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Jinny Girl · 01-13-2002, 01:28 AM

Its been a while since ive done one all on my own... please read and review peeps!

Tuesday, January 22, 11:09 AM: Its a fairly nice day in sanfransisco. Cool but not cold, a slight breeze, and partly cloudy.

Magda sat at her desk in The Division, somewhat oblivious to the world around her. She was finishing up some paperwork for a case that her and Jin solved... Of course Jinny did absolutly no paperwork. 'She might be sober' Magda thought 'But she's still Lazy as hell'. Magda finished the last bit of work and looked up, Jinny wasn't there. She figured she was in the bathroom and just sat there doing nothing and daydreaming. She tried to Imagine her life married to gabriel, and her life not married to him. They both seemed to have the same outcome, the same good things happened and the same good things happened, but with Gabriel she had someone to share the good and bad things with... But still she had some reservations, and she knew until she figured out what they were, that marrying gabe would be a mistake... You know how when you daydream, you can sit there for a half hour thinking then snap out of it and only think you've been out of it for 30 seconds? Well thats what happened to magda. When she finally realized that she was in the division and not at Bens college graduation, she also realized Jinny still wasn't there. She figured she aughta see if she really was in the bathroom, and besides, she had to go herself. She got up and walked down the hall and into the bathroom... Jinny was sitting on the bench lost in thought... completely oblivious to time like magda was.
"Jinny? Hey Jin" Magda said, snapping Jinny out of her trance.
"Hmm, oh hi." Jinny replied
"Jin, You've been in here for like, a half hour" Mag said.
"Oh really?... I was just thinking." Jinny stated staring at a corner.
"Bout what??"
"Nothing important." Jinny answered.
"Oh comeon, it had to be a little important... you speant a half hour thinking about it." Magda said.
"Magda... I..." Jinny cut herself off and looked away from mag at the opposit wall.
"Comeon Jin you can tell me whats wrong." Magda said with an understanding tone in her voice, which came from being a mother and always saying "Comeon, you can tell me anything".
"I started drinking again..." Jinny made no eye contact.
Magda got a very dissapointed look on her face "Why? You were doing so well!"
"I just couldn't take it anymore! My dad always has alcohol in the house and its everywhere I go!" Jinny began to cry "I was trying so hard... I just cant do anything right!
"Jinny dont talk that way... You sayed sober for 3 months, now what makes you think you cant just... pretend you never started drinking again and try for 6 months!?"
"Because it'll just be a constant cycle! Get sober, get drunk! Get sober get drunK!" Jiny began "Honestly, its not worth stressing out over anyway. I've been just fine these past two weeks... And if I get sober again Ill just get drunk again... I'll just keep going in circles!" ok more?

BlairandJo · 01-13-2002, 12:36 PM

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Jinny Girl · 01-13-2002, 02:01 PM

It's been so long since I've heard people say Ur fan fic rox... Ah, I forgot how good it felt.

"Jinny... You know... honestly... ur being pretty stupid I mean, what do you want to happen this time!?!? You wanna get fired!? Or get in an accident!? Or get aids or something!?" Mag was somewhat ticked...
"Don't you even start with me Mag... I'm not in the mood for a "Booze is Bad" lacture from you... I got onna those at that god forsaken intervention!" Jinny got up and left the bathroom and went back to her desk. She pretended she was writing something but in reality she was drawing little squiggly lines and stick figures. When Magda got back from the bathroom she sat all the paperwork that wasnt done on Jinnys desk.
"Ok I know youve only been back 2 and a half weeks but... Well Im tired of doing everything, its ur turn.." she pointed to the stick figured drawn on jinnys calendar. "Your friends can help you."
Jinny decided not to argue it, she really didnt want to hear Magda be all mad today. She scribbled word on the paper so fast it was barely legible... But she didnt really care, cops and doctors werent supposed to have nice handwritng anyway. Captain walked by and kinda grabbed Jinnys hand to stop her from writing.
"Uhh, your gonna kinda have to do that over. I cant read it and I doubt anyone else will be able to... I doubt you can read it."
"I can..." Jinny squinted at the paper. "Uhh... Approx. Time of Death... Ummm... I think it says 1:05 but it might be a seven..." she dug througha bunch of papers and found one that she had written everything down on. "No... No its a seven... I think... I cant read this either."
"7:05 AM" Magda said.
"Well at least somebody knows what goin on around here... And besides, all of you, your shifts are over and I'm supposed to cut back on everyones overtime so go away before that guy get here." Captain said.
"Oh I'm free." Jinny threwthe papers in a manilla folder and shoved them into the top drawer of her desk. She walked out singing "No more overtime", a song she wrote. Magda was still putting everything in a neat orderly file.
"Captain?" she said "Can I have a word with you?"
"In my office"
Mag got up and went in and told captain that Jinny was drinking again.
"... so dont be surprised if she comes in late everyday or does something stupid like that." Magda finished.
"I really thought she was serious about quitting." Capt said sorta dissapointed. She expected that Jinny would go back to drinking as soon as she was out of rehab. Meanwhile, Jinny was about 5 miles away at a bar that nobody at the division ever goes to.

more or no more?

Divisionbabe05 · 01-13-2002, 03:56 PM

ooooo ooooooo oooooo chik I need more! This is great.

BlairandJo · 01-13-2002, 04:44 PM

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ISmellFine · 01-13-2002, 06:02 PM

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Jinny Girl · 01-15-2002, 09:42 PM

In the few hours Jinny spent at the bar she got herself much drunker then usual... It had been a while since she got herself drunk drunk... She didnt want to admit it to herself but it felt better to be sober... At first being drunk felt ok but about an hour into it she just wanted it to all go away. Usually when she drank she was oblivious to real life but this time she was just sitting there about to pass out, loathing her self for her stupidity. She still wasnt extally sure when she wanted to be, sober or drunk. Both had their strong points. Being sober made her feel better about herself... And gave her a better sense of reality... Before rehab she was always just a little drunk... Because she was always drinking. Pretty much every day on the job... Made her feel pretty weak... Being controlled by a bottle... And sobriety made her feel like she was a touch as she acted. But sobriety was hard. There wasnt a time when she didnt think about alcohol... And being drunk was equally hard... But good in a way. She didn't have to worry about what she said or did wrong because she could always blame it on the alcohol. Of course, she didnt admit it to other people but in her own mind she didnt do anything wrong, the alcohol did. She took the last sip of her drink and got up but kinda slid back down again
"Damnit..." she slurred as she made a succesfull attemt at stnadint up. She held onto the wall and made it to the door. She walked down the street holding onto the sides of buildings for support. As she reached an alleyway she felt someone pull her into the alley... Not really very forcefully but then again, in her condition somebody could have touched her on the shoulder and she would have fallen over
"Hey Jin.. Long time no see..." The man said.
"No... Go away" Jinny could barely get the words out, much less stand up She couldn't push him away, she eeded to hold on to him to keep from falling.
"Oh come on now Jin..." He said "Remember how much fun we had last time we saw each other" Jinny was drunk but she remembered exactly what happened.
"You... You had fun... Not... me" Jinny tried her best to speak straight.
"Just come with me... I promise you you'll have the time of your life!" he said she he moved her toward his car... She tried to fight him but after about 5 seconds she passed out, so he just pushed her into the backseat and drove off. He drove a blue Mercedes that was about 10 years old, with custome liscense plated that read JOE.

more or no more, that is the question!

Babes_Cat · 01-15-2002, 09:47 PM

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Originally posted by Jinny Girl
"Just come with me... I promise you you'll have the time of your life!" he said she he moved her toward his car... She tried to fight him but after about 5 seconds she passed out, so he just pushed her into the backseat and drove off. He drove a blue Mercedes that was about 10 years old, with custome liscense plated that read JOE.

Oh DAMN! IT'S JOE!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH! MORE DANA! LOVE IT! YAY! YAY! YAY!

Divisionbabe05 · 01-15-2002, 10:25 PM

oooooo billy(havent used that one in awhile) this is sooooooooo great Danerz! MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!

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01-13-2002, 01:28 AM	#1
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	A new fan fic by me... ONLY ME!!! Titled: "Going in circles" Its been a while since ive done one all on my own... please read and review peeps! Tuesday, January 22, 11:09 AM: Its a fairly nice day in sanfransisco. Cool but not cold, a slight breeze, and partly cloudy. Magda sat at her desk in The Division, somewhat oblivious to the world around her. She was finishing up some paperwork for a case that her and Jin solved... Of course Jinny did absolutly no paperwork. 'She might be sober' Magda thought 'But she's still Lazy as hell'. Magda finished the last bit of work and looked up, Jinny wasn't there. She figured she was in the bathroom and just sat there doing nothing and daydreaming. She tried to Imagine her life married to gabriel, and her life not married to him. They both seemed to have the same outcome, the same good things happened and the same good things happened, but with Gabriel she had someone to share the good and bad things with... But still she had some reservations, and she knew until she figured out what they were, that marrying gabe would be a mistake... You know how when you daydream, you can sit there for a half hour thinking then snap out of it and only think you've been out of it for 30 seconds? Well thats what happened to magda. When she finally realized that she was in the division and not at Bens college graduation, she also realized Jinny still wasn't there. She figured she aughta see if she really was in the bathroom, and besides, she had to go herself. She got up and walked down the hall and into the bathroom... Jinny was sitting on the bench lost in thought... completely oblivious to time like magda was. "Jinny? Hey Jin" Magda said, snapping Jinny out of her trance. "Hmm, oh hi." Jinny replied "Jin, You've been in here for like, a half hour" Mag said. "Oh really?... I was just thinking." Jinny stated staring at a corner. "Bout what??" "Nothing important." Jinny answered. "Oh comeon, it had to be a little important... you speant a half hour thinking about it." Magda said. "Magda... I..." Jinny cut herself off and looked away from mag at the opposit wall. "Comeon Jin you can tell me whats wrong." Magda said with an understanding tone in her voice, which came from being a mother and always saying "Comeon, you can tell me anything". "I started drinking again..." Jinny made no eye contact. Magda got a very dissapointed look on her face "Why? You were doing so well!" "I just couldn't take it anymore! My dad always has alcohol in the house and its everywhere I go!" Jinny began to cry "I was trying so hard... I just cant do anything right! "Jinny dont talk that way... You sayed sober for 3 months, now what makes you think you cant just... pretend you never started drinking again and try for 6 months!?" "Because it'll just be a constant cycle! Get sober, get drunk! Get sober get drunK!" Jiny began "Honestly, its not worth stressing out over anyway. I've been just fine these past two weeks... And if I get sober again Ill just get drunk again... I'll just keep going in circles!" ok more?
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01-13-2002, 02:01 PM	#7
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	It's been so long since I've heard people say Ur fan fic rox... Ah, I forgot how good it felt. "Jinny... You know... honestly... ur being pretty stupid I mean, what do you want to happen this time!?!? You wanna get fired!? Or get in an accident!? Or get aids or something!?" Mag was somewhat ticked... "Don't you even start with me Mag... I'm not in the mood for a "Booze is Bad" lacture from you... I got onna those at that god forsaken intervention!" Jinny got up and left the bathroom and went back to her desk. She pretended she was writing something but in reality she was drawing little squiggly lines and stick figures. When Magda got back from the bathroom she sat all the paperwork that wasnt done on Jinnys desk. "Ok I know youve only been back 2 and a half weeks but... Well Im tired of doing everything, its ur turn.." she pointed to the stick figured drawn on jinnys calendar. "Your friends can help you." Jinny decided not to argue it, she really didnt want to hear Magda be all mad today. She scribbled word on the paper so fast it was barely legible... But she didnt really care, cops and doctors werent supposed to have nice handwritng anyway. Captain walked by and kinda grabbed Jinnys hand to stop her from writing. "Uhh, your gonna kinda have to do that over. I cant read it and I doubt anyone else will be able to... I doubt you can read it." "I can..." Jinny squinted at the paper. "Uhh... Approx. Time of Death... Ummm... I think it says 1:05 but it might be a seven..." she dug througha bunch of papers and found one that she had written everything down on. "No... No its a seven... I think... I cant read this either." "7:05 AM" Magda said. "Well at least somebody knows what goin on around here... And besides, all of you, your shifts are over and I'm supposed to cut back on everyones overtime so go away before that guy get here." Captain said. "Oh I'm free." Jinny threwthe papers in a manilla folder and shoved them into the top drawer of her desk. She walked out singing "No more overtime", a song she wrote. Magda was still putting everything in a neat orderly file. "Captain?" she said "Can I have a word with you?" "In my office" Mag got up and went in and told captain that Jinny was drinking again. "... so dont be surprised if she comes in late everyday or does something stupid like that." Magda finished. "I really thought she was serious about quitting." Capt said sorta dissapointed. She expected that Jinny would go back to drinking as soon as she was out of rehab. Meanwhile, Jinny was about 5 miles away at a bar that nobody at the division ever goes to. more or no more?

01-13-2002, 03:56 PM	#8
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01-15-2002, 09:42 PM	#11
Jinny Girl Member Senior Member Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: ...I'm not sure (looks around) WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!!?!??!? Posts: 2,726	In the few hours Jinny spent at the bar she got herself much drunker then usual... It had been a while since she got herself drunk drunk... She didnt want to admit it to herself but it felt better to be sober... At first being drunk felt ok but about an hour into it she just wanted it to all go away. Usually when she drank she was oblivious to real life but this time she was just sitting there about to pass out, loathing her self for her stupidity. She still wasnt extally sure when she wanted to be, sober or drunk. Both had their strong points. Being sober made her feel better about herself... And gave her a better sense of reality... Before rehab she was always just a little drunk... Because she was always drinking. Pretty much every day on the job... Made her feel pretty weak... Being controlled by a bottle... And sobriety made her feel like she was a touch as she acted. But sobriety was hard. There wasnt a time when she didnt think about alcohol... And being drunk was equally hard... But good in a way. She didn't have to worry about what she said or did wrong because she could always blame it on the alcohol. Of course, she didnt admit it to other people but in her own mind she didnt do anything wrong, the alcohol did. She took the last sip of her drink and got up but kinda slid back down again "Damnit..." she slurred as she made a succesfull attemt at stnadint up. She held onto the wall and made it to the door. She walked down the street holding onto the sides of buildings for support. As she reached an alleyway she felt someone pull her into the alley... Not really very forcefully but then again, in her condition somebody could have touched her on the shoulder and she would have fallen over "Hey Jin.. Long time no see..." The man said. "No... Go away" Jinny could barely get the words out, much less stand up She couldn't push him away, she eeded to hold on to him to keep from falling. "Oh come on now Jin..." He said "Remember how much fun we had last time we saw each other" Jinny was drunk but she remembered exactly what happened. "You... You had fun... Not... me" Jinny tried her best to speak straight. "Just come with me... I promise you you'll have the time of your life!" he said she he moved her toward his car... She tried to fight him but after about 5 seconds she passed out, so he just pushed her into the backseat and drove off. He drove a blue Mercedes that was about 10 years old, with custome liscense plated that read JOE. more or no more, that is the question!

01-15-2002, 10:25 PM	#13
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01-16-2002, 12:13 AM	#14
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