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PhoenixMcKeonism · 04-02-2002, 10:34 PM

I made this one fan fic called THE DIVSIION JINNY STYLE but I decided to stop that one cause i had some trouble with it and start a new one instead. Hopefully you guys will enjoy and respond with good comments

ENJOY:

STUGGLING WITH SOBRIETY- BY CELINE AKA MELI

It was another windy evenning in San Francisco, Jinny Extead all alone in her father's house, watching old reruns of "I Love Lucy" on TV Land. She was very inert and today was her father's 58th Birthday Day. The boys were out partying with their old man while Jinny lay stuck in the front room, glued to the tv with her hair sort of all over the place. She gently closed her eyes then she heard a loud BANG! from the window. She looks up at the window and it was the wind that was causing all the whistling and banging. She looks over to the old wooden table that had the old dim lamp and saw her card laying there. It was nothing special, just a simple hallmark card that said HAPPY 58TH BIRTHDAY DAD-HOPE YOUR DAY IS WONDERFUL. There was a picture of a birthday cake on the front. She saw the flower that she gave him, the blue one that was in this old dusty white vase on the old wooden table. She looked at the old brown pendulum clock on the wall... 10:13pm. It was a late saturday night and Jinny was alone in the dark big house, craving the one thing she couldn't have.... alcohol.

Jinny called her sponsor, dusty on the phone. She heard another loud banging noise coming from that same big window by the door.

JINNY: Hey It's me, Jinny... Jinny Extead. I hope I'm not disturbing you or anything I just need somebody to talk to right now.

DUSTY: It's ok Jinny... Jinny Extead. I will always be here for you whenever, wherever.

Jinny shows a small smile and then her face straightens up again.

JINNY: You see, here's the thing... today is my dad's birthday and all and I'm usually out there at some bar, partying right beside him you know? That can't happen this year and my brother's took him and I had to be left here in the dark watching old reruns I've seen a million times of "I Love Lucy".

DUSTY: Jinny, it's only normal you feel that way. You have to change your daily and annual habits to be able to work and stay with the program. Are you craving right now?

JINNY: Yeah, and it's really just driving me crazy. It's like I have to keep my mind occupied or something. I was thinking of calling Mag up but I figured all she would talk about were the same ole same ole and I would fall asleep at the phone.

DUSTY: That's not too bad. Do you have any hobbies Jinny, besides being an inspector?

JINNY: Drinking was my only hobby for years then when I stopped, I loss my only hobby.

DUSTY: That's not true Jinny, there must be something you do for fun.

JINNY: Well, now that I think about it, I do go jogging from time to time, and I practice martial arts from time to time as well.

DUSTY: Good well, there you go. Sometime to keep you busy Jinny. You can always count AA meetings as a hobby as well.

JINNY: Yeah true Dusty...

Another bang on the window, this time, the bang sounded like a person hitting the window hard.

JINNY: Listen Dusty can you hold on a minute?

DUSTY: Yeah

Jinny puts the phone down quietly, then she moves over to that big window by the door. she glances outside and something humanlike catches her eye. A man who looked about the same age as her only a few more years older stood there across the street staring at her. Jinny started to look closely at him, but it was so dark she could barely make out what he looked like. She didn't recognize him so she left the window and picked up the phone.

JINNY: Dusty you still there?

DUSTY: Yep I am, what's going on, you were off for a while.

JINNY: Yeah uh, I heard something so I checked it out.

DUSTY: You should get some rest Jinny, you'll feel better in the morning.

JINNY: Yeah I think that's what I'm going to do, goodnight Dusty.

DUSTY: Goodnight Jinny, remember anytime you need me, you know my number.

JINNY: Thanks, see you later

Jinny starts to hang up the phone when something hits the window and her hand jerked and the phone landed on the floor. She picked it up quickly and hung it up. She went over to the window again and she didn't see the man, but she saw a flashlight laying on the grass outside. She decided that she really needed some good rest so she went up to her bedroom and jumped under the covers of her lumpy ole bed... and she closed her eyes. The night became cold and she started to shiver. There was a presence in the room, staring at her, stalking her, touching her without her even knowing. The darkness slowly decreased as the banging on the windows eventually stopped and the dark night sky gave way to a new dawn.

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF IT AND I'LL CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE

aeysh1 · 04-02-2002, 10:51 PM

POST MORE MOR MORE! NOW!!!!

td luver · 04-02-2002, 10:59 PM

IM GETTIN FREAKED AND IGOTO BED IN 52 MIN.

Esperanza · 04-02-2002, 11:06 PM

Wow.... this is of course and amazing start, so add more asap!

dovesong · 04-02-2002, 11:06 PM

One word..........WOW

Okay two........MORE

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 04-02-2002, 11:49 PM

wow ! more now!!

Ewan's My Man · 04-03-2002, 09:37 PM

This is AWWWWWWWWWWWWESOME!! I must have more!!

Jinny Girl · 04-04-2002, 02:01 AM

....Im scared mommie....

PhoenixMcKeonism · 04-04-2002, 05:45 AM

Ok Here's More:

Jinny wakes up, and walks over to the kitchen to find her father John making some eggs for breakfast. She sees the tired expression on his face as he smiles and breathlessly says a quick good morning.

JOHN: You hungry? I made some breakfast for us.

JINNY: No, I'm not hungry this morning, I'll get something on the way to the division.

JOHN: I'm sorry I stayed out late Jinny. I know that you really wanted to spend some time with me and...

JINNY: No, no... that's not it. I just didn't get enough sleep last night. It has nothing to do with you.

JOHN: Jinny I know that I haven't been a good influence on your problems but you can always come to me whenever you need to talk and...

JINNY: Listen to me, you shouldn't have to change your whole life around because of me. I shouldn't even be living here...

JOHN: But you are and I want to help.

JINNY: Look, dad... honestly, you could help by giving me a little space.

Jinny goes in the front room to grab her jacket and notepad. John walks in holding an envelope and hands it to her.

JINNY: What is this?

JOHN: I don't know who this is from but I found it laying by the door earlier this morning.

The envelope said, TO: JINNY FROM:_________. Jinny stared at it for a couple of seconds then opened it. A look of terror spread across her face as she almost dropped the letter. The letter contained this message:

DEAR JINNY, I FOUND IT HARD HOPEFULLY TONIGHT, I'LL SUCCEED.

YOUR'S TRUELY: XXX XXX XXX

Jinny couldn't believe what she just read. The letter was typed up and it didn't say who it was from. She sat down on the chair looking straight at the window.

JOHN: Jinny, what did the letter say? Who wrote it?

JINNY: Change the locks and lock the windows up. It was a threat letter.

JOHN: What do you mean a threat letter? A death threat?

JINNY: I dont know ok.... have you seen anybody lurking around the neighborhood lately?

JOHN: No, why.

JINNY: I could of sworn last night I saw somebody staring at our house, but I couldnt make out the face or anything.

JOHN: Oh, well maybe it was just your imagination.

JINNY: No, I didn't imagine this. I have a feeling whoever sent me this letter, saw me in here last night watching tv. probably from the window.

JOHN: You need to calm down, it was probably just a dream or nightmare.

JINNY: I'm not going to sit here and argue with you about something I know is 100 percent clear, now if you excuse me I need to get going. I can't believe you would even think for a second that I was making this crap up.

Jinny walks out the door without saying goodbye to her father, she turns her head and looks at the grass. She slowly stopped for a split second.... the flashlight was missing.

Babes_Cat · 04-04-2002, 07:37 AM

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

MORE PLEASE!

aeysh1 · 04-04-2002, 05:46 PM

MORE! NOW!!!!!lol

Esperanza · 04-04-2002, 06:15 PM

wow.... post more!

KimFieldsFan637 · 04-04-2002, 06:26 PM

MORE MORE MORE!!!!

td luver · 04-04-2002, 06:54 PM

WHO'S THE FREAKIN STALKER?AND IF YOU KILL HER I'LL KILL YOU!YOU BETTER NOT KILL HER.

NewsiesGurl229 · 04-04-2002, 08:12 PM

MOMMY!!! I'm scareded!!!

okay, that takes care of that! now for the other detail...you kill or hurt jinny in anyway WHATSOEVER I myself will hunt down your favorite tree and hug it to death, becuz thats what i do, hug trees, sometimes I hug them to death, so you've been warned! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

good bye, my sweet tree!

04-02-2002, 10:34 PM	#1
PhoenixMcKeonism Psychotic McKeon Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 20, 2001 Location: Los Angeles Ca Posts: 306	Struggling With Sobriety I made this one fan fic called THE DIVSIION JINNY STYLE but I decided to stop that one cause i had some trouble with it and start a new one instead. Hopefully you guys will enjoy and respond with good comments ENJOY: STUGGLING WITH SOBRIETY- BY CELINE AKA MELI It was another windy evenning in San Francisco, Jinny Extead all alone in her father's house, watching old reruns of "I Love Lucy" on TV Land. She was very inert and today was her father's 58th Birthday Day. The boys were out partying with their old man while Jinny lay stuck in the front room, glued to the tv with her hair sort of all over the place. She gently closed her eyes then she heard a loud BANG! from the window. She looks up at the window and it was the wind that was causing all the whistling and banging. She looks over to the old wooden table that had the old dim lamp and saw her card laying there. It was nothing special, just a simple hallmark card that said HAPPY 58TH BIRTHDAY DAD-HOPE YOUR DAY IS WONDERFUL. There was a picture of a birthday cake on the front. She saw the flower that she gave him, the blue one that was in this old dusty white vase on the old wooden table. She looked at the old brown pendulum clock on the wall... 10:13pm. It was a late saturday night and Jinny was alone in the dark big house, craving the one thing she couldn't have.... alcohol. Jinny called her sponsor, dusty on the phone. She heard another loud banging noise coming from that same big window by the door. JINNY: Hey It's me, Jinny... Jinny Extead. I hope I'm not disturbing you or anything I just need somebody to talk to right now. DUSTY: It's ok Jinny... Jinny Extead. I will always be here for you whenever, wherever. Jinny shows a small smile and then her face straightens up again. JINNY: You see, here's the thing... today is my dad's birthday and all and I'm usually out there at some bar, partying right beside him you know? That can't happen this year and my brother's took him and I had to be left here in the dark watching old reruns I've seen a million times of "I Love Lucy". DUSTY: Jinny, it's only normal you feel that way. You have to change your daily and annual habits to be able to work and stay with the program. Are you craving right now? JINNY: Yeah, and it's really just driving me crazy. It's like I have to keep my mind occupied or something. I was thinking of calling Mag up but I figured all she would talk about were the same ole same ole and I would fall asleep at the phone. DUSTY: That's not too bad. Do you have any hobbies Jinny, besides being an inspector? JINNY: Drinking was my only hobby for years then when I stopped, I loss my only hobby. DUSTY: That's not true Jinny, there must be something you do for fun. JINNY: Well, now that I think about it, I do go jogging from time to time, and I practice martial arts from time to time as well. DUSTY: Good well, there you go. Sometime to keep you busy Jinny. You can always count AA meetings as a hobby as well. JINNY: Yeah true Dusty... Another bang on the window, this time, the bang sounded like a person hitting the window hard. JINNY: Listen Dusty can you hold on a minute? DUSTY: Yeah Jinny puts the phone down quietly, then she moves over to that big window by the door. she glances outside and something humanlike catches her eye. A man who looked about the same age as her only a few more years older stood there across the street staring at her. Jinny started to look closely at him, but it was so dark she could barely make out what he looked like. She didn't recognize him so she left the window and picked up the phone. JINNY: Dusty you still there? DUSTY: Yep I am, what's going on, you were off for a while. JINNY: Yeah uh, I heard something so I checked it out. DUSTY: You should get some rest Jinny, you'll feel better in the morning. JINNY: Yeah I think that's what I'm going to do, goodnight Dusty. DUSTY: Goodnight Jinny, remember anytime you need me, you know my number. JINNY: Thanks, see you later Jinny starts to hang up the phone when something hits the window and her hand jerked and the phone landed on the floor. She picked it up quickly and hung it up. She went over to the window again and she didn't see the man, but she saw a flashlight laying on the grass outside. She decided that she really needed some good rest so she went up to her bedroom and jumped under the covers of her lumpy ole bed... and she closed her eyes. The night became cold and she started to shiver. There was a presence in the room, staring at her, stalking her, touching her without her even knowing. The darkness slowly decreased as the banging on the windows eventually stopped and the dark night sky gave way to a new dawn. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF IT AND I'LL CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE
	__________________ You know, Nancy McKeon has had a great affect on my life ever since I discovered her last July 2001 on Lifetime's The Division. She is like my mentor and my lifetime goal is to one day meet her and tell her that she saved my life. If it weren't for Nancy, I don't know where I'd be today. She has touched so many lives, I'm one of them. Nancy made me realize that life's worth living, and to not give up on mine... no matter how angry I get. http://web.ukonline.co.uk/classic.js...urn/kate01.jpg Katharine Hepburn #1 greatest woman actress of all time 1907-2003 AIM: PhoenixMcKeon or email me at PhoenixMcKeon@aol.com Visit my Site Celine's 90210/Division Fan Fic Site

04-02-2002, 10:51 PM	#2
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04-02-2002, 10:59 PM	#3
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04-02-2002, 11:06 PM	#4
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04-02-2002, 11:06 PM	#5
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04-02-2002, 11:49 PM	#6
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04-03-2002, 09:37 PM	#7
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04-04-2002, 02:01 AM	#8
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04-04-2002, 05:45 AM	#9
PhoenixMcKeonism Psychotic McKeon Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 20, 2001 Location: Los Angeles Ca Posts: 306	Ok Here's More: Jinny wakes up, and walks over to the kitchen to find her father John making some eggs for breakfast. She sees the tired expression on his face as he smiles and breathlessly says a quick good morning. JOHN: You hungry? I made some breakfast for us. JINNY: No, I'm not hungry this morning, I'll get something on the way to the division. JOHN: I'm sorry I stayed out late Jinny. I know that you really wanted to spend some time with me and... JINNY: No, no... that's not it. I just didn't get enough sleep last night. It has nothing to do with you. JOHN: Jinny I know that I haven't been a good influence on your problems but you can always come to me whenever you need to talk and... JINNY: Listen to me, you shouldn't have to change your whole life around because of me. I shouldn't even be living here... JOHN: But you are and I want to help. JINNY: Look, dad... honestly, you could help by giving me a little space. Jinny goes in the front room to grab her jacket and notepad. John walks in holding an envelope and hands it to her. JINNY: What is this? JOHN: I don't know who this is from but I found it laying by the door earlier this morning. The envelope said, TO: JINNY FROM:_________. Jinny stared at it for a couple of seconds then opened it. A look of terror spread across her face as she almost dropped the letter. The letter contained this message: DEAR JINNY, I FOUND IT HARD HOPEFULLY TONIGHT, I'LL SUCCEED. YOUR'S TRUELY: XXX XXX XXX Jinny couldn't believe what she just read. The letter was typed up and it didn't say who it was from. She sat down on the chair looking straight at the window. JOHN: Jinny, what did the letter say? Who wrote it? JINNY: Change the locks and lock the windows up. It was a threat letter. JOHN: What do you mean a threat letter? A death threat? JINNY: I dont know ok.... have you seen anybody lurking around the neighborhood lately? JOHN: No, why. JINNY: I could of sworn last night I saw somebody staring at our house, but I couldnt make out the face or anything. JOHN: Oh, well maybe it was just your imagination. JINNY: No, I didn't imagine this. I have a feeling whoever sent me this letter, saw me in here last night watching tv. probably from the window. JOHN: You need to calm down, it was probably just a dream or nightmare. JINNY: I'm not going to sit here and argue with you about something I know is 100 percent clear, now if you excuse me I need to get going. I can't believe you would even think for a second that I was making this crap up. Jinny walks out the door without saying goodbye to her father, she turns her head and looks at the grass. She slowly stopped for a split second.... the flashlight was missing.

04-04-2002, 07:37 AM	#10
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04-04-2002, 06:54 PM	#14
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04-04-2002, 08:12 PM	#15
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	MOMMY!!! I'm scareded!!! okay, that takes care of that! now for the other detail...you kill or hurt jinny in anyway WHATSOEVER I myself will hunt down your favorite tree and hug it to death, becuz thats what i do, hug trees, sometimes I hug them to death, so you've been warned! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA good bye, my sweet tree!
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