Absurdity

[MyStErIoUs ChIck]

This fanfic takes place in the Exstead residence early in
the morning. Jinny wakes up in consternation after having
a terrible, reoccuring nightmare that leaves her teary eyed
and in a cold sweat. She just lays there for a moment
shaking a little after being subjected to such a vivid vision
of sheer terror. After she calms down some, she shuts
off the alarm that to her relief, woke her from the dreaded
imagery that went through her head all too often. Talking
to herself, she said "It wasn't real". Jinny threw the blanket
off that was wrapped around her and got up out of the bed.
To her surprise, she was completely nude. She just stood
there for a moment exposed and in total shock. Then she
started trembling out of fear and screamed as loud as she
could because she knew that she had gone to bed
with a big T-shirt and undergarments on. Her reoccuring
nightmare always started off that way with her wearing
nothing but her birthday suit, and she could never figure
out why she was unclothed after she always went to bed
wearing textiles of some kind. When she screamed as
loud as she did, her Father woke up immediately and
ran into Jinny's room frantically. "What's wrong, Jinny?
what happened?!" inquired her Father in genuine
concern for his daughter. Jinny's eyes widened when she
saw him, she grabbed the blanket off the bed, covered herself, and stood there gocking at him with a terrified expression on
her face that made her look like she had seen a ghost. Mr. Exstead asked her again what was wrong and she finally
replyed "c...can't you see I'm naked? get out of here!" yelled
Jinny after stuttering a little out of fear. Her Dad looked at
her in confusion and said "what are you talking about, Jinny? Before you covered yourself up, I observed the fact that
you're wearing your work clothes". Jinny slowly pulled the
blanket off and looked at her body to see that her Father
was right. She was wearing black pants, an indigo blue shirt,
and her black leather jacket. "oh my god, I'm dressed!"
exclaimed Jinny. Her Dad looked at her with a strange look.
"Uh, Jinny girl ...have you been drinking?" inquired her Father. Jinny looked at him and nonchalantly replied with a lie because
she thought it would be easier than explaining to him
about what really happened, which she wasn't even sure
of. "Yeah" was Jinny's nonchalant responce. Mr. Exstead's
heart sank and it showed on his face.Jinny looked at him and couldn't help, but cry. "Jinny" said her Father, You need to get some more help". She nodded and said "I will". He walked over to her, put his hand on her shoulder, looked into her eyes with sincerity, and said "please do". Jinny took her hand and pushed his off of her shoulder. "I said I would" said Jinny sharply. Then her Father turned around and walked out of the room. Jinny
gave herself a pep talk. "Common, Jinny. Pull yourself together!" She looked at herself again and she was still dressed. "ok, I'm not naked--this is a good thing. Now I'll just go to work, distract my mind, and forget any of this ever happened".


Note to readers:

ok, this is my first fanfic and I'm not really used
to writing. I don't do it often. I know this seems
like a really odd story ( I'm an odd person...so
ya know....) BUT I'm going to try to get it
to make more sense as I go along. This will be
a challenge for sure. hehe To be continued...

[Babes_Cat]

Hmm.... Interesting! More please!

[Divisionbabe05]

Wow this is pretty damn good, I like the way u started out with something that would make us wonder whats goin on. Keep goin!

[InspectorExstead]

you know what? megan likes it! and she wants more! it's good so far...intriguing...intruiging...intiuging..ok..doesn't matter. more!

[MyStErIoUs ChIck]

Jinny got all of her stuff together for work, walked out of
the bedroom, and into the family room where she found
her Father sitting in a chair drinking beer. She looked at
him, shook her head, and said "You really should practice
what you preach". Her Father set the bottle of alcohol
down on the table and gazed at her gloomily. "There's
a difference, Jin. I'm not an alcoholic" said Mr. Exstead.
"Yeah, Dad....keep telling yourself that. Stay in denial!
That'll make everything better" said Jinny sarcastically.
With that, she walked out the door and got into her
car without saying goodbye to her Father. As she was
driving along in her car, things went blurry....and she
started seeing in tunnel vision. Then she pulled over
to the side of the road because she had enough
sense and good judgement to know that she'd end
up in a wreck if she couldn't see right. She folded her
arms and put her head down over her steering wheel
for a while to make the dizziness go away, but then
she suddenly heard a tapping at her window. She
lifted her head up quickly to see a blurred vision of
a guy standing outside her car door that she couldn't
quite make out. She cracked the window a little so
that she could talk to him, but the guy spoke first and
she recognized the familiar voice as someone she knew
very well. "Are you alright, Jinny?" asked the man. "not
exactly. is that you, Teddy?" she inquired. "Of course
it is. what's wrong with you?" he asked in concern.
"I don't know but my vision is really screwed up so I
had to pull over" replyed Jinny matter-of-factly. "oh,
god. Have you been drinking?" asked Teddy bluntly.
"Ya know what? just do me a favor and go to hell!"
shouted Jinny in anger. "um...well....what do you
expect me to think? why else would you be on the
side of the road with impaired vision??" interrogated
Teddy with a tone in his voice. " I don't know what
the problem is, smart ass...all I know is that I cant
see. Why are you here on the side of the
road??" questioned Jinny. "Well, I was on my way
to work and I spotted you here. Then I decided to
check up on you and see if you were alright" replyed
Teddy. "oh, well...uh....I appreciate your concern" said
Jinny softly. Teddy smiled and impulsively kissed her.
Jinny closed her eyes and kissed him back. When
their lips departed from eachother's face, Jinny and
Teddy both looked at eachother. As soon as Jin
opened her eyes after having them closed during the
kiss, her vision became clear again. She studied his
handsome features with her renewed eye sight.
"I can see again! damn...you look good" said Jinny
with a smile. Teddy blushed and looked away. "well,
uh...I'm glad that your sight has returned. That was
quick". Jinny looked into his eyes with sincerity and
prepared herself to ask him an important question.
"Teddy, do you forgive me for what happened when
I...uh....ya know.....kissed that other guy when I was
drunk?" Teddy looked down and then back into her
eyes. He felt uncomfortable with giving her a straight
answer so he decided to change the subject. "Jinny,
I really need to get to work because I'm going to be
late. You should take the day off or something so
another 'vision loss incident' doesn't come about"
said Teddy uneasily. Before she could say anything,
he asked her a question. "umm...would you like me
to drive you home?" you might get in an accident
if your eyes act up again and we certainly can't
have that". "No, said Jinny, I'll be fine"."We both
need to get to work right now so we're not anymore
late than we already are". Teddy looked concerned
but knew she was too stubborn to change her mind,
so he didn't bother trying. "Well, alright. I'll see you
later then" said Teddy as he walked over to his car
and got in. Jinny watched him until he drove off and
she just sat there in her car for a few minutes
thinking about teddy and the kiss they shared before
she decided to drive off to work. When she finally
arrived at the division, she ended up being twenty
minutes late. She walked in through the door and
almost immediately heard Captain Kate shouting
at her. "Exstead! in my office now!!" called cap.
Jinny walked inside her office and closed the door
behind her. "Yeah?" asked Jinny trying to sound
care-free. "You're 20 minutes late!!" exclaimed
cap. "Oh, well" replyed Jinny without showing any
kind of concern. "Oh, well? is that all you have to say
for yourself??" inquired cap impatiently. "Look, cap
...there's been a lot of crazy **** going on this
morning. I don't even know what's happening...all
I know is that my vision got blurry and I started
seeing in tunnel vision on my way over here" said
Jinny without any expression. "My god, have you
been drinking again??" asked captain kate. "If
one more person asks me that, I'm going to pull
my friggen hair out! I'm 100% sober but I just
happen to be going crazy!! why is that so hard
to believe??? I don't need rehab; I already went
that route....I need to go to a loony bin!!! OK?!?!"
exclaimed Jinny irrationally. "ok, ok.....calm down.
You're actually acting like a crazy person so the
whole loony bin scenario wouldn't be so hard to
believe if I didn't know you as well as I do" said
captain. "You don't know me, cap" replyed
Jinny. "Well, I do know that you're perfectly
sane but you're just under a lot of stress" said
cap confidently. "You think you know everything
but you're sadly mistaken" said Jinny flatly.



To be continued...

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Hey that was really good. lol I'm for anything with Theodore in it. lol I really enjoyed that.. now post some more! lol I took a few minutes off of writing my own story to read and reply to this one.. hehe Keep up the good work, and keep going!

[Babes_Cat]

Wow, unususal but really very good! More please!

[MyStErIoUs ChIck]

Captain Kate raised her eyebrows and said "I beg your differ".
Jinny just shook her head and rolled her eyes at that responce.
"ok, well...you're right that I don't know everything but
I try to gain as much knowledge as I can....so won't you talk
to me about this and fill me in on what's going on with you?"
asked cap. "I don't know" said Jinny softly. "You mean you
don't know if you want to share this with me or you don't know what's going on?" inquired cap in both curiousity and concern.
"All of the above" said Jinny. "Well, if not me...you need to talk
to someone" replyed cap. Jinny nodded and said "Yes,
I know just who to talk to". "Oh yeah? well, go ahead and do
that. Take the day off and get everything in order" said cap.
"ok, well...ya see....It's another inspector that I have in mind".
"Alright, I'm not going to pry and ask you who it is...so just
take whatever person it is that you need to talk to aside...and
I'll assign some other inspectors to fill in for you two. Take as
long as you need to sort things out, but I expect you to have
your ass on straight tomorrow.....and ready to work again. Got
it?" asked captain. "Yes, captain.Thankyou for being...so...um
understanding" said Jinny sincerely. "No problem, Jinny. Everyone has problems and it's when you take the time to solve them that they go away" answered cap wisely. "ok then. I'm going to go
discuss some personal issues with someone who could possibly
relate" said Jinny. "Great. That's just what you need to do" replyed cap with a little wave". Jinny walked out the door and
confronted someone who she wasn't exactly comfortable with,
but knew that she needed to talk to. "Hey, uh....C.D.?" called
Jinny. Inspector Delorenzo turned around from sitting at her
desk and was surprised to see Jinny standing there". "Oh, hi Jinny. Can I help you??" asked C.D. "Well, umm...I was just
wondering if we could talk" said Jinny. Cap said it was ok that
we take as long as we need to discuss some things...if you
want to, that is....and she'll assign some other inspectors to
pair up with Nate and Magda. Actually, she'll probably pair
them up together for the day". "oh ok....what do you need to talk about?" inquired C.D. in curiousity. "A lot of personal *****
that I need to get off my chest before I end up in a room with
padded walls. Can we go somewhere a lot less public?" asked
Jinny as she looked around at all the other cops. "oh, sure. I'll
be glad to listen to what you have to say and talk about stuff
...but...do you really feel comfortable telling me things
about your personal life?? I mean....you never did before" said C.D. logically. "No, I don't feel comfortable talking to you
...but I know that I need to tell someone before I explode. I'm
not keeping it bottled up inside me anymore and I figured you'd understand since...well....ya know....you've been in a similar situation. Also, I'll save money by not going to a shrink" said
Jinny with a smirk on her face. "Hmph! well, how do you know
I'm not going to charge you for my expert advice?" joked C.D.
Jinny laughed a little. "So, where do you want to go?" inquired
C.D. "uh...doesn't matter. Anywhere that's quiet and doesn't
have eavesdropping people around" answered Jinny. C.D talked
in almost a whisper and said "We better get out of the division then. Raina is close by". Jinny smirked and walked out the door
followed by C.D.


Note to readers: Thanks for the compliments, ppl.
I think it's starting to get better now. It's still in the
works, but I see improvement from when I first
started. I'm having fun with it, though. hehe.
More to come soon....

[sue z q]

WOW, dis is awesome writing, I LOVE it!!! I gotta have more!!!!!!

[MyStErIoUs ChIck]

Thanks, sue z q....but you write better. I've read some of
your fanfics that are really awesome. I'll post
more soon.

[#1_Nancy_McKeon]

Yeah definitely, this is getting really good. Can't wait for more. You write really really well. Keep it up!!

[Swimfan85]

SWEET- i love it so far...great a cd-jinny scene this should be interesting, keep up the good work!!!

[MyStErIoUs ChIck]

C.D. suggested to Jinny that they go to her place to talk
so Jinny took her up on the offer. C.D. drove and Jinny sat
in the passenger seat of the car. There was silence for a
while until Jinny turned on her favorite heavy metal station
on the radio in C.D.'s car. She cranked it up loud enough for
all of San Francisco to hear. "Turn that down!" yelled C.D.
"What?!" asked Jinny with a shout. C.D. reached over and
turned the radio off hastily. Jinny folded her arms, looked
out the window, and then back over at C.D. with a glare.
"What?" inquired C.D. calmly. "That was rude" said Jinny
flatly. I was listening to that and you go and shut it off".
"oh, well. It was distracting me" said C.D. "From what?!"
asked Jinny sharply. "Driving! how am I supposed to
concentrate with that crap blaring in my ears?" inquired
C.D. with a tone in her voice. Jinny mumbled under her
breathe and sarcastically said "sure, get an attitude
about it. That's real mature". C.D. heard her and responded.
"I'm sorry, Jinny. I didn't mean to get an attitude with you.
Loud music just happens to be one of my pet peeves".
"Among many other things, eh?" asked Jinny slyly. "No,
not really. I don't let many things bother me" said C.D.
softly. "You could have fooled me" replyed Jinny. "what
is that supposed to mean?" inquired C.D. with curiousity.
"Well, uh...you just strike me as the uptight type. That's
all" answered Jinny. C.D. laughed a little and said "I guess
I am compared to you". "Huh? why would you say that??"
questioned Jinny in wonder. "It's quite obvious that you're
a seemingly wild individual" replyed C.D. in amusement.
"oh. wow. I didn't know that I came off as being that way"
said Jinny in sincerity. "Are you being a smart ass??" asked
C.D. with a smirk on her face. "No! why does everyone
think that every word that comes out of my mouth is
intended to be cutting or sarcastic?" questioned Jinny.
"Because most of the things you say are wisecracks
and you're impulsive as hell...so the combination between
the two gives people the perception that you're a smart ass,
wild woman" responds C.D. matter-of-factly. "oh" said Jinny
without any expression. C.D. turns into the driveway of her
humble abode and parks.



Note to readers:

Thanks again for the compliments, ppl.
I appreciate the kind words. You all
make me feel special and stuff.


More to come soon...

[Swimfan85]

this is awesome....

i feel for jinny everyone thinks im a wiseass too...

[Ewan's My Man]

Hey, this is really good...pleez post more!