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Warm & Fuzzy · 03-05-2002, 10:08 PM

This is my first Fic, so bare with me, lol. Anyhow, I'm just going to ramble on until I can think of a decent plot, lol. So, it's untitled, for now. Tell me what you think of it so far.
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It was Christmas holiday and obvious to Kate and everyone else in the division that this was not where they wanted to be. As usual, when there was much work to be done, papers were flung all over the place, piled on top of one another. Magda's plans to fly to New York with Ben and Gabe were disregarded, Angela and CD were off working on the ‘Ms.Kaysdon’ case, and Jinny had to break, yet, another date with Teddy Blumental, whom she had got along with for the last couple of weeks. Everyone was in complete silence and went on with their business, as if not minding each other would be an excuse to leave for home early. Sometimes, it would seem rather queer, for pin drops would be able to be heard miles away. As for Jinny, she knew she couldn’t stand the silence much longer; this made her head spin.

aeysh1 · 03-05-2002, 10:13 PM

MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!

Babes_Cat · 03-05-2002, 10:17 PM

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Originally posted by aeysh1
MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!

YES! JENNY! POST MORE PLEASE!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 03-05-2002, 11:06 PM

SEE!!!!! I knew you could write a fan-fiction. Yes, taken, you've only posted once so far, but so far so good. And YES! Theodore & Jinny are getting along so far, yay! lol

Great Start, Jenny! Keep going!

Ewan's My Man · 03-05-2002, 11:06 PM

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!

Warm & Fuzzy · 03-05-2002, 11:28 PM

So far, it's still rather pointless, lol. Here's a little more.
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The day was still quiet; yet, nothing was done about it. Hardly anyone was in focus. Jinny is rolling back and forth on her chair; turning to CD, she asks, “How’s the case going?” rather pointlessly.
“Well, we have a lead on some of the students whom where departmentalizing at the time, but that’s about it.”
“Oh,” not knowing what to say next.
Angela continues to shuffle through a couple of student records. “You know, none of these students were straight A’s, maybe Ms. Kaysdon had her reasons for punishing them so?”
“I doubt that. There’s no excuse to threaten a child.” CD replied almost too confidently.

consentida · 03-06-2002, 12:02 AM

MOOORE!!!

sue z q · 03-06-2002, 03:28 AM

YAY!! Jenny's doing a fic!! Great so far! POST MORE!

NewsiesGurl229 · 03-06-2002, 10:28 AM

more more more more more more more more please

Warm & Fuzzy · 03-06-2002, 04:45 PM

Here's more
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It was apparent that the captain was listening to their conversations.
“Aren’t you to suppose to be at Jane Sodel School by now? I thought I’ve told you earlier. This is a serious case. I mean, not any 7-year old would complain to their parents, who in return will complain to the principal that their teacher has been throwing threats and beating her students; one was found dead the other day.”
“No apparently, you haven’t told us this.” CD replied.
“Well, we’ll just be on our way.” Angela added.
With that, Angela and CD grabbed their coats and headed out the door, without saying goodbye. Jinny and Magda, exchanged glances, pondering what was putting their captain in such a mood that day.

NewsiesGurl229 · 03-06-2002, 04:50 PM

great job!

aeysh1 · 03-06-2002, 06:02 PM

more!

Warm & Fuzzy · 03-06-2002, 07:25 PM

Still rambling. lol
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Almost a spilt second after, Kate finds herself fronting her daughter, Amanda. More or less dressed appropriately in a black skirt right above her knees, she enters McCafferty’s office without knocking, impatiently waiting for her mother to get off the phone. Kate shows a bit of interest for her showing up without notification, pushes the HOLD button and tells Amanda that she’ll be with her right away. Then carries on with her conversation.
“No, I’m not just sitting here!” Kate says, almost screaming, “…Yes, I’ve already sent two of my most reliable inspectors…yea…uh huh…they’ll be right there…Reide and DeLorenzo…Okay, bye bye.”
Hanging up, she started to realize how caught up she was in the discussion, for she didn’t acknowledge that her daughter had left, just as mysteriously as she had come.

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 03-06-2002, 08:00 PM

**Mystery Music** lol... Come on, Post more!! I'm waiting.... anytime now... lol

consentida · 03-06-2002, 08:55 PM

MOOOOOOORE!!! C'mon...u hafta post more! this is sooo gooooood!

03-05-2002, 10:08 PM	#1
Warm & Fuzzy Member Forum Fanatic Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Posts: 10,254	UNTITLED-my first fic :D This is my first Fic, so bare with me, lol. Anyhow, I'm just going to ramble on until I can think of a decent plot, lol. So, it's untitled, for now. Tell me what you think of it so far. ___________________________ It was Christmas holiday and obvious to Kate and everyone else in the division that this was not where they wanted to be. As usual, when there was much work to be done, papers were flung all over the place, piled on top of one another. Magda's plans to fly to New York with Ben and Gabe were disregarded, Angela and CD were off working on the ‘Ms.Kaysdon’ case, and Jinny had to break, yet, another date with Teddy Blumental, whom she had got along with for the last couple of weeks. Everyone was in complete silence and went on with their business, as if not minding each other would be an excuse to leave for home early. Sometimes, it would seem rather queer, for pin drops would be able to be heard miles away. As for Jinny, she knew she couldn’t stand the silence much longer; this made her head spin.
	__________________ "To the world, you may be one person, but to one person, you may be the world." ~Unknown

03-05-2002, 10:13 PM	#2
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03-05-2002, 11:06 PM	#4
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	SEE!!!!! I knew you could write a fan-fiction. Yes, taken, you've only posted once so far, but so far so good. And YES! Theodore & Jinny are getting along so far, yay! lol Great Start, Jenny! Keep going!
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03-06-2002, 03:28 AM	#8
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03-05-2002, 11:28 PM	#6
Warm & Fuzzy Member Forum Fanatic Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Posts: 10,254	So far, it's still rather pointless, lol. Here's a little more. ______________________________ The day was still quiet; yet, nothing was done about it. Hardly anyone was in focus. Jinny is rolling back and forth on her chair; turning to CD, she asks, “How’s the case going?” rather pointlessly. “Well, we have a lead on some of the students whom where departmentalizing at the time, but that’s about it.” “Oh,” not knowing what to say next. Angela continues to shuffle through a couple of student records. “You know, none of these students were straight A’s, maybe Ms. Kaysdon had her reasons for punishing them so?” “I doubt that. There’s no excuse to threaten a child.” CD replied almost too confidently.

03-06-2002, 12:02 AM	#7
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	MOOORE!!!

03-06-2002, 10:28 AM	#9
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03-06-2002, 04:45 PM	#10
Warm & Fuzzy Member Forum Fanatic Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Posts: 10,254	Here's more __________________________________ It was apparent that the captain was listening to their conversations. “Aren’t you to suppose to be at Jane Sodel School by now? I thought I’ve told you earlier. This is a serious case. I mean, not any 7-year old would complain to their parents, who in return will complain to the principal that their teacher has been throwing threats and beating her students; one was found dead the other day.” “No apparently, you haven’t told us this.” CD replied. “Well, we’ll just be on our way.” Angela added. With that, Angela and CD grabbed their coats and headed out the door, without saying goodbye. Jinny and Magda, exchanged glances, pondering what was putting their captain in such a mood that day.

03-06-2002, 04:50 PM	#11
NewsiesGurl229 Sweet scaredy cat Forum Regular Join Date: May 08, 2001 Location: Nebraska...where I'm in love with Carter and I blissfully watch all of my shows over and over and over...again! Posts: 795	great job!

03-06-2002, 06:02 PM	#12
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03-06-2002, 07:25 PM	#13
Warm & Fuzzy Member Forum Fanatic Join Date: Feb 02, 2001 Posts: 10,254	Still rambling. lol ______________________________________ Almost a spilt second after, Kate finds herself fronting her daughter, Amanda. More or less dressed appropriately in a black skirt right above her knees, she enters McCafferty’s office without knocking, impatiently waiting for her mother to get off the phone. Kate shows a bit of interest for her showing up without notification, pushes the HOLD button and tells Amanda that she’ll be with her right away. Then carries on with her conversation. “No, I’m not just sitting here!” Kate says, almost screaming, “…Yes, I’ve already sent two of my most reliable inspectors…yea…uh huh…they’ll be right there…Reide and DeLorenzo…Okay, bye bye.” Hanging up, she started to realize how caught up she was in the discussion, for she didn’t acknowledge that her daughter had left, just as mysteriously as she had come.

03-06-2002, 08:00 PM	#14
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Mystery Music lol... Come on, Post more!! I'm waiting.... anytime now... lol

03-06-2002, 08:55 PM	#15
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	MOOOOOOORE!!! C'mon...u hafta post more! this is sooo gooooood!