"THE DIVISION" JINNY STYLE~ by Celine

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

Hey all.... here it is coming from my point of view.... my fan fic on "The Division" JINNY STYLE!!

Early Monday Morning

Setting: The wind is kicking up blowing the clouds away.. its a cool 64 degrees in San Francisco.

Scene One: At the Division

McCafferty(On the Phone): Yeah yeah I know, are you sure you're alright though?

Amanda: Yes mommy dearest!!(sarcastically) I'm fine!! dont worry about me!! goodbye now!!!

McCafferty: I'll talk to you later honey.... bye. (Puts down the phone) oh geez.... C.D. get in here right away... good news...

De Lorenzo: Yes? What is it?

McCafferty(gets up): Murder in 47th Street... woman there got supposely beaten to death by a golf club last night at around 11:30pm.... threw her in the garbage in the back alley... I want you to contact her coworkers right away... here are the numbers (gives CD the numbers and addresses) They cant find killer but they are suspecting the husband due to his past history of domestic abuse...

De Lorenzo: And thats the good news?

McCafferty: You have a new partner.... Nathan Russo... he'll be making his appearance tomorrow in the meantime get started with this case.

:: CD Exits ::

Scene Two: Corner of Maple St. by a small store

Setting: Magda Interrogating a young man

Ramirez: So you didnt see them after all?

Young Boy: No.... I had thought I did... but it was so late last night

Ramirez: LISTEN..... sir..... dont be playing any games now... you either saw the couple in this picture or you didnt.. (waves the picture around)

Young Boy: No I'm sorry to mislead you... I have to deliver these groceries so... im sorry to leave this sudden

:: The Young Boy Leaves::
:: All of a Sudden.... the sun comes out of the light gray clouds and casts a light shade of Jinny's hair and she walks down up to Magda::

Extead: No luck?

Ramirez: No.... I thought for sure I had something with that kid... but it was just a waste of time

Extead: No it wasn't.... look! :: The Kid heads toward the Ferry in the bay area instead of uptown where he said::

Ramirez: We got him.... lets go (Magda and Jinny cruise over to the bay area)

Extead: Captain is gonna be happy about this one Mag I'm telling ya.... gold stars..... Inspector of the month.... ::laughs::

Ramirez: Not if I can help it!! After I turned Gabriel down I need something wonderful to happen to me... not that you dont deserve it Jin.... cause I know these past couple of weeks havent been good for you.... with everything...

Extead: Yeah I know what you're saying Mag....dont worry about me.

Extead: Look there he is.... lets go after him

:: car pulls up by the dock where there is a car ferry loading up::
:: the boy is seen carrying cargo onto the ferry::

Extead: HEY! HEY! SFPD!

Young Boy: I told you I dont know anything... :: the ferry slowly closes up as it journeys off across the bay::

Extead(to herself): Damn it!

Ramirez: Don't worry Jin.... We'll get him.... I have the number to his parents...

Extead: yeah... listen.... mind if we go make that call now? I really need to be busy... if you know what I mean?

Ramirez: yeah.... lets do it... :: drives back uptown::

Scene Three: At the Division

Raina: Captain..... you needed... ALL these papers .... delivered.. by when?

McCafferty: Right now... get on it.... now.

Raina: yes... ok .... I'll have them delivered right away( she goes past Jinny's desk.. and notices a card.... she starts to read it.. it says: Call A Sponsor: 1-800-556-4596)...
:: Suddently Out of Nowhere.... Jinny grabs the Card::

Raina: Oh... Jinny.... hi.... I didnt know you were here.... I was just --

Extead: Just mind your own damn business alright? Didnt the captain tell you.. its automatic unemployment for invading one's privacy here?

Raina: I'm sorry Jinny... it just brought back memories... i had a friend that suffered from---

Extead: I dont want to hear your biography right now... I dont appreciate you looking through my stuff either... what I do on my own time is my business.. nobody elses

Raina: I understand that... sorry..... :: leaves to go deliver the papers:

Extead (On The Phone): Yeah.... Jeremy? Yeah... hey... how you doing? Listen.... I need something from you right away.... what time? 8:00? I'll be there... Goodbye. (Jinny leaves with a suspicious look on her face)

WELL.... I'M GONNA WRITE MORE TOMORROW SO IF YOU WANT TO HEAR MORE.. ITS COMING ON THE WAY... AGAIN A LITTLE SLOW.. BUT IT'LL GET A LOT BETTER I PROMISE.

[sue z q]

Great start! Can't wait for more!

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

::Scene Four::

Setting: Nice sunny afternoon... clouds come from a distance 64 degrees

:: CD interviews a woman by the name of Mary Thompson::

Mary:: She never had any real threats... she was always a kind lady... had some sort of problem with the husband but i cant be so certain.. ya know?

De Lorenzo:: You say that nobody else would of laid a hand on her? You just assume the husband had something to do with it?

Mary:: Yeah.... well.... hold on a minute. I think.. I think... I remember a time when she was being hassled by a strange man by the name of James Macky... he's our truck driver that takes the furniture over to the store. Now I dont think James would...

De Lorenzo:: Why was this happening?

Mary:: She had a confrontation with him all last month... then he just stopped working for us... I dont know why

De Lorenzo:: Thankyou(leaves the scene)

::Scene Five::
::Anchorside::
Setting: The night is clear and its around 8:00pm.... 59 Degrees

Extead(comes walking in): Hi Jeremy

Jeremy(smiles): Hi Jinny.... have a seat.

Extead: So, have things been going alright for you?

Jeremy: yes, I'm mainly concerned about you though Jinny

Extead: Should I feel Special? (smiles)

Jeremy: You've been back for a week now and you havent called me in 5 days.... I thought we made a deal that we would call each other every other day.

Extead: Yeah I know.... I've been busy lately.... with this case and all... I've been at my dad's house a lot.. and it makes me feel better.

Jeremy: Ok... just promise me.. you'll call every other day like we planned?

Extead: I will.... dont worry... listen... my friend Magda asked me to watch over her son Ben... so I have to be there in about 20 minutes

Jeremy: Thats fine... I just wanted to make sure everything was ok Jinny. I dont want you to feel like you cant reach for help here.

Extead: Dont worry.... if something happens to me... You'll be the first person I call. I have to get going.... I'll call you tomorrow

:: Jinny exits Anchorside::

::Scene Six::
:: Magda's appartment::
:: Jinny surprises them walking in on their conversation::

Ben: JINNY!!!
Extead: Hey Ben!! (gives Ben a great big hug)
Extead: Are we gonna have fun tonight or what?
Ben: Ha! If you do my homework!!
Ramirez: Now Ben, I'll be back in a couple of hours, just behave yourself like you always do ok?
Ben: Yes mom (hugs and kisses his mom)
::Magda walks up to Jinny::
Ramirez: Thankyou for doing this... it really means a whole lot to me
Extead: I know Mag... go have fun!
Ramirez: Fun? not too likey... (laughs)
:: Magda leaves::
Extead: Ok Ben, crack open the books let me show you how...
::Scene Seven::
setting: Chez Camero Restaurant

Ramirez: This is nice, a good meal for a change... us together.

Gabriel: why?

Ramirez: It's too sudden Gabriel. I have my son to think about I cant just say I do and have a wedding like its no big change

Gabriel: We can change together... slowly... graduatly.... dont you trust me?

Ramirez: Gabriel, listen you know I love you.. and you know how much I care about you being in Ben's life and all. I just gotta give this some time.

Gabriel: I understand that... its just when you blew me off last week... i had thought I lost you for good... I mean you never called...

Ramirez: No.. no.. I didnt.... I mean I got a little scared thats all. Listen Gabe.... I just want you to know that I love you and that will never change....
:: They hug and kiss::
::Scene Seven::
Setting Magda's Apartment
::Ben is asleep in bed and Jinny is watching some tv on the couch::
:: A violent Earthquake appears shaking the walls and Jinny wakes up immediately::
Extead: Ben!! Ben!! Stay where you are!! dont run to me!!
:: she gets to bens room and grabs him and holds his head::
:: the books fall off the shelves and the lamp falls to the ground and breaks.... shattering dishes come crashing down from the cabinets... the whole place sounds like thunder...suddently.. everything stops... the ground stops shaking... and everything is quiet::

Extead: Are you ok?
Ben: Yeah I think so...
Extead(grabs her phone): .... Mag? ... yeah Ben and I are ok... no... just minor damage... oh wait... you might want to think about getting some more dishes.. yeah dont worry I'll be with him the whole time.... ok .... bye
Extead(hangs up the phone): Ben, you mom is gonna be here in like 10 minutes.. so dont worry about a thing just try to stay calm alright?
Ben: Ok Jinny... can we watch tv?
Extead: sure we can..... we gotta see what kind of earthquake it was and everything... ::turns on the news::
:: Ben sees smoke coming from the door.... the smokes starts to increase greatly::
Ben: Jinny!! LOOK! SMOKE!! what do we do? We have to go! There's fire!!
Extead: Ok... dont panic Ben.... ::hears the fire engine arrive::
Extead(looks out the window): Help!! Help!! we're up here and we're stuck!! get us a ladder!!
Fireman1: dont worry we have it coming up there
:: a yellow flame shows up on the carpet::
Ben: HURRY! HURRY!
Fireman2: Ok... the ladder is all set... now.. listen... I'm going up for the kid first.... you stay as close as you can get to the window.. try to stay calm alright?
Extead: Ok just hurry!
Fireman2(climbs up to the top by the window and gets Ben and slowely brings him down from the ladder): Ok listen to me Ben... just take one step at a time alright? Take your time.. dont feel rushed..
Ben: al... al... alright
Fireman2: That's right... that's right... put your right foot there.. ok... take your left foot and put it there...
:: after 5 minutes, Ben safetly makes it down the ladder.... Magda runs up to him and gives him a hug::
Ramirez: OMG are you ok? Do you need some water? Are you cold honey?
Ben: No I'm fine mommy... just dont go anywhere ok?
Ramirez: No... im staying right here baby... dont you worry.
:: Gabriel hugs them both::
Gabriel: How are you doing Ben? Are you ok? No scratches or anything?
Ben: No dad, I'm alright. :: hugs him::
:: Jinny is just about off the ladder::
Ramirez: JINNY!!! OVER HERE!!
Extead: Are you guys alright?
Ramirez: Yeah we're fine now... how about you?
Extead: Yeah I'm fine
:: Firemen hose down the apartments only to discover that the other apartment next door started the fire from the earthquake::
Fireman3: You're lucky.... the appartment didnt burn all up... the carpet is ruined though and you might have to get the place repainted.. but other than that... you're fine.
Ramirez: Thankyou so very much....
:: Fireman3 leaves back to the scene::
Extead: listen you guys... you stay for me the rest of the night and we'll take care of this tomorrow.... :: They all walk up to the car and get in::
Ramirez: thanks Jin... I really appreciate it...
Extead: No problem... its been a long night.
:: as 12:30am approaches.... the clouds start to clutter up and the moon can no longer been seen.... They drive away leaving a drenched apartment behind::

[Esperanza]

This is so great so far!!! Keep going ASAP!!!

[ZeldaGilroy]

Wow! This is really good. Keep going!

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

SCENE NINE

Setting: Cool Thursday Morning 61 Degrees.... the sky is cloudy... like its gonna rain
AT THE SMITH'S HOUSE

JINNY: We've been wondering why your son refuses to tell us everything he knows about what went down last friday night.

MRS. SMITH: Why ... Jordan has been truthful I dont know why he would lie.

JINNY: ok ok ... you saying he is telling the truth? I dont buy that for a second Mrs. Smith. Listen to me.... either you get your son downstairs now... or I'll get a warrant ready.... its a felony to lie to a police officer.

MRS SMITH: Very well then.... JORDAN!!! JORDAN!! There's some woman here that would like to ask you a few questions.... :: paces back and forth nervously::

JORDAN: Yeah... what you want? I already told you what I know.

JINNY(brings him to another room): Listen, I know a liar when I see one... You're our only hope to shed new light on this case... I promise there will not be a penalty for telling the truth here.

JORDAN: I saw the man who killed the couple. He was a young guy.... around mid 20s I'd say.... he had dark hair... almost black.. green eyes.. in the dark when i saw them... and he was wearing a suit and tie... I think he saw me.. and I was scared to tell anyone about it... I was afraid of my own safety.

JINNY: Listen Jordan... what you're telling me is really helping these couple's families deal with their grief of losing their kids... you know? This couple has been missing for days now... and we need to know what happend to them... Do you understand?

JORDAN: Yeah... I know him.... he worked at Fresh Fish Shop by the harbor.... but after then crime was commited.. he hasnt been seen since... But I know.. that he drives a camero.... red... and he never goes without his car... and he left it behind cause the other day i was delivering some Groceries and saw it parked outside his house...

JINNY: Thankyou thats all i need to know... are you sure he was the one that did it?

JORDAN: Yes I'm sure... I hope you catch him

JINNY(Smiles): Thanks a lot you really helped me out a lot kid you know that?
:: Jinny leaves the house calling the captain and telling the captain that Jordan is part of the crime and to get her a warrant for his arrest::

SCENE TEN
Setting: Park ... sunny.... clear blue skies... 67 degrees
:: Jinny walking with Teddy::

TEDDY: So how long have you been sober?

JINNY: 95 days sober

TEDDY: wow... thats sure an accomplishment from the last time I saw you

JINNY: Yeah? When did you see me last?

TEDDY: Nevermind about that.... what's important is that you're fine

JINNY: Teddy.... come on.... was it at a bar? Did you see me with a guy or something?

TEDDY: Look Jinny... youre clean and sober now... does it really make a difference whether I saw you with another man or not?

JINNY: No.... Just tell me something... do you hate me?

TEDDY: No.... I dont hate you Jinny.... things just didnt work out for us. I wanted them so bad to... cause I truely cared about you alot... and I wanted to ignore the fact that you had a problem.... because i cared about you so much

JINNY: Teddy.... things have been going great for me.... I jog every day for 30 minutes.... I eat right... my appartment has been looking pretty decent so far.... I'm moving on with my life you know?

TEDDY: Jinny.... can I ask you a question?

JINNY: What?

TEDDY: Why did you want to talk to me?

JINNY: Because I need closure from you... i havent seen you in like almost 4 months... and wanted to know if we can still be friends and talk to each other about stuff

TEDDY(smiles): Well... that can be arranged.... shall we go eat lunch?

JINNY: Sure just as long as it isnt Anchorside.... I'm really getting sick of their Tuna Melts:: laughs::

TEDDY: Sure thing

SCENE ELEVEN
Setting: midday 65 degrees somewhat cloudy... gusts of wind at around 20 miles per hour..
::OVER AT JAMES MACKY'S HOUSE::

CD: Excuse me... are you James Macky?
JAMES(all surprised): Yeah... what you want?
CD: SFPD YOURE UNDER ARREST FOR THE MURDER OF HELEN KEPLER!!
JAMES(Starts to run down the hallway): I dont know what you
re talking about
:: CD runs after James... he goes down the stairs and out of the appartment complex... CD follows not too far off.... he knocks down some trash cans.... CD jumps over the trash cans... James heads up to a store then goes in and whips out a gun::
JAME: Listen you.... if you dont stop right there... this guy is gonna have his brains blown away... you get it?
CD: Dont do anything stupid James.. just put the gun down and let the innocent citizens go free
:: All of a sudden cop cars swarm all over the whole store::
CD: Listen James.... just put the gun down now.... you hear me?
JAMES: I didnt mean to kill that B****... she was being reallly mean to me just because I stole some furniture... she threatened to take away my job!!
CD: Listen... James.... this is not the answer.... you arent thinking clearly ... now hand me the gun
JAMES: NO!! you better tell the cops to let me go... or else one of these people arent gonna make it home tonight
:: gets ready to fire::
CD: Alright listen... just let me talk to the chief officer and I'll let him know what you want... is that a deal?
JAMES: Fine.... hurry up
:: CD goes and reaches for her phone.. but instead takes out her gun and gets ready to shoot him.. unfortunately it barely misses James.. and James starts to fire his gun off... and CD trys to duck cover but she ends up getting hit in the stomach... Finally the cops roll in from behind the store and captures James and takes him in.... an ambulance is ready to take CD to the hospital for gun shot wounds...::

SCENE TWELVE
Setting: hospital... everyone is there in the waiting room
JINNY: Pain you never felt in your life
MAGDA: I cant believe CD could be so careless... what was she thinking?
JINNY: Well she probably wanted to get the bastard Mag... I would of done the same thing... except i would of hit the guy.
NATE: This isnt the time to be making jokes about this
JINNY: Who said anything about me joking... i was serious
NATE: I should of been there..... if I would of been there... maybe I could of ...
JINNY: Could of what... prevented her from using her gun? Nate.. dont blame yourself for this.... this stuff happens all the time... we just gotta be prepared to handle it
MAGDA: I left Ben with Gabe.... gosh.... I havent been spending any time with him lately Jin.... I just feel so guilty and all this stress over the apartment and now CD.... I dont know if I can handle all this rignt now
JINNY: Its ok Mag... :: hugs Mag:: everything will be all right... you'll see
:: Doctor walks in with some good news::
DOCTOR: Well.. she's ready for visitors but only two at a time... who would like to go first?
MAGDA: I will...
NATE: So will I... is that alright with you Jinny?
JINNY: Yeah... you guys go ahead... I'll be fine
:: They both go into CD's room::
MAGDA( almost in tears): How you feeling CD?
CD(softely): I'm doing alright.... been better.. but im strong... I'll pull through
NATE: I'm so sorry CD... I should of been there to help you out
CD: No.... really Nate.. its ok... you had to get ahold of some documents... besides there wasnt really anything you could of done... I'm very stuborn ::laughs.. but quickly stops..::
MAGDA: I hope you feel better... what did the doctors say?
CD: They said I should be out of here but next week.... they have to remove the bullet from my stomach area...... I was very thankful it didnt hit any of my vital organs.... I should of worn my bullet proof vest.... how professional of me... Captain is gonna kick my butt for that
NATE: I'm just glad you're ok :: gives CD a kiss::
CD: Me too.... me too...

SCENE THIRTEEN
Setting: hospital.... Jinny waits for the two to walk out of the room when she is surprised to see her sponsor Jeremy here
JINNY: Jeremy.... what are you doing here?
JEREMY: Kate called me... she told me you were here and probably could use someone to talk to
JINNY: OK wait a minute... how did she know about you? I cant be too certain she did it all out of the good of her heart...
JEREMY: Accidental you see.... i called the division ... and your captain answered it........ and told her that i needed to talk to you..and she told me that you were here
JINNY: oh... so she doesnt know that you're my....
JEREMY: sponsor
JINNY: oh good... last woman in the world I would tell... we arent exactly on good terms right now...but whatever... lets get out of this depressing hospital for a few....
:: They Walk Out of the Hospital to go to a coffee shop across the street "to talk"::

TUNE IN NEXT TIME... SAME JINNY TIME... SAME JINNY CHANNEL
I'll have more soon.... tell me what you think of it

[Divisionbabe05]

This is great...post more soon.

[InspectorExstead]

I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. I WANT MORE. POST MORE ! LOVE IT SO FAR !!!!!

[Esperanza]

This is great!!!!

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

Thanks for your good comments guys ) I'm so new at this and I always think everyone is gonna hate my writing. LOL well im gonna write some more later on tonight so you guys can read the next part tomorrow or later tonight. The funny thing.. not extremely weird but ironic is when wrote about CD chasing down that guy in the store and getting shot by him and last nights episode.... CD chases the guy and the guy hurts her by biting her but i just thought wow you know i just got done writing how CD got hurt and stuff LOL anyways... I actually made Raina in my fan fiction kind of nosey... but she is totally gonna change drastically in the coming parts of my story ....

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

SCENE THIRTEEN

setting: coffee shop across from the hospital
(Jinny and Jeremy sit together discussing what happened to CD)

JINNY(STRESSED OUT): I cant stay here long. They're going to wonder where I am and I really want to visit CD before we all leave, Jeremy.

JEREMY(NERVOUSLY): I can't believe this is happening to me.

JINNY(CONFUSED): What are you talking about?

JEREMY: I think im falling for you Jinny.

JINNY: Jeremy... listen to me, you don't know me. You dont know my family. You really don't want to get involved with me. Sponsors are not suppose to date each other.

JEREMY: We can help each other.... we're both alcoholics and...

(Jinny gets up)

JEREMY: Jinny wait a second...

JINNY: You know what? SHOVE IT!

(Jinny walks back to the hospital)

SCENE FOURTEEN
setting: hospital waiting room

(Jinny sees everyone else ready to leave)

MAGDA(WORRIED): Jinny? Where were you?

NATE: Yeah we looked all over the hospital for you.

JINNY: You guys worry too much. I'm out of here.

MAGDA: Jinny what's wrong?

JINNY: What is this? Lets Interrogate Jinny Day? Yeah Mag, I was over at the nearest bar getting drunk while you were with CD. See you all later

(Sarcastically, Jinny walks away leaving Nate and Magda confused)

NATE: What's with her?

MAGDA: I dont know, but I'm sick of it.

NATE(GRINS): So, you want to try the coffee shop across the street?.... my treat.

MAGDA: Well..... sure why not. I'm so tired from all this running around tonight. I've had one hell of a week.

(Magda and Nate leave to the coffee shop)

SCENE FIFTEEN
setting: coffee shop late at night

MAGDA: you know something, I cant stay long. Ben is over at my mom's and I hate leaving him there all the time.

NATE: What about Gabriel?

MAGDA: He's been distant lately, doing some shows a couple times a week at this club down the street.

NATE: I'm sorry things didnt work out between the two of you

MAGDA: It's not that, I still love him. I just need some time to think about the marriage.

NATE: I understand.

MAGDA: With Jinny back, she's been so bitter towards me lately. I'm afraid she's going to relapse. The Captain has been giving her a hard time. Being in the apartment with Ben when that fire occured,she saved his life you know? She's such a good person and I don't want to lose her again.

NATE: you don't have to convince me she's a great person Magda. I already know that.

(They continue to talk as the scene slowly ends)

SCENE SIXTEEN
setting: The Division

(It's mornning with lots of fog around San Francisco.... 60 degrees)

(Captain approaches Jinny and Magda)

CAPTAIN: You guys are way behind on this case. I suggest either you move quickly on this or it's being assigned to someone who can solve it.

MAGDA: We're on it, Don't worry Captain.

CAPTAIN: Good... remember Jinny I still have my eye on you, screw up once and you're gone again.

(Jinny gives her "The Look")

JINNY: What crawled up her....

MAGDA: JINNY LET'S GO!!

(They leave)

TUNE IN TOMORROW FOR PART FIVE, SAME JINNY TIME SAME JINNY CHANNEL.... tell me what you think so far

[Esperanza]

I love this so much!!! Keep going!

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

Thanks Esperanza!!! )) you inspire me to write more I can't tonight because i was swamped with homework and i didnt go to bed last night until about 3:00am.. and i woke up at 5:00am so you know.. thats not much sleep when i have to go to school and stuff... anyways.... I'll write a longer part tomorrow evening.. )

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

SCENE SEVENTEEN
setting: Magda and Jinny roaming through the streets of San Fransico.... its sunny clear 69 degrees

MAGDA: This this the right address? 1939 Kingston Pl?...... Jinny?

JINNY: Oh yeah... that's right.

(Jinny look's out the window waiting for the light to change... and looks over to a bar on the corner there she used to hang out at.)

MAGDA: You seem distracted... what's up?

JINNY: My sponsor.... he wants to go out with me.

MAGDA: WHAT?? When did this happen?

JINNY: Nothing happened... I shut him out like I do with the rest of them losers.

MAGDA: Isn't that Illegal or something to even go out at your stage of recovery?

JINNY: Yeah supposely.... I guess my sponsor had other plans with me. You know that really ticks me off.... now i have to go find another sponsor...

MAGDA: we're here, listen Jin... let's talk about this later.

:: They both walk up to the door, Magda knocks on the door to an old two story house::

:: A man opens the door slowly and looks at both of them::

JINNY: Hi I'm Inspector Extead and this is my partner Inspector Ramirez....

:: Suddently, the man slams the door and dashes to the back of the house::

JINNY: Damn it..... I'm not in the mood right now

:: Jinny runs to one side of the house while Magda runs to the other side::

:: So the man jumps over his fence in the backyard and Jinny sees him. So she starts running after him and he grabs the gun from the inside pocket of his dark blue jacket and starts to shoot at Jinny. The bullets miss Jinny and Jinny continues to run after him. Meanwhile Magda cant find the guy so she calls in for backup and tries to look for him and Jinny. The man starts to get tired and finds an older woman in the car on the phone. He grabs the lady out of the car and grabs the keys starts the engine and heads off. Jinny see's some police cars chasing after him and they chase him off on the next street over. Jinny stops... breathing rapidly. Magda finally finds Jinny::

MAGDA: Are you ok? I heard gun shots.

JINNY: Yeah I'm fine... couldnt catch the guy.

:: Jinny runs towards the lady on the side of the street and helps her up and everything::

SCENE EIGHTEEN
setting: The Division

(It's nightime in San Fransico and clouds start to appear over the sky making the sky more darker than in actuality... 56 degrees)

(Captain talks to Raina about her job)

CAPTAIN: I'm thinking about sending you to the streets next month at the soonest.

RAINA: Next month? I hate working like this captain!! I need to be out there helping out!!

CAPTAIN: You help out here.

RAINA: That's different... I'm sorry. I know I've made mistakes in the past but I also learned from them captain. I mean... haven't I been punished enough?

CAPTAIN: It's not my place to say... I can't change your work duty Raina

:: Phone rings::

CAPTAIN(PICKS UP PHONE): Hello?... huh?.... ALRIGHT I'LL BE RIGHT THERE!!!

:: hangs up :

RAINA: What's going on?

CAPTAIN: That... that... was my sister. My mother is in the hospital... I have to leave now.... make sure you take care of all the work I gave you earlier this evening.

:: Captain walks out::

RAINA: Sure thing

:: She looks worried::

SCENE NINETEEN
setting: Jinny's dad's house

( It starts to rain and Jinny walks into the house only to discover that her brothers are there as well)

JOHN: Jinny girl!!! we were just talking about you.

JINNY: Hey dad

:: They hug::

CASEY: Hey Jinny, how are you feeling?

:: Gives Jinny a hug::

JOHN JR: She is fine Casey, aren't you Jinny.

JOHN: I'll set up the poker table while you kids catch up

:: Leaves holding a beer in his hand::

CASEY: How's your case going?

JINNY(SMILES): Don't ask...

CASEY: You look great Jinny. You seem so well now.

JINNY: Well I still have a long way to go but I'm getting there... one day at a time you know?

JOHN JR(LAUGHS): Well, are we just gonna stand here and talk about Jinny or are we going to go in there and play some cards?

:: They all sit at the poker table.... John and John Jr have their beers while Jinny and Casey have water.... Jinny gets easily distracted::

JOHN JR: Whats the matter Jinny? That place you went to must of screwed up your head.

JOHN: John... just stop the fighting ok?

CASEY: Yeah really.

JOHN JR: I'm not even talking to you Casey so I suggest you stay quiet.

JOHN: I have two tickets to the show tomorrow Jinny girl. I was wondering if we can catch a movie together.. like old times?

JINNY: Gee dad I would love to but I wouldnt want to cause a fight.

JOHN: You're not causing anything...

JINNY: You know... I just wanted us to spend some quality time together.... why did you have bring the whole family over?

JOHN: I didnt. They just came on their own. What was i suppose to do? Throw them out of their home?

JINNY: I dont know... but I'm so sick of this fighting... and I'm reallying trying to stay sober. You guys arent doing a good job helping me out... what is it... like your fourth beer dad in like what? 30 minutes?

JOHN: Don't start this crap now... I'm not like you.

JINNY: NO DAD!! IM NOT LIKE YOU!!

JOHN: What the hell do you expect from me? You expect me to say that my wife killed herself because of me?

JINNY: NO! All I wanted was a little support from you... maybe a little comfort wouldnt hurt either.

JOHN JR: Oh come off it Jinny! You think you're the only one with problems! Just give it a rest. I'm so sick of hearing you whine about mom.

CASEY: Leave her alone John.

JOHN JR: Didn't I just tell you to shut up?

:: John gets up and with his empty beer bottle he grabs Casey and hits his head with the beer bottle... you see glass and blood all over an unconscious Casey::

JINNY: CASEY!!

:: Jinny goes after John.... kicks him in the nuts... and pushes him aside::

JOHN JR: Ohhhhhhhh..... Damnit!!!! Why!!

:: kneels to the floor holding his you know what LOL::

JINNY: Dad!! call an ambulance... Now!!!

JINNY(CRYS): OH god.... oh god.... please be alirght.

:: Casey lays there unconscious being held by Jinny who is stroking his hair and hugging him::

JINNY: DONT WORRY CASEY... YOU'RE GONNA BE OK... DONT WORRY.... DONT WORRY...

:: Jinny is scared to death thinking of the worse::

JOHN JR: I'm out of here

JINNY: JOHN!!! YOU COME BACK HERE!!!

:: attempts to get up and run after him....but decides to stay with Casey till help arrives::

JOHN: Jinny girl.... im really sorry... I dont know what to say or do

JINNY: Just pray dad.... or can you even do that

( Jinny starts to cry....... rain hits the ground outside and thunder and lighting starts up suddently.... you hear the ambulance in the background... and the scene slowly fades into blackness)

TUNE IN TOMORROW FOR PART 6.... SAME JINNY TIME SAME JINNY CHANNEL!!

Tell me what you all think about this one....

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

OMG how annoying!!!!! I'm so sorry you guys... you know im a 90210 fan as well and i wanted a david and donna pic... but i didnt know it was gonna come out that big LMAO!!!! OMg whoa!! LOL I'm so sorry now its hard to read the scenes...... I wont do that again i promise