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MrCleveland · 07-02-2019, 09:50 PM

I found a webpage that saves lyrics to songs you wanna write, I have a few and this is one that I wrote after that dismal putt-putt game....

Crying (Because I Lost)

1-Having fun with everyone,
In the red-hot June sun.
I play mini-golf, felt like a kid again,
But then a triple-bogus, I got a hole-in-ten!

Chorus-Oh...I'm in loser place,
Oh...I gotta pay the cost.
Oh...I'm now crying,
Crying because I lost!

2-Tonight as we cosmic-bowl,
Wearing shoes that I don't own.
Playing disco hits and how it would fall,
As I got my 10th-straight gutter-ball!

Chorus-Oh...I'm in loser place,
Oh...I gotta pay the cost.
Oh...I'm now crying,
Crying because I lost!

Bridge-As I see people having a fine time,
They eat fancy steaks, salad, and wine.
But I'm not invited here,
So I eat my hamburger and drink my beer.
I guess I have to face the music again,
I'm dead-last place again!
I sleep in the basement bed,
Will this loser pain end?
I could use a faithful friend,
So my reality isn't pretend!

3-I think I'll shoot some 8-ball pool,
With the wise men and the fools.
But as I see many won it all,
I'm there behind the 8 ball!

Chorus-Oh...I'm in loser place,
Oh...I gotta pay the cost.
Oh...I'm now crying,
Crying because I lost!

(Guitar Solo)

Bridge-As I see people having a fine time,
They eat fancy steaks, salad, and wine.
But I'm not invited here,
So I eat my hamburger and drink my beer.
I guess I have to face the music again,
I'm dead-last place again!
I sleep in the basement bed,
Will this loser pain end?
I could use a faithful friend,
So my reality isn't pretend!

4-I hold the Ace of Spades,
I roll the snake-eyes every day.
I went Directly to Jail, I can't pass GO!
My King's in a checkmate, what else is old?

Chorus-Oh...I'm in loser place,
Oh...I gotta pay the cost.
Oh...I'm now crying,
Crying because I lost!

It starts with a sad violin solo in E Minor, then a piano plays...then a synthesizer orchestra plays into the song...the song has resemblance to most of this song....

And the intro and ending has similarities of this song....

07-02-2019, 09:50 PM	#1
MrCleveland Drew Carey from Hell Forum Star Join Date: Nov 10, 2007 Location: The City of Cleveland, in The State of Cleveland, in The United States of Cleveland Posts: 14,222	I've been writing lyrics for original songs... I found a webpage that saves lyrics to songs you wanna write, I have a few and this is one that I wrote after that dismal putt-putt game.... Crying (Because I Lost) 1-Having fun with everyone, In the red-hot June sun. I play mini-golf, felt like a kid again, But then a triple-bogus, I got a hole-in-ten! Chorus-Oh...I'm in loser place, Oh...I gotta pay the cost. Oh...I'm now crying, Crying because I lost! 2-Tonight as we cosmic-bowl, Wearing shoes that I don't own. Playing disco hits and how it would fall, As I got my 10th-straight gutter-ball! Chorus-Oh...I'm in loser place, Oh...I gotta pay the cost. Oh...I'm now crying, Crying because I lost! Bridge-As I see people having a fine time, They eat fancy steaks, salad, and wine. But I'm not invited here, So I eat my hamburger and drink my beer. I guess I have to face the music again, I'm dead-last place again! I sleep in the basement bed, Will this loser pain end? I could use a faithful friend, So my reality isn't pretend! 3-I think I'll shoot some 8-ball pool, With the wise men and the fools. But as I see many won it all, I'm there behind the 8 ball! Chorus-Oh...I'm in loser place, Oh...I gotta pay the cost. Oh...I'm now crying, Crying because I lost! (Guitar Solo) Bridge-As I see people having a fine time, They eat fancy steaks, salad, and wine. But I'm not invited here, So I eat my hamburger and drink my beer. I guess I have to face the music again, I'm dead-last place again! I sleep in the basement bed, Will this loser pain end? I could use a faithful friend, So my reality isn't pretend! 4-I hold the Ace of Spades, I roll the snake-eyes every day. I went Directly to Jail, I can't pass GO! My King's in a checkmate, what else is old? Chorus-Oh...I'm in loser place, Oh...I gotta pay the cost. Oh...I'm now crying, Crying because I lost! It starts with a sad violin solo in E Minor, then a piano plays...then a synthesizer orchestra plays into the song...the song has resemblance to most of this song.... And the intro and ending has similarities of this song....
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