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10-12-2001, 10:43 PM
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The Flu
Ok... I don't know where I got the idea for this.... Dana and Britt tried... oh BTW Britt... I dont think I'm gonna use that one idea u said.... anyway....
Inspector Magda Ramirez woke up with a jolt. She felt a sudden wave of nausea overcome her. She bolted out of bed and into the bathroom and began to vomit. “Great! The flu!” she thought. “Mommy! Are you ok??” Benjamin called from the hallway. Magda flushed the toilet with a groan. She grabbed a tissue and wiped off her mouth. “Ugh…yeah,” she managed to groan. She grabbed a Dixie cup and rinsed her mouth. She left the bathroom and opened the door to her room. “Hi honey. Mommy’s sick so your going to have to keep your distance.” “You gonna be OK?” Ben asked. “Oh yeah. It’s just the flu. It’ll be gone in a few days.” “OK Mommy. I’m gonna go watch Bugs Bunny now.” He quickly hurried off to the living room to watch his cartoons. Magda picked up the phone and dialed Gabriel’s number. He picked up after 3 rings. “Hello?” he answered with a groan. “Hey Gabe. It’s Mag.” His voice perked up. “Oh…hey babe. Why are you calling so early?” Magda glanced at the digital clock beside her bed. It said it was 6:30. “Oh Gabe! I’m sorry! I didn’t realize it was this early. Anyway, I just threw up. I think I have the flu.” “Aw poor baby!” he said with a chuckle, “What can I do for you?” “Well I might need you to take Benjamin for a while. The last thing I need is for him to get sick. I’m really sorry but I--” Gabe cut her off, “Hey. Don’t worry about it. I’d love to have the little guy over for a while. He’ll keep me company.” “Thanks a lot. I really appreciate it. I’m gonna take my temperature and call the doctor, so I’ll see you later today. Okay?” “Sure hun. See you later.” They said their goodbyes and hung up. Magda went back into the bathroom to look for the thermometer. She couldn’t figure out why she was sick. She got her flu shot about a month before. And Ben wasn’t sick, so it couldn’t be something they ate. When she found the thermometer, she popped it in her mouth and slowly laid down on her bed. She began slowly drifting off to sleep, but she forced herself to stay awake. The 5 minutes seemed like 5 hours to Mag, but the time finally came when she could take it out. She looked at the thermometer in shock. “97.5*??” she thought, surprised. She knew she had to make an appointment with her doctor. Something wasn’t right. After thinking about it for a while, she remembered the last time this happened. It was about 9 years ago when she was pregnant with Ben….. Continue?? Yay? Nay? ------------------ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ ~*Amy*~ CookieCupcake24@aol.com "Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead. "I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo. Jo~ I need a clock! Mrs. G.~ What are you gonna do? Build a bomb? Nat~ YES! YES! Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee. Blanche~ Coffee? Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy. Sophia~ My butt fell asleep and you know what? I'm kinda getting into it. ************************* Polka Dots turn me on!!! YEAH!!! HaHaHaHa! Little Jack Horn-....nevermind... "How do they change the lightbulb? I mean, what do they lean the ladder up against?" DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC! http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com |
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10-12-2001, 10:52 PM
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keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!
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10-12-2001, 11:01 PM
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I cant believe you actually ASKED if you ahould have posted more... HELL YEAH!
------------------ ~Dana Jinny Exstead~ Well since Britt is a Jineddy (Jinny and Teddy) and Morganne is a Jinanybody (Jin and Anybody) I'm a JinMag, now you can figure that one out on your own... OH! And Jenn is a JinKate! Isn't that the most interesting tidbit of information ever? *Me, Britt, and Morganne are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators... You know who you are!* On April 24, 2008, Kaley and I are going to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon and Jay Harrington, and you're not. Ahahaha! Penguin. Email or IM me at DaDanceGirl88@aol.com And don't forget to visit my homepage, which I have brilliantly titled"Dana Jinny Exsteads Web Profile... At least I think thats the title... "COME ON! SAY IT WITH ME!" *LOL!* |
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10-12-2001, 11:05 PM
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LoL I'm still working on it *evil grin #4* LoL
------------------ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ ~*Amy*~ CookieCupcake24@aol.com "Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead. "I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo. Jo~ I need a clock! Mrs. G.~ What are you gonna do? Build a bomb? Nat~ YES! YES! Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee. Blanche~ Coffee? Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy. Sophia~ My butt fell asleep and you know what? I'm kinda getting into it. ************************* Polka Dots turn me on!!! YEAH!!! HaHaHaHa! Little Jack Horn-....nevermind... "How do they change the lightbulb? I mean, what do they lean the ladder up against?" DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC! http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com |
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10-12-2001, 11:09 PM
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holy geez!! dis is GREAT!!! post more soon!!
------------------ ¥§*¤~¤Jamie Nancy McKeon Jinny Exstead¤~¤*§¥ LOL NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!! HAHA!! LOL Lauren, Jamie and Karli, da sLaNgSIsTaS!!!! GUM IS GOOD!! LMFAO Jamie's fan site for the BEST actress in the world, Nancy McKeon!!! YOU 'TARD ~me ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ please e-mail or IM me at: Jamiegirl2006@aol.com , WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com, NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com |
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10-12-2001, 11:27 PM
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Yay or Nay????I dont really know.......Let me
see.............YAY!!!!!!!!!MORE Please;o) ------------------ Visit my FOL website click above^ Last updated:September 15th Edna's Edibles:I changed the name from Receipies to Edibles and I added tons of receipies. Upcomming Events:I added 3 new Read,Write and send me Fol Fan Fiction:I added 1 new. Awards:I added 1 new ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~kEwL~sayings Lord keep your arm around my shoulder,And Your hand over my mouth. Its Fall and I cant get up! You can agree with me or you can be WRONG! I didn't ask to be a Princess but if the TIRA fits..... (I love that one) ~~~~~~~~~ God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference. -Blair |
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10-12-2001, 11:54 PM
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10-13-2001, 12:10 AM
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YES!!! WHY DO YOU EVEN ASK??? Just continue ASAP
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10-13-2001, 12:11 AM
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Thanx ppl. Here's a lil more:
Magda sat anxiously on the doctor’s examining table waiting for the doctor to return with her results. The thought she had this morning had completely slipped her mind The doctor had asked her the questions she had anticipated. What have you eaten? Fever? Has she had her flu shot? He insisted on taking so many tests. Urine, blood, TB, you name it. . The doctor burst in the room with an unusually cheery look on his face. “Mrs. Ramirez? Congratulations! You are going to be a mother…AGAIN!” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ When she got home, Magda was greeted by the sound of the lively beeping of Ben’s video game. Ben and his father were lying on the floor playing a Mario game. “Hey Mag. How ya feeling?” Gabe asked. Magda sighed and dropped onto the couch. “Gabe…Um I have to talk to you. Alone,” Magda said wearily. “Um Okay,” Gabe replied, “Ben why don’t you play this one alone. K?” Gabe followed Mag into her bedroom. Magda didn’t quite know how to tell him this. She figured he had to know sooner or later. Gabe, I…uh….I have some news…,” Magda trailed off. She couldn’t seem to find the right words. She decided just to blurt it out and get it over with. “Gabe…I…I…I’m gonna have a baby.” Gabriel was stunned. At first he didn’t move. He was speechless. Then, he shouted the 5 words that Magda knew were coming. The only problem is, she didn’t know how to handle them. “WE HAVEN’T HAD SEX YET!” ------------------ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ ~*Amy*~ CookieCupcake24@aol.com "Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead. "I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo. Jo~ I need a clock! Mrs. G.~ What are you gonna do? Build a bomb? Nat~ YES! YES! Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee. Blanche~ Coffee? Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy. Sophia~ My butt fell asleep and you know what? I'm kinda getting into it. ************************* Polka Dots turn me on!!! YEAH!!! HaHaHaHa! Little Jack Horn-....nevermind... "How do they change the lightbulb? I mean, what do they lean the ladder up against?" DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC! http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com |
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10-13-2001, 01:16 PM
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HOLY GEEZ!!! MORE MORE MORE!! i need MORE
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10-13-2001, 01:48 PM
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GREAT! post more soon, please!
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10-13-2001, 04:41 PM
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Thanx ppl. Oh...btw...Britt, I am gonna use ur idea after all!!! lol
Magda’s body shook, not knowing what Gabriel would do or say next. She was terrified. She saw the look in his eyes and he was honestly hurt. She could tell he loved her and she really didn’t mean to do this to him. “Gabe, I-I-I-” “I gotta get out of here!” Gabriel exclaimed. He quickly bolted out of the room. Magda began to sob quietly. All of a sudden Gabriel burst back in the door. “Magda! I have just one question for you. Who is it? Huh? Who would you sleep with, knowing how much I love you and care about you? God! I even asked you to marry me! MARRY me! God! How stupid am I? You never loved me back. Since I’ve been back you made me believe you care about me, but that’s not the truth. If you loved me you wouldn’t be having some other guys baby! So who is it? Huh? Tell me d*mmit!” Magda knew exactly who the father is. She couldn’t bring herself to tell Gabe or anyone else for that matter. She sat in silence with her head down. She figured maybe if she ignored him he would go away. Then she decided that wasn’t a very good idea. “Gabe, I-I-I- don’t--” she began He cut her off, “You don’t know? I think you have been around your friend Jinny to much! Don’t even tell me you are turning into a slut like her.” That was the straw that broke the camel’s back. Magda couldn’t stand people talking about Jinny like that, even though most of the things they said were true. She especially didn’t like to hear these things now, after what she did to Jinny. “Don’t you ever, and I mean EVER talk about my best friend and partner that way. Sure she may sleep around. She even drinks too much. But once you overlook all of that, she is a damn good person.” Her voice suddenly became quiet and helpless, “ And for your information, I do know who the father is. I just don’t know how to tell you.” She saw he was beginning to calm down a little. “Fine. But when you decide you CAN tell me, call me. I’ll be in New York. I’m leaving Magda. I thought we had something, but now I see we don’t. I am going to go kiss Ben goodbye,” he declared. “Oh yeah. This is just like you. You would leave your son just like that? Sure. You hate me, but you have 8 years to catch up on with your son, but selfish Gabriel doesn’t seem to care about that!” Magda shot back. Gabe stormed out of the bedroom and right out of the apartment. She heard the door slam. Magda proceeded into the living room to see her son. She didn’t know if Benjamin would ever see his father again. More? Yes? No? Maybe? ------------------ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ ~*Amy*~ CookieCupcake24@aol.com "Oh please, folks, don't be shy! Apparantly anyone is welcome to crap all over me tonight,so step right on up!"~ Jinny Exstead. "I give people chances who earn them...except insurance guys."~ C.D. DeLorenzo. Jo~ I need a clock! Mrs. G.~ What are you gonna do? Build a bomb? Nat~ YES! YES! Rose~ It's a letter from St. Olaf. It's from the Department of Water and Coffee. Blanche~ Coffee? Rose~ No thanks. It makes me jumpy. Sophia~ My butt fell asleep and you know what? I'm kinda getting into it. ************************* Polka Dots turn me on!!! YEAH!!! HaHaHaHa! Little Jack Horn-....nevermind... "How do they change the lightbulb? I mean, what do they lean the ladder up against?" DON'T CALL ME EASY MAC! http://www.nancymckeon-division.cityslide.com |
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10-13-2001, 05:18 PM
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“Don’t you ever, and I mean EVER talk about my best friend and partner that way. Sure she may sleep around. She even drinks too much. But once you overlook all of that, she is a damn good person.”
GO MAG!!!!! HOLY GEEZ dude..she TOLD him..LMAO..anyways..im luvin' it..u GOTS 2 post more SOON ------------------ ¥§*¤~¤Jamie Nancy McKeon Jinny Exstead¤~¤*§¥ LOL NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!! Lisa, Lauren, Jamie and Karli, da sLaNgSIsTaS!!!! GUM IS GOOD!! LMFAO Jamie's fan site for the BEST actress in the world, Nancy McKeon!!! YOU 'TARD ~me ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ please e-mail or IM me at: Jamiegirl2006@aol.com , WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com, NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com |
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10-13-2001, 09:04 PM
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*funger agger* LOL
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C'mon, girl! We gotta find out who the father is! POST MORE NOW!!!!!!
Please?
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10-13-2001, 09:43 PM
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Heck yes more! I usually don't reply when I read fanfics, but this one is good. I think I have an idea of who Mag's baby daddy is.....
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