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Jo/Blair_fan · 03-23-2002, 06:37 PM

This is my first Division Fan fic so don't expect it to be too great.
Even though I have done FOL fan fic's.
here it is:
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The Shooting.
At Jinny’s apartment she is inside unpacking her things that she had brought from her dad’s house from when she was staying there.
Jinny: (to herself) where should I put the TV? Maybe I could put it over there by the fireplace? (Note: the apartment building is two stories and Jinny is on the second story so she can have a fireplace) Yea I think I will. (She puts the TV over by the fireplace across from the couch.) Well that’s every thing. (She sits down on her couch and turns on her TV, and begins to flip channels until she comes to The Facts of Life) oooooh I love this show.
(Phone rings)
Jinny: hello?
Captain: hey Jinny, I need you and Magda to come in to work today so you guys can go to Sunny Brooke High and give them the DARE assembly, I know it is your day off and all and I would have CD and Nate do it but they are off on an assignment.
Jinny: ok, have you called Mag?
Captain: no, I was hoping you would do that for me.
Jinny: no problem, Bye
Captain: Bye.
(They hang up)
(Jinny picks up the phone again and calls Magda)
Jinny: hello?
Mag: hey Jin.
Jinny: Mag, we have to go into work today to do a DARE assembly at Sunny Brooke High. Cap just called and told me. Do you want me to pick you up? (Note: yes Jinny does have her Mustang back)
Mag: sure.
Jinny: k I well see you in 20min. bye
Magda: bye.
(They hang up)
(At Magda’s house)
Magda: hey Gabe, I have to work so could you watch Ben?
Gabe: sure
Magda: Ben I have to work so your dad is going to watch you. Ok?
Ben: ok.
(Doorbell rings)
Magda: that’s probably Jinny. (Opens door) Come in I’m almost ready.
Jinny: ok.
Ben: Hey Jinny, will you tell me a story?
Jinny: I don’t have time now but maybe if you’re good for your dad I will tell you one when we get back.
Ben: ok.
Magda: I’m ready.
Jinny: k lets go, Bye guys.
Ben and Gabe: bye.
(They leave)
(At the Division)
CD: hey cap, we found out some more on the Jewel theft and killing.
Cap: good what is it?
Nate: Well we found some fingerprints on a Diamond necklace that was dropped by the door. The prints are down in the lab now.
CD: they are looking for witnesses that saw the person leave after the shots were heard.
Nate: Now all we have to do is wait.
Cap: good, CD can I see you in my office.
CD: sure
(They go to the captain’s office.)
CD: what is it?
Captain: I just wanted to know if you need a new partner or if Nate is working out?
CD: No I don’t need a new partner Nate is great. Thanks for asking though.
Cap: no problem.
(CD leaves the captain’s office.)
Jinny: well Mag we better be on our way.
Mag: yep I put all the DARE packets in your car.
(They leave the building)
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What do you think?

Ewan's My Man · 03-23-2002, 06:48 PM

MORE!!!!

MyStErIoUs ChIck · 03-23-2002, 07:32 PM

I like it! please continue!!

Jo/Blair_fan · 03-27-2002, 10:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by MyStErIoUs ChIck
I like it! please continue!!

I can post more tommarow or friday but that is as soon as i can post

InspectorExstead · 03-30-2002, 05:38 PM

lol..about the facts of life thing....ooh...jinny being my dare officer in 5th grade...lol...anyway...i like it..more please!

Swimfan85 · 03-30-2002, 05:42 PM

u best be adding asap!!!!!!!!!! come on this rocks!

Jo/Blair_fan · 03-30-2002, 08:21 PM

Here's more!
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(In Jinny’s car.)
Mag: I hate having to do this.
Jinny: you’re not the only one.
Mag: we always get a smart a$$ who thinks that they know everything.
Jinny: yea well when I was that age I was that kid.
Mag: that doesn’t surprise me.
Jinny: haha, but it was true I did know all that they were telling us.
Mag: you couldn’t of known everything.
Jinny: I did, I knew it all cause of my dad being a cop.
Mag: Well we’re here.
(At the station)
Nate: (Looks really nervus) uhh CD I was wondering if you wanted to uhh go out with me for dinner tonight?
CD: umm sure I’d Love to. (To herself: YES)
Nate: do you want me to pick you up at you’re place or do you want to leave after work?
CD: how about you pick me up around 7.
Nate: ok
CD: By the way, where are you taking me?
Nate: It’s a surprise.
CD: ooooh a surprise.
(At the High School)
Jinny: ahh this reminds me of my horrible childhood.
Mag: come on school couldn’t of been that bad for you.
Jinny: you don’t know the half of it.
(They head to the principals office)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I know that wasn't much but i hope u liked it anyway!

Esperanza · 04-01-2002, 10:01 PM

This is great... add more!

Ewan's My Man · 04-01-2002, 11:04 PM

MORE!!

Jo/Blair_fan · 04-03-2002, 06:32 PM

heres more!!
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(Principal’s office)
Jinny: We have everything we need to start the demonstration in my car all we have to do is set it up.
Principal: ok the gym is right to the left of my office.
Mag: ok, we will go set up.
(Back at the station)
Nate: we better get going we have a homicide at 31st and Falcon St.
CD: ok let me get my coat on and we can go.
(At the school Jinny and Magda are beginning the assembly)
Jinny: Hi I’m Inspector Jinny Exstead and this is Inspector Magda Remeraz. We are going to talk to you about Drugs.
Magda: Your teacher have handed out to you the D.A.R.E booklets. We would like for you to turn to page 3 of the booklet. (The kids turn to that page when some kid yells gun. And all the kids go crazy and start to run around. Some of them are smart enough to drop to the ground incase a bullet is shot. While all of this is going on the kid with the gun got out of the gym.)
Jinny: Everyone calm down, and Stay in here. (to Mag) some of the are already out in the halls. You stay here while I go out there.
Mag: Ok be careful.
Jinny: When am I not.
Mag: (thought about making a smart remark but decides not to.) k
Jinny: (goes out into the hall and turns a corner when she sees a kid about 16 years old holding a gun.) put the gun down.
Kid: no. (kid shoots Jinny)
Jinny: (yells) HELP!!!!
Mag: (runs out of the auditorium and sees the kid and arrests him) then gives him to the cops waiting at the door, and run’s to find Jin lying on the floor with a bullet wound threw her chest.) OMG HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jin come on talk to me. (Crying) please!
Jin: (weak) Mag?!?!? Help. (Goes unconscious.)
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Do you want more?!?!?!?!?!?

td luver · 04-03-2002, 06:44 PM

I HATE YOU! SHE'S GONNA DIE! IM CRYING NOW.I NEED TO WASH MY FACE.

Esperanza · 04-03-2002, 08:15 PM

oh my.... well i don't hate you if she does die... just ADD MORE!!!

*Marilyn Monroe* · 04-03-2002, 09:37 PM

Jinny's gonna die and you arent even posting anymore!! How could you do this to me?? lol

Ewan's My Man · 04-04-2002, 10:31 PM

Denise, we've discussed this, you will NOT let Jinny die, don't even think about it!! I kno ur sn!!!

KimFieldsFan637 · 04-04-2002, 11:19 PM

you need to post more...and u NEED to make her live...

03-23-2002, 06:37 PM	#1
Jo/Blair_fan NMK fan forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 22, 2001 Location: KSU WILDCATS RULE! EMAW Posts: 1,202	The Shooting This is my first Division Fan fic so don't expect it to be too great. Even though I have done FOL fan fic's. here it is: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Shooting. At Jinny’s apartment she is inside unpacking her things that she had brought from her dad’s house from when she was staying there. Jinny: (to herself) where should I put the TV? Maybe I could put it over there by the fireplace? (Note: the apartment building is two stories and Jinny is on the second story so she can have a fireplace) Yea I think I will. (She puts the TV over by the fireplace across from the couch.) Well that’s every thing. (She sits down on her couch and turns on her TV, and begins to flip channels until she comes to The Facts of Life) oooooh I love this show. (Phone rings) Jinny: hello? Captain: hey Jinny, I need you and Magda to come in to work today so you guys can go to Sunny Brooke High and give them the DARE assembly, I know it is your day off and all and I would have CD and Nate do it but they are off on an assignment. Jinny: ok, have you called Mag? Captain: no, I was hoping you would do that for me. Jinny: no problem, Bye Captain: Bye. (They hang up) (Jinny picks up the phone again and calls Magda) Jinny: hello? Mag: hey Jin. Jinny: Mag, we have to go into work today to do a DARE assembly at Sunny Brooke High. Cap just called and told me. Do you want me to pick you up? (Note: yes Jinny does have her Mustang back) Mag: sure. Jinny: k I well see you in 20min. bye Magda: bye. (They hang up) (At Magda’s house) Magda: hey Gabe, I have to work so could you watch Ben? Gabe: sure Magda: Ben I have to work so your dad is going to watch you. Ok? Ben: ok. (Doorbell rings) Magda: that’s probably Jinny. (Opens door) Come in I’m almost ready. Jinny: ok. Ben: Hey Jinny, will you tell me a story? Jinny: I don’t have time now but maybe if you’re good for your dad I will tell you one when we get back. Ben: ok. Magda: I’m ready. Jinny: k lets go, Bye guys. Ben and Gabe: bye. (They leave) (At the Division) CD: hey cap, we found out some more on the Jewel theft and killing. Cap: good what is it? Nate: Well we found some fingerprints on a Diamond necklace that was dropped by the door. The prints are down in the lab now. CD: they are looking for witnesses that saw the person leave after the shots were heard. Nate: Now all we have to do is wait. Cap: good, CD can I see you in my office. CD: sure (They go to the captain’s office.) CD: what is it? Captain: I just wanted to know if you need a new partner or if Nate is working out? CD: No I don’t need a new partner Nate is great. Thanks for asking though. Cap: no problem. (CD leaves the captain’s office.) Jinny: well Mag we better be on our way. Mag: yep I put all the DARE packets in your car. (They leave the building) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ What do you think?
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03-23-2002, 06:48 PM	#2
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03-30-2002, 05:38 PM	#5
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04-01-2002, 10:01 PM	#8
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04-03-2002, 06:44 PM	#11
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03-23-2002, 07:32 PM	#3
MyStErIoUs ChIck deep thinker Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 03, 2002 Location: nowhere special Posts: 378	I like it! please continue!!

03-30-2002, 05:42 PM	#6
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	u best be adding asap!!!!!!!!!! come on this rocks!

03-30-2002, 08:21 PM	#7
Jo/Blair_fan NMK fan forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 22, 2001 Location: KSU WILDCATS RULE! EMAW Posts: 1,202	Here's more! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (In Jinny’s car.) Mag: I hate having to do this. Jinny: you’re not the only one. Mag: we always get a smart a$$ who thinks that they know everything. Jinny: yea well when I was that age I was that kid. Mag: that doesn’t surprise me. Jinny: haha, but it was true I did know all that they were telling us. Mag: you couldn’t of known everything. Jinny: I did, I knew it all cause of my dad being a cop. Mag: Well we’re here. (At the station) Nate: (Looks really nervus) uhh CD I was wondering if you wanted to uhh go out with me for dinner tonight? CD: umm sure I’d Love to. (To herself: YES) Nate: do you want me to pick you up at you’re place or do you want to leave after work? CD: how about you pick me up around 7. Nate: ok CD: By the way, where are you taking me? Nate: It’s a surprise. CD: ooooh a surprise. (At the High School) Jinny: ahh this reminds me of my horrible childhood. Mag: come on school couldn’t of been that bad for you. Jinny: you don’t know the half of it. (They head to the principals office) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I know that wasn't much but i hope u liked it anyway!

04-01-2002, 11:04 PM	#9
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	MORE!!

04-03-2002, 06:32 PM	#10
Jo/Blair_fan NMK fan forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 22, 2001 Location: KSU WILDCATS RULE! EMAW Posts: 1,202	heres more!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (Principal’s office) Jinny: We have everything we need to start the demonstration in my car all we have to do is set it up. Principal: ok the gym is right to the left of my office. Mag: ok, we will go set up. (Back at the station) Nate: we better get going we have a homicide at 31st and Falcon St. CD: ok let me get my coat on and we can go. (At the school Jinny and Magda are beginning the assembly) Jinny: Hi I’m Inspector Jinny Exstead and this is Inspector Magda Remeraz. We are going to talk to you about Drugs. Magda: Your teacher have handed out to you the D.A.R.E booklets. We would like for you to turn to page 3 of the booklet. (The kids turn to that page when some kid yells gun. And all the kids go crazy and start to run around. Some of them are smart enough to drop to the ground incase a bullet is shot. While all of this is going on the kid with the gun got out of the gym.) Jinny: Everyone calm down, and Stay in here. (to Mag) some of the are already out in the halls. You stay here while I go out there. Mag: Ok be careful. Jinny: When am I not. Mag: (thought about making a smart remark but decides not to.) k Jinny: (goes out into the hall and turns a corner when she sees a kid about 16 years old holding a gun.) put the gun down. Kid: no. (kid shoots Jinny) Jinny: (yells) HELP!!!! Mag: (runs out of the auditorium and sees the kid and arrests him) then gives him to the cops waiting at the door, and run’s to find Jin lying on the floor with a bullet wound threw her chest.) OMG HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jin come on talk to me. (Crying) please! Jin: (weak) Mag?!?!? Help. (Goes unconscious.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Do you want more?!?!?!?!?!?

04-03-2002, 08:15 PM	#12
Esperanza Hogwarts Head Girl Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 07, 2001 Location: Snowy Tundra of Minnesota Posts: 299	oh my.... well i don't hate you if she does die... just ADD MORE!!!

04-03-2002, 09:37 PM	#13
Marilyn Monroe Diamonds... Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 24, 2001 Location: Where gentlemen actually prefer brunettes Posts: 4,811	Jinny's gonna die and you arent even posting anymore!! How could you do this to me?? lol
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04-04-2002, 10:31 PM	#14
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	Denise, we've discussed this, you will NOT let Jinny die, don't even think about it!! I kno ur sn!!!

04-04-2002, 11:19 PM	#15
KimFieldsFan637 Kim Fields #1 Fan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 06, 2001 Posts: 2,353	you need to post more...and u NEED to make her live...
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