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k well this is my new fic and the title sux so i mite change it later on but...for now.....yea.....anywayz so...the beginning is boring...i kno i kno...it'll get better..i hope
~it is 9:30 a.m. in the Division…Jinny and Magda are sitting at their desks going through some old paper work~ Captain Kate Mcafferty opened the door to her office, “Exstead, Ramirez” she said “my office.” Jin and Mag walked into her office as she shut the door behind them. Captain shuffled through a few papers to find the folder she was looking for. She then pulled it out and said, “15 year old Brittany Gold was raped last night…” Jinny squinted a little bit “15?” she asked. Captain nodded and gave her a folder. “Brittany’s in San Francisco Memorial Hospital as of now, go over there as soon as possible.” Mag combed her fingers through her hair and nodded as she and Jinny walked out of the office. Nate and a***4 months pregnant*** CD walked into the division. They had been working on a homicide case for the past few days. They had narrowed the case down to two suspects and were debating who they thought was behind the drugs. “Look, Nate…Mark may seem like a nice guy but you’ve seen his records…” CD said as she flipped through a few papers. “Rape, drug abuse, shoplifting…this guy is far from clean.” “CD, that was years ago. He’s 45 years old now! He’s has a wife and kids…it just doesn’t seem logical for him to mess all that up now.” Kate walked by while Nate was speaking. She turned around, “You’re not saying 45’s old are you…” she asked. “Oh, um of course not I was just um…” he scratched his head. Kate grinned a little. “That’s what I thought…anyway…what have you narrowed this case down to?” “well, we got Mark Bolton, 45 year old husband and father of two, and Tony Jackson 23 year old male.” answered CD. “Okay…tell me about these two..” Kate said. Nate flipped open a folder. “Well in the past 30 years, he’s been charged with rape, drug abuse, and shoplifting. Tony has been known for violent tantrums and for abusing his ex girlfriend…that’s about all we have.” he closes the folder. “All three witnesses were able to identify these two men so we know it must be one of em…we’re heading over to Tony’s place in a few.” CD added. Captain nodded and walked away. ***meanwhile Jinny and Magda reached the hospital. They had just entered Brittany’s room*** “Hi…” Jinny began “I’m Inspector Exstead and this is Inspector Ramirez” both of them showed the girl their badges. “Can I help you…” Brittany said quietly. “You can start by telling us what happened to you..” Magda said. Brittany shook her head. “I uh…don’t wanna say.” she paused “do if you could just go…” Mag glanced over at Jin and than back to the girl. “We can’t help you if you’re not going to tell us anything Brittany.” Brittany shivered a little bit. speaking incredibly slowly she said... “Well…my mom and dad got divorced a few years ago so my mom’s been dating for a while now. She had two boyfriends though. Neither of them knew that she was dating two men at once. My mom wanted it to stay that way but, somehow, I don’t really know, but they found out about each other and were really mad…" she paused "It was the middle of the night when I heard a pounding at the door.” her eyes started to get teary. “They both started yelling at her and…and…the next thing I knew my mom ran out of the house and slammed the door, leaving me all alone.” “Wait…your mom just left you there?” asked Jinny-kind of shocked. Brittany nodded. Reluctantly, the girl continued “I hid under my covers to try to block out all the yelling and all…but it didn’t work…I heard the door slam and I had thought they both finally left. I was wrong. only one was gone....it was pitch black when a-” a tear rolled down her cheek. “d…dark figure came into my room…I had no idea who it was…” she paused “he mumbled something like ’this wasn’t exactly how I planned it but it’ll hafta do.’ Than he…he hit me…so hard that it knocked me out” she moved her hair to show a large scar on the left side of her face. “ I…I don’t remember much after that…all I remember is waking up here…in a hospital bed…my mom must have taken me here when she found me.” Brittany wiped the tears away from her eyes. Magda and Jinny looked shocked. “Do you know the names of your mom’s two boyfriends?” She nodded. “Vinny Varano and Joe…Joe um…Wagner” Jinny’s eyes widened… Joe Wagner is the guy who raped jinny...they just never said his last name so i hadta make it up |
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHH ADD MORE !!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE!
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thanks for all the replies
heres a little more....it aint much and its not all that xciting but...here ya go....i'll add more later if i get a chance** CD and Nate had reached Tony Jackson’s house.** “Look-” Tony said. “I dunno what you coppers are talkin ‘bout. I didn’t kill Julie or whatever her name was. I didn’t even know the girl.” “Okay well we have three witnesses who all identified you being near the scene of the crime on Wednesday night.” Nate answered. “All did on Wednesday night was go to the bank, okay?“ he said. “Would that happen to be the bank across from Rural Street?” CD asked. “Yea” Tony answered starting to get frustrated. “If you don’t believe me, go look at the videotape from the bank…I mean I mighta been near the scene of the crime but I didn’t kill no one…” “When you left the bank, did you see anything?” CD paused “like a dead body…” she said getting annoyed with Tony. “I don’t care if you arrest me for this one but-” he hesitated. “ I was too drunk to even see my own hand clearly, none the less see a body on the road…so you just go head and arrest me for DWI…I don’t even care…all I know is I didn’t kill that girl.” “Thanks for your help” CD said in an annoyed and rude tone. “We’ll be in touch.” Nate added. |
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MORE SISTAH!!! NO DITCHIN THIS FIC!
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k im so sry im postin in such small sections!!! i just havent had much time to write....
i'll post some more tomorrow or sumthin...sry**Jinny and Magda left the hospital and were in the car…Jinny had barely said a word ever since Brittany said the name “Joe Wagner”. Mag didn‘t realize who Joe was…yet** “Jin…” Mag began. Jinny didn’t respond. “Jin…” Mag said a little louder. Still no response. “Jin!” she practically yelled. Jinny turned around. “What?!” she asked annoyed. “What’s wrong with you-huh?” Mag answered. Jin shook her head- “Nothin” Mag gave her a ‘yea right’ look, and said “Oh please…it’s obviously something.” Jin hesitated, but finally said “One of her mom’s boyfriends name was Joe Wagner…sound familiar?” Magda shook her head. “No, not really.” “Think about it Mag…” After about two minutes Magda figured out who Joe was. “Oh my G-d Jinny…is this the same Joe that” she paused and lowered her voice “raped you last year?” “Bulls eye..” answered Jinny. Mag put her hand on her head..“Are you gonna be aright doing this case?” she paused “I mean, when we bring him in and all…” “Guess I’ll have to be now won’t I.” Jinny answered |
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defying gravity
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thanks for all the replies guyzzz
heres some more...**Jinny and Magda had Vinny and Joe come into the station to be questioned…they had talked to Vinny first and he seemed innocent but they weren’t sure of anything yet…** “You guys wanna see Joe now?” Raina asked Jin and Mag. Mag glanced over at Jinny, “Um…yea sure.” she answered. Raina nodded and walked out of the room to get Joe. “I’ll do all the talkin’ if you want Jin-” Mag said Jinny shook her head. “Don’t bother.” Just then Joe walked in the room and sat down. He looked at Jinny as if he knew her from somewhere but couldn’t remember where… “Aright Joe, listen up…“ Magda began “you were one of Mariah Gold’s boyfriends, right?” Joe nodded his head “Yea, what’s it to ya?” “What was your reaction when you realized she was cheating on you..? Did you want revenge?” Mag asked. Joe shrugged. “Nah, I mean sure I was mad but I wasn’t actually gonna do anything ‘bout it.” “Okay, so then raping your girlfriend’s daughter for revenge would be out of the question right?” Jin said rudely and sarcastically. He scratched his head, “You actually believe that girl was raped? More like she raped me…” Mag and Jin’s eyes widened. “What do you mean by that?” Jin asked “I had some stuff at Mariah’s house you know? Since I was there so much I mean…anyway considering that it was over between us, I figured I’d get all my stuff and go.” he paused “So I go upstairs and Brianna, no wait…Brittany, yea that was her name, well she was sitten in her bedroom, where all my stuff was, practically waiting for me“ he paused again “I’m leanin down to get my stuff and all of a sudden this girl just started getting at it with me! I mean I tried to get her to stop and all but she just kept goin…” “You expect us to believe a 15 year old forced you to have sex with her?” Mag said in disbelief. “Believe whatever you want, all I know is that the only way to get her off-a me was to push her off the bed…she gotta pretty nasty bruise on her face from that one.” “Give me a break…you raped that girl and we’re gonna do everything we can to prove it.” Jinny said sharply. Joe squinted “Hey, I remember you now…” Joe began “you were that slut over at the bar last year…yea…I remember now.” Magda practically jumped up out of her chair and immediately grabbed Joe by the collar and put his face just above the table-top. “Listen to me, call her a slut again, I’ll break you’re nose. Got it?” she said firmly. “Aye! Get off!” Joe answered trying to get away. “do you understand?!” Magda raised her voice. “Yea, I got it aright?!” Mag let go and sat back down as Joe was fixing his collar. “We’re keeping you in custody for statutory rape by the way.” “What?!” he asked shocked. “The girl forced me into it!” Mag rolled her eyes, “whatever…” “This is nuts!! You’re both crazy! Ya hear me?!…” his voice started to fade out in Jinny’s mind. She just sat there thinking about what had happened with him…she tried to block it out but it was all so clear and fresh in her mind now… btw-mariah's brittanys mom...yea u prob figurd that out but ooo well |
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