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Swimfan85 · 04-20-2002, 09:33 PM

Ok this is an idea that Emma (TeddyIsMine) gave to me because in the mist of doing all my boring papers and hwk I could not think straight......basically a Jinny and Theodore story later on...hehe i have about more then 5 pages so far written

The loud banging on her door and constant yell of "Jinny....Jinny Girl" woke Jinny Exstead up. She slowly moved and wiped the sleep out of her eyes.

Jinny: Yah dad, I heard you *mumbles* the first hundred bangs on the door

John Sr: Hey Jinny Girl, you might want to look at the forecast it seems like we are going to have heavy showers tonight

Jinny: uhuh thanks...

About a half hour later Jinny came downstairs to wiff the smell of burnt eggs in the air. Jinny had to laugh to herself because of her fathers attempts at trying to cook something that was actually edible

Jinny: *looks at the two burnt eggs on her plate* Wow dad impressive, but because I am running late so I think I will have to pass on the eggs

John Sr: What does a man have to do around here to have his daughter sit and eat with him?

Jinny: Not burn eggs....Dad I love you, but I honestly have to go, you can try and make dinner or be safe and order a pizza for dinner. I will see you tonight

John Sr: Okay, bye Jinny Girl see you tonight

**At the Division**

Jinny sits at her desk and a couple minuets later sees Magda coming in with Starbucks coffee and she gives on to Nate and CD

C.D.: Thanks Magda, I didn’t realize we were getting the good stuff today

Nate: Thanks

Magda: Your Welcome, I was dropping off Ben at his school and the new Starbucks had opened and I wanted to try it, so do not think that this is an every day occurrence.

Jinny: Hey Mag, where’s mine?

Magda: Jinny… a little patience please, you’ll get yours

Jinny: O yes, mommy

Magda: So, what do we have on our case today?

Jinny: A child abuse one- George Bennet, 43, accused of beating his step-son regularly and hitting with different objects. Not only is there physical abuse, but seems like there is mental abuse as well. The son, Garret is 14 and has a case of mental retardation and when he does something “wrong” or not perfect George gets a little angry and beats him. The Mother is in complete denial and the reports came from the older brother, 17, Matthew. Matthew walked in on George beating Garret one night and although George threatened him, he reported what he witnessed. There are bruise marks on Garret but both of the parents claim that Garret has a tendency to bruise easily and to make things more complicated it was written down by a doctor too...but get this George has a past of violence and had to take anger management classes after a small incident 6 years ago

Magda: I always hate child abuse cases, who do these parents, think they are for doing that?

Jinny: I don’t know Mag; there are just some really sick people in this world

*Just then Captain McCafferty stepped out of her office*

Captain: Exstead, Ramirez… my office
___________

because i have lots more written i will add more if you like, but trust me its get much more interesting well...it will and teddy dearest may have a role

*Marilyn Monroe* · 04-20-2002, 09:41 PM

oooh add more! glad it becomes a Jinny/Teddy story, too! lol

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 04-20-2002, 10:07 PM

This is REALLY,REALLY good so far,keep up the good work!!

5 pages all ready! Jeez I thought I could really get on a roll sometimes!!
I've got a fic, That I've been working on for a while(A long while,since last season finale infact) that is now 9 pages long.
I started on it last season,and got stuck, I finally just rewrote the whole thing,got on a roll,and did 3 pages in about 30 minutes.

ok I rambleing again,sorry

Swimfan85 · 04-20-2002, 10:19 PM

here is just a little more:

*Inside of Captains office*

Captain: So where do you think you guys are going to go with this case?

Jinny: Talk to the mother, she will be most likely to crack first

Captain: The thing is, she claims to have no idea of what is going on with her husband and believes that her son maybe just doing this to get some attention, is that really the best approach with this case?

Jinny: All I am saying is that—

Captain: I know what you are trying to say but it does not seem like the route to go

Jinny: What if she is withholding information, and she knows something more, but may have been threatened to keep her mouth shut

Captain: mmm uhuh, well Magda what do you think?

Magda: Possibly talk to the oldest son again and then ask a couple questions to Garret. Even though he has issues, he would not be completely obvious to what was happening. Then bring the step-father down here, but I agree with Jinny, at some point in time try and crack the mother and see if she was every abused as well

Captain: Sounds good, well get to it.

**They leave the office**

Magda: So what does the address say?

Jinny: It says 26 Mahoney Ave.

Magda: I have no idea where that is, how about you?

Jinny: O yah, my first high school b/f lived in that neighborhood, I was a freshman, and he was a senior and quite a good body if I do say so I…and I would know from pervious experience with him too.

Magda: JINNY!

Jinny: But actually, we won’t need to go to the house right away because it is still early in the morning and Matthew would be in school still. So I figure we swing by the school and talk to him.

Magda: Good Point, what high school did you go to again?

Jinny: Joseph Patrick Kennedy High School never thought I would have to see that place again, I wonder if they named the detention center after me yet?

Magda: *laughs* Oh gezze Jinny, come on let’s go

**In the Car**

Magda: So are you ready to relive your high school days?

Jinny: Mag- those were the years of my life I choose to forget, and possibly the reasons why I never attended any of the reunions which reminds me I have to decline one when I get home

Magda: You know, you should really go to one, just too see what it is like and see how everyone turned out, it can be quite amusing

Jinny: O yah sounds like barrels of fun, well we are here…

*In the Principles office*
Magda: *to secretary* Hi, I am Inspector Ramirez and this is my partner Inspector Exstead we would like to speak to the principal

Secretary: Please have a seat, I believe she is just getting out of a meeting let me go find her for you. This should only take a moment

Jinny: Oh wow, this place looks all too familiar

Magda: *mock voice* Jinny Exstead…do you mean you actually spent time in here?

Jinny: Well I wouldn’t, if you were with me

Magda: Jinny shut up

**A couple minuets later**

Secretary: Inspectors, this is the schools principal, Dr. McIntosh

Magda: Inspectors Ramirez and Inspector Exstead

Dr. McIntosh: Nice to meet you, Inspector Exstead do you have any relatives that attending here, the name seems very familiar…

Jinny: Yes, I did, as well as my brothers John and Casey

Dr. McIntosh: Well how about that, after make enough trouble you decided to fight crime, well good for you

Jinny: Yah, well anyways we are here to speak to one of your students, Matthew Hershaw, he is not in type of trouble, and we just have a few questions for him

Dr. McIntosh: O sure, I will get him promptly

Magda: Oooo please Jin, do tell what kind of trouble you got into…besides with boys…

Jinny: It was nothing just some juvenile things

**Just then Matthew enters with the principal, Jinny sighs because she doesn’t have to get into anything about her childhood, that she knows Magda could blackmail her with**

Dr. McIntosh: Well Inspectors if there is anything I could do please say so

Magda: if it’s not too much trouble, could we have a privet room

Dr. McIntosh: Sure, right this way *leads them into a small office*

Jinny: Well Matthew, we just want to go over some things in your statement and not to worry you are not in any sort of trouble, we are just at a tough position

Matt: Yah, sure good ahead

Jinny: Did you see your step-dad directly hitting your brother in anger?

Matt: Yah, I jumped on top of him to get him off of Garret

Jinny: has this been a more then of a one time occurrence?

Matt: I think so, I mean I walked in on that one time, and I talked to Garret after and he showed me a bunch of bruises he had on his back and he told me that they were from George

Magda: Has there been more, like verbal abuse?

Matt: Yah, often times when my mother is not around he calls him names like ****** and idiot…

Jinny: Thank you, you have clarified everything we will be in contact and I advise you to not let George be alone with your brother

Matt: Thank you inspectors, but please try and hurry for my brothers sake

-----------------------------------------------------

i will try and write more tonight

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 04-20-2002, 11:35 PM

Is this a great fan fic? I think so! Can't wait for more!

*Marilyn Monroe* · 04-21-2002, 12:38 AM

Please post more! This is awesome!

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 04-21-2002, 10:08 AM

POST MORE!!

Ewan's My Man · 04-21-2002, 11:15 AM

This is REALLY good. Post more soon!!!

Esperanza · 04-21-2002, 12:56 PM

This is great! Post more!

Swimfan85 · 04-21-2002, 06:01 PM

wow...i didnt expect anyone to reply cuz its not very interesting, i have some break in between my math project and other stuff i am going to do, so here is a little more that I wrote last night

**Back at the Division**

Jinny and Magda spend the rest of the afternoon working on the case, thinking of anyways they could get the father in on the evidence they have. They also plan out a tactic on how to get the mother to crack and say everything she knows. They filled in Captain on everything that was going on in their case, and tomorrow she would give them the green light to talk to Garret. By the time their shift is over, the rain is coming down very hard and at certain moments almost down pouring.

Jinny: Okay, if we are done for the day I say that we should be heading out to our families

Magda: Jinny, I will be calling you later on this evening about wedding plans, so do not be tying up the phone lines

Jinny: Oh right, because I will be calling my numerous boyfriends and talking all night with them…

Magda: Jin- you know what I am talking about though, and stopping making jokes, its going to be one of the biggest days of my life and I want it to be magical

Jinny: *laughing*

Magda: You know what? Forget it Jin *lightly hits her* I will get captain to be my maid of honor

Jinny: What a shame, you know how much I wanted to wear that dress too

Magda: STOP! *trying not to crack a smile* you know what, you are hopeless

Because the weather Jinny is taking a different route home, but the visibility has getting lower and lower as she gets further and further away from the Division. More then once she has had to make a quick turn. She is going a little too fast when she realiezed a car in front of her was stalled, she slammed on her breaks trying to stop, but because of the weather conditions her car spins out of control and into a large pole on the side of the highway. Her head slams against the window, and then slams down onto the steering wheel. She becomes unconscious and has a deep cut into her forehead.

**A couple hours later**

Magda: Hello John, is Jinny there? She is not picking up on her cell phone

John Sr: Hello Magda, I was beginning to worry about her because she has not arrived home from work yet, and she would have told me if she was going to be later

Magda: She is most likely stalled in traffic, but if she does not arrive home anytime soon please call me, thank you.

**Back to jinny**

Some very kind young man who is appeared to be in his late 50's or so, had pulled over to the side of the road and called 911 on his cell phone. The ambulence comes a short while later and at this point Jinny's face is covered somewhat with blood. She is taken to the St. Benedicts Hospital where she is identified as Jinny Exstead around 8:30 pm John Sr. Exstead gets a very distrubing call

John Sr.: Yes, hello, Jinny is my daughter......what the he_x_ (get it he double hockey sticks?) mean she was an accident? Yes, thank you I will be down there in a minuet

John Sr.'s next reaction was to go through the phone book and call Magda and to let her know what happened.

Magda: Hello Magda speaking how may I help you?

John Sr.: Hey Magda there has been accident, and Jinny was involved, she is know at the St. Benedicts Hospital

Magda: *on the verge of crying* Thanks John, I will be right there

Ben: Mommy what is wrong?

Magda: I have to go to the hospital to see a friend, I am going to drop you off at your grandmothers house because Gabe is out of town

**About a half hour later Magda arrives to the hospital and she sees John Sr. and ask any news..**

John: Doctors say she is in surgury, but she lost a great deal of blood and how her brain will be effected only time will tell...

Magda: O wow, I think I should call Captain and the others

John: Yah, Casey and John will be here as soon as their shifts are over

Magda: *on phone* Hey Capt, theres been an accident..

*Marilyn Monroe* · 04-21-2002, 06:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
Some very kind young man who is appeared to be in his late 50's or so,

lol what do you qualify as young and old??

anyways...post more soon! It's really good so far!

KerriBerri687 · 04-21-2002, 06:54 PM

aaaah keightee im sry i took soooo long to respond....so....i'll make this response xtra long

THIS IS REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY GRRRRRR8!!!!!!!!!!!!

i loooooove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor lil jin

AHHH post more soooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Swimfan85 · 04-21-2002, 07:29 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by NancyMcKeon1987

lol what do you qualify as young and old?? anyways...post more soon! It's really good so far!

welll i was going make him in the 30s and be all cute but then i decided against that sooo well theres another guy

Jo/Blair_fan · 04-21-2002, 08:12 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Blair n' Jo Rock
aaaah keightee im sry i took soooo long to respond....so....i'll make this response xtra long

THIS IS REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY GRRRRRR8!!!!!!!!!!!!

i loooooove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor lil jin AHHH post more soooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ditto

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 04-22-2002, 12:49 PM

POST MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!

04-20-2002, 09:33 PM	#1
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	How the day turns Ok this is an idea that Emma (TeddyIsMine) gave to me because in the mist of doing all my boring papers and hwk I could not think straight......basically a Jinny and Theodore story later on...hehe i have about more then 5 pages so far written The loud banging on her door and constant yell of "Jinny....Jinny Girl" woke Jinny Exstead up. She slowly moved and wiped the sleep out of her eyes. Jinny: Yah dad, I heard you mumbles the first hundred bangs on the door John Sr: Hey Jinny Girl, you might want to look at the forecast it seems like we are going to have heavy showers tonight Jinny: uhuh thanks... About a half hour later Jinny came downstairs to wiff the smell of burnt eggs in the air. Jinny had to laugh to herself because of her fathers attempts at trying to cook something that was actually edible Jinny: looks at the two burnt eggs on her plate Wow dad impressive, but because I am running late so I think I will have to pass on the eggs John Sr: What does a man have to do around here to have his daughter sit and eat with him? Jinny: Not burn eggs....Dad I love you, but I honestly have to go, you can try and make dinner or be safe and order a pizza for dinner. I will see you tonight John Sr: Okay, bye Jinny Girl see you tonight At the Division Jinny sits at her desk and a couple minuets later sees Magda coming in with Starbucks coffee and she gives on to Nate and CD C.D.: Thanks Magda, I didn’t realize we were getting the good stuff today Nate: Thanks Magda: Your Welcome, I was dropping off Ben at his school and the new Starbucks had opened and I wanted to try it, so do not think that this is an every day occurrence. Jinny: Hey Mag, where’s mine? Magda: Jinny… a little patience please, you’ll get yours Jinny: O yes, mommy Magda: So, what do we have on our case today? Jinny: A child abuse one- George Bennet, 43, accused of beating his step-son regularly and hitting with different objects. Not only is there physical abuse, but seems like there is mental abuse as well. The son, Garret is 14 and has a case of mental retardation and when he does something “wrong” or not perfect George gets a little angry and beats him. The Mother is in complete denial and the reports came from the older brother, 17, Matthew. Matthew walked in on George beating Garret one night and although George threatened him, he reported what he witnessed. There are bruise marks on Garret but both of the parents claim that Garret has a tendency to bruise easily and to make things more complicated it was written down by a doctor too...but get this George has a past of violence and had to take anger management classes after a small incident 6 years ago Magda: I always hate child abuse cases, who do these parents, think they are for doing that? Jinny: I don’t know Mag; there are just some really sick people in this world Just then Captain McCafferty stepped out of her office Captain: Exstead, Ramirez… my office ___________ because i have lots more written i will add more if you like, but trust me its get much more interesting well...it will and teddy dearest may have a role

04-20-2002, 09:41 PM	#2
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04-20-2002, 10:07 PM	#3
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04-20-2002, 11:35 PM	#5
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04-21-2002, 11:15 AM	#8
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04-20-2002, 10:19 PM	#4
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	here is just a little more: Inside of Captains office Captain: So where do you think you guys are going to go with this case? Jinny: Talk to the mother, she will be most likely to crack first Captain: The thing is, she claims to have no idea of what is going on with her husband and believes that her son maybe just doing this to get some attention, is that really the best approach with this case? Jinny: All I am saying is that— Captain: I know what you are trying to say but it does not seem like the route to go Jinny: What if she is withholding information, and she knows something more, but may have been threatened to keep her mouth shut Captain: mmm uhuh, well Magda what do you think? Magda: Possibly talk to the oldest son again and then ask a couple questions to Garret. Even though he has issues, he would not be completely obvious to what was happening. Then bring the step-father down here, but I agree with Jinny, at some point in time try and crack the mother and see if she was every abused as well Captain: Sounds good, well get to it. They leave the office Magda: So what does the address say? Jinny: It says 26 Mahoney Ave. Magda: I have no idea where that is, how about you? Jinny: O yah, my first high school b/f lived in that neighborhood, I was a freshman, and he was a senior and quite a good body if I do say so I…and I would know from pervious experience with him too. Magda: JINNY! Jinny: But actually, we won’t need to go to the house right away because it is still early in the morning and Matthew would be in school still. So I figure we swing by the school and talk to him. Magda: Good Point, what high school did you go to again? Jinny: Joseph Patrick Kennedy High School never thought I would have to see that place again, I wonder if they named the detention center after me yet? Magda: laughs Oh gezze Jinny, come on let’s go In the Car Magda: So are you ready to relive your high school days? Jinny: Mag- those were the years of my life I choose to forget, and possibly the reasons why I never attended any of the reunions which reminds me I have to decline one when I get home Magda: You know, you should really go to one, just too see what it is like and see how everyone turned out, it can be quite amusing Jinny: O yah sounds like barrels of fun, well we are here… In the Principles office Magda: to secretary Hi, I am Inspector Ramirez and this is my partner Inspector Exstead we would like to speak to the principal Secretary: Please have a seat, I believe she is just getting out of a meeting let me go find her for you. This should only take a moment Jinny: Oh wow, this place looks all too familiar Magda: mock voice Jinny Exstead…do you mean you actually spent time in here? Jinny: Well I wouldn’t, if you were with me Magda: Jinny shut up A couple minuets later Secretary: Inspectors, this is the schools principal, Dr. McIntosh Magda: Inspectors Ramirez and Inspector Exstead Dr. McIntosh: Nice to meet you, Inspector Exstead do you have any relatives that attending here, the name seems very familiar… Jinny: Yes, I did, as well as my brothers John and Casey Dr. McIntosh: Well how about that, after make enough trouble you decided to fight crime, well good for you Jinny: Yah, well anyways we are here to speak to one of your students, Matthew Hershaw, he is not in type of trouble, and we just have a few questions for him Dr. McIntosh: O sure, I will get him promptly Magda: Oooo please Jin, do tell what kind of trouble you got into…besides with boys… Jinny: It was nothing just some juvenile things Just then Matthew enters with the principal, Jinny sighs because she doesn’t have to get into anything about her childhood, that she knows Magda could blackmail her with Dr. McIntosh: Well Inspectors if there is anything I could do please say so Magda: if it’s not too much trouble, could we have a privet room Dr. McIntosh: Sure, right this way leads them into a small office Jinny: Well Matthew, we just want to go over some things in your statement and not to worry you are not in any sort of trouble, we are just at a tough position Matt: Yah, sure good ahead Jinny: Did you see your step-dad directly hitting your brother in anger? Matt: Yah, I jumped on top of him to get him off of Garret Jinny: has this been a more then of a one time occurrence? Matt: I think so, I mean I walked in on that one time, and I talked to Garret after and he showed me a bunch of bruises he had on his back and he told me that they were from George Magda: Has there been more, like verbal abuse? Matt: Yah, often times when my mother is not around he calls him names like ****** and idiot… Jinny: Thank you, you have clarified everything we will be in contact and I advise you to not let George be alone with your brother Matt: Thank you inspectors, but please try and hurry for my brothers sake ----------------------------------------------------- i will try and write more tonight

04-21-2002, 12:38 AM	#6
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04-21-2002, 10:08 AM	#7
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04-21-2002, 12:56 PM	#9
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04-21-2002, 06:01 PM	#10
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	wow...i didnt expect anyone to reply cuz its not very interesting, i have some break in between my math project and other stuff i am going to do, so here is a little more that I wrote last night Back at the Division Jinny and Magda spend the rest of the afternoon working on the case, thinking of anyways they could get the father in on the evidence they have. They also plan out a tactic on how to get the mother to crack and say everything she knows. They filled in Captain on everything that was going on in their case, and tomorrow she would give them the green light to talk to Garret. By the time their shift is over, the rain is coming down very hard and at certain moments almost down pouring. Jinny: Okay, if we are done for the day I say that we should be heading out to our families Magda: Jinny, I will be calling you later on this evening about wedding plans, so do not be tying up the phone lines Jinny: Oh right, because I will be calling my numerous boyfriends and talking all night with them… Magda: Jin- you know what I am talking about though, and stopping making jokes, its going to be one of the biggest days of my life and I want it to be magical Jinny: laughing Magda: You know what? Forget it Jin lightly hits her I will get captain to be my maid of honor Jinny: What a shame, you know how much I wanted to wear that dress too Magda: STOP! trying not to crack a smile you know what, you are hopeless Because the weather Jinny is taking a different route home, but the visibility has getting lower and lower as she gets further and further away from the Division. More then once she has had to make a quick turn. She is going a little too fast when she realiezed a car in front of her was stalled, she slammed on her breaks trying to stop, but because of the weather conditions her car spins out of control and into a large pole on the side of the highway. Her head slams against the window, and then slams down onto the steering wheel. She becomes unconscious and has a deep cut into her forehead. A couple hours later Magda: Hello John, is Jinny there? She is not picking up on her cell phone John Sr: Hello Magda, I was beginning to worry about her because she has not arrived home from work yet, and she would have told me if she was going to be later Magda: She is most likely stalled in traffic, but if she does not arrive home anytime soon please call me, thank you. Back to jinny Some very kind young man who is appeared to be in his late 50's or so, had pulled over to the side of the road and called 911 on his cell phone. The ambulence comes a short while later and at this point Jinny's face is covered somewhat with blood. She is taken to the St. Benedicts Hospital where she is identified as Jinny Exstead around 8:30 pm John Sr. Exstead gets a very distrubing call John Sr.: Yes, hello, Jinny is my daughter......what the he_x_ (get it he double hockey sticks?) mean she was an accident? Yes, thank you I will be down there in a minuet John Sr.'s next reaction was to go through the phone book and call Magda and to let her know what happened. Magda: Hello Magda speaking how may I help you? John Sr.: Hey Magda there has been accident, and Jinny was involved, she is know at the St. Benedicts Hospital Magda: on the verge of crying Thanks John, I will be right there Ben: Mommy what is wrong? Magda: I have to go to the hospital to see a friend, I am going to drop you off at your grandmothers house because Gabe is out of town About a half hour later Magda arrives to the hospital and she sees John Sr. and ask any news.. John: Doctors say she is in surgury, but she lost a great deal of blood and how her brain will be effected only time will tell... Magda: O wow, I think I should call Captain and the others John: Yah, Casey and John will be here as soon as their shifts are over Magda: on phone Hey Capt, theres been an accident..

04-21-2002, 06:54 PM	#12
KerriBerri687 defying gravity Senior Member Join Date: Jan 13, 2001 Location: you'll find me in Emerald City...I'm the green one with the flying monkeys Posts: 2,869	aaaah keightee im sry i took soooo long to respond....so....i'll make this response xtra long THIS IS REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY GRRRRRR8!!!!!!!!!!!! i loooooove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor lil jin AHHH post more soooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
	__________________ *.:[K][E][R][R][ I]:.* So if you care to find me, look to the western sky. As someone told me lately; 'Everyone deserves the chance to fly', and if I'm flying solo, at least I'm flying free. To all those who'd ground me, take a message back from me: Tell them how I'm defying gravity. I'm flying high, defying gravity *insanity is like heaven*

04-22-2002, 12:49 PM	#15
TeddyisMINE!!!! Crazed Nancy Fan!!!! Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 03, 2002 Location: Tennessee Posts: 496	POST MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!