The Rape

[InspectorExstead]

Hey..well i'm writing a new fan fic. i just finished my first one. i don't have much time but i'll write a little right now.....here goes.

It's 10 AM at The SFPD.

Captain walks out of her office with folders for everybody.
Cap hands Cd and Nate a folder:Robbery on 48th street. Nothing valuable was taken. go check it out. get some suspects. Find out who did it !
Hands a folder to Jinny and Magda.
Cap:A homeless woman was raped by 4 men it looks like. they took her shopping cart even though she did not own anything valuable. they all took turns raping her then slashed her throat and wrists to kill her and threw her off a cliff. then to finish her off they threw the shopping cart after her. Landed on top of her.
Jinny has a disgusted look on her face. She hates rape cases. So does Magda.
Jinny:When did they find her body ?
Cap:Yesterday afternoon. The hospital ran the tests to see if she had been raped-even though you could tell just by looking at her.

Cd had been listening to this. Comes over to jinny and magda.

Cd:God..what kind of a sicko does this to a human being.
Jinny: Wish i knew...it would make my job a whole hell of a lot easier.

Cap:Alright. well you all have things to do..so go do them.

So..what do you think so far ? the rape thing is in this book i'm reading so i thought i could write about it.
i'll write more later....

[Esperanza]

This is a great start!! And if this FF is anything like your last one it'll be amazing!!!

[NMK_GG_FAN]

More more!!!!....I am kinda new here...i mean i have been reading posts for about 5 months now...but i just decided to start to post my own....and so about me...i am a divison fanatic and i love nancy mckeon!!.but back on the subject.....this is really good keep up the work!!

[Swimfan85]

this is a great start, please add more soon

[InspectorExstead]

A'right. In the words of Jinny...hey guys I'm back. Ok so here's more.....

Cd and Nate leave to go investigate the roberry on 48th street.
Jinny and Magda go to visit the hospital to see if they can find some info on the woman.

*In the car ride*
Magda:4 men raped her ? then threw her off the cliff ?
Jinny:Yeah..then threw her cart after her..i guess the sex wasn't too good.
Magda:Jinny this isn't about sex-well it it but you know what I mean.
Jinny:I know-I hate rape cases. they give me the creeps. I was just trying to lighten the mood.
Magda:yeah well do me a favor and don't lighten an more moods for me will you ?
Jinny:Geez...I'm sorry. You okay mag ? you don't seem like yourself.
Magda:I'm fine. there's the hospital...pull over.

*They get out and walk into the hospital. they see Steven*

Jinny:hey doc.
Steven:Hey inspectors !
magda:Your cold all better.
Steven:Worse I'm afraid..but I'll heal. it's our rape victim I'm more worried about.
Jinny:Yeah..did she have any identification on her ? anything ?
Magda:um..what was..what was in the cart ?
Steven:Yeah...here's her wallet *Hands them a wallet in a plastic bag*
Jinny and Magda put their gloves on and take it out.
Magda:Jennifer Wright. Age-24.
Jinny:24 ? that's sad.
Steven:There wasn't much in the cart..just a blanket, a change of clothes and some worn and torn socks.
Jinny:Umm..we're gonna take this w/ us okay *indicating wallet*
Steven:Yeah sure.
Jinny:Thanx.
Magda:Thanx for your time.
Steven:Inspectors...*they both turn around* I hope you find the sonuvabitches.
magda:Yeah..me too.
Jinny:Thanx.

They walk out of the hospital. Magda sees a cafe across the street.

Magda:Hey Jin. I'll go buy coffee-wait in the car.
Jinny:Okay..you sure you okay *she yells this to magda because magda is almost across the street*
Magda yells back:I'm fine !

Magda thinking to herself:I told the cap..no rape cases ever. Does she not understand that ? I don't want everyone to find out. And Ben. He's so young. And gabe......


stay tuned to see what mag is talking about...you'll be suprised. i decided to take this more magda's way than jinny's in the beginning. but it'll be more about jinny in the middle and then the end will be about all of them.

[Wisupastar]

That's great..keep going!

[Esperanza]

ooooh!!! I like how it's more about Magda!!! Post more ASAP!!!

[Babes_Cat]

Originally posted by Esperanza
ooooh!!! I like how it's more about Magda!!! Post more ASAP!!!

Yeah, I gotsa an IDEA!

MORE PLEASE!

[InspectorExstead]

hey tootsies ! ah my fav song is on ! i love it ! it's nickback's this is how you remind me ! omg. i haven't heard it in like a couple of days. yay ! so here's more....

Magda gets the coffee and gets into the car she gives a cup to Jin.

Jin:Magda, what's up ?
Mag:Why would you think somethings up ?
Jin:Listen mag you feel weird. you're acting weird and i'm getting weird vibes when i'm around you. you wanna tell me somethin ? or are you planing on giving me another intervention ? *jinny laughs but not magda*
Mag:Can we just go to work ? please ?
Jin:*looks worried* UH yeah.

Inside the SFPD

Captain walks out of her office.

Cap:Any new info on the rape ?
Mag: Yeah her name was jennifer wright.
Jin:She was 24.
Cap:24 ? are you serious ? i've done rape cases in the past but they're usually older.
Jin:Or younger.
Mag:What ? it's that hard to believe someone 24 was raped ?
Jin looks at her.
Jin:Uh..we're gonna go look ehr family up later. see if they know anything.
Cap:What's the point ? she was homeless. either she didn't have a family or she wasn't welcome there.
Mag:That's sad. what kind of mother would do that ?
Jin:yeah well. she was wearing a UCSF (university of california of san fransisco, my dream college along w/ Colombia) sweatshirt. so we're gonna go by the campus in a few minutes and see if we can find any info.

Cd and Nate walk in.

Cd:Hey. any luck w/ the case ?
Mag:Yeah. i wish. i'm gonna go to the bathroom.
Jin *after mag leaves*:She's ticked off at something.
Cd:Maybe the rape case.
Jin: Yeah.
Cap:Good luck.
Jin:thanx. *the cap goes back into office*
Cd:So you know if she's okay ?
Jin:Magda ? i dunno she's been acting weird since we got assigned to this case.
Magda enters the room.
Mag:Ready ?
JIn:Yeah.
Magh cd..did you find anything new on the robbery ?
Cd:Nope. good luck guys.

Nate comes up to them.
Nate:Hey you guys come check this out.

They all look at the tv. Apparently there was a robbery in the bay area where a coupke of teens raped a mother and teen. they made the mom look. then smashed her skill with a baseball bat.

mag looks disgusted.

mag:god what kind of sicko does this.
Jin:Yeah i know. just think about it like this-we catch the 4 guys who did that t jennifer and they can't do it to anyone anymore.
Mag:yeah they probably raped 50 women last night.
Jinny is getting bothered by magda's attitude.

Magda:hey uh. Jin. can you ? um. can you go the campus yourself ? i gotta drop ben off at the sitters. i'll meet you here later. i gotta call gabe tonight.
Jin:You know what mag ? take the day off. i know i'm not the cap. but you need it. ok ? i think this case is getting to you. i'm sure the cap'll undertand.
mag:i'll go ask.

The captain lets mag have the day off for "personal reasons."

Mag comes out of the office.
Jinny nods at her as a signal to tell erh if she has the day off.
Mag:She gave me the day off.
Jin:Good. go home. get some rest.
Mag:yeah. thanx. see you tomorrow.
Jin:bye.

Jinny to herself:Wha is up w/ her ? she's never acted this way.

Magda picks Ben up from school and is going to drop him off at the sitters. *in front of the house, in the car*

Mag:Now ben. I want you to be a good boy for mrs.stevens.
Ben:Okay mommy.
Mag:and remeber-don't cause too much trouble. don't cause any trouble.
Ben: MOOOM ! can i go now ?
Mag smiles. The first time since this whole case started.
Mag:Sure baby. have fun. Now remember daddy will pick you up before school tomorrow. okay ?
Ben:Okay mom. bye. *kisses her* I love you.
Mag:love you too mijo.

Ben goes inside the house.

Magda to herself:It's time. gabe has to know. I've waited this long.

Magda drives up to gabe's work. She gets out. She spots gabe playing the piano.

Magda to herself:it's gonna break his heart but...

Gabe notices Magda.

Gabe:Maggie !
Magda:gabe-you now i don't like that name.
Gabe kisses her on the cheek.
Gabe:Sorry baby. what's wrong ?
Mag:This rape case is really bugging me. I'll tell you later. no i'll tell you now. Uh a woman was raped by for men-then they threw her off a cliff and threw her shopping cart after her. *gabe is about to questions something but magda answears it for him* she was homeless.
gabeh man.
mag:yeah. gabe listen.
Gabe:i was thinking we could have dinner at that new salsa club. you could wear that red dress i love so much. *gabe sees magda isn't smiling, which she always does when the subject is about dancing, especially her favorite, salsa.* Baby. what's wrong.
Mag:Gabe. i think there's something you should know. I've put it off for a while. Ben-

whatcha think ?

[NewsiesGurl229]

OMG! It so wasn't fair to stop there! how dare you?

[Esperanza]

.......!!!! I don't know what to say except you absolutely can NOT LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!!!!!!! Post more ASAP!!

[InspectorExstead]

Ok..here's more !

Magda still has Ben's name on her tongue. Should i continue ? i'm just teasin you guys ! lol. ok...

So magda has ben's name on her tongue.

magda:Ben-
gab:ben what ? he has a fever ?
Mag:Gabe, i want you to understand. and afterwards if you don't want to have anything to do w/ me i'll understand.
Gabe:What is it ?
Mag:And i don't think you'll stick around after i tell you. And i won't blame you.
Gabe:baby what is it ?
mag:Gabriel, Ben isn't your son.
gabe:what ?
Mag:when i was 24 i was raped on night. i became pregnant. ben's the child.
Gabe:So he's not my son ?
Mag:i couldn't tell people i was raped..i mean...
gabe:Oh so you decided to tell me i was the father and put all these responsibilities on me. and the guilt trips. not being there for ben. what was that ?
*magda just looks of into space*
Gabe:i'm outta here.
mag:Gabe !
gabe:no magda ! save it. ok ? just don't do me any more favors. ben's not my son ? i can't believe you !

Before magda can explain gabe takes off. More later !!

[Babes_Cat]

YAY! MEGAN! MORE PLEASE!

[NewsiesGurl229]

more times 99999999999999999999999999999999 (in other words: MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE-repeatedly)

[InspectorExstead]

aright....i'm gonna post some more since i haven't in a while. here's more.

magda couldn't believe it. but she knew gabe would walk out. she knew it.

magda to herself:god why ? why did i do that ? no..the question magda is why didn't i do it sooner ? i ruined his life. i made hime think he was nothing. god i can't believe i did that. omg. i have to tell ben...now. i've waited 8 years. i think he should know.

magda drove to her apartment. when she got home she found ben playing video games in his soccer uniform.

magda:hey how was practice.
ben:AWESOME ! i trapped the ball every time it came AND my coach says my dribblings getting better.
magda:Alright ! attaboy ! ok benjamin i think there's something you should know. *ske looks at the video game* mm..soccer death. your father get you this ?
ben:yeah. mommy please don't make me take it back. it's so cool. in fact it's helping me improve in soccer too.
magda:*laughs* you're just a handful aren't ya. *hugs him*
benjamin i think there's something you should know ?
ben:what mommy ?
magda:well i don't think your father's gonna pick you up for school tomorrow. or after school.
ben:why ?
magda:well he's busy. anyway..nejamin there's something else...
ben:what mami ?
magdaapi i need you to understand that this is hard for me. i've wanted to tell you this for a long time i just never knew what to say.
ben:what ?
magda:ben-honey-gabriel is not your real father. you see a long time ago before you were born something happened to mommy. she was patroling and all of a sudden a guy attacked her.
*ben looks confused. like a 6 year old learning calculs*
magda:honey there are people in this world who do things...that aren't right. and well you're mom got hurt that night. but she found out she was gonna have a baby. a baby benjamin. that's you.
ben:SO you mean my father's not my REAL father ? i can't belive you.
*ben starts to run...magda tries to grab him but she fails.*
ben runs to his room and slams the door. magda gets up to go talk to him

magda:ben...honey. i'm not asking you to understand but
ben:does daddy know ? has he known all along like u ?
magda:benjamin your father didn't know. i told him half an hour ago.
ben is crying.
magda goes over to him. she holds him.
magda:listen papi....
ben:i wanna know who my father is.
magdak. here's what we're gonna do.
ben:i wanna know who my father is !
magda:we're gonna take a trip benjamin. ok ? for a week. no school. no work. i'll call jinny. ok ? we'll go somwhere special. ok ? pack your bags.

magda leaves ben's room crying.

magda:good going. now your own kid hates you.

she dials jinny's dad's number. no one's there.

*answering message*

Jinny:Hey ! you've reached the exstead family. neither john sr, john jr, casey or me, jinny, are here right now. so after this comes a beep...well you know what else to do. so do your thing !

BEEP !

magda on the answering machine:Hey jin it's magda. listen i'm gonna be gone for a week. me and ben are gonna go take a vacation. i'll explain everything when i get back. tell the cap and everyone. good luck w/ the case. i'll talk to you see. ok..bye.

little did magda know that this one week vacation would be longer. and that both she and ben's lives were gonna be in danger !!!