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XoVanillaRain90oX · 01-22-2002, 08:55 PM

Kate walks into her office. "Another long day" she says. Then, her phone rang. "McCafferty...Oh Hi Magda..Oh you cant come in today? Why not...Bens sick..Okay then..I'll tell her..Alright..Buh bye" Kate sighs and puts the phone down, and it rang again. "McCafferty?! CD...ooh..your at a trial with your husband for harrassment and you cant come in today..great....alright, I will tell him...bye" she put the phone back down on its ringer. She gets up and pops her head out of her office, "Basso, Exstead may I see you in my office for a second?" Jinny and Nate looked at eachother and then went inside. "Okay, Magdas at home sick with Ben and CD is at a trial with her ex-husband for harrassment..Now, the only thing I can do is assign you two a case together.." Jinny gleamed with happines. Nate did as well. "Okay, Cap" Nate said as he walked out of her office, Jinny followed. "Didnt go half bad.." Kate said, as she sat down and put on her glasses.
Jinny couldnt keep her eyes off Nate, she'd smile at him now and then.."Are you..flirting with me, Jinny?" asked Nate..Jinny grinned, "Maybe.." "Dinner" Nate said. "I'll be there" Jinny replied....

Take it Caitlin!! (anyone like?!)

sue z q · 01-22-2002, 09:18 PM

Ooooooo, YAY!! You guys are doing a FF!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!

CAITLIN! POST! LOL

nancys#1fan_jinnyjo · 01-22-2002, 09:27 PM

That was really good. Post more.

InspectorExstead · 01-22-2002, 10:15 PM

oooo !!!! in the words of susan"CAITLIN!POST!"...lol. i love it so far. and i can't wait to read more....keep going !!

Babes_Cat · 01-23-2002, 10:54 AM

OK OK! Here I am with more! YAY!

"Good" Nate says, "I wasn't going to take no for an answer anyways." Jinny smiles and shakes her head, "So what do we got?"

Nate opens the manilla folder and reads the information on the case. "Ok, we got a suicide on 411 Downer Ave. White female, in her 40s. Apparently she used a gun to kill herself. Her daughter found her in the bathroom."
Jinny puts a hand up to her face thinks to herself 'Oh God No. This is too similar! I can't take this!' Nate notices her reaction, "You ok?" Jinny snaps out of her thoughts and replies "Hmm? Oh yeah, I just, *sighs* umm... nevermind. Let's go." She grabs her jacket off of her chair and heads out the door with Nate right behind her.

The whole time they are in the car on their way to Downer Ave. Jinny is staring out of the window, lost in thought, and debating with herself. 'Should I tell him why I had that reaction? Does he really need to know? What would his reaction be? What would he think, what would he say? Am I ready to tell him, do I want to tell him? I can't tell him, not now at least. ' She has all these thoughts racing through her mind on their drive. She comes back to reality when the car stops, Nate gets out of the car, and comes around to open her door. "We're here" he says.

Ewan's My Man · 01-23-2002, 07:09 PM

This rox!!! Post more now!!!

FOL_lover · 01-23-2002, 07:13 PM

im lovin this!!!!!!! post more...NOW!!!

XoVanillaRain90oX · 01-23-2002, 07:27 PM

Jinny smiles slightly at him and gets out of the car. She walks into the house, Nate following. She finds a girl around 14 sitting on the couch, in shock. Jinny flashes her badge.
"SFPD. I'm Inspector Exstead this is my--this is Inspector Basso. Can you please tell me what happened?" The girl looked up, "Yes..y..yes...I came home from school today and I yelled out for my mom..When she didn't answer I thought she was at the store or something.." she began. Nate nods "and.." "Yes well..then I saw something that looked like it came from the bathroom..so i put down my back-pack and went inside and there she was.." The girl began to cry. "I know this is hard for you...Thanks, this does help though.." Jinny said "its hard for me too.." she said lowly..Nate looked at Jinny confused.. "Whats your name?" he asks the girl. She looks up at him, "Im Jenna..Jenna Patterson..My mom was..IS..Marie Patterson.." "Thank you" Nate said with a kind smile...He and Jinny walked out of the house as people in black and white uniforms came in.."My God..why is this happening again?!" she said outloud, not realizing Nate was right by her side. Nate stopped and stopped Jinny, "Come on Jinny..is something bothering you? Inside when Jenna was explaining everything, you said it was hard for you too and now..." Jinny looked up with tears in her eyes "Its like this..."

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I added!! Your turn!

Jo/Blair_fan · 01-23-2002, 07:35 PM

THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Babes_Cat · 01-23-2002, 09:01 PM

::Flashback::

"Mom! Mom, I'm home! I got something I want to show you!" 14 year old Jinny waves her algebra test, marked with a B+, above her head. "I did really good on it too! Mom? Mom where are you?" Jinny then smells something strange and follows it; it leads her into her parents room and into their bathroom. She sees two feet sticking out of the bathroom door, she walks to the door and pushes it open and look. "OMG! NO!" Jinny screams as she sees what is in front of her. "NO! NO! Please God NO!"

::End Flashback::

"Like what?" Nate asks. Jinny comes back to reality and then sighs, "It's like.... it's like..... it's like I can't tell you." "Yes, yes you can, Jinny. You can tell me anything," Nate says reassuringly. "No I can't! Don't push me! This is not one of my favorite places to go. OK? Just drop it please." Jinny looks up at him and her eyes are filled with tears. Nate just nods and heads towards the car and Jinny follows him. Once they are seated in the car Jinny turns to him and says "Look, there are things about me I don't want you to know, things I want you to know and things that I am debating with myself over to tell you or not; I'm debating this? That makes it a maybe, so please.... Don't push it?" "I won't. I promise," Nate puts the keys in the car and starts it up. "Dinner still on?" He asks changing the subject. "Wouldn't miss it." Jinny smiles and replies.

-LISA! HIT IT BABY!-

Esperanza · 01-23-2002, 09:02 PM

Oh. this is really great!!!! Post more ASAP!!

XoVanillaRain90oX · 01-23-2002, 09:36 PM

They drive back into the station greeted by Kate. "How are things going??" she asks them. Jinny takes out her notepad, "The woman was Marie Patterson. Her daughter, Jenna Patterson, found her" she replied. Nate takes off his coat and puts it behind his chair. He sits down and goes through some files about the woman. "Anything else, Exstead? How are things going with you and Nate?" "Um..fine. Why?"she answers. Kate shakes her head, "Oh no reason. Just the thought of you working with a different person than Magda..and it being a guy..You two behave yourselves, got it?" Kate joked. "Ha ha very funny" Jinny says, sarcastically. Kate walks into her office and closes the door behind her. Nate looks up, "What was that all about?? I heard it.." Jinny smiles, "Nothing..nothing..So, where are we going for dinner tonight?" she asks, with a slight grin. "My place..if you dont mind.."he replied. Jinny sits down, "Oh..I dont mind at all" She grins. "Great.." "Anyways..what do you got on this case??" Nate goes through some files, "Statements from her neighbors who claim to hear the gunshot..saw it through the window...Where she was and what she did that day..she was home all day so she was capable of doing this, since nobody else was around..Her husband was at work, still didn't recieve the news.." Jinny nods, "Oh..." her voice drifted at the sight of Teddy. He didnt say anything, just walked into Kates office. Jinny clears her throat.Kate comes out of her office and bumps into Teddy. They exchange some words and then he leaves. Kate comes over to Nate and Jinny, "Alright, you guys have done enough for today. Your free to go home" Jinny and Nate both got up, grabbed their jackets and headed to his place for dinner and maybe something more...

(lol)

HIT IT CAITLIN!! hehe

Babes_Cat · 01-23-2002, 09:58 PM

Screw this... had to edit it!

iluvnancymckeon05 · 01-23-2002, 10:00 PM

omg, u have to post more. NOW. *singing* Jinny and Nate r going to have sex Jinny and Nate r going to have sex Jinny and Nate r going to have sex.

Babes_Cat · 01-23-2002, 10:04 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by iluvnancymckeon05
omg, u have to post more. NOW. *singing* Jinny and Nate r going to have sex Jinny and Nate r going to have sex Jinny and Nate r going to have sex.

I believe that that is up to me.... HAHA! But again, y'all know me so.... um yeah.... Just you wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I AM REBBLY!

01-22-2002, 09:18 PM	#2
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01-22-2002, 09:27 PM	#3
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01-22-2002, 10:15 PM	#4
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01-23-2002, 07:09 PM	#6
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01-23-2002, 07:13 PM	#7
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01-22-2002, 08:55 PM	#1
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	*New FF, The Unexpected Romance, by Caitlin and I* Kate walks into her office. "Another long day" she says. Then, her phone rang. "McCafferty...Oh Hi Magda..Oh you cant come in today? Why not...Bens sick..Okay then..I'll tell her..Alright..Buh bye" Kate sighs and puts the phone down, and it rang again. "McCafferty?! CD...ooh..your at a trial with your husband for harrassment and you cant come in today..great....alright, I will tell him...bye" she put the phone back down on its ringer. She gets up and pops her head out of her office, "Basso, Exstead may I see you in my office for a second?" Jinny and Nate looked at eachother and then went inside. "Okay, Magdas at home sick with Ben and CD is at a trial with her ex-husband for harrassment..Now, the only thing I can do is assign you two a case together.." Jinny gleamed with happines. Nate did as well. "Okay, Cap" Nate said as he walked out of her office, Jinny followed. "Didnt go half bad.." Kate said, as she sat down and put on her glasses. Jinny couldnt keep her eyes off Nate, she'd smile at him now and then.."Are you..flirting with me, Jinny?" asked Nate..Jinny grinned, "Maybe.." "Dinner" Nate said. "I'll be there" Jinny replied.... Take it Caitlin!! (anyone like?!)

01-23-2002, 10:54 AM	#5
Babes_Cat Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Oct 11, 2001 Location: massachusetts Posts: 34,145	OK OK! Here I am with more! YAY! "Good" Nate says, "I wasn't going to take no for an answer anyways." Jinny smiles and shakes her head, "So what do we got?" Nate opens the manilla folder and reads the information on the case. "Ok, we got a suicide on 411 Downer Ave. White female, in her 40s. Apparently she used a gun to kill herself. Her daughter found her in the bathroom." Jinny puts a hand up to her face thinks to herself 'Oh God No. This is too similar! I can't take this!' Nate notices her reaction, "You ok?" Jinny snaps out of her thoughts and replies "Hmm? Oh yeah, I just, sighs umm... nevermind. Let's go." She grabs her jacket off of her chair and heads out the door with Nate right behind her. The whole time they are in the car on their way to Downer Ave. Jinny is staring out of the window, lost in thought, and debating with herself. 'Should I tell him why I had that reaction? Does he really need to know? What would his reaction be? What would he think, what would he say? Am I ready to tell him, do I want to tell him? I can't tell him, not now at least. ' She has all these thoughts racing through her mind on their drive. She comes back to reality when the car stops, Nate gets out of the car, and comes around to open her door. "We're here" he says.

01-23-2002, 07:27 PM	#8
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	Jinny smiles slightly at him and gets out of the car. She walks into the house, Nate following. She finds a girl around 14 sitting on the couch, in shock. Jinny flashes her badge. "SFPD. I'm Inspector Exstead this is my--this is Inspector Basso. Can you please tell me what happened?" The girl looked up, "Yes..y..yes...I came home from school today and I yelled out for my mom..When she didn't answer I thought she was at the store or something.." she began. Nate nods "and.." "Yes well..then I saw something that looked like it came from the bathroom..so i put down my back-pack and went inside and there she was.." The girl began to cry. "I know this is hard for you...Thanks, this does help though.." Jinny said "its hard for me too.." she said lowly..Nate looked at Jinny confused.. "Whats your name?" he asks the girl. She looks up at him, "Im Jenna..Jenna Patterson..My mom was..IS..Marie Patterson.." "Thank you" Nate said with a kind smile...He and Jinny walked out of the house as people in black and white uniforms came in.."My God..why is this happening again?!" she said outloud, not realizing Nate was right by her side. Nate stopped and stopped Jinny, "Come on Jinny..is something bothering you? Inside when Jenna was explaining everything, you said it was hard for you too and now..." Jinny looked up with tears in her eyes "Its like this..." ~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~~**~ I added!! Your turn!

01-23-2002, 07:35 PM	#9
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01-23-2002, 09:01 PM	#10
Babes_Cat Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Oct 11, 2001 Location: massachusetts Posts: 34,145	::Flashback:: "Mom! Mom, I'm home! I got something I want to show you!" 14 year old Jinny waves her algebra test, marked with a B+, above her head. "I did really good on it too! Mom? Mom where are you?" Jinny then smells something strange and follows it; it leads her into her parents room and into their bathroom. She sees two feet sticking out of the bathroom door, she walks to the door and pushes it open and look. "OMG! NO!" Jinny screams as she sees what is in front of her. "NO! NO! Please God NO!" ::End Flashback:: "Like what?" Nate asks. Jinny comes back to reality and then sighs, "It's like.... it's like..... it's like I can't tell you." "Yes, yes you can, Jinny. You can tell me anything," Nate says reassuringly. "No I can't! Don't push me! This is not one of my favorite places to go. OK? Just drop it please." Jinny looks up at him and her eyes are filled with tears. Nate just nods and heads towards the car and Jinny follows him. Once they are seated in the car Jinny turns to him and says "Look, there are things about me I don't want you to know, things I want you to know and things that I am debating with myself over to tell you or not; I'm debating this? That makes it a maybe, so please.... Don't push it?" "I won't. I promise," Nate puts the keys in the car and starts it up. "Dinner still on?" He asks changing the subject. "Wouldn't miss it." Jinny smiles and replies. -LISA! HIT IT BABY!-

01-23-2002, 09:02 PM	#11
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01-23-2002, 09:36 PM	#12
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	They drive back into the station greeted by Kate. "How are things going??" she asks them. Jinny takes out her notepad, "The woman was Marie Patterson. Her daughter, Jenna Patterson, found her" she replied. Nate takes off his coat and puts it behind his chair. He sits down and goes through some files about the woman. "Anything else, Exstead? How are things going with you and Nate?" "Um..fine. Why?"she answers. Kate shakes her head, "Oh no reason. Just the thought of you working with a different person than Magda..and it being a guy..You two behave yourselves, got it?" Kate joked. "Ha ha very funny" Jinny says, sarcastically. Kate walks into her office and closes the door behind her. Nate looks up, "What was that all about?? I heard it.." Jinny smiles, "Nothing..nothing..So, where are we going for dinner tonight?" she asks, with a slight grin. "My place..if you dont mind.."he replied. Jinny sits down, "Oh..I dont mind at all" She grins. "Great.." "Anyways..what do you got on this case??" Nate goes through some files, "Statements from her neighbors who claim to hear the gunshot..saw it through the window...Where she was and what she did that day..she was home all day so she was capable of doing this, since nobody else was around..Her husband was at work, still didn't recieve the news.." Jinny nods, "Oh..." her voice drifted at the sight of Teddy. He didnt say anything, just walked into Kates office. Jinny clears her throat.Kate comes out of her office and bumps into Teddy. They exchange some words and then he leaves. Kate comes over to Nate and Jinny, "Alright, you guys have done enough for today. Your free to go home" Jinny and Nate both got up, grabbed their jackets and headed to his place for dinner and maybe something more... (lol) HIT IT CAITLIN!! hehe

01-23-2002, 09:58 PM	#13
Babes_Cat Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Oct 11, 2001 Location: massachusetts Posts: 34,145	Screw this... had to edit it!
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01-23-2002, 10:00 PM	#14
iluvnancymckeon05 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jan 23, 2002 Location: Damascus, Md Posts: 44	omg, u have to post more. NOW. singing Jinny and Nate r going to have sex Jinny and Nate r going to have sex Jinny and Nate r going to have sex.