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Kate McCafferty · 01-02-2002, 09:29 PM

Hey...tell me if this totally sucks.

*At the SFPD*
It's 12:30 p.m., CD., Angela, Jinny, and Magda are sitting at their desks finishing their lunch.
Angela: I can't believe it's past lunchtime and the captain's still
not here.
Jinny: Yeah...that's strange since she's always on me about
being late. I hope everything's okay.
CD: Me too.
Magda: Well we have our cases we should get started. *Opens a
folder*
Jinny: What is ours?
Magda: A four year old girl is missing from her bedroom. Her
parents went in to wake her up this morning and she
was gone.
Angela: We have a homicide...a bride was found murdered the
morning after the wedding. Her husband is gone.
CD: I think he did it...probably married her, planned on killing
her, and probably get all of her money.
Angela: That's unlikely...he wouldn't have left town if he killed
her.
CD: Maybe he panicked. *Tosses her trash away* Let's find
out*

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Should I post more??

-*Forever*- · 01-02-2002, 09:33 PM

Write more! Itz good so far!!!

JinnyRulz2932 · 01-03-2002, 10:46 PM

POST MORE POST MORE! i like the cases..lol! *Nate pinches CD's butt*..haha im still laughing! Private joke people...

XoVanillaRain90oX · 01-11-2002, 09:19 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by JinnyRulz2932
*Nate pinches CD's butt*

MORE WHITNEY!!!!!!!

Babes_Cat · 01-12-2002, 12:46 PM

OHHHH I LOVE IT SO FAR! Please post more soon!

-*Forever*- · 01-12-2002, 01:33 PM

Please write mooore!!!!! And Bonnie can eat some.... GOOOOOOEY GOOOOOEY PICKLES!!!!! LMFAO

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-31-2002, 02:18 PM

It's awesome so far! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more!

01-02-2002, 09:29 PM	#1
Kate McCafferty Obsessed Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 12, 2001 Location: In a Bonnie Obsessed World Posts: 115	My First Fan Fic Hey...tell me if this totally sucks. At the SFPD It's 12:30 p.m., CD., Angela, Jinny, and Magda are sitting at their desks finishing their lunch. Angela: I can't believe it's past lunchtime and the captain's still not here. Jinny: Yeah...that's strange since she's always on me about being late. I hope everything's okay. CD: Me too. Magda: Well we have our cases we should get started. Opens a folder Jinny: What is ours? Magda: A four year old girl is missing from her bedroom. Her parents went in to wake her up this morning and she was gone. Angela: We have a homicide...a bride was found murdered the morning after the wedding. Her husband is gone. CD: I think he did it...probably married her, planned on killing her, and probably get all of her money. Angela: That's unlikely...he wouldn't have left town if he killed her. CD: Maybe he panicked. Tosses her trash away Let's find out* ______________________ Should I post more??
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01-02-2002, 09:33 PM	#2
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01-03-2002, 10:46 PM	#3
JinnyRulz2932 ¤SHANE WEST FAN¤ Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 01, 2001 Location: In a house with a door... Posts: 196	POST MORE POST MORE! i like the cases..lol! Nate pinches CD's butt..haha im still laughing! Private joke people...
	__________________ §~¤Loren¤~§ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Burke-Pulls Striker down by pullin on his shirt Striker-gets upYou know, i wanna know wat the he-- you're even doing here? If some guy tried to dassle is way into my ex-girlfriends fancys, i'd probably be doing the same thing..only i'd have a bigger part... Burke-You dropped your sword ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Landon-Can I kiss you now? Jamie-What if i'm bad at it? Landon-moves in closerthats not....possible Kisses Jamie ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jamie-Sure, Landon...I'll help you with your lines...if you promise me one thing... Landon-What? Jamie-Promise me that you wont fall in love with me... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I LOVE SWING! (nickname for the guy i like) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I wish i never saw you....i wish u never smiled at me...i wish i never smiled back...i wish you never looked at me...i wish you never broke my heart...and i wish that you would love me back... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ SHANE WEST IS SOOO HOT!

07-31-2002, 02:18 PM	#7
BonniesLilCutiePie Ivy Winthrop Crane Senior Member Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,742	It's awesome so far! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more!
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01-12-2002, 12:46 PM	#5
Babes_Cat Member Forum Superstar Join Date: Oct 11, 2001 Location: massachusetts Posts: 34,145	OHHHH I LOVE IT SO FAR! Please post more soon!

01-12-2002, 01:33 PM	#6
-Forever- <3333333333333333333 Forum Superstar Join Date: Nov 22, 2001 Location: Manlius, NY in reality. Deerfield Beach, FL in my heart. Posts: 28,001	Please write mooore!!!!! And Bonnie can eat some.... GOOOOOOEY GOOOOOEY PICKLES!!!!! LMFAO