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ok..so here's a fanfic by me !!
It was Sunday night. 9:00 PM. Work was over. Jinny sat on her bed in her father's house for the last time. Well the last time she would be apartment-less. She had found an apartment that had very low rent. And since she had gotten her paycheck last week Jinny had decided to go for it. Jinny to herself:Why didn't they invite me to the bar ? I mean it's not like I would've gone..I'm sure I wouldn't be able to handle it. But just offerring would be have made me feel so much better. She glances at an 8 by 10 pic frame w/ a pic of her and her mom just 3 weeks before she killed herself. Or as Jinny put it blew ehr brains out. Jinny:WHY MOM ? why'd you go ? Just then Jinny's Dad kncoks on the door, startling Jinny. She jumps up. Jinny:Come in. JohnSR:Hey Jinny girl. Listen dinner'll be ready in 10 minutes. Casey and John should be here soon. Jinny:Great I'm starved. JohnSr:Ok good. John Sr. leaves. Jinny starts going through her desk drawers. Just then she found something. Her diary. She hadn't thought of it in ages. She used to love to write in it every night. But one night she stopped. The night after her mom was killed. Jiny turned to the last entry with shaky hands. The top read February 18. Jinny started reading..... Dear Diary- you're not going to believe this. Mom, she, well, she killed herself. I was coming home from school and I found her..dead...in the bathroom. Everybody came..they took her away. It isn't fair. They say she won't come back..ever ! it's not true it just isn't. how can it be ? just 12 hours ago she was calling me and telling me I'd miss the bus if i didn't scoot my little booty in the kitchen. I remembered she wrote me a not and put in my lunch box. I'll put it in an envelope. and put the envelope in here. Mom's gone ? It's just so unbelievable. Dad's calling. I'll write more later tonight... That was all that was written on the last entry. Then Jinny saw a small envelope taped to a page of her childhood diary. She opened it slowly and carefully. She took it. It was the last note her mom wrote her. She began to read it.... Jinny I love you. And I will always love you. Even if I'm not here. *Jinny remembered thinking how confused she was about that last sentence when she read the note* But I want you to know...you and your brothers have given me such joy. Being a mother is wonderful. I pray that you will make it in the real world. If you decide to be a cop then I just want to say I'm sorry I can't be there to watch you. Take care and remember my love, I love you. It was all clear now. THIS was her mother's suicide note. She had written it to Jinny. When Jinny first read it she didn't undertand at all. Then she got home and found her mom but she didn't put two and two together. After they took her mom's body away Jinny put the note in an envelope, secured it w/ tape, and taped it to her page. JohnSR: *Yelling* JINNY ! CASEY AND JOHN ARE HERE ! JohnJr:Let's eat ! This startled Jinny and she put the diary back into the drawer.... more ? |
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i think its great post more
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Oh i don't know, what a hard question! let me think about that...hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...YES!!!!
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This is AWESOME!!!
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Woah!!! Add more... NOW!!!!
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<center> KELLY «`·..¤* *¤..·`» </center>Dumbledore: Dear Mr. Potter, you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Soon, you and your schoolmates will join us here, and your education in the magical arts will begin. Ron: That was bloody brilliant! Professor McGonagall: Well, thank you for that assessment, Mr.Weasley. <p><center><a href="http://atypically.net/hp/hetquiz.shtml" target="_blank"><img src="http://atypically.net/hp/images/harryginny.jpg" alt="[harry + ginny]" border="0" width="300" height="175" /></a></center></p> |
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ok..so uh here's more....
Jinny shouting back:Aright I'm coming. She runs down the stairs. Casey:Hey Jinny. *he hugs her* JohnJr:yeahyeahyeah..listen can we just eat..i gotta get back to work. Jinny:Oh you missed me that much huh ? JohnSr:alright dinner is served *brings out a burnt chicken with salad that has dressing that's expired* Jinny, casey and JohnJr all look at it in digust. Jinny:Uh you know what dad ? I'm not THAT hungry. JohnSr:What are you talking about ? it's delic ! here...*offers some to Jinny* Jinny:*has a disgusted look on her face* no dad really. umm..i know how much you love chicken and all so i'll let you have it.... Casey and JohnJr:Yeah.... JohnSr:Yeah it's a little burnt huh ? Jinny, Casey and JohnJr:No really ? JohnSr k..we'll order pizza. What do you guys want.Jinny:MM...mushrooms and olives. JohnJr:Pepporoni. Jinny:John that's dead pig. JohnJr:Yeah so ? A man's gotta eat ? whatc you talking about jinny - you eat dead animals all the time. casey:I want pineapples. JohnJr:Pineapples ? gay ass *** *he mumbles that under his breath* Casey:I heard that john. Johnsr:Heyheyhey...we'll get a pizza w/ works..k ? They all agree. So they eat pizza and now they're watching tv. Jinny ad this is the last night i'm gonna be hereJohnJr:*sarcastically* what u gonna shoot yourself ? Jinny gives him a look that says "You know what john i'm not talkin to you so why don't you just shut up !" JohnJr backs off. Jinny:Anyway....Uh..Mr.Stephen... JohnSR:Mr.Stephen ? Jinny:yeah that's my manager's name...dan stephen. JohnSr:Stephen..dan stephen....*clicking his tongue* Jinny ad ? Dad you ok ?JohnSr:Oh uh that name it sound sounds familiar. like...no...it couldn't be. Jinny:WHAT DAD ? JohnSr:Oh nothing..nothing at all. Jinny ad I'm serious.JohnSr:I am too..there's nothing to talk about. Listen john don't you have work to do ? Jinny got this weird feeling that her dad was trying to avoid the subject. Maybe they were friends ? Maybe they worked together. Maybe he was his manager ? Maybe....... more later !
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ok..so uh here's more....
Jinny shouting back:Aright I'm coming. She runs down the stairs. Casey:Hey Jinny. *he hugs her* JohnJr:yeahyeahyeah..listen can we just eat..i gotta get back to work. Jinny:Oh you missed me that much huh ? JohnSr:alright dinner is served *brings out a burnt chicken with salad that has dressing that's expired* Jinny, casey and JohnJr all look at it in digust. Jinny:Uh you know what dad ? I'm not THAT hungry. JohnSr:What are you talking about ? it's delic ! here...*offers some to Jinny* Jinny:*has a disgusted look on her face* no dad really. umm..i know how much you love chicken and all so i'll let you have it.... Casey and JohnJr:Yeah.... JohnSr:Yeah it's a little burnt huh ? Jinny, Casey and JohnJr:No really ? JohnSr k..we'll order pizza. What do you guys want.Jinny:MM...mushrooms and olives. JohnJr:Pepporoni. Jinny:John that's dead pig. JohnJr:Yeah so ? A man's gotta eat ? whatc you talking about jinny - you eat dead animals all the time. casey:I want pineapples. JohnJr:Pineapples ? gay ass *** *he mumbles that under his breath* Casey:I heard that john. Johnsr:Heyheyhey...we'll get a pizza w/ works..k ? They all agree. So they eat pizza and now they're watching tv. Jinny ad this is the last night i'm gonna be hereJohnJr:*sarcastically* what u gonna shoot yourself ? Jinny gives him a look that says "You know what john i'm not talkin to you so why don't you just shut up !" JohnJr backs off. Jinny:Anyway....Uh..Mr.Stephen... JohnSR:Mr.Stephen ? Jinny:yeah that's my manager's name...dan stephen. JohnSr:Stephen..dan stephen....*clicking his tongue* Jinny ad ? Dad you ok ?JohnSr:Oh uh that name it sound sounds familiar. like...no...it couldn't be. Jinny:WHAT DAD ? JohnSr:Oh nothing..nothing at all. Jinny ad I'm serious.JohnSr:I am too..there's nothing to talk about. Listen john don't you have work to do ? Jinny got this weird feeling that her dad was trying to avoid the subject. Maybe they were friends ? Maybe they worked together. Maybe he was his manager ? Maybe....... more later !
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Oops I did it again...i played w/ the post..got very confused, i'm not that intelligent...lol. thank you thank you. oh no please...don't beg never do encores (nancy in strange voices)...anyway. i doubleposted. so just ignore the last one or the first one. doesn't matter...they're botht he same ! hey-oh ! lol...
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I'll Cover You
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MORE!!!
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ok here's more if anyone's reading...
So Casey and John leave. Morning time.... Jinny:Bye dad. JohnSR:Bye jinnygirl. call me ok ? Jinny:*hugs her dad* Will do. *jinny walks out of the house and sees the taxi..she still doesn't have a car* She tells the driver where to go and he goes there... ok so she's here ! at her new apartment. Jinny:Waterfall Apartments..hmm...well at least i'm iving it a shot. She walks to the managers office. Jinny: DAN ! it's jinny... Dan pops up outta nowhere... Dan: Hey Jinny ! Jinny: hey...ok so umm...can i have a key to my apartment. Dan: oh yeayeahyeah..sure...first i need to see your license. Jinny: WHY ? *dan points to a sign which reads IT IS APARTMENT POLICIY TO CHECK INFORMATION OUT BEFORE MOVING IN* Jinny: ah...i see...*hands him her liscense* might as well keep it..not like i need a use for it. Dan: No car ? Jinny: please... Dan looks at his computer screen. Jinny: anything wrong ? Dan ?! Dan just looks at the computer screen. Jinny snaps her fingers in front of his face. Jinny: DAN ! EARTH TO DAN ! dan: Oh sorry...your last name's exstead. Jinny: yeah and yours is stephen. so ? Dan: was your mom's name Jennifer Exstead ? *Jinny has a very confused look on her face* Jinny: yeah...why ? Dan: oh my god...so you're jenny and john's little jinny girl. Jinny: uh....*still looks confused* how did you know my mom ? Dan is smiling. Jinny: Dan Dan h my god..well slap my butt and call me abraham.Jinny:uh no that's okay....how'd you know my mom. Dan:well know that's not important is it ? Jinny to herself:why is everyone avoiding the subject of dan and mom ? |
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lol....
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"slap my butt and call me abraham" ahahahhaha tats funny
annnnyway this is gr8! post more soon
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ok..so here's more...
Jinny takes her apartment keys from dan and walks up the stairs. Jinny to herself:what was he talking about ? how'd he know my mom ? and me ? well if he knew my mom then he knew me. smart jinny, real smart. oh sleep..i need sleep. must sleep. don't want the cap bitchin over me at work tomorrow. oh gotta call dad. Ok...so here she is in front of her new apartment. Jinny:apartment #32...here goes nothing....*she opens the door* *Looks around* Jinny:mm....furniture ! that's what i need ! i need a bed. i can't believe they threw my old stuff away...those creeps. anyway... she grabs the phone, which has been previously installed compliments of dan, and dials her dad's number. Jinny:Hey dad. it's me. JohnSr:Hey ! Jinny ! so how's the place. Jinny:yeah great listen dad...the guy, my manager, he knew mom. JohnSr:Really ? Jinny:Well aparently slap my butt and call me abraham means yeah he knew mom ! JohnSR:jinny- Jinny:WHAT ? JohnSR:I knew dan-your mom too. Jinny:How ? what did you guys all go to the same country club or somethin ? JohnSR:Not really. Jinny:What you were partners ? JohnSR:Jinny this is hard ok ? so i'm just going to go out and say it. Jinny:WHAT ?! Dad c'mon you're killin me here. JohnSr:Your mom-and dan- Jinny:yeah..... JohnSr:Your mom and dan they uh... JohnSr is crying now. Jinny:dad what is it ? JohnSR:Jinny i don't want you to hate me-or your mother. Jinny is getting upset now. JohnSr:Jinny your mom and dan had an affair. more later |
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U have to post more now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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