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extead · 04-05-2002, 09:36 PM

Jinny awoke at 7:00 in her room in her dads house. She got out of bed and yanked the first things that came out of her closet and went to the bathroom to shower and get dressed.

Jinny is standing in a steam filled bathroom in her black robe when she spots something taped to the outside of the bathroom window it was a piece of paper with smeared words on it since it had rained the night before. She walked to the window bent down to read and squinted to read the blurred words. It read,
"JINNY EXTEAD WILL BE TAKEN TO DEATH WITH YOUR MOTHER!"

Jinny looked around outside to see nothing, she quickly opened the window pulled off the screen , then walked to her bedroom she grabbed a pair of gloves and went back to the bathroom.
She carefully pulled the paper off the window and put it in a zip-loc bag.
Then glancing around the bathroom to see if anything else had been disturbed she put the screen back on, closed the window, then pulled the shades down
She ran down the stairs to see her father at the stove with the smoke alarm going off and her father pulled the pan off the stove with the flame on it and put it in the sink.
Jinny reached up and shut the smoke alarm off. "Oh good morning Jinny" John Extead said with a smile.
"Mornin" said Jinny with a half smile
"Sorry, I was trying to make a nice breakfast"
"That's okay I'm not all the hungry anyway"
"OOO I'm going to be late" Jinny said looking at her watch

She ran up the steps, into her room grabbed her bag suffed the threat note inside and raced down the steps.

"Buy-bye dad" Jinny said walking out the door

After the door was closed Jinny looked behind the house.

"Hmm no footprints " Jinny said to herself

she was to afraid to be even in her back yard to long.
She went back to the front of the house and opened the garage. She walked in her gun out of its holster in her hand.
Her dad walked in.
"Jinny" He said

Jinny spun around her gun pointed at him

"Jinny its just me" he said
Jinny lowered her gun
"Jinny is something wrong?" he asked
"No uh I just thought I heard something "Jinny lied
"Oh uh" he said uncertainly "We do have a racoon that's been getting in the garage"
"That must be it got to go" Jinny said while walking towards her car

Jinny still had her gun out and by her side as she walked to her car. She looked in the windows before getting in. John gave her a weird look.

~At The Division~

Kate came out of her office
"Wheres Exstead" Kate asked
" Not here yet" Magda replied

Jinny walked in with a look of fear on her face but she tried to hide it. Magda rose from her seat and was about to say something when she was cut off.

"Exstead your late" Kate said
"yeah what else is new?" Jinny shot back
"Jinny is something wrong" Magda asked
"as a matter of fact there is" Jinny said while digging into her bag "Here" she said as she handed the zip-loc bag to Kate
"Where did you find this?" Kate asked

Magda walked up and read over Kates shoulder

"It was on my bathroom window" Jinny said while sitting down and rubbing her forehead and sitting down

"Raina take this down for prints" Kate said
Raina took the paper read it then started walking out

"Exstead Remeriaz my office" Kate said

~ In Kate's Office~

Jinny sat down
Magda stayed standing
" Okay I know what your gonna ask who can I think of that would wanna do this. Have I had any recent arguments with anyone. Maybe make another list even though no on would be in it from the last 146 days!"
Jinny yelled

"Jinny Jinny calm down" Kate said
"I-uh-I-I I'm sorry"
"I know your under stress so we'll pretend it didn't happen" Kate said
"So now what?"
"I think instead of settin officers outside your house we should have you move in with someone a stalker wouldn't expect. You and Magda think about someone"
"Okay" said Jinny as she started walking out
"Jinny call you sponsor oh and your riding a desk job"

Jinny absently nodded and walked out Magda followed her. After they were both seated Magda spoke up
"Jinny you call your sponsor I'll think of someone"
"No I wanna help"
"You can help by calling your sponsor its okay to admit you need to talk to him"
"fine" Jinny said as she started dialing

Magda started dialing and in a low voice so Jinny couldn't hear she started talking to the person on the other line, "Teddy! Magda, yeah I really need to talk to you."

extead · 04-05-2002, 09:46 PM

oh crap i just saw that i registered my nickname wrong its sposed to be exstead.

consentida · 04-05-2002, 09:50 PM

...more...more...more...more

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 04-05-2002, 09:57 PM

This is really good,Keep going!!

td luver · 04-05-2002, 10:27 PM

THE SECOND FANFIC WHERE JIN GETS STALKED.BUT,DON'T KILL HER WHATSOEVER OR I'LL KILL YOU!IT'S GREAT,SO KEEP POSTIN

Swimfan85 · 04-06-2002, 12:12 AM

ADD MORE PLEASE!

aeysh1 · 04-06-2002, 12:15 AM

kj

aeysh1 · 04-06-2002, 12:21 AM

sorry i hit send reply before i typed

extead · 04-06-2002, 12:30 AM

threats?lol

Magda sat at a restaurant looking around finally Teddy walked in
"Hi Teddy" Magda said as she hugged him
"Hey"
They both sat down
"So what did you need to talk to me about?" Teddy asked
"Well it's about Jinny"
"What about her?"
"Well I don't know if you heard this yet but she found a note threatening her life this morning"
"Was it a breakin?"

"No"
"So what do we need to talk about?"
"The captain suggested she stay somewhere undetected….and.."
"Are you suggesting that I…?"
"Teddy will you please let her stay in your apartment?"
"Why mine?"
"Think about the 2 exes do you think a stalker would look there?"
"I can't believe Jinny would even agree with this"
"Well …..I haven't told her yet"

Teddy was about to object but Magda cut him off

"I figured we might have a chance of getting her to go if she hears that you said she can. You and I both know she won't go if you have any obligation!….. Please just think about it"

Teddy sat there in deep thought

"Well if she has a stalker won't he follow her to my building?"
"Oh don't worry about that ….. I've got that covered"
"Well….."
"Teddy will you or not?"
"Uh….. I guess"
"I can't take I guess theres to much at risk you need to know"
"Fine she can stay"
"Thank You"

consentida · 04-06-2002, 01:57 AM

*chants* more...more...more...more...more

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 04-06-2002, 05:05 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by extead
threats?lol

Yeah, threats. lol... If you're going to write fan-fictions around here you best get used to them. You should read some of the ones I've gotten on my fan-fictions. lol... Hell, not to mention Instant Messages. Threats are a way of life for writers on this board. lol

Great start so far, I've enjoyed reading it. Keep on goin'.

I think the 'Jinny has a stalker' fan-fictions are always interesting. haha....Because they're all so different.......And YES...Magda called Theodore.... I'm so a Jin/Teddy fan. (I'm sure no one guessed though..*coughs* MY site's and fan fiction *coughs*

) Yay, Good Teddy allowing her to stay...He knows what's good for him. LOL

aeysh1 · 04-06-2002, 11:08 AM

i've seen some of your threats .lol

extead · 04-06-2002, 11:15 AM

yeah i've seen your threats even yhough i'm not caught up i'm on like page 60

extead · 04-06-2002, 11:59 AM

~ At The Division ~

Jinny sat on her chair rolling it back and forth while talking with Dusty. Just then Magda came in with Teddy.
Jinny immediately stands up
"What's he doing here," Jinny asked
"Well Jinny I found your temporary roommate," Magda replied
"What are you talking about?…no,"
"Dusty, can you, will you…?"
"Don't say another word I'm outta here," Dusty replied
"Come-on Jinny, Teddy, lets find somewhere to talk"

Jinny and Teddy reluctantly followed Magda into one of the witness questioning rooms
"Okay here's the deal, Jinny you stay in Teddy's house" Magda said
Jinny was about to say something but Magda cut her off,
"Who would expect you staying with your ex"
"You dragged Teddy down here to ask him that? You should have asked me first I knew Teddy wouldn't agree to it" Jinny shot back
Teddy cleared his throat
"But he did" Magda said
"What," Jinny asked
"He said you could stay I've already talked to him. He said you could stay…. Jinny people do care" Magda replied
"Jinny, Magda makes a good point who would expect you to be staying with your ex" Teddy said
"And you're okay with this?" Jinny asked him
"Magda convinced me my place would probably be safest" Teddy replied
"I asked are you okay with this Teddy?" Jinny repeated
"Yes" Teddy replied rather forcibly after a long pause

Swimfan85 · 04-06-2002, 12:23 PM

coool!!! add more!!!

04-05-2002, 09:57 PM	#4
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04-06-2002, 12:15 AM	#7
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04-06-2002, 12:21 AM	#8
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04-05-2002, 09:36 PM	#1
extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2002 Posts: 211	stalking love Jinny awoke at 7:00 in her room in her dads house. She got out of bed and yanked the first things that came out of her closet and went to the bathroom to shower and get dressed. Jinny is standing in a steam filled bathroom in her black robe when she spots something taped to the outside of the bathroom window it was a piece of paper with smeared words on it since it had rained the night before. She walked to the window bent down to read and squinted to read the blurred words. It read, "JINNY EXTEAD WILL BE TAKEN TO DEATH WITH YOUR MOTHER!" Jinny looked around outside to see nothing, she quickly opened the window pulled off the screen , then walked to her bedroom she grabbed a pair of gloves and went back to the bathroom. She carefully pulled the paper off the window and put it in a zip-loc bag. Then glancing around the bathroom to see if anything else had been disturbed she put the screen back on, closed the window, then pulled the shades down She ran down the stairs to see her father at the stove with the smoke alarm going off and her father pulled the pan off the stove with the flame on it and put it in the sink. Jinny reached up and shut the smoke alarm off. "Oh good morning Jinny" John Extead said with a smile. "Mornin" said Jinny with a half smile "Sorry, I was trying to make a nice breakfast" "That's okay I'm not all the hungry anyway" "OOO I'm going to be late" Jinny said looking at her watch She ran up the steps, into her room grabbed her bag suffed the threat note inside and raced down the steps. "Buy-bye dad" Jinny said walking out the door After the door was closed Jinny looked behind the house. "Hmm no footprints " Jinny said to herself she was to afraid to be even in her back yard to long. She went back to the front of the house and opened the garage. She walked in her gun out of its holster in her hand. Her dad walked in. "Jinny" He said Jinny spun around her gun pointed at him "Jinny its just me" he said Jinny lowered her gun "Jinny is something wrong?" he asked "No uh I just thought I heard something "Jinny lied "Oh uh" he said uncertainly "We do have a racoon that's been getting in the garage" "That must be it got to go" Jinny said while walking towards her car Jinny still had her gun out and by her side as she walked to her car. She looked in the windows before getting in. John gave her a weird look. ~At The Division~ Kate came out of her office "Wheres Exstead" Kate asked " Not here yet" Magda replied Jinny walked in with a look of fear on her face but she tried to hide it. Magda rose from her seat and was about to say something when she was cut off. "Exstead your late" Kate said "yeah what else is new?" Jinny shot back "Jinny is something wrong" Magda asked "as a matter of fact there is" Jinny said while digging into her bag "Here" she said as she handed the zip-loc bag to Kate "Where did you find this?" Kate asked Magda walked up and read over Kates shoulder "It was on my bathroom window" Jinny said while sitting down and rubbing her forehead and sitting down "Raina take this down for prints" Kate said Raina took the paper read it then started walking out "Exstead Remeriaz my office" Kate said ~ In Kate's Office~ Jinny sat down Magda stayed standing " Okay I know what your gonna ask who can I think of that would wanna do this. Have I had any recent arguments with anyone. Maybe make another list even though no on would be in it from the last 146 days!" Jinny yelled "Jinny Jinny calm down" Kate said "I-uh-I-I I'm sorry" "I know your under stress so we'll pretend it didn't happen" Kate said "So now what?" "I think instead of settin officers outside your house we should have you move in with someone a stalker wouldn't expect. You and Magda think about someone" "Okay" said Jinny as she started walking out "Jinny call you sponsor oh and your riding a desk job" Jinny absently nodded and walked out Magda followed her. After they were both seated Magda spoke up "Jinny you call your sponsor I'll think of someone" "No I wanna help" "You can help by calling your sponsor its okay to admit you need to talk to him" "fine" Jinny said as she started dialing Magda started dialing and in a low voice so Jinny couldn't hear she started talking to the person on the other line, "Teddy! Magda, yeah I really need to talk to you."

04-05-2002, 09:46 PM	#2
extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2002 Posts: 211	oh crap i just saw that i registered my nickname wrong its sposed to be exstead.

04-05-2002, 09:50 PM	#3
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	...more...more...more...more

04-05-2002, 10:27 PM	#5
td luver Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 26, 2002 Location: alabama Posts: 143	THE SECOND FANFIC WHERE JIN GETS STALKED.BUT,DON'T KILL HER WHATSOEVER OR I'LL KILL YOU!IT'S GREAT,SO KEEP POSTIN

04-06-2002, 12:12 AM	#6
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04-06-2002, 12:30 AM	#9
extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2002 Posts: 211	threats?lol Magda sat at a restaurant looking around finally Teddy walked in "Hi Teddy" Magda said as she hugged him "Hey" They both sat down "So what did you need to talk to me about?" Teddy asked "Well it's about Jinny" "What about her?" "Well I don't know if you heard this yet but she found a note threatening her life this morning" "Was it a breakin?" "No" "So what do we need to talk about?" "The captain suggested she stay somewhere undetected….and.." "Are you suggesting that I…?" "Teddy will you please let her stay in your apartment?" "Why mine?" "Think about the 2 exes do you think a stalker would look there?" "I can't believe Jinny would even agree with this" "Well …..I haven't told her yet" Teddy was about to object but Magda cut him off "I figured we might have a chance of getting her to go if she hears that you said she can. You and I both know she won't go if you have any obligation!….. Please just think about it" Teddy sat there in deep thought "Well if she has a stalker won't he follow her to my building?" "Oh don't worry about that ….. I've got that covered" "Well….." "Teddy will you or not?" "Uh….. I guess" "I can't take I guess theres to much at risk you need to know" "Fine she can stay" "Thank You"

04-06-2002, 01:57 AM	#10
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	chants more...more...more...more...more

04-06-2002, 11:08 AM	#12
aeysh1 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Oct 21, 2001 Location: WI,USA Posts: 309	i've seen some of your threats .lol

04-06-2002, 11:15 AM	#13
extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2002 Posts: 211	yeah i've seen your threats even yhough i'm not caught up i'm on like page 60

04-06-2002, 11:59 AM	#14
extead Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 05, 2002 Posts: 211	~ At The Division ~ Jinny sat on her chair rolling it back and forth while talking with Dusty. Just then Magda came in with Teddy. Jinny immediately stands up "What's he doing here," Jinny asked "Well Jinny I found your temporary roommate," Magda replied "What are you talking about?…no," "Dusty, can you, will you…?" "Don't say another word I'm outta here," Dusty replied "Come-on Jinny, Teddy, lets find somewhere to talk" Jinny and Teddy reluctantly followed Magda into one of the witness questioning rooms "Okay here's the deal, Jinny you stay in Teddy's house" Magda said Jinny was about to say something but Magda cut her off, "Who would expect you staying with your ex" "You dragged Teddy down here to ask him that? You should have asked me first I knew Teddy wouldn't agree to it" Jinny shot back Teddy cleared his throat "But he did" Magda said "What," Jinny asked "He said you could stay I've already talked to him. He said you could stay…. Jinny people do care" Magda replied "Jinny, Magda makes a good point who would expect you to be staying with your ex" Teddy said "And you're okay with this?" Jinny asked him "Magda convinced me my place would probably be safest" Teddy replied "I asked are you okay with this Teddy?" Jinny repeated "Yes" Teddy replied rather forcibly after a long pause

04-06-2002, 12:23 PM	#15
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	coool!!! add more!!!