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nymckeon · 05-06-2002, 03:30 PM

Hey i am bored so i decided to write a nice lil fan fic.

The time is 8:00 am. Jinny Exstead enters the felony division of the SFPD with a smile on her face. Everything in her life seemed to be looking up. She was back on the captains good side, and she had just bought a new car with her hard earned money.

Cap: morning Jin. Before you even have your morning coffee, i just wanted to let you know that the murder case youve been working on has finally come together. Mr Carmen's attorney is talking about a plea bargain, but we need to make sure that he stays on the line.

Jin: Is there a point to this rambling?

Cap: You and Magda need to sit down with ADA Blumenthal about the plea or you could lose it.

Jin: Anything else? (captain shakes her head) Oh and Capt . Just to let you know. ive already had my morning coffee.

Jinny walks over to her desk and plops down into her chair. Magda walks into the office with Teddy at her side.

Mag: Jinny! Lets go we have work to do. (madga smirks as she walks into the conference room with Teddy)

Jin: oh great. The perfect start to an obviously perfect day.

Teddy: Good morning Inspector (Jin nods)

Jin: let me say this again Theodore, its Jinny, and its not really a good morning now is it?

Mag: Come on you two knock it off. We have work to do.

The three sit down to work on the case attempting to put together all of the hard facts and minor facts that they have about the case.

Jin: well we have a six pack and statements from 4 people who fingered Mr Carmen as the shooter. Thats hard evidence right there. Material witness'.

Teddy: Its still going to take a lot of time that im sure none of us have during the day to get this together so ill tell you what. You two meet me at my place at 7:30 tonight and wel work it out.

Mag: Ugg i cant. I have a family thing.

Jin: Ill come for business purposes. Mag do whatcha gotten do, well take care of it. As long as you wont feel uncomfortable about it.

Teddy: Its fine. See you tonight. (gathers his things and leaves)

Mag: Time alone with the ex. Thats gonna be akward isnt it?

Jin: Probably..no...yea.. No, no its not. We are working a case, co-workers its fine. (magda smiles at jinny and turns around)

That night, Jinny sat out front of teddys house for about 20 minutes deciding if she should go in our not. She was interrupted by a knock on her new car window.

Teddy: Youve only been sitting out here for 20 minutes jin. Come on in. I wont bite....Hard.

Jinny got out of the car and headed into his apt. About 30 minutes later the two of them were stuttering their words.

Teddy: Jinny Why are we doin this? We both know that it doesnt feel like work. It feels like old times.

Jin: I know i feel the same way but i mean...It has to be work related cause remember we arent friends or anything. we are co-workers.

Teddy: i made a mistake jin. I shouldnt have said what i did to you because you were the only thing that was making me happy in my whole life. You got help. I know that when you kissed him, it wasnt you. it was the alcohol. and i know that i still do love you and i cant deny that.. i try but its not that...

his words were cut short when jinny pulled him to her and began to kiss his soft lips. She wanted at that moment to do nothing but be with him. She wanted to wake up in his arms and feel nothing but his body next to hers. Teddy on the other hand, was still confused about what he was feeling. But he did know that he wanted her.. And bad...

*whatcha think? Should i continue??*COLOR]

Ewan's My Man · 05-06-2002, 03:55 PM

This is AWESOME!! Post more soon!!!

Babes_Cat · 05-06-2002, 04:39 PM

He wants her baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!

MOre please!

AllIWantIsYourClutch · 05-06-2002, 04:45 PM

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Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
He wants her baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!

MOre please!

Haha. Caitlin's a sheep.

Hey! It's Jo! Post more!

Babes_Cat · 05-06-2002, 05:43 PM

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Originally posted by NancyRulz24

Haha. Caitlin's a sheep.

No, Amy. Some one has their animals mixed up. I'm a BUNNIT!

MORE AGAIN PLEASE!

Babes_Cat · 05-06-2002, 08:37 PM

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Originally posted by nymckeon
Teddy: Youve only been sitting out here for 20 minutes jin. Come on in. I wont bite....Hard.

Yeah but prolly hard enough to leave a "mark"!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Babes_Cat · 05-07-2002, 07:31 PM

I'm Waaaaaaaaaaaaaiting!

And anyone here can tell you, I'm one very impatient little girl!

nymckeon · 05-10-2002, 01:42 PM

hehe ok heres a lil bit of intimate detail..but i find that most of yall are under 15 so i have to keep it clean. Laugh. Even though anybody in their right mind would want to think about TEDDY doing this to them right? LOL.. teddys_gurl this is for you.. hehe.

Teddy continued to kiss Jinny softly but all at once his work came back to him. He shouldnt be doing this. She had hurt him once and now he should be concentrating on his work. BUT shes such a hot kisser: he thought to himself. On the other note, jinny was busy thinking erotic thoughts..
Jinny (to herself): Oh what the hell. i havent had sex in almost 3 weeks. Ive been good. Its been hard but im been good. Speaking of hard....

Teddy: Jinny are you sure that you want to do this? I mean this is gonna change everything between us. And once again im here being used as a sex object and this means nothing to you i need to know that....

Jinny: Teddy shut up.

The two begin to fondle eachothers clothes. Teddy's masculine chest is an instant pair of lips to jinny as she begins to kiss him up and down his body. In return Teddy does the same (haha this is the part of the divisioin you cant see lol) They begin to passionatley make love, the whole time teddy concentrating on how bad he wanted Jinny to be his again, and Jinny concentrating on how could it felt to be with someone again.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

The next morning Jinny woke up in Teddys arms. He was still sound asleep so she figured now was a good time to quietly tiptoe out the door. She found a piece of paper in his briefcase and was about to write a letter when she saw her name on the front of an envelope. she slipped it out and shrugged her shoulders as she set it on the desk. She would read it later.
She began to write a small detailed note to Teddy. Heres what she wrote.

Dear Teddy
I just wanted to tell you that i had a lot of fun last night. Well maybe fun isnt the right word but i think you get it. It really meant a lot to me knowing that you still cared as much as i did. Heres the part that i conviently neglected to tell you. Last night was my closure. I was indeed using you to make sure that i didnt want to be with you anymore. See Teddy, you are everything that i USED to want. Not everything i need. You no longer hold a place in my heart. As a matter of fact. I have somebody else. They are perfect for me and they work with you. He is a DA. He is bright and charming and great. We have a lot more now than what you and i ever had. Im sorry to inform you like this, but it had to be done. Take care. Jinny

And with that Jinny closed his briefcase and got dressed. When she was done she picked up her black leather jacket and slipped the note to her into her pocket than headed out the door...

More??

Babes_Cat · 05-10-2002, 03:29 PM

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Originally posted by nymckeon
LOL.. teddys_gurl this is for you.. hehe.

Thank ya! I just IM-ed you but you're away!

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Originally posted by nymckeon
LOL.. teddys_gurl this is for you.. hehe.
Dear Teddy
I just wanted to tell you that i had a lot of fun last night. Well maybe fun isnt the right word but i think you get it. It really meant a lot to me knowing that you still cared as much as i did. Heres the part that i conviently neglected to tell you. Last night was my closure. I was indeed using you to make sure that i didnt want to be with you anymore. See Teddy, you are everything that i USED to want. Not everything i need. You no longer hold a place in my heart. As a matter of fact. I have somebody else. They are perfect for me and they work with you. He is a DA. He is bright and charming and great. We have a lot more now than what you and i ever had. Im sorry to inform you like this, but it had to be done. Take care. Jinny

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ARE YOU SERIOUS!?!?!?!?!?!? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMG MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE!

AHHHHHHHHHHH *can't breathe* MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ewan's My Man · 05-10-2002, 10:23 PM

OMG!!!!!!! POST MORE SOON!!

NancyFan · 05-11-2002, 10:07 PM

"Speaking of hard...."??????

*Snort* LOL

Babes_Cat · 05-11-2002, 10:12 PM

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Originally posted by NancyFan
"Speaking of hard...."??????

*Snort* LOL

So you snort when you laugh ay?

nymckeon · 05-11-2002, 10:46 PM

caitlin this is for you..otherwise this wouldnt be here...

Later that morning Jinny stared at the sealed envelope debating with herself on whether to open it or not.

Jin: to open or not to open, that is the question... Man the hell with this.

She tore opened the letter and focused it on the date in the right hand corner. it was from yesterday.. when had he read it? she thought to herself. silently she read.

Dear Jinny,
This is by far the hardest letter that i have ever had to write in my entire life. I know im gonna mess up in it a bit but here goes. SIGH. first off, when i saw you in the division my mind wasnt on the case..thats why i left so soon. my mind was on you and how much i loved you. I cant pretend jinny. Outside the courthouse that day when i was trying to help you..i wish you could have seen my heart becasue it was in two,, i can still hear you saying "what do you want teddy? You cant be hear for a friendly chat because remember were not friends." those words have been eating me up Jinny and i cant live with those words. I want the last words that we say to eachother to be i love you, not WERE NOT FRIENDS. you know what? We are friends. Best friends. I have only ever loved one person jin, and that girl i was dating for awhile... i though she was my first love, but baby...i didnt know what real love was until i met you.. and i know you have problems and that youve done stupid things, but thats just things youve done. Not who you are. I know who you really are jinny. and by far i think im the only one that really does. Call me. I love you from now til forever...
Teddy

Jinnys eyes filled up with tears as she read the words to herself over and over again.

Jinny (to herself): Im such an idiot.. god why? Why do you insist on taking everything from me why! Everytime my life is good. WHY!
she stood up and kicked her chair, then she picked up her coffee and threw it to the ground. She hit her desk hard and then grabbed her lamp and threw it off the desk then walked quickly out of the office leaving the note on the desk behind her.

More? Ill stick around for a bit to see if i should write more or not...

Babes_Cat · 05-11-2002, 10:50 PM

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Originally posted by nymckeon
caitlin this is for you..otherwise this wouldnt be here...

Awe gee thank I love you too!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And you know I wont stop asking!

NancyFan · 05-11-2002, 11:58 PM

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Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl

So you snort when you laugh ay?

Aw, now was that necessary?

That line was really funny, so I added a cyber snort to my laugh to indicate that I enjoyed it. Next time, I won't.

05-06-2002, 03:30 PM	#1
nymckeon Jinny's Clone Occasional Poster Join Date: May 04, 2002 Location: NY is my home, but i live in MD Posts: 22	"teddy" bear---an intimate story. readers be prepared Hey i am bored so i decided to write a nice lil fan fic. The time is 8:00 am. Jinny Exstead enters the felony division of the SFPD with a smile on her face. Everything in her life seemed to be looking up. She was back on the captains good side, and she had just bought a new car with her hard earned money. Cap: morning Jin. Before you even have your morning coffee, i just wanted to let you know that the murder case youve been working on has finally come together. Mr Carmen's attorney is talking about a plea bargain, but we need to make sure that he stays on the line. Jin: Is there a point to this rambling? Cap: You and Magda need to sit down with ADA Blumenthal about the plea or you could lose it. Jin: Anything else? (captain shakes her head) Oh and Capt . Just to let you know. ive already had my morning coffee. Jinny walks over to her desk and plops down into her chair. Magda walks into the office with Teddy at her side. Mag: Jinny! Lets go we have work to do. (madga smirks as she walks into the conference room with Teddy) Jin: oh great. The perfect start to an obviously perfect day. Teddy: Good morning Inspector (Jin nods) Jin: let me say this again Theodore, its Jinny, and its not really a good morning now is it? Mag: Come on you two knock it off. We have work to do. The three sit down to work on the case attempting to put together all of the hard facts and minor facts that they have about the case. Jin: well we have a six pack and statements from 4 people who fingered Mr Carmen as the shooter. Thats hard evidence right there. Material witness'. Teddy: Its still going to take a lot of time that im sure none of us have during the day to get this together so ill tell you what. You two meet me at my place at 7:30 tonight and wel work it out. Mag: Ugg i cant. I have a family thing. Jin: Ill come for business purposes. Mag do whatcha gotten do, well take care of it. As long as you wont feel uncomfortable about it. Teddy: Its fine. See you tonight. (gathers his things and leaves) Mag: Time alone with the ex. Thats gonna be akward isnt it? Jin: Probably..no...yea.. No, no its not. We are working a case, co-workers its fine. (magda smiles at jinny and turns around) That night, Jinny sat out front of teddys house for about 20 minutes deciding if she should go in our not. She was interrupted by a knock on her new car window. Teddy: Youve only been sitting out here for 20 minutes jin. Come on in. I wont bite....Hard. Jinny got out of the car and headed into his apt. About 30 minutes later the two of them were stuttering their words. Teddy: Jinny Why are we doin this? We both know that it doesnt feel like work. It feels like old times. Jin: I know i feel the same way but i mean...It has to be work related cause remember we arent friends or anything. we are co-workers. Teddy: i made a mistake jin. I shouldnt have said what i did to you because you were the only thing that was making me happy in my whole life. You got help. I know that when you kissed him, it wasnt you. it was the alcohol. and i know that i still do love you and i cant deny that.. i try but its not that... his words were cut short when jinny pulled him to her and began to kiss his soft lips. She wanted at that moment to do nothing but be with him. She wanted to wake up in his arms and feel nothing but his body next to hers. Teddy on the other hand, was still confused about what he was feeling. But he did know that he wanted her.. And bad... whatcha think? Should i continue??COLOR]
	__________________ Jo- How could you do that to me? How could you use me to get yourself out of a jam? Eddie- honey i did not use you! Jo- Yes you did! you wanted me to love you no matter who it hurt. Eddie- Whats so terrible about wanting you to love me? I never stopped loving you Jo. Jo- Eddie, love isnt just hugs and kisses. its honesty, and trust-- and why did you have to take all of that away! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~* "this is so hard to understand, but when you have so little self respect, youre just afraid all the time. I was afraid that one day you were gonna wake up and see the real me. The real...screwed up me and you would just go... So i uh.. i beat you to the punch." (AHH THAT SOUNDS SO FAMILIAR!)

05-06-2002, 03:55 PM	#2
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05-10-2002, 01:42 PM	#8
nymckeon Jinny's Clone Occasional Poster Join Date: May 04, 2002 Location: NY is my home, but i live in MD Posts: 22	Heres more hehe ok heres a lil bit of intimate detail..but i find that most of yall are under 15 so i have to keep it clean. Laugh. Even though anybody in their right mind would want to think about TEDDY doing this to them right? LOL.. teddys_gurl this is for you.. hehe. Teddy continued to kiss Jinny softly but all at once his work came back to him. He shouldnt be doing this. She had hurt him once and now he should be concentrating on his work. BUT shes such a hot kisser: he thought to himself. On the other note, jinny was busy thinking erotic thoughts.. Jinny (to herself): Oh what the hell. i havent had sex in almost 3 weeks. Ive been good. Its been hard but im been good. Speaking of hard.... Teddy: Jinny are you sure that you want to do this? I mean this is gonna change everything between us. And once again im here being used as a sex object and this means nothing to you i need to know that.... Jinny: Teddy shut up. The two begin to fondle eachothers clothes. Teddy's masculine chest is an instant pair of lips to jinny as she begins to kiss him up and down his body. In return Teddy does the same (haha this is the part of the divisioin you cant see lol) They begin to passionatley make love, the whole time teddy concentrating on how bad he wanted Jinny to be his again, and Jinny concentrating on how could it felt to be with someone again. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~* The next morning Jinny woke up in Teddys arms. He was still sound asleep so she figured now was a good time to quietly tiptoe out the door. She found a piece of paper in his briefcase and was about to write a letter when she saw her name on the front of an envelope. she slipped it out and shrugged her shoulders as she set it on the desk. She would read it later. She began to write a small detailed note to Teddy. Heres what she wrote. Dear Teddy I just wanted to tell you that i had a lot of fun last night. Well maybe fun isnt the right word but i think you get it. It really meant a lot to me knowing that you still cared as much as i did. Heres the part that i conviently neglected to tell you. Last night was my closure. I was indeed using you to make sure that i didnt want to be with you anymore. See Teddy, you are everything that i USED to want. Not everything i need. You no longer hold a place in my heart. As a matter of fact. I have somebody else. They are perfect for me and they work with you. He is a DA. He is bright and charming and great. We have a lot more now than what you and i ever had. Im sorry to inform you like this, but it had to be done. Take care. Jinny And with that Jinny closed his briefcase and got dressed. When she was done she picked up her black leather jacket and slipped the note to her into her pocket than headed out the door... More??

05-11-2002, 10:46 PM	#13
nymckeon Jinny's Clone Occasional Poster Join Date: May 04, 2002 Location: NY is my home, but i live in MD Posts: 22	more caitlin this is for you..otherwise this wouldnt be here... Later that morning Jinny stared at the sealed envelope debating with herself on whether to open it or not. Jin: to open or not to open, that is the question... Man the hell with this. She tore opened the letter and focused it on the date in the right hand corner. it was from yesterday.. when had he read it? she thought to herself. silently she read. Dear Jinny, This is by far the hardest letter that i have ever had to write in my entire life. I know im gonna mess up in it a bit but here goes. SIGH. first off, when i saw you in the division my mind wasnt on the case..thats why i left so soon. my mind was on you and how much i loved you. I cant pretend jinny. Outside the courthouse that day when i was trying to help you..i wish you could have seen my heart becasue it was in two,, i can still hear you saying "what do you want teddy? You cant be hear for a friendly chat because remember were not friends." those words have been eating me up Jinny and i cant live with those words. I want the last words that we say to eachother to be i love you, not WERE NOT FRIENDS. you know what? We are friends. Best friends. I have only ever loved one person jin, and that girl i was dating for awhile... i though she was my first love, but baby...i didnt know what real love was until i met you.. and i know you have problems and that youve done stupid things, but thats just things youve done. Not who you are. I know who you really are jinny. and by far i think im the only one that really does. Call me. I love you from now til forever... Teddy Jinnys eyes filled up with tears as she read the words to herself over and over again. Jinny (to herself): Im such an idiot.. god why? Why do you insist on taking everything from me why! Everytime my life is good. WHY! she stood up and kicked her chair, then she picked up her coffee and threw it to the ground. She hit her desk hard and then grabbed her lamp and threw it off the desk then walked quickly out of the office leaving the note on the desk behind her. More? Ill stick around for a bit to see if i should write more or not...

05-06-2002, 04:39 PM	#3
Babes_Cat Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Oct 11, 2001 Location: massachusetts Posts: 34,145	He wants her baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad! MOre please!

05-07-2002, 07:31 PM	#7
Babes_Cat Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Oct 11, 2001 Location: massachusetts Posts: 34,145	I'm Waaaaaaaaaaaaaiting! And anyone here can tell you, I'm one very impatient little girl!

05-10-2002, 10:23 PM	#10
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	OMG!!!!!!! POST MORE SOON!!

05-11-2002, 10:07 PM	#11
NancyFan Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 08, 2001 Location: Canada Posts: 199	"Speaking of hard...."?????? Snort LOL