Insight for my Stories! :D Better Version! :D

[Janice Johnson]

My other recent Insight for my Stories was supposed to be mainly an insight and I ended up basically writing my Stories all over again with occasional insights to them.

Take two.

Part 1

My Darryl Johnson Character was based on my twist on the Michael Jackson Character named Darryl in the Bad music Video, 18 minute version. Michael's Darryl was a Juvenile Delinquent who lived in the New York Ghetto who was sent to an upscale Boarding School and is back home on a school vacation and his Friends want him to mug someone to prove that he is still tough. Darryl plans to mug an old guy but feels bad and warns the man to run. He does and his Friends berate him for going soft. He turns into Michael Jackson and sings the Bad Song... His Friends respect that he has changed for the better.

My Darryl Johnson Character physically was based on Michael's Darryl character. Sean, Julian, and Mario were based on MJ's Darryl three friends. I even had them look like those characters. My Darryl Character lived in North Miami Suburbs and was sent to Marshall Johnson Academy Boarding School after his Mom found out he was mugging People, carjacking, ribbing convenience stores and burglarizing homes. On my very first Darryl Johnson story, he goes home on a school Vacation and his Friends dare him to shoot someone to prove he is still tough. He pretends to shoot the Victim, but the Victim falls over. Darryl understandably freaks out. Later, he is told this was an elaborate prank by his his Mom, Friends, a Policeman and the "Victim," and all of them end up LAUGHING. My first Darryl story got a lot of consecutive criticism basically saying that most people aren't going to pretend to shoot someone for a dare and the People in on it should be HORRIFIED that it looked like Darryl would have shot someone for a dare. They also pointed out that Darryl should be PISSED, not LAUGHING.

My second Darryl Story took the consecutive criticism to heart and made a better Version where Sean snapped and was shooting random People because he was upset that Darryl left him, Julian, and Mario to go to MJA. He coerced Julian and Mario into keeping their mouths shut by threatening to turn them into the Authorities for Criminal deeds they did themselves. Sean killed his latest Victim and Darryl who tried to stop the shooting was hit by Sean and fell as Darryl watched in Horror as Sean's latest Victim was shot right in front of him. Sean had an attitude of,"It's just a game. If they die, it's just a casual casualty. I wanted to show that Sean was cracked Sociopath.

This version of Darryl was more well received. A boy shooting People because he really snapped was more well received than the "Dared to," thing. Sean left Darryl to be the fall guy(Darryl called Police and Ambulance and was the only one of the four who was around the dead body) and Darryl was arrested and jailed until he admitted Sean was the Killer and was let go.

Sean thinking that Darryl was still in jail went to his house and tried to steal Darryl's money. Once again, Sean is no good. Darryl confronted him and I had Darryl ask for his money back($300!) And Sean gave it back to him and Darryl gave him $40. I wanted to show that Darryl still cared about him. He then kicked Sean out.

Later he finds out that Sean is blackmailing Julian and Mario into keeping secrets his shooting game. I had Darryl, Mario, and Julian dress up in disguise , knock out Sean and put him in a human sized bag and put breathing holes and "Kidnap," him l, tie him up, and pretend to be the ghosts of his dead Victims who were going to kill him. Sean freaked out of course and tried to run and knocked himself out. LMAO! They later took him home and untied him and put him in his bed.

I later had Sean regret what he did and try to commit Suicide and Darryl took him to the Mental Hospital. Sean later found out that Darryl ratted him out and made creepy calls to him disguising his voice. Darryl was freaked out of course.... Later he realized that Sean was the creepy caller by a slip Sean made when Darryl checked on him. Sean admitted he was the creepy caller and sounded like he was having a nervous breakdown. Darryl wasn't mad at Sean and calmed him down. Sean later got arrested and imprisoned for his latest Victim that Darryl tried to prevent the death of. He was sentenced to 30 years behind bars. And released when he was 47 and got a trade job, got married and had two kids. This was in an Epilogue I wrote. This Epilogue was the first time I wrote an Epilogue.

My third Darryl Story, Sean was kind of normal and wasn't a Killer. Sean, Julian, and Mario still hijacked cars l, robbed Convenience Stores, burglarized homes, and mugged People. Darryl went to North Miami High School and was sent to Marshall Johnson Academy Boarding School in Jacksonville, Florida, an All Boys School when his Mom interrogated him on where he was getting all this extra money from and he confessed.

Before he got sent to MJA, he had to do a bunch of Special tests and pass and work hard to get a Scholarship, and he did. He got Straight A's in everything except Math where he got D's and had to do Remedial Math. He got his Math grade up to a B. But even in MJA, he still had to do Remedial Math.

Darryl was greeted at MJA by Max Cartwright, his blonde and blue eyed Dorm Parent. Max gave Darryl a Tour and was really chipper and Darryl nicknamed him Skippy. I thought Skippy matched his personality. Max was surprised that Darryl was a Johnson and suggested that Darryl claim to be a descendant of Marshall Johnson. Darryl thought ,"No one would fall for me being a Descendant of Marshall Johnson because I am Black and Marshall Johnson is White." I claimed that Darryl had a light brown complexion like Chingy.

Max took him to his Dorm. In his Dorm, he saw two beds which meant he had a Roommate. His Roommate was Dave Winston, who was White with brown eyes and brown hair. He smiled at Darryl and they shook hands.

[Janice Johnson]

Part 2

Maybe I should try a better type of Insight.


Rob and George in the Darryl as Lead Characters were 16 year old Bullies who beat up Darryl and Dave. They had told Darryl that he was a Nig(I couldn't write the full word as it was automatically flagged as a Racial Slur) and told him to go back where he came from. Darryl called them The Sneerys based on the Sneers they gave him when taunting him. He called George, Sneery Right due to George being on the Right and Rob, Sneery Left due to being on the Left. Rob and George beat Darryl for not leaving when they told him to and Dave for being Friends with him. Sneery Left told Dave that he would stop beating him up if he stopped being Friends with Darryl and called him a Nig. Dave refused to betray Darryl by calling him a Nig so Rob kept beating him up. The Students just stood by watching, scared to stop Rob and George. I wanted to imply that Rob and George were intimidated by them.

Rob and George were also Co Presidents of the Phi Beta Alpha Fraternity on Marshall Johnson Academy. They were Big Men On Campus. Students knew of they stood up to them, they would lose their chances to become Fraternity Members. So they let George and Rob beat up Dave and Darryl.

In the Dave as Lead Character, I said that Rob was more aggressive and stronger of the two and who he was scared of most. George fell in a swimming pool and begun drowning as he couldn't swom(What he was doing walking near a pool when he knew he couldn't swim is personally beyond me although I wrote it. Let's just say plot purposes).

Dave was walking by and saw him thrashing and drowning and wanted to leave him to drown since if George died, he wouldn't be getting beat up by George anymore. He had nasty thoughts about letting him drown and actually started to let him die. His conscience begun screaming at him that he would be Murderer if he left him to drown. Dave is a compassionate guy although he does have selfish thoughts, do his compassion outweighed his selfish thoughts and he saved George from drowning, gave him CPR, and called Ambulance for him.

Since George was the less aggressive of George and Rob, I still to this day do not know if Dave would have let Rob drown had Rob been the one to have been drowning. I do write that Dave had a nasty Fantasy of Rob being the one to have been drowning, and then his dead body floating to the top, but Dave soon felt guilty about wishing Rob had drowned to death. So I'd like to say that he would have saved Rob too judging by how guilty he felt about his Fantasy. Rob beat up Dave when he noticed that George was missing and Dave's clothes were wet. Rob accused Dave of drowning George since Dave knew George George couldn't swim. To be fair, MOST People would have been suspicious that George was missing, Dave's clothes were wet and Dave knew George couldn't swim.

Dave pointed out he didn't drown George and Rob questioned why his clothes were wet. Dave said because he jumped into the pool and got George out and saved him. Rob was like,"That's actually plausible," and asked where George was. Dave answered,"The Hospital," and Rob went to go to visit him.

Rob ended up becoming sole Temporary Sole President of PBA, and I implied him to be a Bad President as he told his Pledgies to beat up Dave and Dave's Friends in order to become "Brothers," . Dave saved George, , his Best Friend's LIFE and he told his Pledgies to beat up Dave and Dave's Friends. I wanted to show that Rob had a kind of unhealthy obsession with Dave. I also wanted to imply that George, who was less mean than Rob kind of kept him in line. The Pledgies were uncomfortable and were like,"You are a Bad President Rob. We can't wait for George to recover and become your Copresident again." Once again, Rob is a Tyrannical type of President.

Later, Dave ends up having to help Rob out when Rob chased him to the roof in order to beat him up once again. Dave pointed out to the Readers that running to the roof when a Maniac is chasing you is STUPID and he'd get killed in a Horror Movie doing that... He begged Rob to leave him alone as Rob might make him fall off the roof of he started beating him up. Rob, so obsessed with beating up Dave lunged at him to beat him up and Dave instinctively moved out of the way and Rob fell off the roof himself screaming in surprise and terror.

Dave instead of being happy that Rob might have died, was filled with compassion and concern for Rob and went to check on him. He was relieved that Rob wasn't dead, but he was kind of paralyzed and in a lot of pain . Rob begged him not to leave him there, one of Rob's pure vulnerable times. Darryl screamed at him that he almost got him to fall off a damn roof! But saw how much pain and trouble Rob was in and called Ambulance for Rob.

Now, PBA had both Presidents in the Hospital. In a Darryl as Lead Character story, I originally wrote that Rob and George had gotten Suspended for calling Darryl a Nig and Dave was voted as temporary PBA President. I'm not sure if I actually published Dave becoming temporary PBA President online although I originally wrote it in my notebook. Dave was voted as Temporary President in this Dave as Lead Character story where he helped out both George and Rob after they got into trouble. Dave said he had the Pledgies do Community Service and said that they loved him. I meant it honestly, but it could come off as sarcastic.

Rob came back on crutches and couldn't beat up Dave while he was on crutches. George recovered and was grateful to Dave for saving his life and stopped beating him up. Rob soon got off the crutches and started beating up Dave again.... Something is seriously wrong with Rob is what I wanted to convey..
He was NOT normal. George berated Rob for beating up the guy who saved both of their lives and Rob was like,"You're only grateful to him because he saved you from drowning. Before that, you would have been beating him up too." George was like,"He saved both our lives. You should be nicer to Dave (Good point). Rob left and George once again thanked Dave for saving his life.

Darryl thanked him and after school, he was at Student life(Inside) minding his business when Rob came and once again started beating him up again and taunting that George wasn't around this time to help him out. Dave compared mentally George and Rob, claiming that Rob was like Freddy Krueger and George was like Jason Voorhees. Both bad, but Rob was clearly worse(Freddy) than George (Jason) Rob kept beating up Dave, ignoring his begging him to stop. Dave finally told him off and Rob was shocked as usually Dave was timid. Dave told him he would be ignoring him and took back all the fear he ever gave him and from now on he didn't exist to him( Mentally thinking of Nancy Thompson telling Freddy Krueger basically the same thing in Nightmare On Elm Street Part Fitting as Rob was like Freddy to Dave

Rob laughed this off and punched Dave in his stomach. Dave said,"Ow!" And Rob mocked him saying something like,"I don't exist! You shouldn't be feeling anything!" He continued to beat up Dave and he lost consciousness. When he came to, he was getting treated by a school nurse in the office. The Nurse wanted to know who beat him up like this and he refused to tell her Rob did this. She continued to clean him up and sent him home. At home, he realized he looked like Rob's Bitch.

He offered money to Mr. X, his ex Cocaine Dealer(He used to be a Drug Addict) to beat and kidnap Rob and leave him somewhere far away. Mr. X refused to beat, kidnap, and leave a Teen somewhere, noting he could get into a lot of trouble for that(This is the same guy who sells drugs to Teens). He offered to sell Roofies to Dave instead and Dave could do what he wanted to Rob instead. Dave agreed and bought the Roofies.

The next day, Dean Riley offered to keep him safe for whoever beat him up by letting him hide in the office for the day and asked him who did this to him. Dave only mentioned that his attacker's name was Robert and he was a Junior. Dean let him stay in the office for the day.

After school, Dave snuck into the PBA when Rob wasn't home. He knew that Rob was hosting some Pledgies Meeting away from the PBA and George was at a Social Event.

He dropped the Roofies into Rob's favorite drink, Pepsi, and heard Rob's voice outside! Oh crap! NOOOOOOO! The special meeting ended early! Dave knew he could get into a lot of trouble for breaking and entering the PBA house and Rob would kick his ass for doing that. He decided to hide in George's Closet and hoped Rob wouldn't go in George's Closet. Rob came in, drank the Pepsi and exclaimed to himself that it tasted weird. Dave smiled and left George's Closet. Rob was passed out. He tied up Rob and when Rob came too, he was confused on why Dave was in the PBA House and why he was tied up. Understandable. Dave started beating him up and Rob claimed he would kick his ass once he got untied. Dave beat him up more and started acting crazy speaking in different Accents and even like a little girl and an Evil Villain from a Fictional Space Planet! Rob was understandably freaked out.

This was one of my favorite things to write and I am STILL laughing to this day at this. Dave continued to beat up Rob and then forced Rob to drink more of the Roofie Pepsi. Rob said that Dave poisoned him as he was feeling very weak and Dave truthfully said there was Sugar in it. Rob soon conked out completely and Dave untied the ropes and put the unconscious Rob in his Closet and said directly to the reader that George will let him out when he got home.

The next day, Dave told his Friend, Rudy to cover for him as he knew Rob most likely would tell Dean Riley what he did. Rudy agreed. Sure enough, Dave was soon called to the office and he knew what this was about even before going to the office. Sure enough, Rob and Dean Riley were there. Rob gave him a bothered look, I envisioned it being a ,"You Bitch!" Dean Riley said that Rob told him that he beat him up yesterday in the PBA after school from 4-6. Dave said,"No, I didn't. I was with Rudy yesterday after school,knowing it was a lie. Rob claimed Dave was lying. Dave cockily told Dean to ask Rudy if he was with him from 4-6.

Rudy was called in and claimed that Dave was with him yesterday from 4-6. Dave smiled at Rudy and Dean thanked Rudy. Rob claimed that both Rudy and Dave were lying. Rob said that George would corroborate what really happened. George was called in and claimed he did find Rob in Rob's closet, passed out, but didn't think Dave did anything to Rob. I made a VERY implausible thing and wrote that George felt that Rob fell asleep on his closet room floor. So implausible. Who sleeps on their closet room floor although George said Rob didn't have rope burns (I purposely didn't leave Rope burns on Robert to make it look like Dave didn't really tie him up.

Rob went CRAZY, acting like a Lunatic and even imitating the different Accents Dave did. I wanted Rob to look like he snapped and wouldn't look all that plausible. Dave pointed out that Rob was digging his own grave with this behavior. Dean Riley suggested he go to Therapy and Rob claimed he was sane, although he did look crazy. Dave looked at Rob like he was CRAZY.

Rob said something like,"Fine, don't believe me, but no one believes a Teenager Girl named Nancy when she claimed a Man named Freddy killed her Friends. Freddy tried to kill Nancy too!" Fitting that Rob referenced Nightmare On Elm Street when Dave considered him the Freddy Krueger of Rob and George. George seriously said something like,"Robert, no more Nightmare On Elm Street or Pepsi for you. You really do need Therapy." Dean Riley caught on that Rob's full name was Robert and asked him if he beat up Dave.


Rob got scared and claimed that Dave beat HIM up, not the other way around. George found him delusional and thought Dave was far too weak and to scared of him to beat him up. Dean Riley claimed that he had a Videotape of him beating up Dave in Student Life. He put the videotape in the VCR and Rob said,"NOOOOOOO!" And ran to the VCR, pressed eject, and pulled out the Videotape and pulled out the tape damaging it. Dean Riley said he found that suspicious. Rob claimed he damaged the videotape by accident. Yeah right.

Dean Riley claimed that a Witness said they saw Rob beating up Dave in Student Life. Rob, not thinking said that was a lie as when he beat up Dave in Student Life, he and Dave were alone. Dean Riley was like,"So you admit that you beat up Dave!" Rob knew he was caught. Dave and George were sent out of the office and Rob had to stay.

It was later revealed that Rob would be Suspended for Two Months for beating up Dave. Dave was elated. George was disappointed that Rob beat up the guy who saved both of them.