Fatal Intentions

[Bonnie Is Great!]

This is my first time writing fan fic. Let me know what you think. But remember that I am also new the show, and don't know the charcters that well. In other words some, or all of the characters might not act, or respond like the characters do.

One more thing before I start. This is the same fan fic that I have been writing on the lifetime Bonnie Bedelia message board. I wanted some more opinions on what I was writing, and someone told me to come here. For those of you who have already read some, or all of what I have written on the lifetime board please read it again, because I will be changing somethings, but not all of it. Once again please let me know what you think. keep in mind that I know nothing about the law either. So here it goes.......

In a Galaxy far far away.....ops sorry worng fan fiction! LOL J/K

Kate: (She is sitting in her office when she gets a knock on the door). "Come in." (Haysbert walks in the door, as Kate looks up. She makes an oh great look what does he want)? "What can I do for you Charles."

Haysbert: "You can tell me why Jinny and Magda have not finished their case yet? It was suposed to be done by yesterday. So why isn't it done? They have the perp in jail. We can only hold him for forty eight hours. He already has been in there for almost twenty four hours. If you ask me we are just waisting money on this. So tell me why isn't this case closed yet?"

Kate: (She wanted to say if you would give me a chance to speek, but she chose not to.) "Jinny and Magdaare trying to find the witness he just vanished. They can't find him. Once they do the case will be closed."

Haysbert: "Didn't they get a statment from the witness before they let him go?"

Kate: "The witness just talked to them. Both Magda and Jinny said that he was real scared. Anything that they got out of him they had to convice him that he would be safe. That they guy would not hurt him. The witness did not want to come down to the police station to make a statment, so they told him that If, he wanted to they could meet him at his address, and he could give the statment in his own house if, that would help calm him down more. The guy agreed to that. They got his address and when they went to get the statment later, he had given them the wrong address. They are trying to track him down now."

Haysbert: "Didn't they get the witness's name?"

Kate: "Of corse they did. Their not frist day officers who don't know what they are doing. Their trying to track his were abouts now. Other then that I don't know what kind of leads that they have."

Haysbert: "Well you should. Keep me posted every few hours." (With that he walked out of her office, and slamed the door).

Kate: (to herself). "Well good bye to you too!" (She got up from her desk, to go find out what Jinny and Magda had found out on the witness, when her phone rings). "Hello Captain MaCafferty."

Tom: (One of Kate's old friends. Who is real high up in the DA's office. Much higher then anyone that Haysbert whould know. Tom also happens to be married to Kate's old high school friend). "Hi Kate, it's Tom."

Kate: "Tom hi! How are you? Is this business or pleasure, or both?"

Tom: "I'm good Kate. I wish this was pleasure. Believe me. Are you sitting down Kate? If, you now maybe you should."

Kate: You have some bad news. I don't need to sit down. Is this about Helen?" (Tom's wife). "Is she alright?"

Tom: "No this is not about Helen. Look I really wish that I could be tellling you this in person, but I can't, so I will tell you over the phone. It's about Eric Stone. He got out on parole."

Kate: (She looks really scared, and mad). "What?! How?! He wasn't even up for parole for another two years! Tom how could they do this twice? Huh?! They let him on parole five years ago, and he tried to kill me then. How in the he** could they let him out again?!"

Tom: "Look Kate I am really sorry. I just found out myself. They let him out one good behaver..." (Kate cuts him off).

Kate: "Good behaver?! That is what he got off for the last time. How could they make the same mistake twice?!"



Now that I have this on the right board.....I hope! Please Let me know what you think??????

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Hey! You have it on the right board! I love it! It's fantastic! I can't wait to read more! I hope you post more soon! This is so awesome!

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Thanks! Yep I got in on the right board! LOL

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Tom: "It's not only good behaver. He is dieing too. He needs better health care, and can not get the same kind of care that you, or I would get."

Kate: (She new that she shouldn't be thinking this, or saying it, but she didn't care). "He should die for everything that he has done. He should have gotten death row the frist time he was sent to jail. What Kind of system do we have? They let a cop killer go, not once, but twice!"

Tom: "I understand how you feel Kate. I don't want this guy out of jail anymore then you do. But you also know that he was not charged with murdering her. The cop that arrested Stones did not read him his rights, so that whole case got thrown out."

Kate: "I don't need you to tell me that I was there. Remember? I watched, and could do nothing while Stones shot, and killed my partner. She wasn't just a partner, she was a good friend as well. If that Cop had just read him his rights then we wouldn't be standing here today with him out of jail again."

Tom: " Kate I want to put a gard on you to keep you safe from him."

Kate: "Two things Tom. One you can't put a gard on me unless he tries to hurt me. And two I can take care of myself."

Tom: "Kate I know that you can take care of yourself, but that did not stop him the last time, and if I remember right he even found out were you lived. If you won't let me put gards on you at least let me call Ross. You know that both Helen and I like Ross. He is one of the good guys. You should take the rest of the day off."

Kate: "Yes, Ross is every nice guy, and it just so happens that I am having dinner with him tonight at my house, so I can tell him then. But I am not takeing the rest of the day off. You know that Charles is trying to find a way to get rid of me. Plus it will make me look like a wimp, and that I am not. I will be fine. I know that I have a lot of work to do, so I can't even think of the amount of work that you have to do, so I will let you go. Keep in touch, and let me know what is going on with Stones."

Tom: "I won't let Charles get rid of you. If you want to stay at work fine. That is up tp you. You are right I do have a lot of work to do, so I will let you go. Just be on the look out for him okay? We both know that he wants to....." (He cuts himself off, and changes what he is going to say). ".....he wants to hurt you and he will not stop until he does. I will keep you up to date on Stones. Bye.

Kate: "Thanks. I will keep my eyes open. I will not let that SOB hurt me. He can't not anymore. Bye." (Kate hangs up the phone, and turns around in her office. She needed to go and find out how Jinny and Magda where doing, but she kept looking at her wall. The truth was that Stones could still hurt her. She kept thinking about everthing that Stones had done to her, and now he was out of jail, and could do anything that he wanted too. Ther was a knock at the door, and the person was comeing in as they knocked. Kate jumped and turned around, putting her hands to her heart. It was Raina). "You scared the crap out of me!"



Please let me know what you all think so far??

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

It's fantastic! I can't wait to read more soon!

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Post more soon,this is great!!

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

I love it! It's fablous!

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Thanks!! I gonna post more.

This next part has a little more of the cast, but Please remember that I am still new to the show. Let me know what you all think!

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Rania: "I'm sorry. Are you okay?? You look really really pale. Maybe you should sit down? Can I ger ya somethin to drink?"

Kate: (She is trying to cover, but not doing a good job of it). "I'm alright Raina. Um....is there something you need?"

Raina: "Well yeah, I had a question about a case, but it can wait."

Kate: (Still not really with it). "That's...uh...what I'm here for." (She just stops talking all together. She is just kind of stareing into space).

Raina: "Uh....Captain are you sure your alright?"

Kate: "Huh...Uh...oh yeah, I'm fine. Now where was I. Oh I know. What is your question?"

Raina: "You know the Stevens's case that....." (the secound Raina said the name Stevens, Kate was gone. She was not paying attention to a work Raina was saying. Raina tells her about the case, and them asks)".....So what do ya think?" (Waits a secound, and there is no answer form kate). "Captain??"

Kate: (Not hearing Raina, or even realizeing that Raina is still in the room). "I can't believe that they let him out on parole again."

Raina: (Very confused). "Huh?!"

Kate: "What?" (Realizeing that she wan't paying attention to Raina, or her question). "Oh, my God! Raina I am so sorry. I didn't hear a word that you said."

Raina: "Oh, that's okay. Are you sure your alright?"

Kate: I'm sure It's.....well I got some bad new today is all." (Trying to change the subject). Now....umm back to you and your case."

Raina: "Captain it can wait. It really isn't that important. I can ask one of the inspectors. They should be able to help me."

Kate: "You sure?"

Raina: "Yes, I'm sure. Uh...you positive that you don't want anything, or need anything?"

Kate: (Getting mad, because Raina keeps asking her is she okay, or is she needs anything). "Positive. Anything else?"

Raina: "No."

Kate: "Good. After you leave could you please send Magda and Jinny in?"

Raina: "Sure thing Captain." (Raina leaves, and shuts the door on her way out. she walks up to Jinny and Magda). "Jinny, Magda Captain wants to see ya."

Jinny: "Ya know what she wants?"

Raina: "Uh...no I don't. There's sometin I want to say befor you go in there." (Looking Worried).

Magda: "What? What is it? Something wrong?"

Jinny: "Yeah, What's up?"

Raina: "It's the Captain. I mean she was acting really strange."

Jinny: "She is strange."

Magda: (Giving Jinny a look). "Jinny."

Jinny: "What? It's the truth."

Magda: "Anyway, go on. Strange how?"

Raina: Well, when I frist walked in she about jumped out of her skin. She was real scared."

Jinny: "CAPTAIN?!"

Raina: (Kinda annoyed). Yes, Captain. Now could you let me finish?"

Jinny: "Sorrrry!"

Raina: "Anyway, I asked her if there was somethin wrong, and she said no, but I could tell that somethin was wrong."

Magda: " Why do ya say that?"

Jinny: " She said to let her finish. Weren't ya listening?"

Raina: (Both Raina and Magda give her a look). "Because, I had a question about a case, and when I was done asking about it, she had not even heard a word that I said. I don't even think that she rememberd that I was in the room. I haven't known her long, but I know that, that is NOT like her."

Magda: "No That's not like her at all. I wonder what's wrong?"

Jinny: " No that doesn't sound like her at all."

Magda: "Maybe we should try and give her a break when we walk in there." (Both Magda and Raina look at Jinny).

Jinny: "Hey, why are you both lookin at me for?" (At this point Kate opens the door to her office, and looks at both Jinny and Magda).

Kate: "Ladies I don't have all day." (She waves for them to come into her office).




Let me know what all of you think? Was it any good?

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

It's fantastic! You could be a writer for "The Division"

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Thank you that was very nice of you to say!

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Magda: (All three walk into the Captain's office, and Magda shuts the door). "What's up Captain?"

Kate: (She is more with it this time, but you can tell there , is something trubleing her). "Charles Haysbert was here, and was not to happy about the witness. He wants this case closed by tonight. Do you know the where abouts of the witness yet?"

Jinny: "Captain it was not our fault the witness vanished."

Kate: "Did I say it was your fault?"

Jinny: "No, but..." (Kate cuts her off).

Kate: "But nothing." (Kate was not in the mood for this at all, but was trying to stay calm. She takes a deep breth in, and lets it out). "I know that it wasn't your fault. Could you just answer my questiion." (Not giving them a chance to answer). "Do you have any leads on the witness?"

Magda: "Well, we have one. We were gonna go and check it out, when Raina said you needed to see us."

Kate: "Where?"

Jinny: "His sister's house."

Kate: " Okay, If, he is there this time bring him in for his statment. Okay?"

Magda: "Yeah."

Jinny: "Shure thing." (They both get up and leave her office , and shut the door). "Well Captain was acting a little funny, but not as Raina said she was."

Magda: "No she wasn't, but I could still tell that something was wrong."

Jinny: "Me to, but there's nothing that we can do about it now. We have work to do, and then we can find out what is wrong with Captain."

Magda: "Okay sounds good. Let's go." (they both walked out).

Kate: (She was in her office paseing the floor. She could not think, or do any of her work. The only thing on her mind was Eric Stones. Tom was right she had to get out of there, or at least for a little while. With that she walked out of her office). "Raina I am going for a long lunch if anybody needs me, I will be back in a couple of hours." (She didn't want to but, she ahd to tell Lious that Stones was out of jail. Kate new that her and Lious were about to argue. Lious tried to get her to quite her job after the whole Stone's case, but she wouldn't. Lious could never except that, and that was just part of the reson that they got a divorce in the frist place.)

At Lious's place

KateShe was walking up to the door. This was the last place she wanted to be, but Lious had a right to know. She said to herself quitely). "Well this is it." (She knocked on the door, and stepped back from it. She looked down and noticed that the news paperwas still sitting there from this morning, so she picked it up. The door opens up to show Louis, and it is clear that he had just waken-up. Kate looked at him shcoked to see that he was only wearing a pair of boxers).



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[BonniesLilCutiePie]

It's fabulous! I can't wait to read more! You are truly a great and talented writer! Keep up the awesome work!

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Thank you your very sweet! I am posting more now. Let me know what you think????????

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Lious: (Kate gives him the news papar). "Kate I didn't expect to see you. My place is missed up, but come in."

Kate: (Kate was not suprised to see that his place was missed up). "Just getting up Lious? It's in the middle of the afternoon. I can't believe that you aren't dressed yet."

Lious: "Yes, I did just get up, and sence we aren't married anymore, it is none of your business. What brings you by Kate?"

Kate: "Sorry Lious your right it is none of my business what time you get up. There is something that I need to tell you. This is not easy for me to say so, PLEASE don't make it even harder."

Lious: "Is this about Ross? Are you finely realizeing what a jerk he is?"

Kate: (Trying to stay calm). "No this has nothing to do with Ross>"

Lious: (Worried). It's not about Amanda, is it?"

Kate: "No it's not. She is fine."

Lious: "So what is it about?"

Kate: "I want you to TRY and stay calm. Okay?" (She new he was going to be mad. He had every right to be, but she thought that it was worth a shot).

Lious: "Yeah okay."

Kate: "They let Eric Stone's out of jail. I just came over her to let you know. I thought that you had a right to know."

Lious: (He was ticked). What?! What were they thinking? Look Kate that means that your in danger. What about Amanda? Is she safe?"

Kate: (Trying to stay calm so that maybe he will get calmed down too). "With Amanda out of town for a while yes, I think that she will be safe."

Lious: "Kate, I really think that maybe you should leave town too. That way you will be safe."

Kate: "No, I am not leaving town."

Lious: "Why NOT?! He wants you dead Kate!

Kate: (Getting mad). "You think that I don't know that he wants me dead?!" (Not giving him a time to answer). "I'm NOT running away, if he wants to kill me he'll find me anyway! Running away is the COWARDS'S way out?" (Looking him in the eyes. Makeing her point. She had never forgiven him for running out on her, and Amanda, when she really needed him).

Lious: "What's that supposed to mean?"

Kate: "It means that when ever you can't handle something, or you get scared, YOU runaway!"

Lious: "That's not fair Kate! I am just worried about you. Stones did awful things to you! And now you just want to sit there and wait until he comes after you again?!"

Kate: "I can take care of myself Lious. I don't need you to worrie about me."

Lious: "YOU can take care of yourself?! Is that why Stones kidnapped you? Held you hostage for three days, and killed your partner?! You can't keep your self safe from him. He is crazy, and he wants you DEAD!"

Kate: "You don't have to tell me what he wants to do to me. Listen, I just came here to give you the heads up. I thought that you had a right to know. Now I am leaving, because I have to go back to work."

Lious: "Now WHO'S the one running away? We wouldn't even be her right now, if you had just listen to me back then. When I told you NOT to take the case. Stone's wouldn't be tryign to kill you now, and YOU and I would still be married!"

Kate: (She has had enough of this). "I am not running away Lious. I do have a job to get back too. As far as you balmeing me for everything.....How like YOU Lious! Nothing is ever your FAULT! Well, it is a good thing that I kept my job because, my life has been a H*ll of a lot better with out YOU in it! Goodbye!" (She walks out and slams the door).

Kate: (She gets in her car, and before she could even stop to think she noticed that she was crying. She tried to stop, but she couldn't. About a half hour later she was pulling into the division. She had stopped crying by then. She redid her make-up in hopes that no one would be able to tell that she had been crying. As she was going in she ran into CD). "Oh, uh....hi. How are things going?"

CD: (Raina told her about what had happened earlyer that day. And she could see that she was still upset). "Yes, everthing is okay. Are you alright Captain?"

Kate: "Yes, fine! If one more person asks me that I am going to scream!" (She takes a breath). "I'm sorry I just got some bad news that's all. I didn't mean to take to out on you."

CD: "That's okay, is there anything that I can do to help?"

Kate: "No, but thanks. I'm going to go in now, and see how much work that I have to get cought up on." (They both walk away. Kate is getting ready to walk into her office, and see's Raina). "Raina did I get any messages while I was gone?"

Raina: "No messages, but Haysbert stopped by."

Kate: "Oh great, what did he want?"

Raina: "No, he just asked where you were, and I told him that you were on a long lunch, and that you would be back in a few hours. He walked away before I got a chanve to ask him weither or not, he wanted to leave a message."

Kate: "Okay, thanks Raina." (Kate started walking to her office).

Raina: "Wait Captain there's one more thing..." (As Raina was saying that Kate kept walking and opened her office door to see Ross sitting there). "...Ross is in your office."

Kate: (Half laughing). "Thanks Raina, I can see that. Hi Ross."

Raina: (Both Raina, and Ross are laughing). "Anything that I can do to help! Uh... I think that I will leave now." (She leaves and shuts the door. Leaving Kate and Ross alone).


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