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TeddyisMINE!!!! · 05-03-2002, 12:02 PM

Here is a preview of a fic I might write,tell me what u think.......................

Kate was fixing herself a cup of coffee when a girl about 17 or 18 walked into the division. "Can I help you?"

"Uh,maybe, Are you Jinny Exstead?" The girl replied. She was a tall girl ,with shoulder length black hair,and green eyes.She looked quite a bit Like Jinny,only about 5 months pregnant.

"No,I'm not...."

"Is this where she works?" The girl was obviously very nervous.

"Yes it is,she's not working today though,can I take a message?"

"Uh....can I ask who you are?"

"I'm her captain"
"Uh....Just tell her: Kaitlyn Harris came by to see her........Tell my birth name was Elizabeth Marie.....Exstead." She ran her fingers through her hair ,just like Jinny does.

Kate looked at her in almost shock,She looked so much like Jinny it was scarey. "Will do."

"Uh....will she be in tomarrow?"

"Yes she will."

"Tell her I'll come back tomarrow,too" with that Kaitlyn walked out,not giving Kate a chance to reply.
"That was weird" Kate thought,as she headed for her office.
Then she stopped dead in her tracks." Was that........no,it couldn't be.........but what if.."

want me 2 go on?

mininancy · 05-03-2002, 04:46 PM

omg, that is really good. Post more soon.

Swimfan85 · 05-03-2002, 05:35 PM

DUDE

I WANT YOU TO GO ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-31-2002, 11:36 AM

That's so awesome! Keep it up!

Iliveforjayandnancy · 08-25-2002, 01:43 AM

YES YES YES I hope it's her daughter lol but then again, that would mean Jinny would have had her as a teenager. And I don't know if that's the kind of fan fic I would right, but that's just my opinion. Right what you like and don't let me stop you! Go girl!

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 08-25-2002, 08:30 AM

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Originally posted by Iliveforjayandnancy
YES YES YES I hope it's her daughter lol but then again, that would mean Jinny would have had her as a teenager. And I don't know if that's the kind of fan fic I would right, but that's just my opinion. Right what you like and don't let me stop you! Go girl!

lol. Actualy I have already stated on it,it is under a different thread. i couldn't think of a title,so......
if ya wanna read what I added to it ,just scroll down, and u'll see it. It's down near the bottom of the page.

i haven't worked on it in a loooong time, I kinda forgot about it lol.
I dunno if i'm gonna finish it or not, cause I got another idea,and it's kinda similar to that.

BonniesLilCutiePie · 08-25-2002, 02:22 PM

I know what the idea is! I helped!

05-03-2002, 12:02 PM	#1
TeddyisMINE!!!! Crazed Nancy Fan!!!! Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 03, 2002 Location: Tennessee Posts: 496	Fan-fic preview........ Here is a preview of a fic I might write,tell me what u think....................... Kate was fixing herself a cup of coffee when a girl about 17 or 18 walked into the division. "Can I help you?" "Uh,maybe, Are you Jinny Exstead?" The girl replied. She was a tall girl ,with shoulder length black hair,and green eyes.She looked quite a bit Like Jinny,only about 5 months pregnant. "No,I'm not...." "Is this where she works?" The girl was obviously very nervous. "Yes it is,she's not working today though,can I take a message?" "Uh....can I ask who you are?" "I'm her captain" "Uh....Just tell her: Kaitlyn Harris came by to see her........Tell my birth name was Elizabeth Marie.....Exstead." She ran her fingers through her hair ,just like Jinny does. Kate looked at her in almost shock,She looked so much like Jinny it was scarey. "Will do." "Uh....will she be in tomarrow?" "Yes she will." "Tell her I'll come back tomarrow,too" with that Kaitlyn walked out,not giving Kate a chance to reply. "That was weird" Kate thought,as she headed for her office. Then she stopped dead in her tracks." Was that........no,it couldn't be.........but what if.." want me 2 go on?
	__________________ "Don't cry because it's gone,SMILE because it happened." "I've discovered that the hardest discovery to make is who you are."-Bonnie Bedelia "You're born,ya move on,ya die,thats life."-Jo's philosophy on life. Kate: You think I'm like 80,don't cha Jinny? Jinny:No...not... 80 (I love the way she said that) "Look Buddy! I got pMS,and I got a gun! Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead. "It's not reaching your dreams that counts. It's going towards them." Cher. ~Emma~ P.S. TEDDY IS MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

05-03-2002, 04:46 PM	#2
mininancy Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Mar 11, 2002 Location: Damascus, Md Posts: 90	omg, that is really good. Post more soon.
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07-31-2002, 11:36 AM	#4
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	That's so awesome! Keep it up!
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08-25-2002, 01:43 AM	#5
Iliveforjayandnancy <3 Jinny/Teddy <3 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 26, 2002 Location: New Bedford, Massachusetts 02740 Posts: 353	Umm let me think about that one?? YES YES YES I hope it's her daughter lol but then again, that would mean Jinny would have had her as a teenager. And I don't know if that's the kind of fan fic I would right, but that's just my opinion. Right what you like and don't let me stop you! Go girl!
	__________________ A Few Good Quotes: Jo:A clock! I need a clock! Mrs. G, I'm takin' your egg timer! A fuse, I need a fuse! Now I gotta go mix up some stuff in the science lab! Mrs G:Jo what are you making, a bomb? (laughs) Nat: Yes, Yes! Mrs G: WHAT?! Jo: I'm gonna roll it through there front door then POW! Dead kawasaki's all over the place!-Facts of Life Jo: Oh I think it's a good idea. Just think of me as one of the guys. Natalie's brother.-Facts of Life "Being alone with my thoughts can be dangerous."-Me "I'll lose but I won't quit."-Me "The heart is an amazing thing. Unlike anything else, once it's broken it can't be fixed."-Me "Men. Can't live with em, and can't live with em." (that's not a typo)-Me "Always be yourself. No matter what. At least if you're hated, you're hated for what you are. Not for what you're not."-Me <<<< MY FAVORITE QUOTE http://www.geocities.com/queencolorguard/AllAboutTHEM.html ^^^^My Cheesy Webpage http://hometown.aol.com/queencolorguard/ ^^^^My Cheesy Homepage <marquee> Jinny and Teddy the best couple on the small screen! </marquee> ^^BIG TIME THANKS TO JEANIE! Iliveforjayandnancy A.K.A. Angie

05-03-2002, 05:35 PM	#3
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	DUDE I WANT YOU TO GO ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

08-25-2002, 02:22 PM	#7
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	I know what the idea is! I helped!