A One Night Stand Comes Back To Haunt Her

[InspectorExstead]

ok so here's a fanfic by me and caitlin.




Jinny to herself:My second AA meeting. Bunch of crap. Here's a list of all the AA meeting..blah blah blah. I don't know why I'm even doing this. Maybe to shut Magda up. Why is she so nosy all the time ? For once, just once, can she let ME live MY own life.
Jinny had had a bad day. The Captain yelled at her because she didn't get her facts straight. Is it her fault that witnesses lie ? And to top it off Magda had threatened to drag Jinny with her to the next meeting if she didn't show up for this. So not wanting Magda to show up w/ her at the next meeting Jinny decided she would do it.

Jinny walking down the hall to room 4 where this weeks meeting was. Suddenly a guy from nowhere came behind her.

Jinny:what the hell ?!?!
Guy:Say sumthin Jinny ?
Jinny:Uhh...and you are ?
Guy:Oh...uh I'm uh Tom..Tom Banks. (lol)
Jinny:And I care because....?
Guy:We go to the same meetings. We're in the same support group.
Jinny:Oh...

Jinny didn't care how cute he was (and he was VERY cute !) she just got this weird feeling around him. It wasn't a he-is-not-good-in-bed feeling but more a cop feeling. Knowing right from wrong. Danger from non-danger.

Jinny:Yeah well here we are...

She had never been happy to get into the room.She just didn't want to hear, talk or look at that creepy guy.

Jinny to herself after she took her place among the other recovering alcoholics :He is so familiar. I just can't put my thumb on it. Has he ever been to the division ? And how'd he know my name ? I've only been to one meeting. And I mentioned my name like once. *shudders*

Therapist Guy:Alright group. Let's start. Jinny you came.
Jinny sighs.
Jinny:Yeah....
Therapist:Great. That's good. Group let's welcome Jinny.
Jinny:Uh we did this last time.
Therapist:Yes I know but this time I would like it if you joined in.

So the group takes turns saying who they are and why they are here.

"I'm Maria and I have a drinking problem."
"I'm Ted and I drink too much."
"I'm Stephanie, I uh...I drank my life away."
"I'm Maggie. I drank and it cost me my kids. They're in a foster home right now."
"I'm Tom and I drink too much. I thought AA might help me relieve the tensions inside my body."
*He catches a glance at Jinny and winks at her. Jinny goes "oh god !"*
"I'm Dan and I drank and I abused my wife."

Then the therapist says:I'm Carol. And I used to drink. I've been sober for 25 years.
*Jinny mouths a whistle*

They all look at Jinny waiting for her to introduce herself and say that she has a problem.

Jinny:My name's Jinny and I uh..I uh *sighs* I drink...or at least I used to. Before I got suspended. *Tom chuckles. Jinny glances at him* Yeah....that's all.

Therapist:Good Jinny that's good. Admitting you have a problem *gets cut off by Jinny*
Jinny:Yeah yeah I know I know. Is the first step to recovery.
Therapist:Okay....

The group takes turns saying why they used to drink too much. Then it comes to Jinny.

Jinny:You know I dunno..I can't.
Tom:C'mon Jin. SHARE !
Jinny just looks at him.

Therapist:Ok. Meeting's over. Jinny we'll start with you at our next meeting which will be the day after tomorrow, Thursday.

They all leave.

Jinny goes out onto the street. She sees a pay phone so she goes to call her dad.

Jinny dials number....

JohnSr:Hello ?
Jinny:Hey dad it's me.
JohnSR:JinnyGirl. How was the meeting ?
Jinny:Yeah it was comforting. Anyways..I'm by the market. You want me to get you anything ?
JohnSr:Yeah..can you get some lettuce and carrots.
Jinnyk. Anything else ?
JohnSr:And some herbal tea.
Jinny:Herbal tea dad ??
JohnSr:Yeah your old man's drinking herbal tea ? What do you think of that ?
Jinny:I dunno. OK I'll be home in 20.
JohnSr:You gonna get a cab ?
Jinny:Yeah right. Like I can afford one. No I'll walk. The excersise will do me good.
JohnSr:Ok bye.
Jinny:Bye.

Jinny hangs up the phone.

She crosses the street and walks half a block down to the market. She enters.

Goes to the vegetable aisle.

Jinny:Ok..let's see.....Mmm....celery..brocclie...parsley..ah ha ! Lettuce. And carrots. Mm..does dad want big or baby ?? Well I'll get the big ones...save a few cents. They'll just have to be Bugs Bunny and chew on em. She then goes to the tea/coffe aisle and grabs a pack of herbal tea bags.

Jinny goes to the checkout stand.

Lady:Hello.
Jinny:*Smiles*Hey.
Lady scans the items.
Lady: $6.50.
Jinny:For lettuce, carrots and herbal tea ? Sheesh !
Lady laughs.
Jinny hands her $6.50.
Lady:Thank you *hands her reciept* And have a nice night.
Jinny:You too.

She walked to the door. She saw someone...a shadowy figure standing by the carts...

Jinny to herself:Mmm...whatever. $6.50 ? Man that's a lot for just 2 veggies and tea.

Jinny laves the market. She goes to the street corner. There was no one there so she decided to cross. Just then a car came towards her missing her by just a few inches.

Jinny yelling:HEY !! WATCH IT !!!!!! The nerve of some people. *By now the guy ahd taken off* Doesn't even bother to stop at a STOP SIGN !!!! Well at least I got 3 digits off his liscense. I'll deal with it tomorrow. I almost died.

Jinny did not like the creepy feeling she had. So instead of walking she decided to jog.

Jinny was almost at her dad's. Just a block left. One more.

All of a sudden a drunk popped up from nowhere. He looked like he hadn't had anything to eat for days. And he had a big bottle of brandy in his hand.


what do y'all think ?

[iluvnancymckeon05]

it's gr8, post more soon.

[Ewan's My Man]

O...this is REALLY good...u HAVE TO post more!!!

[Esperanza]

This is a really good start!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

[NewsiesGurl229]

Originally posted by #1JoFan
O...this is REALLY good...u HAVE TO post more!!!

agree

[Babes_Cat]

"Geezus!" Jinny says as she puts her hand over her heart. She looks closer at the drunk man, "Tom?!?!" He slurs and hiccups, "Heya Jinny! Want some?" He holds up the bottle. "Yeah, yeah I do but not from you." Tom looks confused. Jinny shrugs, "Dunno what you put in there but I'm not that stupid as to accept a drink from you." "Wahetver, hey, you wanna come home with me?" He winks. Jinny rolls her eyes, "You don't have a snowball's chance in hell of me going home with you. Sorry that's a NO!" Tom gets a very pissed look on his face, "I SAID COME WITH ME!" He says and grabs her arm. "And I said NO!" She says as she pulls his arm off of hers and kicks him in the stomach. He falls over and knocks his head on the concrete and becomes unconscious.

"I'm Tom and I drink too much. I thought AA might help me relieve the tensions inside my body. What a bunch of crap!" Jinny says outloud to herself. She laughs, "Bye!" Jinny then sighs and jogs off, "If I don't have a heart attack before I get home then that's a miracle!"

Jinny opens the door to her father's house, "I'm home!" "Hey JinnyGirl, you get everything?" "Yeah, tea and the veggies." Say says as she holds up the bag. She then thinks to herself *And got almost run over by a car and then scared by a drunk*

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HAHA! Y'all: You don't have a snowball's chance in Hell Is my fav. line! LOL! I say it all the time!

[InspectorExstead]

LMAO !! OMG !!! THAT IS TOO FUNNY !!!...YOU DON'T HAVE A SNOWBALL'S CHANCE IN HELL....WHAT A BUNCH OF CRAP...LOL...ALMOST GOT RUNOVER....OH MAN ! THAT WAS JUST TOO FUNNY !!! I'M GONNA GO CALM DOWN NOW !!

[Babes_Cat]

Originally posted by InspectorExstead


LMAO !! OMG !!! THAT IS TOO FUNNY !!!...YOU DON'T HAVE A SNOWBALL'S CHANCE IN HELL....WHAT A BUNCH OF CRAP...LOL...ALMOST GOT RUNOVER....OH MAN ! THAT WAS JUST TOO FUNNY !!! I'M GONNA GO CALM DOWN NOW !!

Yeah, Megan calm down and.... ADD SOME MORE!

[sue z q]

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!

MMMMOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!

hehe

[InspectorExstead]

lol..oh man i'm STILL laughing..ok..uhh...here's more....


Jinny's dad walks in...

JohnSr:Hey JinnyGirl. What up ?
JinnyAD ? What up ? umm...i think you're a bit too old to be doing that...
JohnSr:Oh please...a man is never too old. Listen they're have a 32nd annual sober and clean socer game.
Jinny:Oooh how fun. And who are "they" may i ask ?
JohnSR:Oh you know AA people..so they wanna know if you can go.
Jinnyad I don't do soccer. ok bad choice of words...i don't play soccer.
JohnSR:I know it's been a while...
Jinny:*getting mad* NO dad...when i say I don't play soccer...it means I DON'T PLAY SOCCER !
JohnSR:It'll be fun.
Jinny:I'll think about it..ok ? I'm gonna shower...
JohnSR:Ok...hey i made dinner...left you a plate.
Jinnyh what is it ?
JohnSR:Shrimp and rice.
Jinny:uhh..shrimp and rice..wow. you're beoming quite the cook aren't you ?
JohnSr:*does a little elvis impression* thank you thank you very much !
Jinny is laughing...
Jinny:Ok dad...i'm gonna go shower.
JohnSR:Ok jinnygirl.


SO Jinny grabs her towel, a clean brand a pair of underwear and her pjs.

Jinny:That drunk...that TOM! i'm sure he needs aa. *laughs* tensions my ass...yeah his tensions are the price of liquior going up. The nerve of some people. and he ACTUALLY thought he was getting some...boy he must've been real drunk. i mean real drunk.

John SR is passing through the hall when he hears Jinny in the bathroom.

JohnSR:Jinny...you talking to yourself ?
Jinny:uhh..No ! i was practicing what to say when i call up those aa people.
JohnSr:Ok...

Jinny takes her clothes off and opens the water. She's taking a shower...when all of a sudden....

something flew through the window.

Jinny:WHAT THE HELL ? A ROCK !?

she looks outside the window...and there standing in her front year..well her dad's....is TOM!

Jinny:OH MY GOD !!!! What the hell is wrong w/ you. *she looks at herself* Oh my god..i'm naked...she grabs a towel. *this is the first time she's actually cared about a guy looking at her while she's naked*

She looks outside the window again. Tom is nodding his head and smiling.

Jinny:uh...NO !

SHe opens the window.

Tom:Hey..s..ex..y.
jinny:God i wonder how many beers YOU had. mr.i need aa or else my life is over.
Tom:Uh no see that's not true..i DO need aa. so uhh..you're really sexy jin hun...when you're naked.
Jinny:You know what ? that's against the law..looking in on someone...specially when they're taking a damn shower. You pervert. what the hell is wrong w/ you ?
Tom:Oh come on..you know you want me..
Jinny:Uh no ! that's ok ! Listen i'm gonna give you to the count of 5 to get the hell offa my lawn or i swear to god i'm gonna call the cops...no wait. i'm a cop ! i'm gonna come down there and arrest your drunk ass !
Tom:well no see Jinny this is your dad's lawn.

Jinny thinking:what the hell...how did he know that ? and how could he remember it ...he's so wasted ?!?!

Tom:Ok..i'm leaving...but if u change your mind..you know where i am...*kisses the air..pretending to kiss her*

*Jinny looks disgusted*

Tom leaves.

JohnSR knocks on the bathroom door...

JohnSR:Hey Jinny who is that ? what's going on ?

your turn caitlin....

[Babes_Cat]

Originally posted by InspectorExstead
your turn caitlin....

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH GREAT! Hmmm... lemme think, lemme think!

[Ewan's My Man]

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE...uh...now!

[iluvnancymckeon05]

omg, post more, it's so good

[iluvnancymckeon05]

post more soon. it's so good.

[Babes_Cat]

Originally posted by #1JoFan
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE...uh...now!

HAHA, Ok. Here's more even though the now was more like a week! SORRY!

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Jinny wraps the towel tighter around her and opens the door and pokes her head out, "Nothings going on Dad." "But I just heard someone... " He points into the bathroom. "Nope no one hear. Please can I finish my shower?" She asks. He nods, "yeah." He turns and walks away, "I coulda sworn I heard someone... I know I did. Ahhh whatever...." Jinny smiles and shuts the door and continues with her shower.

The next day Magda and Jinny are on break and they are at a diner getting some lunch. Jinny puts down her menu and looks at Magda.

"I think I got this guy who's been following me." "You do?" "Yeah, I mean he has been at the AA meeting but the thing is he has no problem. He's not a drunk. And then he came to the house last night and he threw a rock into the bathroom, I was taking a shower...." "Do I even want to know?" Mag says with a smile on her face. Jinny shrugs and shakes her head, "Probably not."

"So really Jin, a stalker?" Magda asks. "I guess, but I don't want him to be a stalker," Jinny sighs, "I don't seem to have good luck with those." Mag smiles and goes back to looking at the menu.

The waitress comes and takes their orders then their menus and then returns with their meals. Once the food is in front of them and they start to eat it, Jinny shrugs, "I don't know, it just kinda scares me. Having someone there and watching you, when you don't want them to our you don't know them.... I just...." *She looks out the window and the color drains out of her face* Mag notices Jinny's face and asks, "What Jin?" Jinny points out the window, "He's right there, in that car." Mag turns around and looks.

Toms sitting in his car, parked outside the diner and he seemed to be waiting for something. The guess was that he was waiting for Jinny to come out.

Jinny turns back to face Magda, "So, how we gonna get out?" "We're going to go out the front door like normal." "I'm not gonna go out if he's there!" "Oh Jinny stop it! You sound like a child. Don't be scared of him. I mean c'mon, you're a cop if anything he should be scared of you." Magda smiles and Jinny does the same. She sighs then nods, "K, fine, out the front door." Magda nods and they continue with their lunch.

Once they're done they pay and leave out through the front door. As soon as they are out of the diner Tom opens his car door and steps out in front of them.

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Again, I'm sorry it took so long! But there's more so you can annoy Megan for more! LOL!