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10-22-2001, 05:26 PM
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I'm Writing Sitcom Pilot for The WB
I'm in the middle of writing a sitcom pilot for The WB.The show is about well me,my upbringing an the craziness in my life.I plan to call this show "America's favorite" or "JP" or whatever but right now I'm calling it "Untitled SW Project".Heres a scene from the pilot:
John-Paul  On Phone)Listen you work for me so you do what I want you to capicey?Spanish guy On Phone)CapiceyJohn-Paul(Hangs up)Was the the butler or the limo driver? ah what the hell he works for me |
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10-22-2001, 05:36 PM
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So basically the show is about you bossing people around? Sounds like a laugh riot. And I think you need to seriously rethink the proposed titles.
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10-22-2001, 05:36 PM
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Heres what I have for the pilot so far:
--------------------------------------------- "Pilot" John-Paul On Pohne)Listen you work for me so whether you like it or not you do what I tell you to do because I can sue you capicey?Spanish Guy:Capicey John-Paul Hangs up)Was that the butler or the limo driver? Damn it I the great one screw up for the first time ever but that didn't really happen.......ah what the hell he works for meSpanish Guy:I want a strike against you John-Paul:You have been served Spanish:But you need a lawyer John-Paul:I'm my own lawyer THE END (for now) |
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10-22-2001, 05:39 PM
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I might call it "The Great one". |
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10-22-2001, 05:46 PM
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I hope all of this is still a joke, for your sake. |
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10-22-2001, 05:48 PM
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Heres more of the pilot:
--------------------------------------------- Spanish Guy:I can't believe your also a layer John-Paul:I'm also better than you Spanish Guy:I knew that sir John-Paul:Bow down to me Spanish Guy:Fine dear king (Bows down to John-Paul) John-Paul:I'm not a king I'm better than a king Spanish Guy:Yeah I heard Princh Charles wants your job John-Paul:Stop talking or I'll sue your whole family THE END (for now) |
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10-22-2001, 05:51 PM
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I might rewrite the pilot to make it more about my family life like my TC spinoff that stars me called "John-Paul".
In fact thats what I'm gonna do. |
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10-22-2001, 05:53 PM
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I'm now gonna rewrite the entire pilot as a family sitcom thanks to bootsy
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10-22-2001, 05:55 PM
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This belongs on the fan fiction board, moving it there...
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01-04-2003, 08:27 PM
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Gee, I haven't seen this pilot. Were you lying?
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01-04-2003, 09:28 PM
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01-17-2003, 12:24 AM
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it sucked anyways...
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On Pohne)Listen you work for me so whether you like it or not you do what I tell you to do because I can sue you capicey?