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Angel...but DEVILISH
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This is my first fanfiction So it might be bad. Forgive me. Ok here it goes.
Andy was lying in bed starring at the cilling. He was getting married in a week. He thought he had found the perfect girl. She was smart, beautiful, warm, compassionat. She was wonderful. So why was he so nervus a week before? He got up to get a drink of water. He made his way through his tiny one room apartment. Sure he was one of the richest doctors in Peekskill, but he didn't want a big house untill he was married.Tootie was coming tomarrow and he couldn't wait. He hadn't seen her in a long time. The other girls still lived in Peekskill so he saw them often.He decided to go back to sleep. "Tootie!" Jeff yelled from the living room, "We are gonna miss our plain of you don't hurry. We still got to pick up Amber too!" "I am coming! You want me to look nice don't you?" " you can do that on the plain, now come on!" " Ok I'm here, do we got everything?" "yes" "Good lets go!" Sorry this is so short. I didn't have much time today but I'll post more later. |
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NMK fan forever
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Great!!! Post more!!!!!!
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Me & Lisa Whelchel!
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Good Start.
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I'll Cover You
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This is great...post more soon...and I m not lying...I wouldn't use my 500th post on a fic that wasn't good!!
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Don't you wanna be footloose and free? Well, you could be the life of the party If you were more- Like me! All you have to do is jump over the moon Moo with me! |
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Angel...but DEVILISH
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Thanks so much for the compliments! Heres more
Tootie and Jeff arived at Amber's house in five minutes. They lived very close to each other. In the same neighborhood. Amber was very excited. She was going to Browdway that week. She wanted to be a Browdway actress all her life. This is why she is going. (knock knock) She opened the door. Tootie and Jeff was standing at the door. "Hey Dorthy, Jeff! I'm so excited! Thank you so much for inviting me to come along! I know these are your friends and I'll probably be in the way and--" "Amber it's ok," Tootie interuped,"you won't be in the way! My friends never see a moviesrar often, well except for me of course! Oh no, I am starting to sound like Blair now!" "Don't worry honey, its not THAT bad yet." Jeff said playfully, "Are these your bags Amber?" "Yes, I'll get them. But you can get this one." She handed the biigest bag to Jeff. "Man what do you have in here, rocks?" "No, makeup." "Ok, Jeff, Amber lets go I really want to see my friends now, and besides we will miss our plain." "Beverlyann!" Mrs. Garrett called from down stairs,"come on, the girls will be here any minute!" Mrs. garrett was so happy! She got to spend time with her girls, Andy was getting married, and Tootie was coming! Nothing could go wrong. Now if only Bev would get down here. "Edna, What?" "We have to clean the house! They will be here in a few minutes! And Tootie will be here in one hour!" Bev looks around at the already spotless living room. Not finding one thing wrong with it. "It looks fine to me." (ding dong) "It's to late anyway, there here!" Mrs. garrett ran to the door. She opened it. There stood Blair. "Blair! How are you? I haven't seen you sence well, last month!" "I'm fine Mrs. Garrett. How are you?" "Just great" "Hi Bev!" "Hey Blair." They moved to the couch. "I am so happy for Andy. He is gonna be so happy. Where is he?" "He is getting Heather, his Bride-to-be, to bring her here to meet Tootie and Jeff and Amber." "Oh, Well I can't wait to meet Amber. Jo and Nataile should be here soon. They were following me."(Ding dong) "That must be them" Mrs. Garrett said as she raced to the door. "Natalie! Jo!" "Mrs garrett!" They said in unison. "Come in sit down" Everyone said hello. "So," Nat started "When will tootie be here?" "In a couple of hours" Said Bev "I can't wait" Jo said. Everyone agreed. Sorry this is so short. I just don't have much time to write. I wanted to have more diologe for Jo and Nat, but it would just be repeating what Blair said. With more depth.I lso didn't have time. Jo will play an important part later, so all you Jo fans will be satisfied also. It is a little slow right now, but it should get interesting tomarrow. I'll post more as soon as I can tomarrow. |
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I'll Cover You
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MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *throwing temper tantrum* I want MORE!!! *sucking thumb* Ok...I'm all better now!
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You're totally insane...I don't know you.......lol...TOTALLY KIDDING BEST BUD LAUDIE...........ok, now I'm crazy, it's SPREADING! Anyway, she's finally right about one thing, which is that this is a GREAT fic so you should post more... |
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Angel...but DEVILISH
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Calm down Lauren, Heres more!
Amber, Jeff, and Tootie got off the plain. They went to get their bags. Tootie was so excited. She counl hardly beileve she would see her friends in just a few hours. "Ok Amber you must know something. My friends call me Tootie.You probably should too, if you want." "Tootie?" "Yes! It may not be much of a nick name, but its mine!" "It sounds like an ice cream flavor. Ya know tootie frutie!" "Ladies," Jeff began,"why don't we get something to eat at subway? It in the food court here. I saw it just a minute ago." "ok" Tootie and Amber said. As they go in subway, they over hear a very desturbing conversation. They stopped and listened. They just stood there and watched. "Heather, when are you onna dump that loser and come with me?" "Harvy, you know the plain!" "Uh, tell it to me again." "I marry the rich little doctor, then stay with him for a couple of months,to make it look good, then kill him. Make it look like an accedent and take his money. Just like always. After we run out of money, I find a new rich boy toy." "We've done it again, my sweet!"They walked right past Tootie, Amber,and Jeff. Arm in arm. "I think we need to get out of here now!" Tootie said "Good idea." Jeff agreed "Wait!" Amber said "We have to tell the police! We can't let her get away with this." "We can't we don't know there last names or anything." "Jeffs right, Amber we don't even have evedence." "Ok lets go, I hope who she is doing this to will see what she is doing."Amber couldn't help thinking that she could do something, anything. Se just followed in awe at what she had just heard. They finally get to mrs. Garrett's house. Amber loved the outside. It was so nice, calm. It made her forget compleatly about what she heard. Tootie was just so excited she couldn't think of anything else. She was practically jumping up and down by the time they got to the door. Jeff was happy to see tootie so happy. This was truely awonderful day. Besides well,you know. Ok I'll post more later and thanks for the great replies! ![]() Oh yea I have to tell you something. This story will mostly be in little posts, but what I lack in size, I'll make up in time. In other words, I'll post everyday. |
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I'll Cover You
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HEHEHE...of course u kno me...EVERY1 wants to kno me ...but I didn't give craziness to u...I GOT it from u...hehehe... <u and me!Quote:
So...post more!!!
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!LOL!You want me to go on?! (LAUDIE ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!wait......isnt' that what we've been discucssing!!!!!!?!?LOL!)
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I'll Cover You
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Angel...but DEVILISH
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I am dedicating this post to #1JoFan and Charlotte Rae Fan. To y'all
(Knock knock) "They're here!" Mrs. Garrett shouted as she ran to the door.She was so excited because she knew who was on the other side of the door. It was Tootie. Tootie, Jeff, and Amber. She was right, because when she opened the door, her face lighted up, and she huged Tootie. "Tootie!" Mrs. Garrett said. "Mrs. Garrett" Tootie replied. Everyone came over said their hellos huged ect. "I would like to introduce my friend, Amber Cothorn. Amber, this is Mrs. Garrett, Beverlyann, Jo, Blair, and Natalie.Everone said hello. "So, Amber how do you like New York so far? Nat asked. "Oh I love It, I love browdway. I am so excited about going to a play and maybe looking into doing a play." "Thats nice, but Nat do you really think she has had enough time to reallsee New York?" Jo questioned. "Yes Jo! I think you can see a lot of a place in a couple of hours!" "So," Tootie began "Where's Andy?" "He was called in to work on one of his patients" Bev said "It was just the flu" Mrs. Garrett stated "He will probably be here soon." (knock knock) "Wow Blair thats amazing" Bev said "Yes I know" "Oh please" Jo said aloud. "I'll get it" Mrs. Garrett went to the door."Hi Andy!" "Hey Mrs. G" He replied "Andy!" Tootie said as she ran to him."I've missed you so much!" "Tootie!" He said as he huged her."I've missed you too." "You remember Jeff" "Yes, Hi how are you?" "Good I can't belive this is you you were so small when I last saw you."Jeff replied "And this is Amber Cothorn." Tootie continued "Hi!" Amber said "I's nice to meet you." "Yea you too. Your on that show aren't you?" "Yea That show right." she said sarcastially. "Man I can't belive you are getting married!" Tootie said "Yea I think I have found the perfect girl." "Andy you never did tell us her name" Nat said "Heather."He said. Amber, Jeff, and Tootie all stared at each other. All three thought back to earlier that day at subway"She will be here in about two hours. Are you guys ok?" "Yes were fine."Tootie said "It is probably not the same person" Jeff mouthed to Tootie and Amber as everyone else was talking. "It could be!" Amber mouthed back. "Jeff's right, at least I hope he is. For Andys sake" Tootie mouthed to Amber. "I have met her before," Jo began, "she is very nice. And perfect for you Andy, But there is something that bugs me about her." "Your over reacting Jo. She's over reacting Andy." Blair said. "I've met her too."Bev started " Well of course you have Bev. He is your son!" Jo answered. "I know! And she is a lovely girl." "Well all we need is her to be here, then we can go out to dinner." Hope you like this. I'll post more as soon as I can! Which will probably be tomarrow! |
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AWESOME! Oh wow! you're dedicating it to me...(oh yea, and Lauren) jk! Me AND LAUREN!! WHOA! THANK YA SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!LOL I go crazy when people start dedicating things to me..it seems soo......permanent...anyway, WRITE MORE SOON!! It's AWESOME!(BTW...your name is Amber, Tootie's movie star friend's name is Amber......connection?!?!LOL!)
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I'll Cover You
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GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! LIZZIE!!! U REALLY BOOST MY SELF ESTEEM!!! < U r the one I m punching!!! Even though u are mean to me...*sniff sniff* I still LYLAS!!! ...actually...I find it VERY hard to be mad at u...so u get off...this time!
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I'll Cover You
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WOW!!! I M SO ********!!! (Lizzie...don't say NEthing!!!) I forgot to say the most important thing! POST MORE SOON!!!
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