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Ewan's My Man · 02-15-2002, 10:15 PM

Okie Dokie...here is a fic. I got part of this idea from Megan and the other part is by me. So...here it is.

A cab pulled up to the Division building place(I dunno the name) and Jinny stepped out of the cab. She paid the cab driver his money and walked inside. An elevator door opened and she filed in with the rest of the people waiting. She went to the back of the elevator. "Wait...hold that," someone yelled running towards the closing elevator doors. The person was none other then Teddy Bluthemal. Jinny turned away as he got on the elevator...it was just the day before when they had there "talk" and she was definitely not ready to see him today, let alone be stuck on the same elevator as him. She glanced at him when he first got on then stared at the numbers the rest of the time. When it reached her floor she brushed past Teddy and goes into the Division. "Hey Jin," says Magda. "Hey Mag," she replies putting her stuff on her desk and looks into the captain's office. She sees Charles and Kate at it again. "What are they going at this time?" Jinny asks. "Oh...it is that whole mentally unstable guy thing...it turns out he might get the death penalty."

Ok...I m gonna stop now...that was just a lil taste.

Babes_Cat · 02-15-2002, 11:03 PM

MORE HUN! REAL SOON PLEASE!

InspectorExstead · 02-15-2002, 11:11 PM

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Originally posted by #1JoFan
A cab pulled up to the Division building place(I dunno the name) and Jinny stepped out of the cab.

you mean the sfpd toots ? OMG..I LOVE IT..TOLD U I WOULD..PSOT MORE ! LIKE SOON .....MAYBE LIKE RIGHT NOW !

sue z q · 02-16-2002, 03:48 AM

Ooooo, GREAT start!!!! Post more!!!!!

Jo/Blair_fan · 02-16-2002, 12:09 PM

Gurl u have to post more This is soooo SWEET!!

dovesong · 02-16-2002, 01:26 PM

Okay, so the general consensus?

MORE

I'll go along with that.

Ewan's My Man · 02-16-2002, 10:18 PM

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Originally posted by dovesong
general consensus?

Where's my dictionary?!?!?!?!?!?! I think I might kno wut that means...hehe! LOL! I will add some more laterz peoplez!!!

Babes_Cat · 02-16-2002, 10:37 PM

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Originally posted by #1JoFan

Where's my dictionary?!?!?!?!?!?! I think I might kno wut that means...hehe! LOL! I will add some more laterz peoplez!!!

Umm.. what everyone wants?

Ewan's My Man · 02-16-2002, 11:29 PM

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Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl

Umm.. what everyone wants?

Thank ya hun!

Ewan's My Man · 02-18-2002, 06:50 PM

Here is some more for you peoplez!

"I thought they agreed that they weren't going to use the death penalty," Jinny said sitting down at her desk. Magda sighs, "Yea...well...things change. Now Captain is all mad b/c she promised the guy's sister that the death penalty wasn't going to be used. His sister came by the station after you left yesterday, she was mad, Captain feels worse, and there they are fighting." "Thanks for the book, Mag," Jinny replied, rolling her eyes." Magda laughs and walks off sitting down at her desk. The look up to the sound of a door slamming seeing Charles walking off apparently in a bad mood and Kate sitting at her desk staring off into space. She then stood up and walked outside of her office. She sighs, "Jinny, Magda," and motions for them to come into the office with her. They get up and follow the Captain into her office. "There was a murder at 101 Maple St. Age: 25, Female, Neighbors said they heard gun shots but no one had the guts to find out what was going on, I want you on it." "Ok," Magda replied picking up the minala(sp?) folder, "We'll get on it." They leave the office, gather their things, then get ready to leave.

I will post some more later. I will try and put Nate and CD in the next scene.

Jo/Blair_fan · 02-18-2002, 07:34 PM

Sweet I need more!!!!!!!

consentida · 02-18-2002, 07:40 PM

this is really good. post more!!!!!

02-15-2002, 10:15 PM	#1
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	Here is a fan fic...I suck wit titles Okie Dokie...here is a fic. I got part of this idea from Megan and the other part is by me. So...here it is. A cab pulled up to the Division building place(I dunno the name) and Jinny stepped out of the cab. She paid the cab driver his money and walked inside. An elevator door opened and she filed in with the rest of the people waiting. She went to the back of the elevator. "Wait...hold that," someone yelled running towards the closing elevator doors. The person was none other then Teddy Bluthemal. Jinny turned away as he got on the elevator...it was just the day before when they had there "talk" and she was definitely not ready to see him today, let alone be stuck on the same elevator as him. She glanced at him when he first got on then stared at the numbers the rest of the time. When it reached her floor she brushed past Teddy and goes into the Division. "Hey Jin," says Magda. "Hey Mag," she replies putting her stuff on her desk and looks into the captain's office. She sees Charles and Kate at it again. "What are they going at this time?" Jinny asks. "Oh...it is that whole mentally unstable guy thing...it turns out he might get the death penalty." Ok...I m gonna stop now...that was just a lil taste.
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02-16-2002, 03:48 AM	#4
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02-16-2002, 12:09 PM	#5
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02-16-2002, 01:26 PM	#6
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02-15-2002, 11:03 PM	#2
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02-18-2002, 06:50 PM	#10
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	Here is some more for you peoplez! "I thought they agreed that they weren't going to use the death penalty," Jinny said sitting down at her desk. Magda sighs, "Yea...well...things change. Now Captain is all mad b/c she promised the guy's sister that the death penalty wasn't going to be used. His sister came by the station after you left yesterday, she was mad, Captain feels worse, and there they are fighting." "Thanks for the book, Mag," Jinny replied, rolling her eyes." Magda laughs and walks off sitting down at her desk. The look up to the sound of a door slamming seeing Charles walking off apparently in a bad mood and Kate sitting at her desk staring off into space. She then stood up and walked outside of her office. She sighs, "Jinny, Magda," and motions for them to come into the office with her. They get up and follow the Captain into her office. "There was a murder at 101 Maple St. Age: 25, Female, Neighbors said they heard gun shots but no one had the guts to find out what was going on, I want you on it." "Ok," Magda replied picking up the minala(sp?) folder, "We'll get on it." They leave the office, gather their things, then get ready to leave. I will post some more later. I will try and put Nate and CD in the next scene.

02-18-2002, 07:34 PM	#11
Jo/Blair_fan NMK fan forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 22, 2001 Location: KSU WILDCATS RULE! EMAW Posts: 1,202	Sweet I need more!!!!!!!

02-18-2002, 07:40 PM	#12
consentida oh, you pretty things Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jan 21, 2002 Location: New York Posts: 3,841	this is really good. post more!!!!!