! We're home!

Kate: Morgan, where have you been? It's 9:00!

Morgan: Didn't you read the note on the kitchen table?

Kate: Yes I did. It said that you would be back by dinner. Dinner was 3 hours ago!

Morgan: We must have lost track of time!

Kate: Go upstairs and go to bed!

Morgan: Why? It's only 9:00!

Kate: Because I said so! Now go!

Morgan: Fine! *goes upstairs, but listens to their conversation at the top of the stairs.*

Louis: I'm sorry we're so late.

Kate: You sorry? That's a first!

Louis: I just wanted to spend as much time with her as I could. I hardly ever get to see her.

Kate: Well, maybe if you quit acting like a jerk so much, I'd let you see her more!

Louis: Well, I know another way that I could see her more.

Kate: Oh, what's that?

Louis: I want her to come and live with me.

Kate: What?

Louis: With your job, your never at home to see her, and spend time with her. But if she lives with me, then I will be there all the time with her.

Kate: She's MY daughter, and she's NOT going to live with you!

Louis: Just think about it! okay?

Kate: Whatever! Goodbye Louis!

Louis: Goodbye! *Leaves*

Morgan: *goes to her room and gets in bed.*

Kate: *Just stands there and starts to cry*

Divisionbabe05 · 07-24-2002, 10:04 PM

Kate's daughter's name is...Amanda....and when is this taking place? I'm confused.

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-24-2002, 10:10 PM

I made up a character.

Bonnie Is Great! · 07-24-2002, 10:32 PM

Hey your doing great! I can't wait to read more!

-*Forever*- · 07-25-2002, 04:21 PM

I have to give you a lil bi of credit, this is much better than your 1st one, but I have to say, I don't think Bonnie Bedelia would ever utter the word 'whatever' as Kate McCafferty. Maybe in another movie, but.... no.

Rhiannon · 07-25-2002, 07:38 PM

A thought to ponder...

Rhiannon · 07-25-2002, 07:41 PM

The weather in this state sucks...I step outside and it's an instant steam bath. Uggh!

I can't wait until you post more (since you have 12 pages already!!)

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 07-25-2002, 07:47 PM

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Originally posted by ~*Roxie Rickman*~
I have to give you a lil bi of credit, this is much better than your 1st one, but I have to say, I don't think Bonnie Bedelia would ever utter the word 'whatever' as Kate McCafferty. Maybe in another movie, but.... no.

I have to agree with ya. I cannot see Kate saying the word 'whatever'. And I've been told that i have an extremely vivid imagination.

I like the 1st 1, but I think this 1 is better. It's really good.

post more soon!!

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-25-2002, 08:09 PM

Thanks. I think. I'll post more soon.

Bonnie Is Great! · 07-26-2002, 12:29 AM

I can't wait to read more!

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 07-26-2002, 10:38 AM

hurry up and post more! I can't wait to read what happens next!

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-26-2002, 04:17 PM

I will in a few minutes.

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-26-2002, 04:58 PM

The Division 10:00 A.M.

Magda: Is there something wrong with Captain?

Jinny: I don't know, but she looks like she's been crying, and like she hasn't slept in forever.

Magda: I hope she's okay.

Jinny: Do you think that there's something wrong with Morgan?

Magda: I don't know, but I am about to go and find out.

Jinny: What do you mean?

Magda: I mean, I'm going to talk to Captain. *Goes to Kate's office*

Magda: Captain, can we talk?

Kate: Sure. Sit down.

Magda: Thanks. *sits down*

Kate: Know, what is it that you wanted to talk about?

Magda: Is everything okay? you don't look to good today.

Kate: I'm fine. Don't worry about me.

Magda: Are you sure?

Kate: I'm positive.

Magda: Okay. Just remember, I'm here for you whenever you ned me.

Kate: Thanks. I'll remember.

Magda: *smiles and leaves*

Kate: *crys*

Jinny: Well, what did she say?

Magda: She said that she's fine.

Jinny: She's lying!

Magda: Jinny!

Jinny: What? it's the truth!

Magda: i know. I just wish that there was something that I could do.

Jinny: thare is.

Magda: Like what?

Jinny: Go talk to Morgan.

Magda: That's a good idea.

Jinny: I know.

Magda: *smiles* I'll go during my lunch hour.

Jinny: Tell me what shsays.

Magda: I will.

Jinny: You'd better.

Rhiannon · 07-26-2002, 05:18 PM

This is getting really good!

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-26-2002, 05:22 PM

Thanks. I'll post more soon.

07-24-2002, 09:47 PM	#1
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	My second Fan Fiction! This one needs a title though! Kate's House 5:00 P.M. Morgan! i'm home! no answer Morgan! walks into the kitchen and sees a note on the table, so she reads it. The note reads: Mom, Dad stopped by and took me to the mall. We'll be back before dinner. Love, Morgan Kate: sits down on the couch and watches tv. 2 hours later Morgan and Louis come home. Morgan: Hi mom! We're home! Kate: Morgan, where have you been? It's 9:00! Morgan: Didn't you read the note on the kitchen table? Kate: Yes I did. It said that you would be back by dinner. Dinner was 3 hours ago! Morgan: We must have lost track of time! Kate: Go upstairs and go to bed! Morgan: Why? It's only 9:00! Kate: Because I said so! Now go! Morgan: Fine! goes upstairs, but listens to their conversation at the top of the stairs. Louis: I'm sorry we're so late. Kate: You sorry? That's a first! Louis: I just wanted to spend as much time with her as I could. I hardly ever get to see her. Kate: Well, maybe if you quit acting like a jerk so much, I'd let you see her more! Louis: Well, I know another way that I could see her more. Kate: Oh, what's that? Louis: I want her to come and live with me. Kate: What? Louis: With your job, your never at home to see her, and spend time with her. But if she lives with me, then I will be there all the time with her. Kate: She's MY daughter, and she's NOT going to live with you! Louis: Just think about it! okay? Kate: Whatever! Goodbye Louis! Louis: Goodbye! Leaves Morgan: goes to her room and gets in bed. Kate: Just stands there and starts to cry
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07-24-2002, 10:04 PM	#2
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07-25-2002, 04:21 PM	#5
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07-25-2002, 07:38 PM	#6
Rhiannon oh, snap! Forum Fanatic Join Date: Jul 19, 2002 Location: middle of nowhere Posts: 11,097	A thought to ponder...
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07-24-2002, 10:10 PM	#3
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	I made up a character.

07-24-2002, 10:32 PM	#4
Bonnie Is Great! Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 23, 2002 Location: Rock on! Can ya handle it? Cat is the best! Posts: 488	Hey your doing great! I can't wait to read more!

07-25-2002, 07:41 PM	#7
Rhiannon oh, snap! Forum Fanatic Join Date: Jul 19, 2002 Location: middle of nowhere Posts: 11,097	The weather in this state sucks...I step outside and it's an instant steam bath. Uggh! I can't wait until you post more (since you have 12 pages already!!)

07-25-2002, 08:09 PM	#9
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	Thanks. I think. I'll post more soon.

07-26-2002, 12:29 AM	#10
Bonnie Is Great! Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 23, 2002 Location: Rock on! Can ya handle it? Cat is the best! Posts: 488	I can't wait to read more!

07-26-2002, 10:38 AM	#11
TeddyisMINE!!!! Crazed Nancy Fan!!!! Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 03, 2002 Location: Tennessee Posts: 496	hurry up and post more! I can't wait to read what happens next!

07-26-2002, 04:17 PM	#12
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	I will in a few minutes.

07-26-2002, 04:58 PM	#13
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	The Division 10:00 A.M. Magda: Is there something wrong with Captain? Jinny: I don't know, but she looks like she's been crying, and like she hasn't slept in forever. Magda: I hope she's okay. Jinny: Do you think that there's something wrong with Morgan? Magda: I don't know, but I am about to go and find out. Jinny: What do you mean? Magda: I mean, I'm going to talk to Captain. Goes to Kate's office Magda: Captain, can we talk? Kate: Sure. Sit down. Magda: Thanks. sits down Kate: Know, what is it that you wanted to talk about? Magda: Is everything okay? you don't look to good today. Kate: I'm fine. Don't worry about me. Magda: Are you sure? Kate: I'm positive. Magda: Okay. Just remember, I'm here for you whenever you ned me. Kate: Thanks. I'll remember. Magda: smiles and leaves Kate: crys Jinny: Well, what did she say? Magda: She said that she's fine. Jinny: She's lying! Magda: Jinny! Jinny: What? it's the truth! Magda: i know. I just wish that there was something that I could do. Jinny: thare is. Magda: Like what? Jinny: Go talk to Morgan. Magda: That's a good idea. Jinny: I know. Magda: smiles I'll go during my lunch hour. Jinny: Tell me what shsays. Magda: I will. Jinny: You'd better.

07-26-2002, 05:18 PM	#14
Rhiannon oh, snap! Forum Fanatic Join Date: Jul 19, 2002 Location: middle of nowhere Posts: 11,097	This is getting really good!

07-26-2002, 05:22 PM	#15
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	Thanks. I'll post more soon.