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andress_jade · 07-19-2011, 06:13 PM

I just started writing a Frasier fanfiction story with of course Niles and Daphne.

I want you to tell me what you think of the first chapter. I will give you the link for the story on fanfiction.net and you tell me what you think. Any help at all would be appreciated. Thanks!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7196690/...eart_and_Soul#

Kristen · 07-20-2011, 03:31 AM

I just saw that story on FF, and I was wondering if it was you that wrote it! So happy to see someone else writing N/D stories. I can never get enough of those!

Feel free to R&R (read and review) my stories as well. The link is in my sig!

- Kristen

Schmoopie · 07-20-2011, 03:48 AM

I write stories on ff.net and I'm also a beta reader if you need someone to beta your story. I'm a huge N/D fan so I can't wait to read this! I'm just about to watch the very last episode (the only one I haven't seen!), so then I can read pretty much every story without having spoilers! Just send me a PM if you're interested!

Kristen · 07-20-2011, 03:54 AM

I just want to say, b/c I know Andrea is too humble to say it herself, she's written some incredible N/D stories also. I melt every time I read them (which is a lot, as Andrea already knows!

) It's so awesome to see so many authors taking their shot at writing about our fave couple!

- Kristen

andress_jade · 07-21-2011, 05:15 AM

I just posted Chapter 2, go check it out!

Kristen · 07-21-2011, 05:34 AM

Already R&R'd it. Great job, Andress! I'm begging you, please don't leave me hanging too long w/ that chapter.

Pat · 07-21-2011, 07:26 AM

I've written a few stories in my day, like Happy Days - 10 years later.

I've also written a western and am working on my second. I am trying to get the first one published.

Saying that, I think you have a great tallent.

andress_jade · 07-21-2011, 10:27 PM

Chapter 3 is posted. Go check it out.

I know I have been writing a lot of chapters lately but I am really on a roll with this story. There is more than likely going to be an update every day if it all goes well. I appreciate all your feedback and I'm glad you are enjoying my story. It really helps motivate me to write more.
Enjoy!

andress_jade · 07-22-2011, 02:14 AM

I wanted to go ahead and post these on here to give you and idea of what Niles and Daphne's kids might look like. It might help you when you are reading the story to picture them after seeing these.

http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/...s-006-jpg.jpeg
Their daughter

http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/...s-006-jpg.jpeg
Their son

andress_jade · 07-22-2011, 07:31 PM

Chapter 4 is posted!

andress_jade · 07-25-2011, 02:09 AM

Chapter 5 is up! Sorry it took so long for me to post it, I was out of town for a day and couldn''t write, so I hope you enjoy it. It's a special treat for all you N/D fans.

Schmoopie · 07-25-2011, 02:29 AM

Cool! Sorry I've been a little behind on my reading but I will R&R soon!

Schmoopie · 07-25-2011, 02:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by andress_jade

I wanted to go ahead and post these on here to give you and idea of what Niles and Daphne's kids might look like. It might help you when you are reading the story to picture them after seeing these.

http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/...s-006-jpg.jpeg
Their daughter

http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/...s-006-jpg.jpeg
Their son

Wow, that is cool!

Kristen · 07-25-2011, 03:20 AM

Another great chapter as usual!

N/D being that in love always makes me melt!

andress_jade · 07-27-2011, 12:52 AM

Chapter 6 is up! Read at your own risk, it's pretty dark.

07-19-2011, 06:13 PM	#1
andress_jade Life Goes On... Moderator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 04, 2004 Location: Iola, KS or Glenbrook Posts: 1,220	Your help and opinion, please. I just started writing a Frasier fanfiction story with of course Niles and Daphne. I want you to tell me what you think of the first chapter. I will give you the link for the story on fanfiction.net and you tell me what you think. Any help at all would be appreciated. Thanks! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7196690/...eart_and_Soul#
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07-20-2011, 03:31 AM	#2
Kristen Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 17, 2000 Location: New York, USA Posts: 4,042	I just saw that story on FF, and I was wondering if it was you that wrote it! So happy to see someone else writing N/D stories. I can never get enough of those! Feel free to R&R (read and review) my stories as well. The link is in my sig! - Kristen
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07-20-2011, 03:48 AM	#3
Schmoopie Keep Calm and Love Snoopy Forum Star Join Date: Jul 13, 2008 Location: Lynnwood, Washington Posts: 15,697	I write stories on ff.net and I'm also a beta reader if you need someone to beta your story. I'm a huge N/D fan so I can't wait to read this! I'm just about to watch the very last episode (the only one I haven't seen!), so then I can read pretty much every story without having spoilers! Just send me a PM if you're interested!
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07-21-2011, 07:26 AM	#7
Pat Member Senior Member Join Date: Feb 11, 2000 Location: 2Trivia4Me, VA Posts: 2,729	AWESOME STORY I've written a few stories in my day, like Happy Days - 10 years later. I've also written a western and am working on my second. I am trying to get the first one published. Saying that, I think you have a great tallent.
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07-20-2011, 03:54 AM	#4
Kristen Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 17, 2000 Location: New York, USA Posts: 4,042	I just want to say, b/c I know Andrea is too humble to say it herself, she's written some incredible N/D stories also. I melt every time I read them (which is a lot, as Andrea already knows! ) It's so awesome to see so many authors taking their shot at writing about our fave couple! - Kristen

07-21-2011, 05:15 AM	#5
andress_jade Life Goes On... Moderator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 04, 2004 Location: Iola, KS or Glenbrook Posts: 1,220	I just posted Chapter 2, go check it out!

07-21-2011, 05:34 AM	#6
Kristen Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 17, 2000 Location: New York, USA Posts: 4,042	Already R&R'd it. Great job, Andress! I'm begging you, please don't leave me hanging too long w/ that chapter.

07-21-2011, 10:27 PM	#8
andress_jade Life Goes On... Moderator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 04, 2004 Location: Iola, KS or Glenbrook Posts: 1,220	Chapter 3 is posted. Go check it out. I know I have been writing a lot of chapters lately but I am really on a roll with this story. There is more than likely going to be an update every day if it all goes well. I appreciate all your feedback and I'm glad you are enjoying my story. It really helps motivate me to write more. Enjoy!

07-22-2011, 02:14 AM	#9
andress_jade Life Goes On... Moderator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 04, 2004 Location: Iola, KS or Glenbrook Posts: 1,220	I wanted to go ahead and post these on here to give you and idea of what Niles and Daphne's kids might look like. It might help you when you are reading the story to picture them after seeing these. http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/...s-006-jpg.jpeg Their daughter http://www.morphthing.com/showimage/...s-006-jpg.jpeg Their son

07-22-2011, 07:31 PM	#10
andress_jade Life Goes On... Moderator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 04, 2004 Location: Iola, KS or Glenbrook Posts: 1,220	Chapter 4 is posted!

07-25-2011, 02:09 AM	#11
andress_jade Life Goes On... Moderator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 04, 2004 Location: Iola, KS or Glenbrook Posts: 1,220	Chapter 5 is up! Sorry it took so long for me to post it, I was out of town for a day and couldn''t write, so I hope you enjoy it. It's a special treat for all you N/D fans.

07-25-2011, 02:29 AM	#12
Schmoopie Keep Calm and Love Snoopy Forum Star Join Date: Jul 13, 2008 Location: Lynnwood, Washington Posts: 15,697	Cool! Sorry I've been a little behind on my reading but I will R&R soon!

07-25-2011, 03:20 AM	#14
Kristen Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 17, 2000 Location: New York, USA Posts: 4,042	Another great chapter as usual! N/D being that in love always makes me melt!

07-27-2011, 12:52 AM	#15
andress_jade Life Goes On... Moderator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 04, 2004 Location: Iola, KS or Glenbrook Posts: 1,220	Chapter 6 is up! Read at your own risk, it's pretty dark.