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janeydoll · 10-19-2009, 07:39 PM

I would love to invite you to read the new fiction/soap story that my sister, friend and myself are writing on our forum.

It reads like a soap opera/novella/tv show where it moves in scenes and fast pace. We have pictures of the places and actors that we cast for the roles of the characters and it is awesome if I do say so myself ;-)

It started off as a movie titled Extreme Race. A reality show with no rules and turned into an incredible story with a little bit of everything and so much heart and soul.

We continued it to our new show titled, Unwritten, that we say is a showtime 90 nightly soap. We have episodes that will be easier to read but to get the FULL EFFECT, you must read the race first. It reads fasts and gets very involved less than half way down the first page.

I love the feel of a soap where it continues the lives of characters. That is what this will be. It has action, suspense, LOVE, sexual content, romance, drama, and every single emotion you can have. We got chocked up at the end even as we were writing it.

We would love to personally invited anyone that would love to enjoy reading it. Not critiquing, just commenting as though it was a real tv show you are watching. We do it for enjoyment, not for the critiques of the writing.

If you do want to be a part of our show, please PM me and I will give you the link to our story. We do ask that if you join, you stay active and participate in each episode, but I don't think you would have a problem with that ;-)

We are huge fans of All My Children and some of our storylines surpass those. I personally promise if you can read the Race that you will be so excited to start Unwritten episodes. We already have 6 posted and seem to be posting a new one each week or so.

Please take a chance and share this with us. We would love to have readers besides ourselves. We love it so much and have so much fun discussing it as well.

Thanks
JaneyDoll

janeydoll · 10-20-2009, 12:49 AM

In case this matters to anyone, just my part alone, for one episode, is nearing 30,000 words. We put alot of time and effort and thought into it. It's not just some novelty. It could be on TV right now. And the actors make it come alive.

Jamie Lee Curis
Jennifer Aniston
Hilary Duff
Chad Michael Murray
James Denton
Jennifer Garner
Ashley Olsen
Justin Timberlake
Josh Duhmel
Alyssa Milano
Ashton Kutcher
John Travolta
Sara Ramirez (Callie from Greys anatomy)
Demi Lavoto
Emily Osment
Jenny McCarthy
Ted Dansen
Sally Field
Neil Patrick Harris

and more that I'm missing. Some of those haven't even been revealed in the episodes yet. And, almost of those characters are involved in more than one plotline. Some you can tell are the leading actors, but everyone has a purpose and will continue to flurish into their own.

I didn't realize just how many characters we have. The race only has 20 of those people but all of them continue their story into our new show.

I promise if you're even a little interested, that by the time you get half way through the Race, you will be so addicted.

janeydoll · 10-28-2009, 10:28 PM

Here are a few pictures. the top one is the updated one. We changed Miley Cyrus out for Vanessa Hudgins as Chloe.

The bottom one is like a promo picture. The top one is the one we use in each entry of the story.

janeydoll · 11-10-2009, 11:18 PM

there is a love story with could be at the level of jack and rose from titanic, or any major love story from any movie that i've ever seen. The journey of these two unfolds with a magic that we found incredible. One reader of the Journey said she couldn't believe the emotion the story had. We have layers and layers of emotions from almost all the characters and their unfolding connections to eachother is fascinating.

We have many many many twists that looking back, even surprised ourselves at where some of the characters/relationships started. Just when you think you have something figured out, BAM! You get blown away by something.

And Unwritten is just starting, now 5 days after The Journey ends, and it's some very powerful stuff. We tear up almost every episode.

i know it's hard to want to start reading new stories, but please, just take a chance. I promise The Journey ends with a magic that is seen in only the great rare movies. And Unwritten is so gritting and human, and even raw at times. Having no limits on censoring it has set a bar that nothing on tv can provide. It's groudbreaking at the extreme realness and very detailed emotion of each character.

On unwritten we have added teens as well as a taste of fame that adds a whole new element. I promise the day you finish reading the Journey you will be clawing at your mouse to click on Unwritten's first episode.

It's hard to plug your own work without sounding like your ego is huge, but i am so proud of my work, as well as my sisters. Our friend has a busier life and can't add as much so my sister and I really carry the entire shows. I am so proud and really want readers to enjoy it with us. Just PM me and I can give you the link to our forum where the stories are. I promise to reply right back. I am on all evening.

There is really nothing on tv that has the whole spectrum of emotions that can be expressed in all fashions without the limits of tv ratings. We also express with songs in our episodes as well which just takes it to an all new level.

Our shows evoke emotion in ways that is quite amazing. I promise if you just get through the first few movies of the journey you will fly right through the rest and you will crave each new episode of Unwritten that we are writing as I write this.

Just take a chance.

10-19-2009, 07:39 PM	#1
janeydoll Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 07, 2006 Posts: 166	New Soap/Story I would love to invite you to read the new fiction/soap story that my sister, friend and myself are writing on our forum. It reads like a soap opera/novella/tv show where it moves in scenes and fast pace. We have pictures of the places and actors that we cast for the roles of the characters and it is awesome if I do say so myself ;-) It started off as a movie titled Extreme Race. A reality show with no rules and turned into an incredible story with a little bit of everything and so much heart and soul. We continued it to our new show titled, Unwritten, that we say is a showtime 90 nightly soap. We have episodes that will be easier to read but to get the FULL EFFECT, you must read the race first. It reads fasts and gets very involved less than half way down the first page. I love the feel of a soap where it continues the lives of characters. That is what this will be. It has action, suspense, LOVE, sexual content, romance, drama, and every single emotion you can have. We got chocked up at the end even as we were writing it. We would love to personally invited anyone that would love to enjoy reading it. Not critiquing, just commenting as though it was a real tv show you are watching. We do it for enjoyment, not for the critiques of the writing. If you do want to be a part of our show, please PM me and I will give you the link to our story. We do ask that if you join, you stay active and participate in each episode, but I don't think you would have a problem with that ;-) We are huge fans of All My Children and some of our storylines surpass those. I personally promise if you can read the Race that you will be so excited to start Unwritten episodes. We already have 6 posted and seem to be posting a new one each week or so. Please take a chance and share this with us. We would love to have readers besides ourselves. We love it so much and have so much fun discussing it as well. Thanks JaneyDoll

10-28-2009, 10:28 PM	#3
janeydoll Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 07, 2006 Posts: 166	Here are a few pictures. the top one is the updated one. We changed Miley Cyrus out for Vanessa Hudgins as Chloe. The bottom one is like a promo picture. The top one is the one we use in each entry of the story. Attached Images

10-20-2009, 12:49 AM	#2
janeydoll Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 07, 2006 Posts: 166	In case this matters to anyone, just my part alone, for one episode, is nearing 30,000 words. We put alot of time and effort and thought into it. It's not just some novelty. It could be on TV right now. And the actors make it come alive. Jamie Lee Curis Jennifer Aniston Hilary Duff Chad Michael Murray James Denton Jennifer Garner Ashley Olsen Justin Timberlake Josh Duhmel Alyssa Milano Ashton Kutcher John Travolta Sara Ramirez (Callie from Greys anatomy) Demi Lavoto Emily Osment Jenny McCarthy Ted Dansen Sally Field Neil Patrick Harris and more that I'm missing. Some of those haven't even been revealed in the episodes yet. And, almost of those characters are involved in more than one plotline. Some you can tell are the leading actors, but everyone has a purpose and will continue to flurish into their own. I didn't realize just how many characters we have. The race only has 20 of those people but all of them continue their story into our new show. I promise if you're even a little interested, that by the time you get half way through the Race, you will be so addicted.

11-10-2009, 11:18 PM	#4
janeydoll Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 07, 2006 Posts: 166	there is a love story with could be at the level of jack and rose from titanic, or any major love story from any movie that i've ever seen. The journey of these two unfolds with a magic that we found incredible. One reader of the Journey said she couldn't believe the emotion the story had. We have layers and layers of emotions from almost all the characters and their unfolding connections to eachother is fascinating. We have many many many twists that looking back, even surprised ourselves at where some of the characters/relationships started. Just when you think you have something figured out, BAM! You get blown away by something. And Unwritten is just starting, now 5 days after The Journey ends, and it's some very powerful stuff. We tear up almost every episode. i know it's hard to want to start reading new stories, but please, just take a chance. I promise The Journey ends with a magic that is seen in only the great rare movies. And Unwritten is so gritting and human, and even raw at times. Having no limits on censoring it has set a bar that nothing on tv can provide. It's groudbreaking at the extreme realness and very detailed emotion of each character. On unwritten we have added teens as well as a taste of fame that adds a whole new element. I promise the day you finish reading the Journey you will be clawing at your mouse to click on Unwritten's first episode. It's hard to plug your own work without sounding like your ego is huge, but i am so proud of my work, as well as my sisters. Our friend has a busier life and can't add as much so my sister and I really carry the entire shows. I am so proud and really want readers to enjoy it with us. Just PM me and I can give you the link to our forum where the stories are. I promise to reply right back. I am on all evening. There is really nothing on tv that has the whole spectrum of emotions that can be expressed in all fashions without the limits of tv ratings. We also express with songs in our episodes as well which just takes it to an all new level. Our shows evoke emotion in ways that is quite amazing. I promise if you just get through the first few movies of the journey you will fly right through the rest and you will crave each new episode of Unwritten that we are writing as I write this. Just take a chance.