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JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 03-07-2002, 08:57 PM

ok guys, i'm not a great fan fic writer, but i'm bored, so i'm gonna give it a try...

Jinny woke up to the sound of her alarm going off a 7:15AM. She had already hit the snooze time about 4 times and figured that it was time to get up. She pulled herself out of bed and forced herself into the shower. As the water began to hit her face and slowly started waking up. Jinny breathed hard as she realized who she was, where was was, and how she got there. She grabbed the first thing in her closet that matched and just pulled up her hair. It was Friday, no need to get fancy. As she was waiting for her dad to come pick her up and take her to work, she flipped on the TV.
"Are you tired of flabby arms, chucky bellys.."
*flip*
"Next time, on NYPD blue..." (no guys, i don't watch that show, so I don't know the story lines)
Jinny just thought, "If only cop shows portrayed real life." Suddeny she heard her dad come in "Come on Jinny Girl, sorry i'm late"
"Don't worry about it Dad"

Today wasn't her day. She had been feeling sick all day, and couldn't get over this nauseated feeling in her stomach. "Something bad must be going to happen today..."
"Hey Jinny, how ya doing?"
"Fine Raina" Jinny mumbled. She realized she hadn't been the nicest person to Raina since she got back, but she was too tired to care.
"I have a pile of cases and no inspectors on 'em. Nate, CD, there young girl found lying in an alley, bruises, beat ups, possible rape."
"We're on it"
"Jinny, Mag-- Jinny wheres Magda?"
"Ya got me Cap. Haven't heard from her since last night"
"Well, Ic an't send ya on this case alo--"
"I'll be fine. What is it?"
"Break in. Mrs. Watson called it in this morning, said she was spending the night at her daughters, came home and her house was in ruins"
"I can handle it."
"alright, but don't do nothing stupid, and remember, be nice, her house was just robbed"
"I'm always nice!" Jinny stated, somewhat defensivley.

As Jinny was just walking out of The Division she bumped into her favorite pal, Charles.
"Inspector Exstead. May I have a world with you?"
"Sorry, no time, we got cases and remember 'no over time'!"
"Now, Inspector, your job is depending on it"

Sorry boring start, and not too descriptive...see why I don't do hot in Enlgish? lol

Babes_Cat · 03-07-2002, 08:59 PM

AMANDA! MOOOOOOOORE HUNNY MORE! And I'll think of ideas for you! MORE HUNNY MORE!

sue z q · 03-07-2002, 09:06 PM

GREAT START!!!! ooooooo, can't wait 4 more!!!

Divisionbabe05 · 03-07-2002, 09:28 PM

Amanda....fic....writing....more!

consentida · 03-07-2002, 10:49 PM

AHHH U HAFTA POST MORE!!! U HAFTA!

Ewan's My Man · 03-07-2002, 10:57 PM

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!

InspectorExstead · 03-08-2002, 12:06 AM

oo..continue..i like it so far!!!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 03-09-2002, 01:11 PM

Jinny gave Charles a **** eye look. What was he about to tell her? She hasn't done anything wrong, had she?
"Please, have a seat... Jinn--"
"Inspector Exstead"
"...Inspector Exstead, what I'm about to have to tell you isn't easy, but it's not suprising. I'm afraid that with cut backs and with our numbers being so low, that we are going to have to let off a few officiers, and with your...unclear record, we're afraid that you, along with a few others, are going to have to be the first to leave."
Jinny couldn't belive it. Was she just fired? "Are you firing me?"
"I'm afraid so Inspector. You can come by and fill out the paper work for unemployment draw if you would like"
"Who the hell do you think you are? You can't just cut me off, i've worked my ass off for this division--"
"And it's work it's ass off for you Inspector" Charles was getting impatient and his voice was raising, "We have spent far to much time, not to mention money, trying to drag you out of the hole you put yourself into. We can't have officers that don't put their job first. We can't have a drunk on our force."
"I have been sober for 4 months! You can't hold my past against me"
"That's exactly what i'm doing Jinny. I'm holding your entire past against you, even a little incident with a former captain..."
"You are not leggaly intitled to hold that against me"
"I'm not, legally." Jinny just gave him the "jinny stare down"
"Let me walk you out"
"Get your hands off me" Jinny stormed out the door. She got into the elevator and went up to The Division. Finally Magda arrived. "Hey Jinny, Cap told me you are doing hte Mrs. Watson case, want me to come with ya?"
"No you'll be too busy looking for another partner."

Any suggestions?

Babes_Cat · 03-09-2002, 01:18 PM

AMANDA! OMG! My only suggestion is....... MORE NOW! Well not now cuz you just left for work but MORE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

Ewan's My Man · 03-09-2002, 02:14 PM

Charles is such an @$$hole...ok...well...post!!!

Divisionbabe05 · 03-09-2002, 02:36 PM

shiiiiiiiiiiiit....MORE!

consentida · 03-09-2002, 02:57 PM

OMG!!! MORE!!!!! MORE!!!!!

sue z q · 03-09-2002, 05:03 PM

OMG, AMANDA!! You must post more now!!!

Swimfan85 · 03-09-2002, 10:36 PM

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JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 03-10-2002, 12:24 AM

Her hands were shaking and her heart was pounding. The minute she walked into Charles office she was scared to death and wanted to beg for her job back, but she knew that once she was seen as vulnerable she would never be seen as anything else. She wanted to get away, forget what had happend, forget everything. SHe wanted to forget life, forget the past, forget that she was even alive. She knew what she wanted, god did she know. "Just one...." She grabbed her keys and headed out the door.

---4 hours Earlier---
"Charles, what the hell do you think your doing? YOu have no authority to undermine my power in my own division. In order to fire an officers under my order you have to go through me!" Kate was furious. Though she didn't want to admit, Jinny was one of her best. She wouldn't be easy to replace.
"Kate, i didn't fire Jinny she was layed off. Trust me, I followed the book. Even the DA aggreed with me (I have no clue if that's who he has to go through, but it is now

)"
"On what grounds?"
"Legal ones. Performance record mainly."
"I will fight this."
"Then let the battle began. Jinny Exstead will NOT be a part of the San Fransico police department as long as I am head of it."
"Then one of you will have to go." Kate knew she was stepping over her boundaries here, she knew that she has to keep her composure.
"I would be careful if I were you Kate, I can take that as a threat."
"Then you'll have to prove it."
Charles knew that this wans't going to be easy, but he knew that he wasn't stepping down. Inspector Exstead had to go, or else. He knew he done the right thing...or at least he hoped he did. If only he knew what kind of hell he was going to start....

Magda coudln't belive her ears. "A new partner? Jinny what the hell are you talking about?"
"You heard me Mag, i've been fired."
"Whha--? Wha... on what grounds?"
"Past Magda, past. 28 days in rehab, months in half way house, AA meetings, all for nothing. My life is being held against me Mag. Being Jinny Exstead has got be fired."
"What are you going to do? YOu can't just walk out, you can fight it."
"Dont' worry Magda, this isn't the last you've heard from me. But if I don't get out of here right now, you might have to arrest me."
"For--?"
"...for the murder of a district supervisor."

----Back to Jinny-----
Jinny had arrived at a bar. She didn't know which one, just not a local one. All she did was got in her car (yes, she now has a car!), blasted the music on, and drove till she was too tired to keep her eyes open. She slowly pushed the door open, suddenly she had flashbacks that she didn't want to be rushing back in.
(twilight song... Jk!)

----6 months ago----
Her head was spinning, she couldn't think. Everything was a blurr. All she could feel was nothing. Somehow she had made her way out to an ally, the black guy had already left. "What was his name? Jo...no, that's this guy...wait.." She could feel her self falling, she couln'dt barely stand up. She could feel his breath breathing on her. She didn't want to stop it, but she was too tired to stop him. Stopping him would require work, yelling at him would require feeling. She didn't want to feel. She knew what was happneing. They were both drunk, but different. HE was violent. She couldn't stand it any more, she had to get away.
"Stop it-- just....no.....stop"
"Shut the f8uk up"

"Ma'm can I help you?"
Jinny suddenly jolted back. That hadn't happen, that night hadn't happened. "Ma'm?"
She acknowledged the young man in front of her. He looked barely 25. "Umm...yea, just give me a beer"
"Just one?"

03-07-2002, 08:57 PM	#1
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	well here's goes nothing...... ok guys, i'm not a great fan fic writer, but i'm bored, so i'm gonna give it a try... Jinny woke up to the sound of her alarm going off a 7:15AM. She had already hit the snooze time about 4 times and figured that it was time to get up. She pulled herself out of bed and forced herself into the shower. As the water began to hit her face and slowly started waking up. Jinny breathed hard as she realized who she was, where was was, and how she got there. She grabbed the first thing in her closet that matched and just pulled up her hair. It was Friday, no need to get fancy. As she was waiting for her dad to come pick her up and take her to work, she flipped on the TV. "Are you tired of flabby arms, chucky bellys.." flip "Next time, on NYPD blue..." (no guys, i don't watch that show, so I don't know the story lines) Jinny just thought, "If only cop shows portrayed real life." Suddeny she heard her dad come in "Come on Jinny Girl, sorry i'm late" "Don't worry about it Dad" Today wasn't her day. She had been feeling sick all day, and couldn't get over this nauseated feeling in her stomach. "Something bad must be going to happen today..." "Hey Jinny, how ya doing?" "Fine Raina" Jinny mumbled. She realized she hadn't been the nicest person to Raina since she got back, but she was too tired to care. "I have a pile of cases and no inspectors on 'em. Nate, CD, there young girl found lying in an alley, bruises, beat ups, possible rape." "We're on it" "Jinny, Mag-- Jinny wheres Magda?" "Ya got me Cap. Haven't heard from her since last night" "Well, Ic an't send ya on this case alo--" "I'll be fine. What is it?" "Break in. Mrs. Watson called it in this morning, said she was spending the night at her daughters, came home and her house was in ruins" "I can handle it." "alright, but don't do nothing stupid, and remember, be nice, her house was just robbed" "I'm always nice!" Jinny stated, somewhat defensivley. As Jinny was just walking out of The Division she bumped into her favorite pal, Charles. "Inspector Exstead. May I have a world with you?" "Sorry, no time, we got cases and remember 'no over time'!" "Now, Inspector, your job is depending on it" Sorry boring start, and not too descriptive...see why I don't do hot in Enlgish? lol
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03-09-2002, 01:11 PM	#8
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	Jinny gave Charles a **** eye look. What was he about to tell her? She hasn't done anything wrong, had she? "Please, have a seat... Jinn--" "Inspector Exstead" "...Inspector Exstead, what I'm about to have to tell you isn't easy, but it's not suprising. I'm afraid that with cut backs and with our numbers being so low, that we are going to have to let off a few officiers, and with your...unclear record, we're afraid that you, along with a few others, are going to have to be the first to leave." Jinny couldn't belive it. Was she just fired? "Are you firing me?" "I'm afraid so Inspector. You can come by and fill out the paper work for unemployment draw if you would like" "Who the hell do you think you are? You can't just cut me off, i've worked my ass off for this division--" "And it's work it's ass off for you Inspector" Charles was getting impatient and his voice was raising, "We have spent far to much time, not to mention money, trying to drag you out of the hole you put yourself into. We can't have officers that don't put their job first. We can't have a drunk on our force." "I have been sober for 4 months! You can't hold my past against me" "That's exactly what i'm doing Jinny. I'm holding your entire past against you, even a little incident with a former captain..." "You are not leggaly intitled to hold that against me" "I'm not, legally." Jinny just gave him the "jinny stare down" "Let me walk you out" "Get your hands off me" Jinny stormed out the door. She got into the elevator and went up to The Division. Finally Magda arrived. "Hey Jinny, Cap told me you are doing hte Mrs. Watson case, want me to come with ya?" "No you'll be too busy looking for another partner." Any suggestions?

03-09-2002, 01:18 PM	#9
Babes_Cat Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Oct 11, 2001 Location: massachusetts Posts: 34,145	AMANDA! OMG! My only suggestion is....... MORE NOW! Well not now cuz you just left for work but MORE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

03-09-2002, 02:14 PM	#10
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03-09-2002, 02:57 PM	#12
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03-09-2002, 10:36 PM	#14
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03-10-2002, 12:24 AM	#15
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo A and J Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: May 31, 2001 Location: .S.C. Posts: 3,070	Her hands were shaking and her heart was pounding. The minute she walked into Charles office she was scared to death and wanted to beg for her job back, but she knew that once she was seen as vulnerable she would never be seen as anything else. She wanted to get away, forget what had happend, forget everything. SHe wanted to forget life, forget the past, forget that she was even alive. She knew what she wanted, god did she know. "Just one...." She grabbed her keys and headed out the door. ---4 hours Earlier--- "Charles, what the hell do you think your doing? YOu have no authority to undermine my power in my own division. In order to fire an officers under my order you have to go through me!" Kate was furious. Though she didn't want to admit, Jinny was one of her best. She wouldn't be easy to replace. "Kate, i didn't fire Jinny she was layed off. Trust me, I followed the book. Even the DA aggreed with me (I have no clue if that's who he has to go through, but it is now )" "On what grounds?" "Legal ones. Performance record mainly." "I will fight this." "Then let the battle began. Jinny Exstead will NOT be a part of the San Fransico police department as long as I am head of it." "Then one of you will have to go." Kate knew she was stepping over her boundaries here, she knew that she has to keep her composure. "I would be careful if I were you Kate, I can take that as a threat." "Then you'll have to prove it." Charles knew that this wans't going to be easy, but he knew that he wasn't stepping down. Inspector Exstead had to go, or else. He knew he done the right thing...or at least he hoped he did. If only he knew what kind of hell he was going to start.... Magda coudln't belive her ears. "A new partner? Jinny what the hell are you talking about?" "You heard me Mag, i've been fired." "Whha--? Wha... on what grounds?" "Past Magda, past. 28 days in rehab, months in half way house, AA meetings, all for nothing. My life is being held against me Mag. Being Jinny Exstead has got be fired." "What are you going to do? YOu can't just walk out, you can fight it." "Dont' worry Magda, this isn't the last you've heard from me. But if I don't get out of here right now, you might have to arrest me." "For--?" "...for the murder of a district supervisor." ----Back to Jinny----- Jinny had arrived at a bar. She didn't know which one, just not a local one. All she did was got in her car (yes, she now has a car!), blasted the music on, and drove till she was too tired to keep her eyes open. She slowly pushed the door open, suddenly she had flashbacks that she didn't want to be rushing back in. (twilight song... Jk!) ----6 months ago---- Her head was spinning, she couldn't think. Everything was a blurr. All she could feel was nothing. Somehow she had made her way out to an ally, the black guy had already left. "What was his name? Jo...no, that's this guy...wait.." She could feel her self falling, she couln'dt barely stand up. She could feel his breath breathing on her. She didn't want to stop it, but she was too tired to stop him. Stopping him would require work, yelling at him would require feeling. She didn't want to feel. She knew what was happneing. They were both drunk, but different. HE was violent. She couldn't stand it any more, she had to get away. "Stop it-- just....no.....stop" "Shut the f8uk up" "Ma'm can I help you?" Jinny suddenly jolted back. That hadn't happen, that night hadn't happened. "Ma'm?" She acknowledged the young man in front of her. He looked barely 25. "Umm...yea, just give me a beer" "Just one?"