Jinny's New Life

[InspectorExstead]

Hey everyone. My name's Megan. this is my first fan fiction on the boards...ok the first post'll be short cuz i wannna make sure it goes through. so here goes.....

Jinny was standing in front of the division. She said to herself:Sober 85 days huh Jin ? Yeah never thought you'd make it. Well you did. Ugh..do i really have to come here ? Yeah you do Jinny ! You work here. You've been broke the past 90 days so shut up and get to work ! I wonder if anybody missed me. Not w/ the good-bye party they gave me."

Inside the captain's office........
Cap:Mag. we got a rape adn murder over by chinatown.
Mag:Any witnesses.
Cap:Well a lady said she heard some screaming. Can't be sure..
Mag:Hey cap. Since Jinny's come back I was thinking maybe..
Cap:Magda, do you really think it's a good idea to put Jin back on the streets her first day back ?
magda just looks at the captain.
Cap:Thought so. Look you got some investigating to do and I've got a division to run..so...bye.
Mag:Yeah...

Just as Magda was walking out of the captain's office Jinny came in......


ok..please respond and tell me what you think. i know it's a little slow but it'll pick up.

[sue z q]

Great start! Can't wiat for more!

[Babes_Cat]

Originally posted by sue z q
Great start! Can't wiat for more!

SAME! LOVE IT!!!!

Susan.............. C'mon...Wiat? IT"S WAIT

[InspectorExstead]

ok..here's more.....

Mag:Jin ! Hey !
Jin:What ?!?! Oh yeah hi..whatever
Mag:So been sober 85 days huh ?
Jin:You know what mag. I just i uh really don't wanna talk about it so can we change the subject here ?
Mag:Sure jin..sorry..listen i gotta go..
Jin:Yeah ok...well buhbye
Mag:Bye

...cd comes up to Jinny...

CD:JInny ! what's up ?
Jin: What's up ? what do you think is up ?
CD: Jeez jin calm down. Someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed this morning.
Jin:No i've been getting up on the same side of the bed like always. not that you would know...
CD:..okay....
Jin:So uh where's Angela ?
Cd:Oh you didn't hear ? Angela's husband got a new job so she transferred.
Jin: *Laughs* yeah..woulda thought ?


....inside the captain's office...
Captaing:*to herself* She's back. Well Kate let's call her in. I just hope she's really sober for good. I don't wanna suspend her again.

Captain walks out of her office.
Cap:JINNY! *motions her to come into office*

Jinny to CD:UGH !!! well here goes nothing

[Sabrina]

that is great for a start hope you do more i don't know what to write for my first one my mom does this stuff and so does miranda my friend jeanie is my mom well hope you do more that was great well bye

[sue z q]

hehehe...MORE!!!!!!!

So demanding, aren't we?

[BlairandJo]

One word
M O R E

[InspectorExstead]

Wow...man I feel so loved ! so here's more......

Jinny steps into the office remembering the last time she was here.

Cap:So Jin. Listen as long as your under my watch no more screwing up OK ?!
Jin:*laughs* Good to know some people never change.
Cap:And just what is that supposed to mean ?
Jin:I dunno, you're the boss you tell me.
Cap:look Jinny, it's great to have you back.
Jin:Wish I could say the same.
Cap:I see you're still upset at me for suspending you.
Jin:No really ?!?! Keen eye for detail.
Cap:Ok, you know jinny this has gone far enough. I'm warning you.
Jin:yeah *rubs forehead* look just give me my gun and badge and I'll god. Tell ya what. I'll never look at your face again. OK ? I know how happy you'll be.

Captain gets out the bag that has Jinny's stuff in it and hands it to her.Jinny takes it from her and looks at her badge and smiles. She then leaves the office.

Since the wonderful captain had not assigned her anything she had nothing to do. So she decided to just hang around till Magda or somebody came.

.......2 hours later......

Magda comes into the division and notices Jinny getting a cup of coffee (her 6th one in the past hour)
Magda walks over to Jinny

Magda thinks for a while about what to say finally she says : Hey Jin !
Jin:Oh hey ! Umm listen about earlier..
Mag:No Jin. You don't have to.
Jin:No listen Mag. I'm sorry i shouldn't have been like that. I should'nt have jumped at you after everything you did. I mean I didn't ask you to care. I didn't think anybody really did. But you did. Thanx.
Magda hugs Jinny.
Mag:I still do care Jin. I'm here for you. So wanna go to lunch ?
Jin: GREAT !!

In Jiny's car
Jin:So where we off to ? Anchorside ?
Mag gives Jin one of her oncerned looks.
Jin:Before you say it I'll stop you. Look I've been sober 85 days. Please, it's not even tempting.
Mag:Ok. Fine. Let's go

In The Anchorside Bar And Grill
Jinny walks in and looks at the bar.
Jin to herself: C'mon Jin don't drink. you can do it. Don't even think about it. Good girl.
Mag looks at Jin and thinks: God I knew this was a bad idea. Well at least I'm here.

Jinny and Magda get a table
Jin:So no more Angela huh ?
Mag:Yeah she left, she heard you were coming back.
Both Jinny and Magda laugh
Jin:Oh man I've missed this place. The place Mag the place. Not the bar not the drinks. Ok ? So don't go putting words in my mouth later.
Mag:Ok. So uh Jinny now that you're back I think there's something you should know.
Jin looks at Magda who's silent.
Jin:WHAT ?!?! C'mon you're killing me here Mag !!
Mag:Ok umm..well it's like this. *Waits a few seconds*
Jin:C'mon Mag it's not like you're telling me Teddy's gonna be working w/ us. *Jinny is laughing until she looks at Magda's face*
Jinny realizes that's what Magda was trying to say.
Jin: WHAT !?!?! THEDORE IS WORKING W/ US ?!?! HOW ? WHEN ? WHY ? WHAT ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Mag:Jin just calm down. Teddy's been assigned to all of our cases from now.
Jin:And you tell me this now ?
Mag:Well I didn't know how you'd react. I mean you broke up and you never even mentioned him. What was I supposed to do ?
Jin:I dunno you set up the intervention. Why didn't you just set up another one to tell me this ?

Jinny walks out of the Bar VERY mad.

[aeysh1]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

Dude whoever is writing this stuff PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!

[InspectorExstead]

ok well here's more.....

Jinny walks to the car but Magda is not far behind.

Mag:JIN ! Jin wait up.
Jin:Why ? so you an tell me you're sorry? That you care about my feeling towards Teddy ? That you regret not telling me this ? Which one ? Take your pick !
Mag:Jin that's not fair.
Jin:It so is fair. I mean, c'mon Mag. What did you think I'd go crawling into your arms and thank you for this ? Uh-huh !!
Mag:I didn't want to tell you cuz you just had the intervention and I didn't think you could handle it.
Jin:Yeah. you know what I'm gonna go home. Tell our delightful captain I'll see her at work tomorrow. And she better have something to do. cuz I am NOT gonna sit there listening to you make excuses. Got that ? Bye.
Mag:Jin wait. I have to tell you that...*Jin cuts her off*
Jin:save it. Take the car. I'll walk back home.

Jinny on her walk home
To herself:God I can't believe her. Not telling me teddy's gonna be working w/ us from now on ! Geez. But I guess with the intervention and all I wouldn't have been able to handle it. I can't face Teddy. Not after what he did to me and what i did to him. I wonder if he knows ? Of course he knows. He probably saw me at the bar that night. But why ? I mean he could've called and said he hated me. I wouldn't care. I still love him though.

Jinny finally reaches her apartment and goes to the calendar.
Jin:Well 86 days now. *laughs at herself* This is my biggest acomplishment. ....Well I better get some rest.

In the morning
Jinny wakes up to find that she's behind schedule. Her alarm clock stopped at 7 am. It was now 8:30.
Jin:****! I'm late ! The cap'll never let me hear the end of it.

Jinny quickly changed her clothes and put on her boots and was out the door in 5 minutes.

AT the division
Mag:I can't believe this. She's late. I thought she'd change.
The captain walks out of her office.
Cap:Mag. Is Jin late again ?
Mag:Listen cap could you not yell at her today. I mean she was kinda mad at me when I told her about Teddy.

Just then Jinny walks in.
Jin:KINDA MAG ? KINDA ?!?!
Mag:Jin...
Jin:No Mag. I'm sorry. I just..i was a bitch. I'm sorry. it's not your fault. your right I wouldn't have been able to handle it.
Cap:Well I'll let this go. FOR NOW ! Move. You got that rape and murder to do.
Mag:Yeah.

Jinny looks at the captain.
Cap:Jinny. move !
Jin:Gladly. If I had something to do.
Cap:Your mag's partner aren't you ? Well...go do the case w/ her.
Jin:yeah....

Jin:Hey. uh you mind if I go to the bathroom. It'll be a sec. I didn't have time to go this morning ?
Mag:Sure.

Teddy walks in.

Teddy:Hey.
Magh. Hey. Listen I told Jin. So you don't have to feel uncomfortable or anything.
Teddy:Ok.

Jinny comes in and doesn't notice teddy.

Jin:Alright. let's do this. *laughs* That's what the guys used to say. You know before we'd..
Mag:I get it Jin. I do.
Jin:Uh-huh. So uh who's he ?
Teddy turns around.
Jinny looks like she had just had 20 bottles of beer.
Jin:uhuh..you didn't uh you know. no one told me about uh. so uh hey !
Teddy looks calm as ever.
Teddy:Hello Inspector Exstead.
Jin:*laughs* Inspector ? You've never called me that Teddy. Well let's go got work to do.
teddy:It's Theodore.
Jin:Yeah. I know.
Teddy:I'd appreciate it if you'd call me that.
Jin:OK.
mag:Ok. Let's go. We got a rape and murder by chinatown.

(I don't know if Teddy would be able to go w/ them but in my fanfic he does.)

The car ride to the hospital where they were performing an autopsy was a quiet one.
They all step out of the car.
They walk into the doctor's office.

Mag:hey doc. What did the autopsy say ?
Doc:She was raped. badly.
Jin:Yeah. we know that.
teddy clears his throat.
Doc:As I was saying she was raped badly. And beaten up. we're taking tests to find out who's semen it is.
Mag:Thanx.
Teddy:Thanx
Jinh yeah. thanx for telling us all this stuff we already know !

They walk out.
Mag:Jin what's wrong ?
Jin:What's wrong ?nothing ! Everything is peachy. everything in my life has always been peachy mag.
Teddy looks very uncomfortable.
Mag:jin. Tell me. WHat is it cuz of Teddy being here.
Jin:No magda. For your 411 it's not ! Yeah it's not. ok ? can we just go ?! I'm not....let's just go.

They go to anchorside for a meal.
Teddy to Mag:You sure this is a good idea. W/ Jinny's drinking and all.
Jin:How about you ask the drunk herself ? I'm sober. Ok ? Don't worry about me. Please.

They sit and eat. This was a very quiet meal. Teddy had never seen Jinny so quiet. Just as they were about to leave a man came up to Jin.
Mag to herself:God. Now she'll start sleeping w/ strange men and then comes the drinking.

Guy:Hey Jinny.
Jino I know you ?
Guy:*laughs* yeah you slept w/ me.
Suddenly it all comes back to jinny.
Jin:Slept ? You raped me !
Guy:Hey. You didn't exactly say no. You were cool w/ it.
Jin:That's cuz I was totally drunk and couldn't realize it.
Mag:Jin. maybe we should go in the car.
Jin:No. Stay. Mag when you were looking for me before you bailed me outta jail this...guy...was the one who was......
Mag:Alright let's go.
Guy:Go ? go where ? i was hoping I could get a deal. 2 ladies. I mean if you're as good as Jin then..
Jinny is very mad right now.
Jin:You know buddy. shut up.
Guy:Who's gonna make me ?
Jin:SFPD ! You're under arrest for assaulting not one but two police officers.

The guy runs real fast. Mag starts to go but Jin stops her.
Jin:Stop forget it. he's not worth it. Let's go we've got work.

In the car ride...
Teddy to himself:Jin raped ? Doesn't suprise me she must've been real drunk. But in jail ?
Jin to herself:Teddy teddy teddy. Why ? Why did he have to meet me ? His whole life is probably screwed up. Now he probably thinks the worst of me. Good going Jin.

well I'm tired. More later.

[PhoenixMcKeonism]

This is cool.... like watching a brand new division episode LOL

[InspectorExstead]

LOL. Thanx...that's a big compliment. Here's more.......

Jinn, Teddy and Magda walk into the division.

Jinny to herself:Maybe I should apologize to teddy. I owe him that much. Man he must feel really uncomfortable around me. he's only said like 2 words to me. But then again I wouldn't blame him.

Jin:Teddy. Listen can we talk ?

Mag looks at Jin and raises her eyebrow (in a good way)

Teddy:Uh yeah sure.
Jink. let's go outside.

They go outside into the parking lot.

Jin:Listen I know you hate me and you have every right. I just..it feels weird ya know ?
Teddy:Why ? Cuz we broke up ? You've gone through a lot of guys Jinny so this isn't a big deal for you or for me.
Jin:First of all who are you to past judgment on me and tell me how I feel when I'm not even sure !?!?!! and second of all..wait no there is no second. And what do you mean this isn't a big deal for you ?
Teddy:Like I said this isn't a big deal. We dated, we had fun, you cheated on me, we broke up.
Jin:we never officially broke up. sorta.
Teddy: What we never went to court ?
Jinny and Teddy both laugh.
Jin:I just don't want you or ME to feel uncomfortbale.
Teddy:I know. Don't worry I'm not. I'm just doing my job. and you are too..don't think of it as anything else.
Jink. so uh le's go we've got work.

They walk back into the division.

Teddy:Ok well I'm gonna go back to the office. I'll be back in 40.
Jin and Magk.

Teddy leaves.

Mag:So.....(she has that look on her face you know the one cd had when she smelled those flowers on Jinny's desk)...
Jin:No Mag. We're not getting back together.
Mag:Ok so then what did you talk about ?
Jin:I just told him you know not to feel uncomfortable.
Mag:I don't think he's the uncomfortable one.
Jin:Yeah tell me about it. It's just really annoying how he's so calm about this. Ya know ?
Mag is about to answer when the captain steps out of her office.

Cap:Hey the tests results are in. Seems that Miss Lisa Kernel was raped by her father.
Mag:By her father ?
Jin:Yeah Magda people do that.
Mag:I know that but..
Jin:But if she was raped by her father she was probably killed by him too.
Cap:Go visit him and see if you can get anything.
Mag:we're on it.

Inside the car
Jin:She still hates me.
Mag:Who ?
Jin:the captain.
Mag:Oh c'mon Jin. Not everyone in this world is out to get you.
Jin:Yeah ? then why is she always like that around me.
Mag:Like what ?
Jin:Nevermind.
Mag:You brought it up.
Jin:yeah thankx for reminding me.
Mag:Here we are Mr and Mrs Kernel.

Jinny rings the doorbell.

Mrs.Kernel:Oh hello. Peter. It's the inspectors. Come in.
Mag and jin:Thank you.
Mrs.Kernel:Is ther something we could help you with.
Mrs.Kernel looks like she's 105.
Mag:Uh yeah maybe. We were wondering if we could uhh... *Magda hadn't thought about what to say so she was lost*
Jinny jumps in
Jin:We were wondering if you have the phone numbers of her friends and some photo albums of you guys, the family.
Mrs.Kernel:Sure. Sure.

Mr.Kernel walks in
Mr.Kernel:Hello inspectors. What's up ?
Jin:We just need some of Lisa's friends' numbers. If it's not too much trouble.
Mr.Kernel:I'll say it is. *Lowers his voice to a whisper* She was raped adn killed. Damn you. Can't you leave it at that.
Jin:Sir we're just doing our job.
Mr.Kernel:Your job includes making people's lives a living hell.
Mag:Sir we're just trying to find out about your daughter. We're helping you. Wouldn't you feel better if you knew the guy who did this to your daughter was locked up in jail ?
Mr.Kernel:Not personally.

Mrs.Kernel walks in w/ a piece of paper.
Mrs.Kernel:here you go. these are all of her closest friends. i hope it'll help.
Jin and Mag:Thank you. Good night.

Inside the car
Mag:Well that was...
Jin:Elevating ?
Mag laughs
mag:Yeah. I mean the guy's daughter is dead and he doesn't care if we find the guy.
Jin:Wrong he does. and he doesn't want us to. So he's a major suspect.
Mag:Why ? Cuz of what he said.
Jin:Yeah and the way eh acted. it seemed like he wanted to keep this very hush-hush. And the only reason that would be is if he raped her.
Mag:Uh-huh.
Jin:SO we'll have to call all her friends see if they know. And if they do, well let's just hope mr.kernel hasn't threatened any of em.
Mag:Yeah.

Inside the division.
Cd:Hey Jin. This is my new partner Nate.
Nate:Hey, Jinny. Nice to meet you. heard a lot about you.
Jin:It's not true. *laughs* How you doing. Hadn't really had lunch w/ a male cop in the group since dick so uh hope you join us one day.
Nate:will do. Who's up to go to the bar ?
Magda looks concerned.
Jin:No thanx. Sober 87 days. Let's keep it that way. Besides when Magda's with me I can't really drink. *she laughs* and so does magda.
Nate:alright see you around. By mag.
Mag:Bye.
Cd:Bye.
Jin:Bye.
Mag:Bye.

Teddy walks in.
Mag:Teddy I thought you'd be back in 40 minutes ? What happened ?
Teddy:uh I got stuck at the office.
Jin:Boss had some trouble ?
Teddy: Not exactly

Just then a blonde girl walks in (look like Blair w/ 10 years added on)

Teddy:Oh Jess ! Over here. I want you to meet some people.
Jess:Teddy darling !
Jinarling ? *laughs*
Teddy:Jess this is Inspectors Magda Ramirez and Jinny Exstead.
Magda, Jinny is is Jessica, my fiance.
Mag:OH...uh nice to meet you. *catches a glance at the dumbfounded Jinny.
Jess Nice to meet you too. and nice to meet you .....
Jin:It's Jinny !
Jess:Right right.
Jin:Yeah. Look we got work so if you don't mind.
Jess:Course not. I'll wait in the car Teddy.
Teddy:Just a sec.
Mag:So uh see ya tomorrow.

Magda walks away to give Jinny and Teddy a minute alone.

Teddy:So uh..
Jin:IS THAT WHY YOU WERE SO CALM ?
Teddy:Yeah.
Jin:Go figure.
Teddy:Listen Jin I don't want to hurt you.
Jin:Yeah you just want to ruin my day.
Teddy:no Jin. Listen. Hey ! That's not fair.
Jin:Not fair ? You come in here w/ less than a day fo warning and tell me you're engaged. I've just been out of rehab.
Teddy Looks suprised.
Jin:yeah that's right. me in rehab. See uh after the intervention Magda set up I figured if I went to rehab I could finally get my act together and maybe we could start to go out again and my life would be happy for once. But I see I was wrong.
teddy:You cheated on me.
Jin:Yeah i did ! *She has tears in her eyes now* You know what I don't even care. I don't know why I'm getting so worked up over you. You obviously don't care. just go. I'll see you here tomorrow.
Teddy walks out.

Mag:jin you want to talk.
Jinny pushes her away and runs into the bathroom.

[Esperanza]

I totally agree... this is like watching a new episode of TD! So keep going!!!

[Jo/Blair_fan]

Originally posted by Esperanza
I totally agree... this is like watching a new episode of TD! So keep going!!!

Ditto!! Post MORE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!