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#1_Nancy_McKeon · 10-17-2001, 01:13 AM

Okay, this is my actually Mine and Jeanie's first fan-fiction on the board for awhile. Believe me this fan-fiction gets more interesting as you go along... I've done the writing Jeanie had most of all the wonderful Ideas!!

A Routine

Jinny sat at her desk flipping through some folders that lay before her. Her head resting in her hand she sighs and looks over to Magda.
"Lunch?"
"Sure, I'm starving!"
"Fantastic." Jinny reply's getting up from her seat,and adjusts her gun holster under her leather jacket. While Magda slips on her coat over her blue button up blouse. As the two walk toward the door Angela and C.D. come from the hall. Magda and Jinny step to the side to let them in.
"Where are you two heading" C.D. asks walking past.
"Anchorside." Jinny reply's.
"Ooh, Have fun. We just came from there."
"Business is booming." Angela adds arriving at her desk.
"Bye" the two Inspector's reply disappearing around the corner.

"So if Jason McLate found his girlfriend in the bathroom dead. Isn't that a weird place for for a murder to take place?" Angela asks.
C.D. shakes her head and begins taking off her jacket, "No, not really. She could have been in the bathroom fresh out of the shower. Perhaps maybe a stuggle."
"That ended in the bathroom?"
"You never know. Besides, we haven't ruled out the boyfriend completely. He's still a suspect. He could have done it. Since if she was in the bathroom she saw the suspect appoarching in the mirror."
"If she was paying any attention." Angela says looking up at C.D. then back at the case folder.
"Nothings exact." C.D. says as she sits down. "You've got to realize that by now."
"I do. I was just -"
"You were just assuming that's what happened. Which you have to do in this job,but there is a place to draw the line. You can't get it tangled into reality. Whatever you think may have happened you can not play by."
The phone to the left of C.D. on her desk begins to ring.
"DeLorenzo."

Continue?

[This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 10-20-2001).]

sue z q · 10-17-2001, 01:18 AM

Of course, continue!! I love your fanfics!

That was prolly the fastest reply you ever got, huh? Five minutes! lol

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#1_Nancy_McKeon · 10-17-2001, 02:21 AM

lol I'd say so! I wasn't expecting anyone to reply until morning! haha
I have a lot written so I will post more tonight. Thanks for replying glad you liked it.
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Magda and Jinny walk into Anchorside Bar & Grill casually as they look around for a free table. The complete length of the bar was full of people on stools. Eating and drinking. Aswell as all the tables in sight. Jinny looks down the row then passed them for a table when she hears Magda from behind her say, "Over here,Jin."
When she turns around Magda is standing by a waiter whom is cleaning off a table that the people had just left from. She walks over and together the two wait for the man to finish. At last he washes the table with his washrag that he pulls from his backpocket and places the salt and pepper shakers,etc on the table again.
"Thanks a lot." Magda says as takes a seat.
"Yeah,thanks." Jinny adds as she walks around the man,and takes a seat across from Magda in the booth.
As the two settle in their booth a waiter walks by and puts two waters on the table in front of them a waitress shortly follows with an Anchorside black shirt on. She asks, "Can I get you anything to drink?" her notepad and pen in hand she smiles at the two ready to write whatever they order.
"Yeah, I'll have a Diet Coke." Magda reply's.
"Waters fine." Jinny says.
The waitress nods writes it down and walks off toward the next table before heading toward the kitchen.
Jinny sighs and moves her hair out of her eyes.
"You're off tomorrow aren't you?" Magda asks.
"Sure am. Captain only gives me days off to get poked and injected on."
Her partner laughs, "It's not that bad, Jinny. I had mine last week."
"Yeah well it's the downside to the job..... Not like we don't get enough trouble on the job."
"Amen." Magda smiles. "At least we know our partners and ourselves are healthy."
"Yeah, I guess. I still don't like to be jabbed with things."
"Neither do I. Every six months we have this to look forward to."
"And every six months I complain."
"Believe me ,Jinny, you complain more than every six months."
Jinny gives Magda a look,but can't keep it without a slight smile. "Look who's talking."

Jeanie · 10-17-2001, 03:03 AM

I love it. You are a very talented writer and very good at it... Thanks...

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Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

XoVanillaRain90oX · 10-17-2001, 04:44 PM

Post more!! This seems gr8 so far!!

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#1_Nancy_McKeon · 10-17-2001, 09:47 PM

Thanks, here is more!

Angela glances up with a grin as she finishes their case.
"Finished!" she says proudly,and stands. She walks over to C.D.'s desk across from her.
"All it needs is your signature there." she points at the blank feild.
Her partner looks up to her, "I know where to sign it. I've been doing it for over 14 years." she reply's unamused and a slight bit sarcastic. Kate's phone begins to ring which brings Angela to look behind her at Captain's office.

"McCafferty" Kate answers.
"Hey Sweetie. How's LA. Ya holding up?" She smiles.
"Oooh, I see. What's the news this time,Amanda.......You're what!? You can't live in that sort of a place. God. What happen to the dishwasher?.......Yeah,Bob..You knew whom I was talking about...Uh-huh. Okay, are you sure you don't want to come home yet?" she asks. A smiles comes across her face. "You know I had to ask."

By this time Jinny and Magda were almost finished eating.
Jinny smirks, "I still can't believe Gabe asked you the forbidden question."
"If I'd marry him?" she asks.
"Yep, that's the one!"
Magda laughs, "That was over 3 months ago,Jinny."
"Yeah,well I still can't believe it."
"So you're saying if Teddy had asked you. You would of-"
"He didn't ask me. He won't ask me. Let's drop it." Jinny reply's back.
"Whooa. Sorry,Jin. I didn't mean t-"
"No it's okay, I'm sorry. I've just been moody lately with all the stress. Having everything happen. The intervention , suspention, and finally getting back."
"Yeah, you're doing good though, Jin."
"Thanks" she finishes her last bite of food ,and sits back on the cushion of the booth.

ISmellFine · 10-17-2001, 09:48 PM

More! This is awesome!

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On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha!

Just call on shiny suit man!

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FOL_lover · 10-17-2001, 10:52 PM

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Originally posted by Nancy McKeon Rox:
More! This is awesome!

ditto!!!!!!!

sue z q · 10-17-2001, 11:03 PM

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Originally posted by #1_Nancy_McKeon:
lol I'd say so! I wasn't expecting anyone to reply until morning! haha

LOL, thought you'd be suprised...this is going great! I can't wait to see what you're gonna have happen!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 10-17-2001, 11:24 PM

Thanks everyone for replying here is some more!!

"So how are you doing ,C.D. Without Paul and all?" Angela asks sincerely.
"You know I'm getting through." she reply's in a low voice. "You and Dan?" she trys to change the subject from her and Paul.
Angela nods, " We're doing okay. He doesn't like my job."
"Inspector?" C.D. smirks, "Why?"
"You mean Paul never said anything about you being a cop?"
"No, he knew better."
"Oh, well Dan has a problem with me carrying a gun,and 'putting my life on the line'."
"I guess I can understand that. Glad he's your problem not mine." C.D. smiles.

Jinny and Magda then walk through the doors of the Division.
"He's not exactly a problem, C.D." Angela reply's.
"Does he interfere with your job?"
"I guess, somewhat."
"I'll take that as a yes....He's a problem."
Magda laughs at that comment, "What are you two talking about?"
"Men. I can tell." Jinny reply's.
"Her husband." C.D. reply's. "He doesn't like her carrying a gun and" she begins to mock Angela "putting her life on the line." she trys to hold back a smirk.
Both the Inspectors laugh.
"He'd be out the door." Jinny says.
"Would he ever have been really in the door, Jinny?" Magda asks.
She shrugs, "Probably not."
Before Magda could really think about what she was going to say she blurted out "Gabriel asked me to marry him."
"Speaking of problems." Jinny grins.
"JINNY!" Magda laughs.
"Gabriel , Ben's dad?" C.D. asks.
"Uh-huh." she nods and sits in her seat.
Jinny leans against her desk.
Angela just listens a bit confused.
"What was your response?"
"I said I have to think about it. For god sakes he hasn't been around for that long,and he wants to get married."
"He's another that wouldn't have been in the door." Jinny adds.
Magda ignores that remark.
"That's probably the best reply for now." C.D. nods.
"I hope so." Magda says.

((Going to be getting to the good stuff soon))

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 10-20-2001, 04:46 PM

Here's some more. If anyone it interested. I have lots written. I'm so proud of it.

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The next morning the Alarm clock goes off in Jinny's room. She rolls over and hits the 'Snooze' and covers her face with the comforter to sheild the sun coming from the sleak white curtains over the window. 10 minutes go by and the Alarm clock goes off again.
"Ugh." Jinny says and shuts it off again,but this time sits up in her bed. Rubs her eyes and gets up. Wearing her sweat pants and a t-shirt she walks down her hallway slowly toward the kitchen. She then begins starting her coffee,and turns on the coffee pot. Jinny leans against her counter as she trys to wake up. After a moment she turns around and opens the window above her sink,then walks over and opens the blinds of the window near her stove to let the morning light in. She glances back at the coffee which just had started dripping into the pot, "I'll get my shower out of the way." she thinks to herself as she begins out of the kitchen. Jin had just made it to the hall when the phone begins to ring. Again she turns around and walks over to the desk near the door. Picks up the phone from the cradle and answers, "Hello?" her eyes closed she waits for the person on the other line to reply.
"Hey Jin." a familiar voice says.
"Hey Mag." Jinny reply's and yawns.
"What time is your appointment?"
"9:45."
"That's pretty soon. I just wanted to call and wish you luck!"
"Yeah, thanks. I can't wait." Jinny reply's sarcastically.
"I bet." Magda laughs. "Well I will let you go and get ready or whatever."
"Thanks,Mag. I'll call you later."
"Okay,Bye!"
They both hang up. Once again Jinny is on her way to the bathroom for her shower.

Magda walks into the Division for the first time that day from being down in the archives.
"Hey." C.D. says looking up from her desk.
"Hey Magda, where's Jinny?"Angela chimes in.
"Hey Guys. Oh Jinny's off today. Physical."
C.D. makes a face, "I know. Mines in two weeks. I hate hospitals never the less doctors."
"Mine is done with." Magda smiles.
"Yeah laugh it up." C.D. adds.

Captain walks in, "So,uh, Jinny's off for the physical today."
"Right Cap." Magda nods. "We finished the Watford Case yesterday." she points at the case folder on the left of her desk. "Finishing up the details now."
"Great." Kate nods and walks over to C.D. and Angela.
"Any leads?"
"No ,not any definite ones." Angela reply's.
"We went and talked to Leslie's boyfriend yesterday and he just seemed odd."
"Like he was holding back evidence?"
"Perhaps, we still haven't ruled him out completely."
"No sign of forced entry. Nothing?"
"Not that we gathered. The boyfriends story is he was in the living room he went to check on Leslie when he heard a loud noise and found her in the bathroom."
"So what he's saying is someone came in ,killed her,and left without him seeing them or hearing them leave?" Captain asks folding her arms.
"Exactly. There just isn't something right about that."
"Well talk to neighbors friends anyone who could know anything."
"We've talked to two neighbors,but nothing. We're still waiting for the neighbor to the direct left of their apartment to come home."
"Inform me when you find anything."
"You bet,Captain." C.D. reply's.

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IMakeBurgers · 10-20-2001, 05:17 PM

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Captain asks folding his arms.

HAHA!! das funny..anyways, u HAVE to post more SOON, this is GREAT!!

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#1_Nancy_McKeon · 10-20-2001, 05:33 PM

LOL, I soo didn't put the purposely! As you can tell I don't read mine over. haha.. Poor Cap. lol

IMakeBurgers · 10-20-2001, 05:39 PM

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Originally posted by #1_Nancy_McKeon:
LOL, I soo didn't put the purposely! As you can tell I don't read mine over. haha.. Poor Cap. lol

uh huh..SURE u didnt..lol, j/k..don worry, I thought it was funny

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GUM IS GOOD!! LMFAO

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#1_Nancy_McKeon · 10-20-2001, 05:49 PM

Here I'll add some more. I'm bored! haha

Jinny walks down her hallway dressed,her hair brushed,but still wet from her shower. She walks into the kitchen takes out a small thermo mug,and pours herself some coffee into it. Shuts off the coffee pot and puts the lid on the coffee mug. She picks it up ,takes a sip,and walks into the living room. Then sits the mug down on the table. Walks down the hall and comes back with her gunholster,gun,and her leather jacket in hand. She sits her leather jacket on the table near her coffee and puts the gunholster on. Then proceeds putting her Leather jacket on. Jinny drops her hand in her pocket and feels around for her wallet. Once she feels it she pulls her hand out...Picks up her keys,coffee,and heads toward the door.

Once the car is parked in front of the doctor's office Jinny turns off the engine,and gets out. She walks up to the offices glass door,pulls it open and enters. Jinny then walks up toward the front desk to let them know she was there. Before she gets up there she looks around at the empty office, which was cold,and smelled like a hospital. Which she hated to be in. The receptionist looks at her then to the chart, "Jinny Exstead?"
"Yeah." she reply's in a soft tone almost a whisper.
"The doctor will see you now." The woman reply's handing the chart to a nurse whom walks around to opens the door for Jinny to follow her down the hall,but before she gets to a room she stops at a scale.
"Can you please take off your shoes and get on the scale." the nurse says.
"Right , okay." Jinny sighs bends over and takes off her shoes. Then steps onto the scale.
The nurse then begins to take her height and weight once she was finished she looks at the board and announces, "5 foot 5 and 3/4 inches. 116 pounds!"
"Great." she reply's glancing around to see if anyone was in ear shot.
"Okay right this way." The nurse says as she walks about two feet and opens a room.
Not having enough time to put on her shoes Jinny gets off the scale,picks up her shoes,and walks to the examining room in her socks.

After reading and signing a paper Magda pulls up her sleeve to check the time, "9:50".
'Jinny's probably still waiting to see the doctor. Dying of impatience.' she smirks at her thought and thinks further, "Yeah that sounds like Jinny." she then continues on her papers.

C.D. steps forward and knocks on the door to Jason McLane's neighbors apartment. Her partner beside her.
After a moment a woman comes to the door, the two inspectors lift their badges, "San Francisco Police. I'm Inspector Reide this is Inspector De Lorenzo. We're here to ask you some questions about your neighbors Jason McLane and Leslie McGyver." Angela says very professionally.
"Ooh, I see. Please come in. Did anything happen to them?!" the woman asks moving apart from the door and letting the two Inspector's walk in. Once they were in the lady closes the door and leads them to the living room, "Please sit down."
"Did you know your neighbors very well-" C.D. waits for the woman to state her name.
"Karin, Karin Lincoln." the lady reply's. "Umm, I've spoken with Leslie several times. In the elevator on the way up. Other than that not really."
"Did she ever mention anything about Jason McLane, her boyfriend?" Angela asks.
Karin thinks a moment and shakes her head, "Not that I recall."
"Have you ever heard anything you found out of ordinary?"
"May I ask what this is all about?" Karin asks.
"Mrs. Lincoln, Leslie McGyver was murdered in her apartment next door." C.D. reply's.

[This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 10-20-2001).]

10-17-2001, 01:13 AM	#1
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	A Routine Okay, this is my actually Mine and Jeanie's first fan-fiction on the board for awhile. Believe me this fan-fiction gets more interesting as you go along... I've done the writing Jeanie had most of all the wonderful Ideas!! A Routine Jinny sat at her desk flipping through some folders that lay before her. Her head resting in her hand she sighs and looks over to Magda. "Lunch?" "Sure, I'm starving!" "Fantastic." Jinny reply's getting up from her seat,and adjusts her gun holster under her leather jacket. While Magda slips on her coat over her blue button up blouse. As the two walk toward the door Angela and C.D. come from the hall. Magda and Jinny step to the side to let them in. "Where are you two heading" C.D. asks walking past. "Anchorside." Jinny reply's. "Ooh, Have fun. We just came from there." "Business is booming." Angela adds arriving at her desk. "Bye" the two Inspector's reply disappearing around the corner. "So if Jason McLate found his girlfriend in the bathroom dead. Isn't that a weird place for for a murder to take place?" Angela asks. C.D. shakes her head and begins taking off her jacket, "No, not really. She could have been in the bathroom fresh out of the shower. Perhaps maybe a stuggle." "That ended in the bathroom?" "You never know. Besides, we haven't ruled out the boyfriend completely. He's still a suspect. He could have done it. Since if she was in the bathroom she saw the suspect appoarching in the mirror." "If she was paying any attention." Angela says looking up at C.D. then back at the case folder. "Nothings exact." C.D. says as she sits down. "You've got to realize that by now." "I do. I was just -" "You were just assuming that's what happened. Which you have to do in this job,but there is a place to draw the line. You can't get it tangled into reality. Whatever you think may have happened you can not play by." The phone to the left of C.D. on her desk begins to ring. "DeLorenzo." Continue? [This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 10-20-2001).]

10-17-2001, 01:18 AM	#2
sue z q funger agger LOL Senior Member Join Date: Jun 27, 2001 Location: CA Posts: 1,687	Of course, continue!! I love your fanfics! That was prolly the fastest reply you ever got, huh? Five minutes! lol ------------------ Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most. Check out my Nancy McKeon Links site! http://www.geocities.com/nancymckeonlinkssite Or my Site for Christian Teens! http://www.geocities.com/christianteenssite And from your resident off-topic queens and royalty: ^^~~~God Bless~~~^^ [This message has been edited by sue z q (edited 10-17-2001).]

10-17-2001, 02:21 AM	#3
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	lol I'd say so! I wasn't expecting anyone to reply until morning! haha I have a lot written so I will post more tonight. Thanks for replying glad you liked it. ---------- Magda and Jinny walk into Anchorside Bar & Grill casually as they look around for a free table. The complete length of the bar was full of people on stools. Eating and drinking. Aswell as all the tables in sight. Jinny looks down the row then passed them for a table when she hears Magda from behind her say, "Over here,Jin." When she turns around Magda is standing by a waiter whom is cleaning off a table that the people had just left from. She walks over and together the two wait for the man to finish. At last he washes the table with his washrag that he pulls from his backpocket and places the salt and pepper shakers,etc on the table again. "Thanks a lot." Magda says as takes a seat. "Yeah,thanks." Jinny adds as she walks around the man,and takes a seat across from Magda in the booth. As the two settle in their booth a waiter walks by and puts two waters on the table in front of them a waitress shortly follows with an Anchorside black shirt on. She asks, "Can I get you anything to drink?" her notepad and pen in hand she smiles at the two ready to write whatever they order. "Yeah, I'll have a Diet Coke." Magda reply's. "Waters fine." Jinny says. The waitress nods writes it down and walks off toward the next table before heading toward the kitchen. Jinny sighs and moves her hair out of her eyes. "You're off tomorrow aren't you?" Magda asks. "Sure am. Captain only gives me days off to get poked and injected on." Her partner laughs, "It's not that bad, Jinny. I had mine last week." "Yeah well it's the downside to the job..... Not like we don't get enough trouble on the job." "Amen." Magda smiles. "At least we know our partners and ourselves are healthy." "Yeah, I guess. I still don't like to be jabbed with things." "Neither do I. Every six months we have this to look forward to." "And every six months I complain." "Believe me ,Jinny, you complain more than every six months." Jinny gives Magda a look,but can't keep it without a slight smile. "Look who's talking."

10-17-2001, 03:03 AM	#4
Jeanie Jinny & Theodore Fan Forum Regular Join Date: Nov 12, 2000 Location: NE Posts: 910	I love it. You are a very talented writer and very good at it... Thanks... ------------------ Jeanie Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy? Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic. Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

10-17-2001, 04:44 PM	#5
XoVanillaRain90oX youre RAD <3<3 Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Jun 14, 2001 Location: SwEdEn BaBii! Posts: 3,416	Post more!! This seems gr8 so far!! ------------------ ~^~Jinny the Wild 1~^~ Of the ~Jinny Misdemeaner Exsteads~ Lord of the goats, Jinnys, hot guys, and Gummi Worms In the year 2006, Jinny The Evil 1* Aly and I, Jinny the Wild 1, will fly to LA on her giant flying chinchilla and track down Jay Harrington (the most adorable Teddy bear in the world) and Nancy McKeon AND YOUR NOT MWAHAHA* (Dont take this the wrong way, it's all in pure fun!) ----------------------- Jamie,Lauren,Tiffany and Lisa Da SlAnG sIsTaHs

10-17-2001, 09:47 PM	#6
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Thanks, here is more! Angela glances up with a grin as she finishes their case. "Finished!" she says proudly,and stands. She walks over to C.D.'s desk across from her. "All it needs is your signature there." she points at the blank feild. Her partner looks up to her, "I know where to sign it. I've been doing it for over 14 years." she reply's unamused and a slight bit sarcastic. Kate's phone begins to ring which brings Angela to look behind her at Captain's office. "McCafferty" Kate answers. "Hey Sweetie. How's LA. Ya holding up?" She smiles. "Oooh, I see. What's the news this time,Amanda.......You're what!? You can't live in that sort of a place. God. What happen to the dishwasher?.......Yeah,Bob..You knew whom I was talking about...Uh-huh. Okay, are you sure you don't want to come home yet?" she asks. A smiles comes across her face. "You know I had to ask." By this time Jinny and Magda were almost finished eating. Jinny smirks, "I still can't believe Gabe asked you the forbidden question." "If I'd marry him?" she asks. "Yep, that's the one!" Magda laughs, "That was over 3 months ago,Jinny." "Yeah,well I still can't believe it." "So you're saying if Teddy had asked you. You would of-" "He didn't ask me. He won't ask me. Let's drop it." Jinny reply's back. "Whooa. Sorry,Jin. I didn't mean t-" "No it's okay, I'm sorry. I've just been moody lately with all the stress. Having everything happen. The intervention , suspention, and finally getting back." "Yeah, you're doing good though, Jin." "Thanks" she finishes her last bite of food ,and sits back on the cushion of the booth.

10-17-2001, 09:48 PM	#7
ISmellFine Zim Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Apr 13, 2001 Posts: 4,886	More! This is awesome! ------------------ --Kaley Jinny Exstead, co-Queen of the Asparagus Bobs, Pigs, Penguins, Coke, Insanity, Cows, and Elephants-- On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha! Just call on shiny suit man! Jinny: Oh, come on, folks, please, don't be shy. Apparently anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight, so please, step right on up! Jinny [and me]: Don't screw with me. -Five Queens and a Message Board. One Code: Hell Raising- Go visit my lovely and wonderful website about the best and most talented actress in the entire world: Nancy McKeon!

10-17-2001, 11:24 PM	#10
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Thanks everyone for replying here is some more!! "So how are you doing ,C.D. Without Paul and all?" Angela asks sincerely. "You know I'm getting through." she reply's in a low voice. "You and Dan?" she trys to change the subject from her and Paul. Angela nods, " We're doing okay. He doesn't like my job." "Inspector?" C.D. smirks, "Why?" "You mean Paul never said anything about you being a cop?" "No, he knew better." "Oh, well Dan has a problem with me carrying a gun,and 'putting my life on the line'." "I guess I can understand that. Glad he's your problem not mine." C.D. smiles. Jinny and Magda then walk through the doors of the Division. "He's not exactly a problem, C.D." Angela reply's. "Does he interfere with your job?" "I guess, somewhat." "I'll take that as a yes....He's a problem." Magda laughs at that comment, "What are you two talking about?" "Men. I can tell." Jinny reply's. "Her husband." C.D. reply's. "He doesn't like her carrying a gun and" she begins to mock Angela "putting her life on the line." she trys to hold back a smirk. Both the Inspectors laugh. "He'd be out the door." Jinny says. "Would he ever have been really in the door, Jinny?" Magda asks. She shrugs, "Probably not." Before Magda could really think about what she was going to say she blurted out "Gabriel asked me to marry him." "Speaking of problems." Jinny grins. "JINNY!" Magda laughs. "Gabriel , Ben's dad?" C.D. asks. "Uh-huh." she nods and sits in her seat. Jinny leans against her desk. Angela just listens a bit confused. "What was your response?" "I said I have to think about it. For god sakes he hasn't been around for that long,and he wants to get married." "He's another that wouldn't have been in the door." Jinny adds. Magda ignores that remark. "That's probably the best reply for now." C.D. nods. "I hope so." Magda says. ((Going to be getting to the good stuff soon))

10-20-2001, 04:46 PM	#11
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Here's some more. If anyone it interested. I have lots written. I'm so proud of it. ---------------------------------- The next morning the Alarm clock goes off in Jinny's room. She rolls over and hits the 'Snooze' and covers her face with the comforter to sheild the sun coming from the sleak white curtains over the window. 10 minutes go by and the Alarm clock goes off again. "Ugh." Jinny says and shuts it off again,but this time sits up in her bed. Rubs her eyes and gets up. Wearing her sweat pants and a t-shirt she walks down her hallway slowly toward the kitchen. She then begins starting her coffee,and turns on the coffee pot. Jinny leans against her counter as she trys to wake up. After a moment she turns around and opens the window above her sink,then walks over and opens the blinds of the window near her stove to let the morning light in. She glances back at the coffee which just had started dripping into the pot, "I'll get my shower out of the way." she thinks to herself as she begins out of the kitchen. Jin had just made it to the hall when the phone begins to ring. Again she turns around and walks over to the desk near the door. Picks up the phone from the cradle and answers, "Hello?" her eyes closed she waits for the person on the other line to reply. "Hey Jin." a familiar voice says. "Hey Mag." Jinny reply's and yawns. "What time is your appointment?" "9:45." "That's pretty soon. I just wanted to call and wish you luck!" "Yeah, thanks. I can't wait." Jinny reply's sarcastically. "I bet." Magda laughs. "Well I will let you go and get ready or whatever." "Thanks,Mag. I'll call you later." "Okay,Bye!" They both hang up. Once again Jinny is on her way to the bathroom for her shower. Magda walks into the Division for the first time that day from being down in the archives. "Hey." C.D. says looking up from her desk. "Hey Magda, where's Jinny?"Angela chimes in. "Hey Guys. Oh Jinny's off today. Physical." C.D. makes a face, "I know. Mines in two weeks. I hate hospitals never the less doctors." "Mine is done with." Magda smiles. "Yeah laugh it up." C.D. adds. Captain walks in, "So,uh, Jinny's off for the physical today." "Right Cap." Magda nods. "We finished the Watford Case yesterday." she points at the case folder on the left of her desk. "Finishing up the details now." "Great." Kate nods and walks over to C.D. and Angela. "Any leads?" "No ,not any definite ones." Angela reply's. "We went and talked to Leslie's boyfriend yesterday and he just seemed odd." "Like he was holding back evidence?" "Perhaps, we still haven't ruled him out completely." "No sign of forced entry. Nothing?" "Not that we gathered. The boyfriends story is he was in the living room he went to check on Leslie when he heard a loud noise and found her in the bathroom." "So what he's saying is someone came in ,killed her,and left without him seeing them or hearing them leave?" Captain asks folding her arms. "Exactly. There just isn't something right about that." "Well talk to neighbors friends anyone who could know anything." "We've talked to two neighbors,but nothing. We're still waiting for the neighbor to the direct left of their apartment to come home." "Inform me when you find anything." "You bet,Captain." C.D. reply's. [This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 10-20-2001).]

10-20-2001, 05:33 PM	#13
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	LOL, I soo didn't put the purposely! As you can tell I don't read mine over. haha.. Poor Cap. lol

10-20-2001, 05:49 PM	#15
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Here I'll add some more. I'm bored! haha Jinny walks down her hallway dressed,her hair brushed,but still wet from her shower. She walks into the kitchen takes out a small thermo mug,and pours herself some coffee into it. Shuts off the coffee pot and puts the lid on the coffee mug. She picks it up ,takes a sip,and walks into the living room. Then sits the mug down on the table. Walks down the hall and comes back with her gunholster,gun,and her leather jacket in hand. She sits her leather jacket on the table near her coffee and puts the gunholster on. Then proceeds putting her Leather jacket on. Jinny drops her hand in her pocket and feels around for her wallet. Once she feels it she pulls her hand out...Picks up her keys,coffee,and heads toward the door. Once the car is parked in front of the doctor's office Jinny turns off the engine,and gets out. She walks up to the offices glass door,pulls it open and enters. Jinny then walks up toward the front desk to let them know she was there. Before she gets up there she looks around at the empty office, which was cold,and smelled like a hospital. Which she hated to be in. The receptionist looks at her then to the chart, "Jinny Exstead?" "Yeah." she reply's in a soft tone almost a whisper. "The doctor will see you now." The woman reply's handing the chart to a nurse whom walks around to opens the door for Jinny to follow her down the hall,but before she gets to a room she stops at a scale. "Can you please take off your shoes and get on the scale." the nurse says. "Right , okay." Jinny sighs bends over and takes off her shoes. Then steps onto the scale. The nurse then begins to take her height and weight once she was finished she looks at the board and announces, "5 foot 5 and 3/4 inches. 116 pounds!" "Great." she reply's glancing around to see if anyone was in ear shot. "Okay right this way." The nurse says as she walks about two feet and opens a room. Not having enough time to put on her shoes Jinny gets off the scale,picks up her shoes,and walks to the examining room in her socks. After reading and signing a paper Magda pulls up her sleeve to check the time, "9:50". 'Jinny's probably still waiting to see the doctor. Dying of impatience.' she smirks at her thought and thinks further, "Yeah that sounds like Jinny." she then continues on her papers. C.D. steps forward and knocks on the door to Jason McLane's neighbors apartment. Her partner beside her. After a moment a woman comes to the door, the two inspectors lift their badges, "San Francisco Police. I'm Inspector Reide this is Inspector De Lorenzo. We're here to ask you some questions about your neighbors Jason McLane and Leslie McGyver." Angela says very professionally. "Ooh, I see. Please come in. Did anything happen to them?!" the woman asks moving apart from the door and letting the two Inspector's walk in. Once they were in the lady closes the door and leads them to the living room, "Please sit down." "Did you know your neighbors very well-" C.D. waits for the woman to state her name. "Karin, Karin Lincoln." the lady reply's. "Umm, I've spoken with Leslie several times. In the elevator on the way up. Other than that not really." "Did she ever mention anything about Jason McLane, her boyfriend?" Angela asks. Karin thinks a moment and shakes her head, "Not that I recall." "Have you ever heard anything you found out of ordinary?" "May I ask what this is all about?" Karin asks. "Mrs. Lincoln, Leslie McGyver was murdered in her apartment next door." C.D. reply's. [This message has been edited by #1_Nancy_McKeon (edited 10-20-2001).]