Round Robin

[NancyMcKeonFan8976]

okay, this might be a boring begining, but you guys can all add excitment to it!!!!

(Station Amanda and Kate are fighting about something)

C.D: Wow, WWF in there!!!

Magda: Yeah, what is up in there?

Jinny: God bless Amanda i feel for her.

Angela: Jinny!!! Stop talking like that!!

(Amanda storms out of the office and slams the door)

Jinny: You poor thing!!!

Amanda: She doesn't understand me!!!

Jinny: She doesn't understand me either. She hates me to put it in easy terms.

Amanda: Try being her daughther!!!

Jinny: No thanx!!! I would probubly jump off a bridge if i was her daughter!!

Amanda: Not a bad idea!!

Magda: Jinny, what r u putting into this childs head?

Amanda: I am not a kid!

C.D: Jin, just stop before she really does do what u tell her to do.

Jinny: I didn't tell her to do anything!!!

(While fighting Amanda storms out of the Station saying "Mother, you'll pay" all of the girls turn around in suprise)

Okay, now someone else can add!!! HEHE maybe i will add more later to someone elses!!! how this was a pretty good start!!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

[NancyJoJinny]

Hehe...WHo else but i would continue? I am posting the next part...just give me a chance to do it...which will be in like 10 mins.

[Jo's Girl]

Okay great start...so I'll add more.

Kate: Okay people gather around we've got a lot today.
Magda: Captain I don't want to be like intruding or anything but what just went on between you and Amanda?
Kate: None of your buisiness!!! Now back to work...DeLorenzo, Reid, We've got a homicide of Rachel Commens, Don't know what happened.
CD: What do we know? Like any possible suspects, witnesses?
Kate: Well a witness, Ashley Carmen, said that it was a male medium height mediom built, dark hair.
Angela: Did she see his face?
Kate: Don't know but I'd go and talk to her.
CD: Ok.
Kate: Ramirez (SP) Exstead, (Kate's cell rings) McCafferty, Yes I'll get two of my inspectors out there right away. (Hangs up) Girls change of plans There's a highschool going on shooting at _____ ***If you can think of a name put it in*** So get over there put on bullet proof vests and get out your weapon as soon as you get there.
Jinny: Got it captain.

You guys continue.

[KerriBerri687]

herez a little bit more k?

(Jinny and Magda go down to the scene of the school shooting, they see many frantic people in front of the buiding)

J- what's goin on here?
Person- R..room 304! in...the C hall. There is a boy there..h..he's armed!
M- Aright, come on jin let's go for it.
(jinny and magda run up to room 304 and kick open the door)
Zack- (points the gun at them) Stop! don't move or i swear i'll shoot.
J- (looks at magda and then back at the boy)
Zack- don't say another word.
M- listen..just calm down and think about what you're doing here.
Zack- i know what i'm doing!
J- put the g-d damn gun down!
Zack- i said not another word.
J- (looked at magda and nodded as if she was approving some kind of plan)
M- (looked back at jinny and nodded)
J- (runs up and knocks zack over trying to get the gun out of his hand...however while she is doing he takes a shot...)
(whole classroom gasps)
J- (takes gun out of his hand and takes a peice of rope and ties his hands together) there, that outta hold ya. (turns around to see everyone gathered around someone..laying on the floor.) Hey what's goin on? (runs over to see her partner laying on the floor bleedin and unconsious) Mag! OMG we need an ambulence...NOW! (takes magda's hand as her eyes start to fill up) you're gonna be okay..(fights back tears) don't worry.

someone else write!

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Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
Pal2125@aol.com

Jinny- Intimate? No. I mean, i sleep with him. But i sleep with all the guys in the divison. It's sorta how i break em' in."
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B- If I don't spend money soon i'm gonna pull my hair out!
J- good we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

[Jo's Girl]

I did the last one someone else go

[NancyJoJinny]

OK!!

Jinny Pacing around while Paramedics take her away, calls CD)

CD:Inspector DeLorenzo?

Jinny:Magda....The..some kid shot magda.(crying)Oh...its my fault.

CD:Well..call 9-1-1(Kate and Angela look at her)

Jinny:I did...There here now! I feel sick.

CD:Jinny, dont leave ill pick you up, you cant drive in this condition.

Jinny:Ok, ok, yeah...good idea.(hangs up)

Angela:What was that all about?

CD:Magda was shot...Come on i gotta pick jinny up.

Angela:Oh my...We...why...how?

CD:I..i dont even know...COME ON.

(High school)

Jinny sitting at a desk surrounded by a bunch of kids, cd bursts in.)

CD:Jinny?

Jinny:Your here...

Angela:Come on...i want to be there when she wakes up.

Jinny:If she wakes up.

You go!!!!

[NancyMcKeonFan8976]

okay, i will go again!!! i am not tring to hog actually i am not even that good., just bored. hehe

Angela: She will wake up, Jin!!

C.D: Come on guys lets go!!!!

(Walking out)

Jinny: OMG!!!

C.D: What?????? Are you okay????

Jinny: Yes...but i know what happened.

Angela: What are you talking about?

Jinny: Zack is Amanda's best friend and maybe they planned this together? They probubly were hoping Captain came so they could shot her...(suddenly a shot fired down the hall) (Angela Screamed)

C.D: What the hell?

Amanda: Where is my mother?

Jinny: Oh gosh!!!!

someone else go!!!!

[Jo's Girl]

Jinny: CD let's go!!!
CD: Captain OMG!!!! Jinny!! Look
Jinny: OMG!!! Where is he? Wheres the B**** who did this to her?
CD: Jinny calm down we'll get this guy, but it could be Zack I mean it makes sense first Magda now the Captain.
Jinny: Let's go talk to Amanda then bring him in for questioning. They've got the Captain is surgery.
CD: Let's go.
Jinny: Hey Amanda...We need to ask you some questions.
Amanda: Sure what do you need.
CD: Amanda we need to know what you and your mom were fighting about.
Amanda: It's none of your buisiness.

Someone els

[AlexzBonner]

I'll go!

J: Yes, actually, it is.
C: Amanda, don't you understand that murder is a serious offense.
Am: Do you see me with a gun? I don't think so.
A: No, but we have a hunch that you planned this.
C: Who did Amanda? Who helped you?
Am: (shifts uncomfortably.) I'm not tellin'!

There! That's my part!

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^~^The Division^~^
T: You're in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?
J: No, you're supposed to hide under the covers with me 'cause it's warmer! Come on!
†º† ~~<@ Kenzie @>~~ †º†

[Jo's Girl]

I've done two and don't want to hog it!!!!! SO WoULD SOMEONE ADD ON ALREADY!!!!!!!!!

[NancyMcKeonFan8976]

okay, i only wrote a litle bit last time so here is more!!!


C.D: Amanda, you have to tell us!!

Amanda: No...i don't!

Jinny: (yelling) look Magda, my partner, just got shot and you are going to tell me why this shotting happened. Because obviously you know!!!

Amanda: Fine...i didn't plan it..totaly!

Angela: Totaly?

Amanda: Yeah, it isn't all m,y fault!!!

C.D: Well, what was your fault?

Amanda: Well, i gave him one of my mom's old guns and he promised he wouldn't hurt anyone. He just needed the gun for hunting...or so he said!

Jinny: Your underarrest!!!

Amanda: No!!! You can't do this! My mother won't allow this!! (pulls out a gun) nd maybe i won't allow this!! Tell my mother when you see her in HELL tht she should have hidden her extra guns in better places!!!

Okay, Jo's Girl you can go cuz we are hogging it, but oh well

[Jo's Girl]

K thanks I'll just do a little...

Jinny: Amanda put down the gun.
Amanda: Oh shut-up. I don't gove a d***!!!
Angela: Amanda Pretty please put down the gun.
CD: Oh angela shut up with the pretty pleases.
Angela: Ok Amanda put down the gun or let's take this outside.
Amanda: No we're taking care of this here and now.
Jinny: Angela put down the gun now. If you don't I can and will shoot.
CD: Amanda put down the gun now. I'll give you until the count of five, 1, 2, 3,...Come on amanda put it down 4, (SHe drops the gun)
Jinny: Your under arrest. You (She read Amanda her rites) Let's go. CD get a warrent and get Zack now.
CD: When were you made the captain
Jinny: CD do you want me to let her go...I didn't think so. Now listen to me get a warrent and pick him up now!!!

[Polniaczek-Bonner]

ok, i figured i'd add some because i'm board and someone asked me too...

Jinny and CD slowly backed away
"Put the gun down" Jinny said as she put her hands up.
"We already had an officer shot, we don't need two more" CD said as she put her hands up too.
"I don't care! My mother hates me anyway!" Amanda yelled.
"Do you want to go in prison for life" Jinny asked nervously. "If you kill us you will"
"I'm going to jail no matter what!" Amanda said as she started shaking. "But I could kill you, and get away"
"No, you couldn't" A voice behind Amanda said.
"MOM!" Amanda yelled as she turned around! "What the Hell are you doing here?"
"I was going to ask you the same thing!" Captain said madly as she walked over towards her daughter. Then Amanda turned around and pointed the gun at her mother. CD and Jinny immeditly pulled theirs out.
"Put your guns down, or I'll shoot" Amanda told Jinny and CD "NOW!"
"ok, I'm putting mine down" Cd said as she put hers down. Jinny just kept standing there. "Jinny!" CD wispered, knowing Jinny didn't care about the Captain.
"ok, ok" Jinny said annoyed, as she put her gun down.


ok u guys can work on it now because i feel like crap, and i'm losing my voice....have fun!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

[Polniaczek-Bonner]

Sorry, i didnt notice the last part....o well

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

[Jo's Girl]

it's okay at least we got 2 views.