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Part 1
(The plane has just taken off, Diane is on her way to Boston to visit Sam) Diane- *starts to hum a tune she has just made up* Man- Do you mind Miss I’m trying to read *he goes back to looking at his book* Diane- I’m sorry I’m just excited that’s all, I’m going to visit a friend in Boston that I haven’t seen in nine years. Man- That’s nice…. Diane- I don’t get to see him much, I live in California and he lives in Boston, and there’s not much time for us to socialize. Man- That’s nice, write a book…. Diane- I’ve already written a book and a couple of movie screenplays…..do you recognize me from anywhere? Man- Not that I can think of…..Oh I know now I’ve seen you on a couple of award shows, you were the one who always gave those long speeches…..you would go on and on about the strangest things….Wait a minute your Diane Chambers. Diane- That’s correct….but I don’t find my speeches boring, strange or long, they have some importance you know. Man- Lady…..I get the point I’m trying to read shut up already. Diane- *she talks loudly* I’m trying to have a polite conversation with you and all you care about is reading a stupid magazine. I’ll shut up when I’m damn well ready! (Everyone stares at her) Diane- *she looks to everyone* I’m sorry….I’m excited I’m visiting a friend when I get off this plane. Man2- *he whispers to his wife the woman sitting next to him* Next time we’ll fly first class. Woman- Right. (Some hours pass Diane continues to talk about her friend and her work and the dinner they serve and about anything she could think of, Then after a little while they landed and we see Diane getting off the plane) Diane- Bye Everyone Its been a joyous experience. Everyone- *mutters* (She then rents a car and arrives at Cheers she gets there and sees that all the windows are boarded up and the sign says “closed”) Diane- ::looks at it for a little bit:: (Fade out) Part 2 Diane-*she gets back into her car and drives over to Lilith’s apartment, she knocks on her door* Lilith- *she answers the door* Hello Diane- Hi Lilith, Its Diane may I come in? Lilith- I guess so….. Diane- Thanks. *she looks worried* Lilith- Something must be wrong.. Sit down. Diane- Thank you….. Lilith- Whats wrong? I’m off duty from work but for you I can make an exception and a cheaper rate. Diane- Thanks I guess. It all started when I had a vacation from work so I decided to come and visit Sam as a surprise. I got on a plane and had a wonderful flight. Then I went to Cheers and all the windows were boarded up…..so then I came here Lilith- Don’t you know? Diane- Know What? Sam- Sam is getting married. Diane- What? Lilith- Yes….Didn’t he tell you? Diane- No I don’t believe so…. Lilith- He said all he wanted was a small ceremony….him and his fiancé Jackie are getting married tonight at St. Paul’s Church. Diane- I have to go see him.. Lilith- On his wedding night? No I think you should stay here you may ruin his whole wedding. Diane- But I have to see him……I need to see him tonight. Lilith- Why? Can’t you see him tomorrow? Diane- No because I L-L-L-ove Sam. Lilith- What? You can’t be serious Diane- I didn’t come for a visit I came to see Sam to tell him that I love him. Lilith- Well you can’t see him tonight.. Diane- I have to…. Lilith- That wouldn’t be practical I’ve had experience with this, It doesn’t work out. Diane- I have to see him Lilith- Diane….W--- (Before she could finish Diane was out the door and on her way to the church) Lilith- I never really liked her….that much… (Fade Out) Part 3 (Diane got back in her car and drove over to the church….) Diane- *she runs in* STOP!!!!!!!!!!!! (Sam and his fiance turn around surprised) Sam- Diane……Is something wrong? Diane- I love you. Sam- I don’t love you Jean- He loves me Minister- You may now kiss the bride Sam (They Kiss) Diane- NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SAM!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Diane wakes up in her house) Diane-*dials up the airport* Hello this is Diane Chambers I’m sorry to cancel at the last minute but I won’t be able to make Flight 6573 to Boston. Thank You. Bye *she hangs up the phone and goes back to sleep* (To Be Continued?) |
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I luv my hitachi vcr
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That was good!! i got into it.. Part 2!!!!!!!!
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I really enjoyed that. It was humorous, touching and sad. Way to go!
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Should I write another one?
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Sure, it gets my vote!
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that was great you did a very good job at it,it was interesting and suspencful and touching at the same time,what words can i use that haven,t been said before,i hope you can write another job,if i had diane chambers vocabullary i would think of some interesting and big words to use,well congraguations,WELL DONE
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Good job!!
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